Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2ECDTWEPTJTV7RYKGVSXMT

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Duration:
23.1s
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$0.000598
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DeepSeek

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain came down in sheets, turning the neon glow of Soho into bleeding watercolors on the asphalt. Detective Harlow Quinn kept her pace steady, her worn leather shoes slapping against the wet pavement as she wove through the late-night crowd. Her target was twenty yards ahead, a blur of dark coat and quick movement, always staying just beyond arm's reach. The suspect had bolted when Quinn had flashed her badge outside The Raven's Nest. She'd been watching the bar for two weeks, logging faces and patterns, waiting for the thread that would unravel the whole tapestry. The man in the dark coat had been her thread, and now he was running. Quinn's lungs burned with the familiar fire of pursuit. Her salt-and-pepper hair was plastered to her scalp, the sharp edge of her jaw set tight as she pushed harder. The man glanced back, his face a pale moon in the rain, and his eyes went wide when he saw she wasn't falling behind. He cut left down an alley, and Quinn followed without hesitation. The alley was narrow, choked with dumpsters and the sour smell of spoiled beer. Overhead, a rusted fire escape dripped water in irregular intervals. The man's foot slipped on a slick patch of concrete, and he went down hard, his palms scraping against the ground. Quinn closed the distance. "Metropolitan Police. Stay down." But the man scrambled back to his feet, his breath ragged. He pulled something from his pocket, not a weapon but a small, pale object that caught the faint light from the street behind them. He pressed it against a wall that looked no different from the rest of the damp brick, and the stone groaned in response. A section of the wall peeled inward, revealing a passage that sloped downward into darkness. Faint light flickered from below, orange and green, like gas lamps through colored glass. The man disappeared into the opening before Quinn could reach him. She stopped at the threshold. The air coming from the passage was warm and carried the smell of incense, wet earth, and something metallic. The stone steps were worn smooth by countless feet, and a low hum of voices and music pulsed from the depths. Quinn's hand drifted to the radio on her shoulder. She could call for backup, seal the entrance, wait for uniforms to flood the area. That was procedure. That was safe. But she knew from eighteen years on the force that safe didn't catch suspects who ran into impossible doors in alley walls. She stepped through. The passage closed behind her with a soft thud, sealing her in. For a moment, there was only the darkness and the distant sounds of the market below. Quinn pulled her torch from her belt and clicked it on. The beam cut through the gloom, revealing walls covered in symbols she didn't recognize-coils of script that seemed to shift when she looked at them directly. She descended. The tunnel opened into a cavern that shouldn't have existed beneath London. The ceiling arched high overhead, lost in shadows, while stalls and makeshift shops lined a central thoroughfare that stretched as far as she could see. The light came from lanterns filled with flames that burned blue and green, casting everyone's faces in sickly hues. The air was thick with smoke and the murmur of hundreds of voices speaking a dozen languages. Quinn had heard rumors of the Veil Market. Whispers passed between informants who knew better than to speak too loudly. An underground bazaar that moved with the moon, selling things that couldn't be bought with regular money. She'd always dismissed it as folklore, the kind of story that drunks told to make themselves sound important. But here she was. The crowd parted around her, wary eyes tracking her movements. A woman with iridescent scales running along her cheekbones watched Quinn pass, her pupils slitted like a cat's. A man selling jars of preserved eyes offered no greeting, just a cold stare. The air hummed with tension, the kind that settled in a room when an outsider walked in uninvited. Quinn kept her torch low, her other hand resting on the grip of her service weapon. She scanned the crowd for the dark coat, the pale face, the desperation she'd seen in the suspect's eyes. There. Twenty feet ahead, the man ducked behind a stall draped in black fabric. Quinn moved, keeping her footsteps quiet, her breathing controlled. She slipped between two tents that smelled of dried herbs and decay, and emerged in a narrower corridor where the lighting was dimmer and the stalls sold things she didn't have words for. A cage hung from a wooden beam, and inside it, something with too many limbs pressed against the bars, clicking its mandibles. Quinn forced herself to look past it, to keep her focus on the man. He was stopped at a stall at the end of the corridor, speaking urgently to a vendor who wore a mask of oxidized copper. The vendor was shaking his head, his movements slow and deliberate. The man's voice rose, pleading, and Quinn caught snippets of the exchange. ". . . don't have the token. I need passage. They're coming for me. . ." Quinn stepped into the light, her torch aimed at the man's face. "Metropolitan Police. You're done running." The vendor with the copper mask vanished behind his stall, and the corridor fell silent. The man turned slowly, his hands raised, his expression caught between fear and something darker. "You don't know where you are," he said, his voice cracked. "You don't understand what follows you in here." "I understand enough." Quinn took a step closer. "You're coming with me. We're going back through that door, and you're going to tell me everything you know about the people at The Raven's Nest." The man laughed, a hollow, broken sound. "The Raven's Nest. That's the least of your problems, detective. You step out of this market tonight, and you'll be dead before sunrise. They know your face now. They know you followed me." Quinn's jaw tightened. She kept her hand on her weapon, her eyes scanning the shadows around them. She could feel the weight of unseen gazes from every direction, the press of the market's attention like a physical thing. "You got three seconds to make a choice," she said. "Come with me, or I put you down here and haul your ass out unconscious." The man looked at the copper mask vendor, who had reappeared with a small object in his hand, a token made of yellowed bone. The vendor held it out, and the man snatched it, his fingers closing around it like a lifeline. "I'm sorry," he said, and then he turned and ran. Quinn cursed and gave chase, her boots pounding against the stone floor. The corridor twisted and branched, and she followed the sound of his footsteps through the warren of stalls and tents. She burst into a larger chamber, where the market's central thoroughfare opened up around a fountain that flowed with something dark and viscous. The man was at the far end of the chamber, heading for another entrance, an archway carved with the same shifting symbols she'd seen in the tunnel. Beyond it, the darkness was absolute, and the air that came from it was cold. Quinn stopped at the edge of the fountain. The crowd around her had stilled, watching, waiting. The man paused at the archway, the bone token clutched in his hand, and looked back at her. "Follow me, and you don't come back," he said. "This is the last door." Quinn looked at the archway, at the unknown darkness beyond. She looked back at the market, at the faces that had tracked her since she'd arrived, at the flickering blue-green flames and the impossible transactions taking place under the ground of London. She had a choice. Turn back, call in the cavalry, seal the entrances she knew about. Live to fight another day. Or step through the door. The man was already turning, his silhouette dissolving into the dark. Quinn took a breath, felt the weight of her badge against her chest, and made her decision.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.385
leniency0.769
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.35% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1369
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
41.56% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1369
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"unravel"
count1
1
word"tapestry"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count1
5
word"depths"
count1
6
word"gloom"
count1
7
word"tension"
count1
8
word"scanned"
count1
9
word"footsteps"
count2
10
word"scanning"
count1
11
word"could feel"
count1
12
word"weight"
count2
13
word"pounding"
count1
highlights
0"unravel"
1"tapestry"
2"familiar"
3"flickered"
4"pulsed"
5"depths"
6"gloom"
7"tension"
8"scanned"
9"footsteps"
10"scanning"
11"could feel"
12"weight"
13"pounding"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"The air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences89
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences96
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1372
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount1250
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.68
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Harlow1
Quinn21
Raven1
Nest1
London2
Veil1
Market1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
places
0"Soho"
1"Raven"
2"London"
3"Market"
globalScore0.66
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"script that seemed to shift when she looked at them directly"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.729
wordCount1372
matches
0"not a weapon but a small, pale object"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean36.11
std19.34
cv0.536
sampleLengths
061
151
253
356
48
558
640
745
852
93
1065
112
1273
1355
144
1560
1635
1756
1836
1947
2016
2117
2230
2319
2434
2540
2638
2725
2842
2910
3055
3142
3234
3314
3442
3521
365
3728
97.38% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences89
matches
0"was plastered"
1"was stopped"
73.02% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs210
matches
0"was running"
1"wasn't falling"
2"was shaking"
3"was already turning"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences96
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1252
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.015175718849840255
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.004792332268370607
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences96
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences96
mean14.29
std7.24
cv0.506
sampleLengths
018
123
220
314
422
515
69
720
824
911
1014
1110
1221
134
144
1511
1624
1723
1815
1914
2011
215
2219
2321
249
2515
263
273
2822
293
3012
3116
3211
3326
342
3512
3625
3719
3817
398
4012
4117
4218
434
4410
4518
4614
4718
4816
4919
34.38% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.28125
totalSentences96
uniqueOpeners27
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences85
matches
0"Her target was twenty yards"
1"She'd been watching the bar"
2"Her salt-and-pepper hair was plastered"
3"He cut left down an"
4"He pulled something from his"
5"He pressed it against a"
6"She stopped at the threshold."
7"She could call for backup,"
8"She stepped through."
9"She'd always dismissed it as"
10"She scanned the crowd for"
11"She slipped between two tents"
12"He was stopped at a"
13"he said, his voice cracked"
14"She kept her hand on"
15"She could feel the weight"
16"he said, and then he"
17"She burst into a larger"
18"She looked back at the"
19"She had a choice."
ratio0.235
24.71% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences85
matches
0"The rain came down in"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn kept her"
2"Her target was twenty yards"
3"The suspect had bolted when"
4"She'd been watching the bar"
5"The man in the dark"
6"Quinn's lungs burned with the"
7"Her salt-and-pepper hair was plastered"
8"The man glanced back, his"
9"He cut left down an"
10"The alley was narrow, choked"
11"The man's foot slipped on"
12"Quinn closed the distance."
13"He pulled something from his"
14"He pressed it against a"
15"A section of the wall"
16"The man disappeared into the"
17"She stopped at the threshold."
18"The air coming from the"
19"The stone steps were worn"
ratio0.871
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
ratio0
43.96% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences65
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"She'd been watching the bar for two weeks, logging faces and patterns, waiting for the thread that would unravel the whole tapestry."
1"He pulled something from his pocket, not a weapon but a small, pale object that caught the faint light from the street behind them."
2"The beam cut through the gloom, revealing walls covered in symbols she didn't recognize-coils of script that seemed to shift when she looked at them directly."
3"The ceiling arched high overhead, lost in shadows, while stalls and makeshift shops lined a central thoroughfare that stretched as far as she could see."
4"An underground bazaar that moved with the moon, selling things that couldn't be bought with regular money."
5"She'd always dismissed it as folklore, the kind of story that drunks told to make themselves sound important."
6"She burst into a larger chamber, where the market's central thoroughfare opened up around a fountain that flowed with something dark and viscous."
7"She looked back at the market, at the faces that had tracked her since she'd arrived, at the flickering blue-green flames and the impossible transactions taking…"
8"The man was already turning, his silhouette dissolving into the dark."
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he said, his voice cracked"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.308
leniency0.615
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.0781%