Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2EB8QG09RABFXPTCVM39YK

Run Details

Duration:
29.1s
Cost:
$0.000688
Provider:
DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The last tube had left Richmond station forty-seven minutes ago, and Rory was beginning to regret her choices. She pushed through the undergrowth, one hand holding her phone up as a flashlight, the other batting aside branches that seemed to reach for her face with deliberate spite. The battery sat at twelve percent. She'd checked twice. The first time had been twenty minutes ago, back when she still had signal and the map on her screen made sense. Now the GPS had given up entirely, spinning its little blue dot in circles like a trapped insect. *Just past the Isabella Plantation,* Isolde had said. *Past the gate, through the birch stand, and before the old oak that looks like a bent woman.* Every oak in Richmond Park looked like a bent woman at this hour. The night air had gone cold in the way London nights never did—sharp and metallic, like licking a frozen railing. Rory pulled her jacket tighter around herself and kept walking, stepping over roots that seemed to rise higher than any roots had business being. She hadn't wanted to come. The delivery had sat on her counter for three days, a small parcel wrapped in brown paper that smelled of earth and honey. *For Isolde, in the Grove,* the note had said, the handwriting elegant and old-fashioned, the ink something dark that caught the light like dried blood. There was no return address, no name. Just the package, waiting for her each morning when she opened her eyes. And then this evening, the flickering of the Heartstone had started. A pulse of warmth against her chest, constant and demanding, like a second heartbeat demanding attention. She'd ignored it for six hours. Then the lights in her flat had begun to buzz, and every clock had started ticking in reverse, and the package had begun to *hum*. So here she was. Alone. In Richmond Park. At half past one in the morning, chasing after a clearing that supposedly existed between worlds. The birch stand appeared ahead, their white trunks glowing spectral in the dim light. Rory stopped. The trees were dead straight, unnaturally so, their bark smooth as bone. They grew in a perfect circle, each trunk spaced exactly the same distance from its neighbour, as if planted by a hand that cared deeply about geometry. *This is it. This is the place.* She stepped through. The moment her foot crossed the threshold between the first two birches, the world changed. The ambient noise of the park—distant traffic, the rustle of leaves, the ever-present drone of the city—cut off like someone had flipped a switch. Silence pressed against her ears, thick and physical, the kind of silence that made her want to swallow just to prove she still could. And then the cold hit. Not the cold of a winter night. Something older. Something that seeped through her skin and settled into the marrow of her bones, making her teeth ache and her breath come in short, sharp clouds. Rory wrapped her arms around herself and walked deeper into the grove. The oak appeared as promised—twisted, gnarled, leaning at an angle that looked like a woman bending to pick something up off the ground. Its bark was covered in symbols, carved deep into the wood, too uniform to be natural. They spiraled up the trunk, following the grain, and Rory could have sworn they *moved* when she looked away. She didn't look away twice. The clearing opened beyond the oak, and there it was. The Fae Grove. A perfect circle of grass so green it looked painted, ringed by standing stones that rose from the earth like crooked teeth. Wildflowers bloomed at their bases, blue and white and a purple so deep it was almost black, their petals catching a light that had no source. In the center of the clearing stood a single stone, flat-topped and waist-high, covered in moss that seemed to pulse with a faint phosphorescent glow. Rory stepped into the circle. The wrongness hit her all at once. It wasn't visible—not yet. But she felt it, a pressure against her skin, a weight in the air that made her want to duck, made her want to run. Every instinct she had was screaming at her to turn around, to leave, to forget about the package and the Heartstone and the humming and just *go*. She took another step. The wildflowers rustled. There was no wind. Rory froze. The grove was completely still. The flowers had stopped their subtle swaying, the grass stood rigid, the air itself felt like it was holding its breath. She could hear her own heartbeat, loud and fast, and something else beneath it—a low, rhythmic thumping, like a drum played far away. *Thump. Thump. Thump.* It was coming from beneath her feet. She looked down. The grass at her shoes was moving, rippling in concentric circles, as if something below was rising toward the surface. Rory ran. She didn't think about it. Her body acted before her mind caught up, legs pumping, lungs burning, the package clutched against her chest. She sprinted for the edge of the circle, for the gap between two standing stones, for anywhere that wasn't *here*. The flowers screamed. Not a sound—an actual *scream*, high and piercing, a chorus of voices that rose from every petal and stem around her. The shriek hit her like a physical force, rattling her teeth, making her stumble. She caught herself on one of the standing stones, her palm slapping against cold, wet rock. The stone was warm. Rory pulled her hand back. The warmth was familiar—the same pulse, the same heat she felt from the Heartstone against her chest. She looked at the stone, at the carvings that covered its surface, and realized with dawning horror that they were the same symbols carved into the oak. The same symbols on the package. Her hands were shaking as she tore at the brown paper. It came away in strips, revealing a wooden box the size of her palm, carved from the same dark wood as the standing stones, covered in the same spiraling symbols. The lid was already open. She peered inside. Nothing but black velvet lining the bottom, smooth and undisturbed, as if it had never held anything at all. The screaming stopped. The silence that followed was worse. Rory stood frozen in the center of the grove, the empty box in her hands, the Heartstone pulsing against her chest like a trapped bird. The flowers were still. The stones were still. Even the air had gone quiet, no longer pressing against her, no longer heavy with the sense of wrongness. Instead, there was a new feeling, creeping up her spine like fingers tracing her vertebrae. *Recognition.* The grove knew her. The stones knew her. The symbols carved into every surface had been waiting for her, had called her here, had summoned her with a package she didn't remember receiving and a heartbeat that wasn't her own. She lifted her head. On the other side of the clearing, just beyond the ring of standing stones, a figure stood in the darkness. Rory couldn't make out details—just a silhouette, taller than any person she'd ever seen, limbs too long, head tilted at an angle that suggested a neck with too many joints. It didn't move. It simply *watched*, and the weight of its gaze pressed against her like the pressure before a storm. The Heartstone pulsed once, hard, and then went cold. The figure raised one long arm and pointed directly at her. Rory's phone buzzed. She looked down, heart hammering, and saw a text message from an unknown number glowing on her screen. *You opened it. Now come home.* She looked up. The figure was gone. But the path through the birches was visible now, the way clear, and the distant hum of London traffic had returned, muffled but present, as if the world was slowly stitching itself back together around her. Rory didn't run. She walked. Fast. Straight through the birches, past the bent oak, through the undergrowth, her phone's light bobbing ahead of her, leading her back toward the park gate, back toward the tube station, back toward anything that felt like *real*. She didn't stop until she reached Silas's bar. The lights were on. The door was unlocked. She pushed through, the bell above jangling, and leaned against the wall, gasping for breath. Silas looked up from behind the counter, a glass in one hand, a towel in the other. He took one look at her and set the glass down. "Rory." She opened her mouth to explain, to tell him about the grove and the flowers and the figure and the box, but the words wouldn't come. Instead, she pulled the Heartstone out from under her shirt. It was glowing. Not the faint inner light it usually held. A steady, angry red, pulsing in time with her heartbeat, hot against her skin. Silas crossed the room in three strides, grabbed her wrist, and turned her hand over. His fingers were cold, his grip firm. "Where did you go tonight?" "The Grove," she whispered. "Someone left a package. I had to take it there. I had to open it." His face went pale. "Did you see anything?" "A figure. In the trees. Tall. Pointing at me." Silas released her wrist and stepped back. His hand went to his face, rubbing his jaw, and when he spoke, his voice was barely a whisper. "There are things in the Grove that shouldn't be touched. Things that slumber. And you just woke one of them up." The Heartstone pulsed again. Somewhere deep in the park, something answered.
created_at"2026-04-25T13:47:57.045Z" 4/25/2026, 1:47:57 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.143
leniency0.286
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.86% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1628
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
32.43% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1628
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"pulse"
count3
1
word"warmth"
count2
2
word"spectral"
count1
3
word"perfect"
count2
4
word"silence"
count3
5
word"weight"
count2
6
word"rhythmic"
count1
7
word"pumping"
count1
8
word"familiar"
count1
9
word"velvet"
count1
10
word"sense of"
count1
11
word"tracing"
count1
12
word"pulsed"
count2
13
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"warmth"
2"spectral"
3"perfect"
4"silence"
5"weight"
6"rhythmic"
7"pumping"
8"familiar"
9"velvet"
10"sense of"
11"tracing"
12"pulsed"
13"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences132
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences132
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences138
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans14
markdownWords52
totalWords1619
ratio0.032
matches
0"Just past the Isabella Plantation,"
1"Past the gate, through the birch stand, and before the old oak that looks like a bent woman."
2"For Isolde, in the Grove,"
3"hum"
4"This is it. This is the place."
5"moved"
6"go"
7"Thump. Thump. Thump."
8"here"
9"scream"
10"Recognition."
11"watched"
12"You opened it. Now come home."
13"real"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount1562
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.83
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Richmond3
Rory13
Isabella1
Isolde2
Park2
London2
Heartstone7
Fae1
Grove2
Silas4
persons
0"Rory"
1"Isolde"
2"Heartstone"
3"Silas"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Isabella"
2"Park"
3"London"
4"Fae"
5"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences79
glossingSentenceCount7
matches
0"looked like a bent woman at this hour"
1"roots that seemed to rise higher than any roots had business being"
2"appeared ahead their white trunks glowing spectral in the dim light"
3"looked like a woman bending to pick somet"
4"moss that seemed to pulse with a faint phosphorescent glow"
5"felt like it was holding its breath"
6"felt like *real*"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1619
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences138
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs75
mean21.59
std19.95
cv0.924
sampleLengths
018
178
226
313
444
573
627
731
824
955
107
113
1263
135
1435
1512
1658
175
1861
1925
205
217
2256
234
247
252
2649
273
287
2923
302
3143
323
3351
344
3549
366
3741
385
3922
403
416
4252
4315
441
4540
464
4720
4851
499
97.29% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences132
matches
0"was covered"
1"was gone"
2"was unlocked"
1.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount8
totalVerbs268
matches
0"was beginning"
1"was screaming"
2"was holding"
3"was coming"
4"was rising"
5"were shaking"
6"was slowly stitching"
7"was glowing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences138
ratio0.058
matches
0"The night air had gone cold in the way London nights never did—sharp and metallic, like licking a frozen railing."
1"The ambient noise of the park—distant traffic, the rustle of leaves, the ever-present drone of the city—cut off like someone had flipped a switch."
2"The oak appeared as promised—twisted, gnarled, leaning at an angle that looked like a woman bending to pick something up off the ground."
3"It wasn't visible—not yet."
4"She could hear her own heartbeat, loud and fast, and something else beneath it—a low, rhythmic thumping, like a drum played far away."
5"Not a sound—an actual *scream*, high and piercing, a chorus of voices that rose from every petal and stem around her."
6"The warmth was familiar—the same pulse, the same heat she felt from the Heartstone against her chest."
7"Rory couldn't make out details—just a silhouette, taller than any person she'd ever seen, limbs too long, head tilted at an angle that suggested a neck with too many joints."
86.91% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1576
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"against cold, wet rock."
1"steady, angry red, pulsing"
adverbCount65
adverbRatio0.041243654822335024
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.006979695431472081
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences138
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences138
mean11.73
std9.1
cv0.776
sampleLengths
018
129
26
33
422
518
68
718
813
920
1024
115
1223
1325
147
1513
1611
1716
186
1925
204
211
223
2316
2414
252
2612
2727
283
294
303
3115
3224
3324
345
357
362
3726
3812
3923
4016
4119
425
4310
443
4522
4626
4725
485
497
40.58% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.30434782608695654
totalSentences138
uniqueOpeners42
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount7
totalSentences120
matches
0"*Just past the Isabella Plantation,*"
1"Just the package, waiting for"
2"Then the lights in her"
3"Even the air had gone"
4"Instead, there was a new"
5"Instead, she pulled the Heartstone"
6"Somewhere deep in the park,"
ratio0.058
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences120
matches
0"She pushed through the undergrowth,"
1"She'd checked twice."
2"She hadn't wanted to come."
3"She'd ignored it for six"
4"They grew in a perfect"
5"She stepped through."
6"Its bark was covered in"
7"They spiraled up the trunk,"
8"She didn't look away twice."
9"It wasn't visible—not yet."
10"She took another step."
11"She could hear her own"
12"It was coming from beneath"
13"She looked down."
14"She didn't think about it."
15"Her body acted before her"
16"She sprinted for the edge"
17"She caught herself on one"
18"She looked at the stone,"
19"Her hands were shaking as"
ratio0.3
72.50% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount93
totalSentences120
matches
0"The last tube had left"
1"She pushed through the undergrowth,"
2"The battery sat at twelve"
3"She'd checked twice."
4"The first time had been"
5"Every oak in Richmond Park"
6"The night air had gone"
7"Rory pulled her jacket tighter"
8"She hadn't wanted to come."
9"The delivery had sat on"
10"A pulse of warmth against"
11"She'd ignored it for six"
12"The birch stand appeared ahead,"
13"The trees were dead straight,"
14"They grew in a perfect"
15"*This is it."
16"This is the place.*"
17"She stepped through."
18"The moment her foot crossed"
19"The ambient noise of the"
ratio0.775
83.33% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences120
matches
0"Now the GPS had given"
1"Now come home.*"
ratio0.017
8.93% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences64
technicalSentenceCount12
matches
0"Rory pulled her jacket tighter around herself and kept walking, stepping over roots that seemed to rise higher than any roots had business being."
1"Silence pressed against her ears, thick and physical, the kind of silence that made her want to swallow just to prove she still could."
2"Something that seeped through her skin and settled into the marrow of her bones, making her teeth ache and her breath come in short, sharp clouds."
3"The oak appeared as promised—twisted, gnarled, leaning at an angle that looked like a woman bending to pick something up off the ground."
4"Wildflowers bloomed at their bases, blue and white and a purple so deep it was almost black, their petals catching a light that had no source."
5"In the center of the clearing stood a single stone, flat-topped and waist-high, covered in moss that seemed to pulse with a faint phosphorescent glow."
6"The grass at her shoes was moving, rippling in concentric circles, as if something below was rising toward the surface."
7"The shriek hit her like a physical force, rattling her teeth, making her stumble."
8"Nothing but black velvet lining the bottom, smooth and undisturbed, as if it had never held anything at all."
9"The symbols carved into every surface had been waiting for her, had called her here, had summoned her with a package she didn't remember receiving and a heartbe…"
10"But the path through the birches was visible now, the way clear, and the distant hum of London traffic had returned, muffled but present, as if the world was sl…"
11"Straight through the birches, past the bent oak, through the undergrowth, her phone's light bobbing ahead of her, leading her back toward the park gate, back to…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
7.14% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.143
leniency0.286
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.286
77.4657%