| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.143 | | leniency | 0.286 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 93.86% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1628 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 32.43% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1628 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "spectral" | | 3 | "perfect" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "rhythmic" | | 7 | "pumping" | | 8 | "familiar" | | 9 | "velvet" | | 10 | "sense of" | | 11 | "tracing" | | 12 | "pulsed" | | 13 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 132 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 132 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 138 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 14 | | markdownWords | 52 | | totalWords | 1619 | | ratio | 0.032 | | matches | | 0 | "Just past the Isabella Plantation," | | 1 | "Past the gate, through the birch stand, and before the old oak that looks like a bent woman." | | 2 | "For Isolde, in the Grove," | | 3 | "hum" | | 4 | "This is it. This is the place." | | 5 | "moved" | | 6 | "go" | | 7 | "Thump. Thump. Thump." | | 8 | "here" | | 9 | "scream" | | 10 | "Recognition." | | 11 | "watched" | | 12 | "You opened it. Now come home." | | 13 | "real" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 37 | | wordCount | 1562 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.83 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Silas" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 3 | | Rory | 13 | | Isabella | 1 | | Isolde | 2 | | Park | 2 | | London | 2 | | Heartstone | 7 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 2 | | Silas | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Silas" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Isabella" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "London" | | 4 | "Fae" | | 5 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 79 | | glossingSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like a bent woman at this hour" | | 1 | "roots that seemed to rise higher than any roots had business being" | | 2 | "appeared ahead their white trunks glowing spectral in the dim light" | | 3 | "looked like a woman bending to pick somet" | | 4 | "moss that seemed to pulse with a faint phosphorescent glow" | | 5 | "felt like it was holding its breath" | | 6 | "felt like *real*" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1619 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 138 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 75 | | mean | 21.59 | | std | 19.95 | | cv | 0.924 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 78 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 44 | | 5 | 73 | | 6 | 27 | | 7 | 31 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 55 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 63 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 35 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 58 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 61 | | 19 | 25 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 56 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 49 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 23 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 43 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 51 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 49 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 41 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 22 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 52 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 40 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 20 | | 48 | 51 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 97.29% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 132 | | matches | | 0 | "was covered" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "was unlocked" |
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| 1.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 8 | | totalVerbs | 268 | | matches | | 0 | "was beginning" | | 1 | "was screaming" | | 2 | "was holding" | | 3 | "was coming" | | 4 | "was rising" | | 5 | "were shaking" | | 6 | "was slowly stitching" | | 7 | "was glowing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 138 | | ratio | 0.058 | | matches | | 0 | "The night air had gone cold in the way London nights never did—sharp and metallic, like licking a frozen railing." | | 1 | "The ambient noise of the park—distant traffic, the rustle of leaves, the ever-present drone of the city—cut off like someone had flipped a switch." | | 2 | "The oak appeared as promised—twisted, gnarled, leaning at an angle that looked like a woman bending to pick something up off the ground." | | 3 | "It wasn't visible—not yet." | | 4 | "She could hear her own heartbeat, loud and fast, and something else beneath it—a low, rhythmic thumping, like a drum played far away." | | 5 | "Not a sound—an actual *scream*, high and piercing, a chorus of voices that rose from every petal and stem around her." | | 6 | "The warmth was familiar—the same pulse, the same heat she felt from the Heartstone against her chest." | | 7 | "Rory couldn't make out details—just a silhouette, taller than any person she'd ever seen, limbs too long, head tilted at an angle that suggested a neck with too many joints." |
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| 86.91% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1576 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "against cold, wet rock." | | 1 | "steady, angry red, pulsing" |
| | adverbCount | 65 | | adverbRatio | 0.041243654822335024 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006979695431472081 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 138 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 138 | | mean | 11.73 | | std | 9.1 | | cv | 0.776 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 29 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 24 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 25 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 27 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 24 | | 33 | 24 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 26 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 23 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 22 | | 46 | 26 | | 47 | 25 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 40.58% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.30434782608695654 | | totalSentences | 138 | | uniqueOpeners | 42 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 120 | | matches | | 0 | "*Just past the Isabella Plantation,*" | | 1 | "Just the package, waiting for" | | 2 | "Then the lights in her" | | 3 | "Even the air had gone" | | 4 | "Instead, there was a new" | | 5 | "Instead, she pulled the Heartstone" | | 6 | "Somewhere deep in the park," |
| | ratio | 0.058 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 36 | | totalSentences | 120 | | matches | | 0 | "She pushed through the undergrowth," | | 1 | "She'd checked twice." | | 2 | "She hadn't wanted to come." | | 3 | "She'd ignored it for six" | | 4 | "They grew in a perfect" | | 5 | "She stepped through." | | 6 | "Its bark was covered in" | | 7 | "They spiraled up the trunk," | | 8 | "She didn't look away twice." | | 9 | "It wasn't visible—not yet." | | 10 | "She took another step." | | 11 | "She could hear her own" | | 12 | "It was coming from beneath" | | 13 | "She looked down." | | 14 | "She didn't think about it." | | 15 | "Her body acted before her" | | 16 | "She sprinted for the edge" | | 17 | "She caught herself on one" | | 18 | "She looked at the stone," | | 19 | "Her hands were shaking as" |
| | ratio | 0.3 | |
| 72.50% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 93 | | totalSentences | 120 | | matches | | 0 | "The last tube had left" | | 1 | "She pushed through the undergrowth," | | 2 | "The battery sat at twelve" | | 3 | "She'd checked twice." | | 4 | "The first time had been" | | 5 | "Every oak in Richmond Park" | | 6 | "The night air had gone" | | 7 | "Rory pulled her jacket tighter" | | 8 | "She hadn't wanted to come." | | 9 | "The delivery had sat on" | | 10 | "A pulse of warmth against" | | 11 | "She'd ignored it for six" | | 12 | "The birch stand appeared ahead," | | 13 | "The trees were dead straight," | | 14 | "They grew in a perfect" | | 15 | "*This is it." | | 16 | "This is the place.*" | | 17 | "She stepped through." | | 18 | "The moment her foot crossed" | | 19 | "The ambient noise of the" |
| | ratio | 0.775 | |
| 83.33% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 120 | | matches | | 0 | "Now the GPS had given" | | 1 | "Now come home.*" |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 8.93% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | technicalSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory pulled her jacket tighter around herself and kept walking, stepping over roots that seemed to rise higher than any roots had business being." | | 1 | "Silence pressed against her ears, thick and physical, the kind of silence that made her want to swallow just to prove she still could." | | 2 | "Something that seeped through her skin and settled into the marrow of her bones, making her teeth ache and her breath come in short, sharp clouds." | | 3 | "The oak appeared as promised—twisted, gnarled, leaning at an angle that looked like a woman bending to pick something up off the ground." | | 4 | "Wildflowers bloomed at their bases, blue and white and a purple so deep it was almost black, their petals catching a light that had no source." | | 5 | "In the center of the clearing stood a single stone, flat-topped and waist-high, covered in moss that seemed to pulse with a faint phosphorescent glow." | | 6 | "The grass at her shoes was moving, rippling in concentric circles, as if something below was rising toward the surface." | | 7 | "The shriek hit her like a physical force, rattling her teeth, making her stumble." | | 8 | "Nothing but black velvet lining the bottom, smooth and undisturbed, as if it had never held anything at all." | | 9 | "The symbols carved into every surface had been waiting for her, had called her here, had summoned her with a package she didn't remember receiving and a heartbe…" | | 10 | "But the path through the birches was visible now, the way clear, and the distant hum of London traffic had returned, muffled but present, as if the world was sl…" | | 11 | "Straight through the birches, past the bent oak, through the undergrowth, her phone's light bobbing ahead of her, leading her back toward the park gate, back to…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 7.14% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.143 | | leniency | 0.286 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.286 | |