Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2EF67MDHAG69PA6H8SBD6J

Run Details

Duration:
1m 25s
Cost:
$0.002639
Provider:
DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rap of knuckles against wood cut through the murmur of late-night Brick Lane—three sharp strikes, deliberate, a rhythm she hadn’t heard in eight months. Rory glanced up from her nest of research notes on Eva’s salvaged sofa. Ptolemy, the tabby, uncoiled from his spot on a teetering stack of grimoires and vanished under the kitchen table. She didn’t move. The deadbolts glinted in the low orange light, all three still thrown. Eva was in Bruges for a manuscript auction, wouldn’t be back until Thursday. The curry house downstairs had closed an hour ago, the smell of cumin and fenugreek still clinging to the floorboards. Another knock, softer this time, four raps with the silver head of a cane. Rory’s stomach dropped. She crossed the rug in bare feet, avoiding a pile of leather-bound journals, and pressed her palm flat against the door. The wood vibrated with the weight of someone leaning in from the other side. “I know you’re there, Rory. The cracks in this door flash when you block the light.” That voice. Low, faintly accented, the vowels polished smooth by years of moving through Paris, Milan, London. Lucien. Rory’s fingers hovered over the first deadbolt. The crescent scar on her left wrist caught the lamplight as she slid the brass aside. Second bolt. Third. She pulled the door open six inches and met a pair of mismatched eyes—one amber, one black as a bullet hole—set in a face that hadn’t changed since she’d walked out of his office on Fleet Street and into a December downpour. Platinum hair was slicked back from his temples, a shade too severe. Charcoal suit, as always, the lapel pressed and the shirt crisp. The ivory-handled cane hung loosely from his left hand, blade hidden inside, untapped. He stood with his weight on his right leg, favouring it, a tell she’d catalogued long ago. “You look well,” he said, and the lie was so effortless it almost sounded like the truth. Rory didn’t open the door further. “Eva’s not here.” “I’m not here for Eva.” A siren wailed somewhere toward Shoreditch, Doppler-shifting down into nothing. Rory’s jaw tightened. She wore an oversized Cardiff University jumper, the sleeves drooping past her knuckles, and a pair of joggers that had seen better days. Under his gaze, the clothes felt like a confession. “How did you find this place?” she asked. “You delivered a Peking duck to a cambion in Wapping last Tuesday. He recognised your scent. Called in a marker.” Lucien shifted his cane, the tip tapping once against the warped hallway floor. “I’m not here for trouble.” “Right. You just happened to be in the neighbourhood with your three-thousand-pound suit and a demon’s errand boy on speed dial.” Lucien’s mouth quirked—almost a smile, almost something else. “May I come in? These hallways have ears. Literally.” Rory wanted to slam the door. Wanted to slide all three bolts home and crawl back into the mess of Eva’s notes and pretend this wasn’t happening. Instead, she stepped aside, because that was the problem with Lucien Moreau. He never arrived without a reason, and she’d learned the hard way that ignoring his reasons only made them multiply. He crossed the threshold and the flat seemed to shrink. A cramped one-bedroom bursting with parchment, dusty tomes, and Ptolemy’s scattered toys. Lucien’s presence turned the clutter into chaos. He surveyed the room with a broker’s efficiency—cataloguing exits, evaluating threats—then unhooked a single button of his jacket and eased himself onto the edge of Eva’s writing chair, a rickety thing that groaned under his weight. “Ptolemy,” he said, spotting the tabby’s tail flicking from beneath a side table. “Still holding grudges.” The cat had once knocked over a vial of distilled nightmare essence in Lucien’s office, nearly costing him a contract with the Seelie envoy. Rory remembered the way Lucien had sighed, not angry but weary, and conjured a wisp of blue flame to burn the spill before it could coalesce. She’d mopped the residue while he poured two glasses of Armagnac. The first night she’d stayed past midnight. She pulled the sleeves of her jumper over her hands. “What do you want, Lucien?” He didn’t answer immediately. His gloved fingers traced the carved ivory of the cane’s handle, a habit she’d seen him perform a hundred times in negotiations. Buying time. “The Archivists’ Guild has flagged a transaction. Your name is attached to it.” Rory blinked. “I haven’t dealt with the Guild in months. Not since—” She stopped herself. “Not since you took the Malphora contract,” he finished. Silence swallowed the room. The name she’d used in the subterranean markets of Avaros—a persona she’d built stone by stone, deal by deal, until it almost fit. Lucien had been the one to broker that identity, to teach her how to walk the border between worlds without falling in. And then he’d asked her to do something she couldn’t stomach, and they’d split like ice cracking under pressure. “I’m retired,” Rory said flatly. “I deliver noodles now.” “The Archivist doesn’t care about your career change. Someone has been using your Malphora seal to requisition classified texts—rituals, binding contracts, the kind of knowledge that got three people killed in Prague last spring.” Lucien leaned forward, the chair creaking. “Either you’re lying to me, or someone is wearing your skin. I’m hoping it’s the latter.” Rory’s pulse hammered against her eardrums. “Why would you hope that?” The question hung between them, heavy and sticky as honey. Lucien’s gaze dropped to the crescent scar on her wrist—visible now because she’d crossed her arms and the sleeve had ridden up. He’d kissed that scar once, in his office after the nightmare essence incident, before they’d ruined everything with words and ambition. “Because,” he said, and his voice lost its broker’s polish, “if it’s you, then I have to stop you. And I’d rather not.” The admission landed like a fist. Rory turned away, walked to the tiny kitchen, and filled the kettle with water she didn’t want. The tap squealed. Ptolemy emerged from his hiding spot and wound around Lucien’s ankles, a traitor to the cause. “It’s not me,” she said over her shoulder. “I burned the Malphora seal three months ago. Dropped it in the Thames off Millennium Bridge.” “Then someone salvaged it. Or replicated it. Which requires access to your original blood signature.” Lucien accepted Ptolemy’s tentative advance with a scratch behind the ears. “Who else had access to that sigil?” Rory thought of Evan, her ex, the reason she’d fled Cardiff in the first place. A human with a supernatural obsession, manipulative and relentless. But Evan didn’t know about Malphora. He didn’t know about any of this. Did he? “No one,” she said. “Just you.” Lucien’s expression flickered—guilt, anger, something older. He rose from the chair, the cane tapping once on the floorboards. In three strides, he stood at the kitchen’s threshold, close enough that she could smell his cologne. Cedar and smoke. The same scent she’d worn on her pillow for weeks after she left. “Then we have a problem,” he said. “Because the Guild assumes it’s you, and they’ve put a bounty on Malphora’s head. A substantial one.” The kettle began to whistle. Rory didn’t move. “So this is a rescue mission.” “It’s a conversation. One we should have had months ago.” She turned to face him, her bright blue eyes catching the bare bulb overhead. “You let me walk out. You didn’t follow.” “You asked me not to.” “I didn’t think you’d listen.” Lucien’s gloved hand lifted, hovered an inch from her cheek, then withdrew. “I have always listened, Rory. You were just too busy running to hear me answer.” The words stripped something away—a layer of armour she’d been clinging to, the story she’d told herself about who was right and who was wrong and why she’d ended up alone in a friend’s flat above a curry house. Her hands unclenched at her sides. “I needed to get out,” she whispered. “Avaros, the contracts, the way you looked at me like I was a piece on a board. I couldn’t breathe.” “I looked at you like you were the only piece that mattered,” Lucien said. “That was the problem. I compromised everything for you, and you never asked me to.” Outside, a drunk couple stumbled down Brick Lane, laughter echoing off the brick. Inside, the kettle screamed until Rory yanked it off the hob. The sudden silence was deafening. She poured two mugs anyway—chipped, mismatched—and slid one across the counter to him. He caught it with his free hand, the leather of his glove creasing around the ceramic. “What’s the play?” she asked, slipping back into the old shorthand because it was easier than dissecting his last sentence. Lucien took a sip of tea that had only steeped for thirty seconds. “We find who forged your seal. We deliver them to the Guild before the bounty hunters find you. And then you disappear properly this time, if that’s what you want.” “And if it’s not?” The heterochromatic eyes held hers. “Then we have another conversation.” Ptolemy jumped onto the counter, tail curling into a question mark, and knocked over the sugar bowl. Granules scattered like tiny crystals across the laminate. Rory didn’t sweep them up. She just stood there, still in her bare feet, still in her friend’s flat, still—somehow—exactly where Lucien Moreau could find her. “I don’t trust you,” she said. “I don’t expect you to.” He set down the mug. “But you need me. And somewhere under all that stubborn Welsh pride, I think you know that.” Rory almost smiled. Almost. “Eva’s back Thursday. We leave tonight?” “There’s a car waiting on Commercial Street.” She drained her tea, the heat scalding her throat, and grabbed her trainers from the mat. As she laced them, she saw him watching her—not as a broker assessing a client, but as someone cataloguing a ghost that had finally stopped running. “Lucien,” she said, tying the last knot. “Yes?” “The conversation. The one we should have had months ago.” He lifted his cane, tapped it once against the floor. “We have time.” And for the first time since she’d opened the door, Rory believed him.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Rory said flatly [flatly]"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.365
leniency0.731
rawRatio0.053
effectiveRatio0.038
97.09% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1721
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"loosely"
count1
highlights
0"loosely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
62.23% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1721
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"stomach"
count2
1
word"vibrated"
count1
2
word"weight"
count3
3
word"effortless"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"flickered"
count1
8
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"vibrated"
2"weight"
3"effortless"
4"traced"
5"silence"
6"pulse"
7"flickered"
8"echoing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences110
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences110
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences143
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1705
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions23
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions69
wordCount1239
uniqueNames25
maxNameDensity1.37
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Brick2
Lane2
Eva4
Bruges1
Thursday1
Paris1
Milan1
London1
Fleet1
Street1
December1
Rory17
Shoreditch1
Doppler-shifting1
Cardiff2
University1
Lucien17
Moreau2
Ptolemy5
Seelie1
Armagnac1
Silence1
Avaros1
Evan2
Malphora1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
2"Lucien"
3"Moreau"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Silence"
6"Evan"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Bruges"
3"Paris"
4"Milan"
5"London"
6"Fleet"
7"Street"
8"December"
9"Shoreditch"
10"Cardiff"
globalScore0.814
windowScore0.667
85.90% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences78
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"sounded like the truth"
1"felt like a confession"
82.70% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.173
wordCount1705
matches
0"not angry but weary"
1"not as a broker assessing a client, but as someone cataloguing a ghost"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences143
matches
0"kissed that scar"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs63
mean27.06
std19.41
cv0.717
sampleLengths
057
165
235
316
418
568
653
717
89
95
1045
118
1238
1321
1417
1559
1665
1716
1868
1915
2028
2113
2215
239
2468
259
2656
2711
2853
2923
3042
3124
3233
3339
346
3551
3624
3714
3810
3922
405
415
4227
4345
4427
4529
4629
4729
4820
4943
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences110
matches
0"was slicked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs219
matches
0"wasn’t happening"
1"was deafening"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount15
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences143
ratio0.077
matches
0"The rap of knuckles against wood cut through the murmur of late-night Brick Lane—three sharp strikes, deliberate, a rhythm she hadn’t heard in eight months."
1"She pulled the door open six inches and met a pair of mismatched eyes—one amber, one black as a bullet hole—set in a face that hadn’t changed since she’d walked out of his office on Fleet Street and into a December downpour."
2"Lucien’s mouth quirked—almost a smile, almost something else."
3"He surveyed the room with a broker’s efficiency—cataloguing exits, evaluating threats—then unhooked a single button of his jacket and eased himself onto the edge of Eva’s writing chair, a rickety thing that groaned under his weight."
4"The name she’d used in the subterranean markets of Avaros—a persona she’d built stone by stone, deal by deal, until it almost fit."
5"Lucien’s gaze dropped to the crescent scar on her wrist—visible now because she’d crossed her arms and the sleeve had ridden up."
6"Lucien’s expression flickered—guilt, anger, something older."
7"The words stripped something away—a layer of armour she’d been clinging to, the story she’d told herself about who was right and who was wrong and why she’d ended up alone in a friend’s flat above a curry house."
8"She poured two mugs anyway—chipped, mismatched—and slid one across the counter to him."
9"She just stood there, still in her bare feet, still in her friend’s flat, still—somehow—exactly where Lucien Moreau could find her."
10"As she laced them, she saw him watching her—not as a broker assessing a client, but as someone cataloguing a ghost that had finally stopped running."
97.47% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1259
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount54
adverbRatio0.04289118347895155
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.007942811755361398
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences143
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences143
mean11.92
std8.35
cv0.7
sampleLengths
025
113
219
33
412
513
620
714
83
921
1014
1116
122
1315
141
157
1616
172
181
1942
2012
2111
2213
2317
2417
256
263
275
2810
293
3023
319
328
3333
345
3521
368
379
386
3921
4012
4120
4210
4312
447
4536
4613
473
4824
4926
58.97% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3706293706293706
totalSentences143
uniqueOpeners53
35.09% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences95
matches
0"Instead, she stepped aside, because"
ratio0.011
93.68% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences95
matches
0"She didn’t move."
1"She crossed the rug in"
2"She pulled the door open"
3"He stood with his weight"
4"he said, and the lie"
5"She wore an oversized Cardiff"
6"He never arrived without a"
7"He crossed the threshold and"
8"He surveyed the room with"
9"he said, spotting the tabby’s"
10"She’d mopped the residue while"
11"She pulled the sleeves of"
12"He didn’t answer immediately."
13"His gloved fingers traced the"
14"She stopped herself"
15"He’d kissed that scar once,"
16"he said, and his voice"
17"she said over her shoulder"
18"He didn’t know about any"
19"He rose from the chair,"
ratio0.316
17.89% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount84
totalSentences95
matches
0"The rap of knuckles against"
1"Rory glanced up from her"
2"Ptolemy, the tabby, uncoiled from"
3"She didn’t move."
4"The deadbolts glinted in the"
5"Eva was in Bruges for"
6"The curry house downstairs had"
7"Another knock, softer this time,"
8"Rory’s stomach dropped."
9"She crossed the rug in"
10"The wood vibrated with the"
11"Rory’s fingers hovered over the"
12"The crescent scar on her"
13"She pulled the door open"
14"Platinum hair was slicked back"
15"Charcoal suit, as always, the"
16"The ivory-handled cane hung loosely"
17"He stood with his weight"
18"he said, and the lie"
19"Rory didn’t open the door"
ratio0.884
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"She wore an oversized Cardiff University jumper, the sleeves drooping past her knuckles, and a pair of joggers that had seen better days."
1"He surveyed the room with a broker’s efficiency—cataloguing exits, evaluating threats—then unhooked a single button of his jacket and eased himself onto the edg…"
2"As she laced them, she saw him watching her—not as a broker assessing a client, but as someone cataloguing a ghost that had finally stopped running."
46.05% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"he said, and the lie was so effortless it almost sounded like the truth"
1"Lucien shifted, the tip tapping once against the warped hallway floor"
2"Lucien leaned, the chair creaking"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.038
81.4584%