Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2EESQVD4H0EAD8NN9ZRMNP

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22.4s
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Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The night air turned cold as Aurora stepped through the gap between the two tallest standing stones. Richmond Park had been quiet when she entered—too quiet, even for midnight—but the silence inside the grove was a different animal. It pressed against her eardrums like a physical weight, thick and swallowing. She'd come here to test the pendant. The crimson gem had been warm against her collarbone for the past hour, pulsing with a lazy beat that matched no rhythm in her body. Eva had warned her not to wander alone. Eva warned her about a lot of things. But the grove was the only place where the pendant ever did anything, and Rory needed to understand what that meant. The wildflowers beneath her boots looked wrong. They should have been wilted under the autumn chill—it was October, and London had already stripped the leaves from most trees. But here, bluebells and foxgloves bloomed in dense clusters, their colours too bright under the strange silver light that filtered through the canopy. The air smelled of damp earth and something else. Something sweet, almost rotten. Rory took three steps deeper into the clearing and stopped. The stones formed a rough circle maybe thirty feet across, their surfaces slick with moss and age. She'd visited during daylight once, on a dare from Silas, and they'd looked like ordinary rocks. Now they seemed to lean inward, their tops crooked toward the centre as if they were listening. The pendant pulsed again. Warmer this time. She touched it with her fingertips. The silver chain felt cool, but the gem itself radiated a gentle heat that spread into her chest. It calmed her, which was stupid. She should be scared. Every survival instinct screamed that this was a bad idea, that the grove was not meant for people after dark. But nothing had happened yet. Just the smell, the stillness, the sense of being watched. Rory turned slowly, scanning the treeline. The oaks that ringed the grove had grown thick and twisted over the decades—centuries, maybe—their branches interlaced like clasped hands. Between them, the darkness was absolute. No stars. No city glow. Just black, deep and patient. A sound broke the quiet. Not a rustle. Not a footstep. Something in between, like fabric dragging over dry leaves. It came from behind her, to her left. She spun, heart hammering, and saw nothing. The flowers swayed where no wind blew. "The hell," she whispered, and the sound of her own voice was too loud in the hush. Her breath misted in front of her face. She looked up. The canopy should have been there, blocking the sky, but instead she saw a seam of deep indigo painted with stars she didn't recognise. The constellations were wrong—sharp angles and spirals where she expected the familiar curves of Cassiopeia or the Plough. The longer she stared, the more they seemed to shift, rearranging themselves into patterns that made her stomach turn. She looked down. The flowers at her feet were open now. Some of them had faces. Not real faces. Just patterns in the petals that resolved into something eye-like, mouth-like, if she looked at them too long. Rory forced herself to breathe. She closed her eyes, counted to five, and opened them again. The flowers were just flowers. The pendant burned hot against her chest. A whisper came from the air around her, formless and layered, like many voices speaking at once from a great distance. She couldn't make out words—just the cadence, the rise and fall of syllables that did not belong to any language she knew. It was beautiful in the way a razor's edge is beautiful. Rory backed toward the stones. Her heel struck the base of one and she stumbled, catching herself on the rough surface. The pendant's heat intensified, almost painful now. She looked down and saw it glowing through the fabric of her shirt, a dull red light that pulsed in time with the whispers. The flowers were all looking at her now. Every single one. The faces in the petals had turned toward her, their tiny mouths open, their stems bent in her direction like sea grass caught in a current. She ran. Not toward the exit—she'd lost track of which gap between the stones led back to the park. She ran across the clearing, boots crushing flowers that cried out in paper-thin voices, heading for the darkest part of the treeline. The whispers rose in pitch, became a single word repeated over and over. *Malphora. Malphora. Malphora.* That wasn't her name. She didn't know what that meant. She reached the trees and plunged through them. The branches didn't scratch her face—they parted, willingly, as if they had been waiting to let her pass. The moment she was through the canopy, the whispers stopped. The cold vanished. She stood in a small clearing under normal moonlight, the distant hum of Richmond traffic reaching her ears. The pendant was cool again. She stood there, chest heaving, and looked back. The grove was visible through a gap in the oaks: a circle of bright flowers and standing stones bathed in an unearthly glow. The stars above it still looked wrong from this angle. Something stood among the stones. Tall. Angular. Its outline flickered like a candle in a draft, and where its face should have been, there was only a smooth, pale surface reflecting the starlight. Rory didn't wait to see if it moved. She turned and ran through the park, the pendant cold and silent against her skin, until the lights of the car park came into view and she could breathe again.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.74% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount950
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
36.84% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount950
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"chill"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count2
4
word"sense of"
count1
5
word"scanning"
count1
6
word"familiar"
count1
7
word"stomach"
count1
8
word"resolved"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"weight"
2"chill"
3"pulsed"
4"sense of"
5"scanning"
6"familiar"
7"stomach"
8"resolved"
9"whisper"
10"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences88
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences88
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords3
totalWords941
ratio0.003
matches
0"Malphora. Malphora. Malphora."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions15
wordCount939
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.64
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Aurora1
Park1
Rory6
October1
London1
Silas1
Cassiopeia1
Plough1
Richmond2
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Rory"
2"Silas"
places
0"Park"
1"London"
2"Richmond"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like ordinary rocks"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount941
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences88
matches
0"screamed that this"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean34.85
std22.23
cv0.638
sampleLengths
050
169
264
360
47
554
615
742
85
937
1017
1172
1216
1342
147
1554
1652
1737
182
1952
203
2110
2257
235
2441
2533
2638
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences88
matches
0"been wilted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs158
matches
0"were listening"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences88
ratio0.08
matches
0"Richmond Park had been quiet when she entered—too quiet, even for midnight—but the silence inside the grove was a different animal."
1"They should have been wilted under the autumn chill—it was October, and London had already stripped the leaves from most trees."
2"The oaks that ringed the grove had grown thick and twisted over the decades—centuries, maybe—their branches interlaced like clasped hands."
3"The constellations were wrong—sharp angles and spirals where she expected the familiar curves of Cassiopeia or the Plough."
4"She couldn't make out words—just the cadence, the rise and fall of syllables that did not belong to any language she knew."
5"Not toward the exit—she'd lost track of which gap between the stones led back to the park."
6"The branches didn't scratch her face—they parted, willingly, as if they had been waiting to let her pass."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount951
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.03785488958990536
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.005257623554153523
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences88
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences88
mean10.69
std7.57
cv0.708
sampleLengths
017
121
212
37
425
58
68
721
87
921
1023
119
124
1310
1417
1516
1617
174
183
196
2018
216
224
2320
245
2510
266
2720
286
292
303
315
325
333
343
359
368
377
387
3917
408
413
4224
4318
4419
453
468
475
483
4918
35.23% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.2727272727272727
totalSentences88
uniqueOpeners24
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences81
matches
0"Just the smell, the stillness,"
1"Just black, deep and patient."
2"Just patterns in the petals"
ratio0.037
96.54% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences81
matches
0"It pressed against her eardrums"
1"She'd come here to test"
2"They should have been wilted"
3"She'd visited during daylight once,"
4"She touched it with her"
5"It calmed her, which was"
6"She should be scared."
7"It came from behind her,"
8"She spun, heart hammering, and"
9"she whispered, and the sound"
10"Her breath misted in front"
11"She looked up."
12"She looked down."
13"She closed her eyes, counted"
14"She couldn't make out words—just"
15"It was beautiful in the"
16"Her heel struck the base"
17"She looked down and saw"
18"She ran across the clearing,"
19"She didn't know what that"
ratio0.309
46.42% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences81
matches
0"The night air turned cold"
1"Richmond Park had been quiet"
2"It pressed against her eardrums"
3"She'd come here to test"
4"The crimson gem had been"
5"Eva had warned her not"
6"Eva warned her about a"
7"The wildflowers beneath her boots"
8"They should have been wilted"
9"The air smelled of damp"
10"Something sweet, almost rotten."
11"Rory took three steps deeper"
12"The stones formed a rough"
13"She'd visited during daylight once,"
14"The pendant pulsed again."
15"She touched it with her"
16"The silver chain felt cool,"
17"It calmed her, which was"
18"She should be scared."
19"Every survival instinct screamed that"
ratio0.827
61.73% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences81
matches
0"Now they seemed to lean"
ratio0.012
23.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The crimson gem had been warm against her collarbone for the past hour, pulsing with a lazy beat that matched no rhythm in her body."
1"But here, bluebells and foxgloves bloomed in dense clusters, their colours too bright under the strange silver light that filtered through the canopy."
2"The oaks that ringed the grove had grown thick and twisted over the decades—centuries, maybe—their branches interlaced like clasped hands."
3"The longer she stared, the more they seemed to shift, rearranging themselves into patterns that made her stomach turn."
4"Just patterns in the petals that resolved into something eye-like, mouth-like, if she looked at them too long."
5"She ran across the clearing, boots crushing flowers that cried out in paper-thin voices, heading for the darkest part of the treeline."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
83.1769%