Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2ED3CPW7HF5F9HRBWP0E1Y

Run Details

Duration:
29.7s
Cost:
$0.000604
Provider:
DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The night air smelled wrong. Not the usual Richmond Park damp of grass and dew and distant city smog, but something earthier, greener, almost sweet—like crushed ferns left to rot in a place that had never seen the sun. Rory stopped at the edge of the clearing and shoved her free hand deeper into her jacket pocket. Her other hand pressed the Heartstone Pendant against her chest through the fabric of her hoodie. It had been warm when she left her flat above Silas' bar. Warm all through the cab ride, warm during the twenty-minute walk from the park gate through the darkened paths. Now it vibrated against her sternum with a low, persistent thrum, like a second heartbeat. She hadn't meant to come here. Not tonight. Not alone. But the pendant had pulsed harder after sundown, a rhythmic insistence that crawled up her neck and settled behind her eyes. Eva had told her to stay away from the Grove unless she had backup. Eva had told her a lot of things. Eva wasn't here. The oak standing stones loomed at the clearing's perimeter, their bark gnarled into shapes that looked almost deliberate—twisted faces, grasping hands, mouths frozen mid-scream. Moonlight slid between the canopy in patches that didn't move with the wind. The wildflowers at her feet glowed faintly, phosphorescent whites and blues that shouldn't have existed in November. Rory took a step forward. The grass crackled under her trainers like dry bone. She scanned the clearing. Nothing. Just the stones, the flowers, the impossible stillness of a place that time had forgotten. An hour in here could be minutes outside, or days. She'd learned that lesson the hard way on her first visit, when what felt like a half-hour conversation with the grove's guardian left her blinking in a Richmond Park that had somehow skipped from Tuesday afternoon to Thursday morning. The pendant kept pulsing. "Alright," she whispered, her voice flat against the silence. "I'm here. Now what?" No answer. Of course. The Grove didn't answer questions. It answered presence, intention, the weight of what you carried inside you. Rory had learned that too. She crossed to the centre stone, the largest, its surface slick with moss that shimmered under the moonlight like wet ink. She pressed her palm against it. Cold. Colder than the night air. Cold enough that she yanked her hand back and shook it, fingers tingling. Behind her, something rustled. She spun. The edge of the clearing stood empty. The undergrowth beyond the stones was thick, black, impenetrable. She waited. Her breath fogged in front of her face. The rustle came again—soft, deliberate, the sound of something brushing against leaves. Not wind. There was no wind. "Hello?" Her voice cracked on the last syllable. She swallowed and tried again. "Is someone there?" Nothing. The rustle stopped. The silence pressed in like a heavy blanket, thick enough to choke on. Rory turned back to the stone, but her gaze snagged on the pendant. It was glowing now, the deep crimson gem casting a faint red light across her chest. She lifted the silver chain and held the stone between her fingers. Warm. Warmer than it had been. Almost hot. She looked up. The Grove had changed. The wildflowers weren't glowing anymore. They had darkened, their petals curling inward, their stems wilting as if someone had turned off the light. The grass beneath her feet had yellowed. The moss on the standing stones had receded, leaving raw grey bark that looked less like oak and more like granite—ancient, unmoving, waiting. Rory's heart hammered against her ribs. She took a step back. The pendant's pulse quickened, matching her heartbeat. Something moved at the edge of her vision. She snapped her head to the left. Nothing. Just a standing stone, its carved face now more distinct—a screaming mouth, hollow eyes, a long nose that might have been a beak. She turned to the right. Another stone. Another face. This one's eyes were closed. They hadn't been closed before. Her breath came shallow. She backed toward the entrance of the clearing, the path she had come in on. The ground felt wrong under her feet, spongy, like walking on wet sponge. The grass made no sound now. The pendant flared, hot against her skin. She gasped and let go of the chain, letting it fall back against her chest. It burned through her hoodie, through her t-shirt, a searing point of heat just above her heart. "Okay," she said, louder now, trying to command the air. "I'm leaving. I'm going." She turned and walked—didn't run, wouldn't run, because running meant something was chasing, and she refused to give whatever this place was that satisfaction. Her legs carried her toward the gap between two stones, the path that led back to the park, to the streetlights and the distant hum of traffic. The gap was gone. Two standing stones stood flush against each other, their edges meeting with a seam so perfect it might have been carved. No space between them. No way through. Rory stopped. Her hands trembled. She forced them still. "Alright," she breathed. "Alright, fine." She turned around slowly. The clearing stretched before her, empty and silent. The flowers had died completely now, their stems blackened, their petals ash. The moss on the stones had turned grey, cracked, flaking off in sheets. The pendant pulsed once, twice, three times—then stopped. Cold flooded her chest. The absence of warmth felt worse than any heat. She looked down. The gem had gone dark, the inner glow extinguished. It lay against her collarbone like a dead thing, heavy and inert. A whisper came from behind her. Close. So close she felt the breath on the back of her neck—cold, dry, smelling of earth and something metallic. She froze. The whisper came again, but she couldn't make out words. It was just sound, a rustle of air shaped by a throat that didn't know how to speak. It ran down her spine like ice water. Rory's eyes darted around the clearing. The standing stones had all taken the same shape now—screaming faces, closed eyes, long beaks. They stared at her from every angle, a ring of stone watchers. The moonlight had vanished. The Grove was dark, darker than night, a blackness that swallowed the concept of light. Something touched her shoulder. She spun, fist raised, ready to swing. But there was nothing. The spot where she had stood was empty. The whisper had stopped. The Grove was still, silent, dead. And then the laughter started. It came from everywhere—from the stones, from the ground, from the air itself. A low, guttural chuckle that rose in pitch until it became a cackle, a shriek, a thousand voices layered on top of each other, all laughing, all at her. Rory clamped her hands over her ears. The laughter didn't stop. It vibrated through her skull, through her teeth, through her bones. She stumbled backward, hit a standing stone, and fell. The impact jarred her spine. Her vision swam. The pendant lay cold against her neck, useless. The laughter cut off. Silence slammed back down, absolute, suffocating. Rory pushed herself up, panting. Her hands were scraped. Blood beaded on her palm. She stared at it, then at the clearing. The flowers had returned. The moss was green on the stones. The moonlight filtered through the canopy in soft, gentle patches. And in the centre of the clearing, a figure stood. Human-shaped. Tall. Still. Face hidden in shadow, but eyes visible—two pinpricks of pale green light that glowed like foxfire in the dark. The figure did not move. Did not speak. Just watched. Rory's breath caught. The Heartstone Pendant lay dead against her chest. She was alone in the Grove, in the dark, in a place where time did not obey. And she was not alone.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.42% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1320
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
16.67% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1320
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"vibrated"
count2
1
word"pulsed"
count2
2
word"rhythmic"
count1
3
word"loomed"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"silence"
count3
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"shimmered"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"quickened"
count1
10
word"searing"
count1
11
word"perfect"
count1
12
word"trembled"
count1
13
word"warmth"
count1
14
word"whisper"
count3
15
word"down her spine"
count1
highlights
0"vibrated"
1"pulsed"
2"rhythmic"
3"loomed"
4"scanned"
5"silence"
6"weight"
7"shimmered"
8"pulse"
9"quickened"
10"searing"
11"perfect"
12"trembled"
13"warmth"
14"whisper"
15"down her spine"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences151
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences151
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences156
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1310
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount1291
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.77
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Heartstone2
Pendant2
Warm2
Grove6
November1
Tuesday1
Thursday1
Rory10
Eva3
Cold3
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Rory"
2"Eva"
3"Cold"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"November"
3"Tuesday"
4"Thursday"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences82
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a half-hour conversation with"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.763
wordCount1310
matches
0"Not the usual Richmond Park damp of grass and dew and distant city smog, but something earthier, greener, almost sweet"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences156
matches
0"learned that lesson"
1"was that satisfaction"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean24.26
std19.51
cv0.804
sampleLengths
039
180
210
346
454
514
669
74
813
926
1046
114
1246
131
1412
153
1617
1749
183
194
2053
2118
2253
235
2438
2539
2614
2751
284
2928
309
315
3237
338
3437
3526
362
3736
3852
394
4029
415
4242
4322
4425
454
466
4722
4821
4910
95.97% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences151
matches
0"been closed"
1"was gone"
2"been carved"
3"were scraped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs213
matches
0"was glowing"
1"weren't glowing"
2"was chasing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences156
ratio0.071
matches
0"Not the usual Richmond Park damp of grass and dew and distant city smog, but something earthier, greener, almost sweet—like crushed ferns left to rot in a place that had never seen the sun."
1"The oak standing stones loomed at the clearing's perimeter, their bark gnarled into shapes that looked almost deliberate—twisted faces, grasping hands, mouths frozen mid-scream."
2"The rustle came again—soft, deliberate, the sound of something brushing against leaves."
3"The moss on the standing stones had receded, leaving raw grey bark that looked less like oak and more like granite—ancient, unmoving, waiting."
4"Just a standing stone, its carved face now more distinct—a screaming mouth, hollow eyes, a long nose that might have been a beak."
5"She turned and walked—didn't run, wouldn't run, because running meant something was chasing, and she refused to give whatever this place was that satisfaction."
6"The pendant pulsed once, twice, three times—then stopped."
7"So close she felt the breath on the back of her neck—cold, dry, smelling of earth and something metallic."
8"The standing stones had all taken the same shape now—screaming faces, closed eyes, long beaks."
9"It came from everywhere—from the stones, from the ground, from the air itself."
10"Face hidden in shadow, but eyes visible—two pinpricks of pale green light that glowed like foxfire in the dark."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount88
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount2
adverbRatio0.022727272727272728
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences156
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences156
mean8.4
std6.88
cv0.819
sampleLengths
05
134
218
316
412
519
615
76
82
92
1021
1114
128
133
1424
1513
1617
175
189
194
201
2115
2210
2339
244
259
264
272
282
295
3012
315
3221
336
341
355
3613
374
382
397
409
412
428
4312
442
454
461
477
485
493
35.26% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats23
diversityRatio0.27564102564102566
totalSentences156
uniqueOpeners43
78.13% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences128
matches
0"Just the stones, the flowers,"
1"Just a standing stone, its"
2"So close she felt the"
ratio0.023
85.63% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount43
totalSentences128
matches
0"Her other hand pressed the"
1"It had been warm when"
2"She hadn't meant to come"
3"She scanned the clearing."
4"She'd learned that lesson the"
5"she whispered, her voice flat"
6"It answered presence, intention, the"
7"She crossed to the centre"
8"She pressed her palm against"
9"Her breath fogged in front"
10"Her voice cracked on the"
11"She swallowed and tried again."
12"It was glowing now, the"
13"She lifted the silver chain"
14"She looked up."
15"They had darkened, their petals"
16"She took a step back."
17"She snapped her head to"
18"She turned to the right."
19"They hadn't been closed before."
ratio0.336
42.03% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount107
totalSentences128
matches
0"The night air smelled wrong."
1"Rory stopped at the edge"
2"Her other hand pressed the"
3"It had been warm when"
4"She hadn't meant to come"
5"Eva had told her to"
6"Eva had told her a"
7"Eva wasn't here."
8"The oak standing stones loomed"
9"Moonlight slid between the canopy"
10"The wildflowers at her feet"
11"Rory took a step forward."
12"The grass crackled under her"
13"She scanned the clearing."
14"An hour in here could"
15"She'd learned that lesson the"
16"The pendant kept pulsing."
17"she whispered, her voice flat"
18"The Grove didn't answer questions."
19"It answered presence, intention, the"
ratio0.836
39.06% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences128
matches
0"Now it vibrated against her"
ratio0.008
21.28% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Not the usual Richmond Park damp of grass and dew and distant city smog, but something earthier, greener, almost sweet—like crushed ferns left to rot in a place…"
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2"The oak standing stones loomed at the clearing's perimeter, their bark gnarled into shapes that looked almost deliberate—twisted faces, grasping hands, mouths f…"
3"She'd learned that lesson the hard way on her first visit, when what felt like a half-hour conversation with the grove's guardian left her blinking in a Richmon…"
4"She crossed to the centre stone, the largest, its surface slick with moss that shimmered under the moonlight like wet ink."
5"They had darkened, their petals curling inward, their stems wilting as if someone had turned off the light."
6"The moss on the standing stones had receded, leaving raw grey bark that looked less like oak and more like granite—ancient, unmoving, waiting."
7"Just a standing stone, its carved face now more distinct—a screaming mouth, hollow eyes, a long nose that might have been a beak."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she whispered, her voice flat against the silence"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"she breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.375
leniency0.75
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.5
76.8812%