Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2EP1EDGW1VCSZ12BBSB0KY

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Duration:
41.1s
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$0.000808
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DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came at half past nine, three sharp raps against the wood that sent Ptolemy scrambling off the windowsill. Aurora paused mid-bite over Eva's research notes, chopsticks hovering above a takeaway box of noodles. The cat's tail flicked as he stared at the door. She wiped her fingers on her jeans and crossed the cramped living room, stepping over stacks of books and a discarded scarf. Three deadbolts slid back with well-practiced turns. Fourth one stuck—Eva always left it half-engaged. Aurora jiggled the lock, yanked, and finally pulled the door open six inches, chain still on. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing. The dim bulb above the curry house caught the platinum of his hair, the crisp white of his shirt beneath an unbuttoned charcoal overcoat. His cane rested against his shoulder, hand dangling loose at his side. One amber eye, one black—both fixed on her with that unreadable stillness he wore like a second layer of tailoring. Aurora's stomach dropped. She didn't close the door. Didn't open it wider either. “You're a long way from Soho,” she said. “Eva's flat.” His voice carried the same Marseille rasp, the same dry amusement at the edges. “I'm not lost.” “She's not here. Gone to Edinburgh for the week. Research trip.” “I know.” The chain rattled as she shifted her weight. “Then why are you knocking?” Lucien reached into his breast pocket with slow, deliberate care—a gesture meant to reassure, not threaten. He pulled out a folded piece of paper, cream-coloured, edges crisp. Held it between two fingers. “This was slipped under my door this morning. Thought you should see it.” She didn't take it. “What is it?” “A photograph. Of you. Leaving the Golden Empress last Tuesday, eleven-nineteen at night.” He paused. “Someone's watching your routine, Rory. Taking notes.” The name hit like a low punch. He'd never called her that before. Only Eva did. Aurora unhooked the chain and let the door swing open. She stepped back, arms crossed, chin lifted. “Come in. But you're not staying long.” Lucien dipped his head in a mock bow and walked past her, close enough that she caught the wintergreen of his cologne, the faint warmth radiating off his skin. He moved through the flat with the quiet dismissal of someone used to taking in spaces at a glance—the cluttered desk, the tower of scrolls, the cat now weaving between his ankles. He didn't pet Ptolemy. He simply stepped around him. Aurora closed the door, locked all four bolts, and turned to face him. “Show me.” He held out the photograph. She took it. Glossy paper, printed on heavy stock. A shot from across the street—her in her delivery jacket, helmet tucked under her arm, the restaurant's neon sign bleeding red across her face. The date stamp in the corner read 22:19. The angle was deliberate. Whoever took it knew where she'd be. “Could be anyone,” she said, but her voice came out flat. “It's not anyone.” Lucien set his cane against Eva's desk and lowered himself onto the arm of the worn sofa, crossing one ankle over the other. “The paper's French. Watermark says Strasbourg. That's my city, Rory. Someone's sending me a message about you. Wants me to know they know.” She dropped the photo onto the nearest stack of books. “Why would you care? We haven't spoken in three months.” “We haven't spoken in three months because you decided we shouldn't.” “I decided?” A laugh escaped her—short, bitter. “You're the one who walked out of that pub without a word. Left me standing at the bar with two drinks and a train schedule.” Lucien's jaw tightened. The movement was subtle, but she caught it. He looked down at his hands, at the silver ring on his middle finger, turning it once. “I had a job. A messy one. I didn't want you near it.” “You could have said that.” “Would you have believed me?” The question hung between them, sharp as the hiss of a kettle. Aurora pressed her palm flat against the wall, felt the old wallpaper peel beneath her fingers. “You didn't give me the chance to find out.” Ptolemy jumped onto Lucien's knee. He didn't push the cat away. His fingers found the scruff of its neck, scratching absently, and for a moment the man in the charcoal suit looked almost human. Almost soft. “I'm here now,” he said. “That doesn't fix it.” “No. But it's a start.” Aurora stared at him. At the platinum hair that never fell out of place, the mismatched eyes that gave nothing away, the hand that kept moving against the cat's fur like he needed something to hold. She remembered the heat of his palm against her lower back the night they'd danced in that basement club in Camden, bodies pressed together as the bass thrummed through the floor. She remembered the way he'd whispered in French against her temple—words she didn't understand but felt in the pit of her chest. And then the silence. The cold silence of three months. “Why now?” she asked. “Why knock on this door tonight?” Lucien looked up. The amber eye caught the lamplight; the black one swallowed it. “Because the photograph arrived this morning. Because I spent the afternoon tracing the postmark and came up empty. Because when I thought about who might be in danger, the first image that hit me wasn't Eva's face.” He stood, crossing the room in three long strides, close enough that she had to tilt her chin to hold his gaze. “It was yours.” Her breath stalled. His hand came up, slow, hovering an inch from her cheek—giving her time to pull away. She didn't. “I should have called,” he said. “I should have explained. But every time I reached for my phone, I remembered the way you looked at me that night. Like you'd seen something in me you didn't want to name.” “I saw you leaving,” she whispered. “That's all I saw.” His fingers brushed her jaw, light as a question mark. “I'm not leaving now.” The flat hummed with the low drone of the fridge, the distant clatter of pans from the curry house below. Ptolemy mewed once, then hopped off the sofa and padded toward the kitchen. The moment stretched, thin as thread. “Luc.” Her voice caught on the syllable. “What are we doing?” He didn't answer with words. His hand slid to the nape of her neck, thumb pressing against the hollow behind her ear, and he leaned in until his forehead rested against hers. The length of his body blocked the light from the lamp, casting them both in shadow. “I don't know,” he breathed. “But I'm tired of pretending I don't want to find out.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1133
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
64.70% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1133
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"flicked"
count1
1
word"unreadable"
count1
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count1
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"tracing"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
1"unreadable"
2"stomach"
3"weight"
4"warmth"
5"silence"
6"tracing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences77
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences103
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen59
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1125
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount814
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.86
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Ptolemy4
Eva4
Moreau1
Marseille1
Lucien7
Aurora7
Camden1
French1
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Eva"
2"Moreau"
3"Lucien"
4"Aurora"
places
0"Marseille"
1"Camden"
2"French"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences49
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1125
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean26.16
std22.1
cv0.845
sampleLengths
045
152
26
356
413
58
619
711
82
913
1045
117
1222
1316
1424
1570
1615
178
1849
1911
2049
2120
2211
2332
2441
255
265
2737
2836
295
304
315
3299
3310
3476
3521
3639
3710
3814
3939
4011
4148
4216
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs141
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences103
ratio0.087
matches
0"Fourth one stuck—Eva always left it half-engaged."
1"One amber eye, one black—both fixed on her with that unreadable stillness he wore like a second layer of tailoring."
2"Lucien reached into his breast pocket with slow, deliberate care—a gesture meant to reassure, not threaten."
3"He moved through the flat with the quiet dismissal of someone used to taking in spaces at a glance—the cluttered desk, the tower of scrolls, the cat now weaving between his ankles."
4"A shot from across the street—her in her delivery jacket, helmet tucked under her arm, the restaurant's neon sign bleeding red across her face."
5"“I decided?” A laugh escaped her—short, bitter."
6"She remembered the way he'd whispered in French against her temple—words she didn't understand but felt in the pit of her chest."
7"The amber eye caught the lamplight; the black one swallowed it."
8"His hand came up, slow, hovering an inch from her cheek—giving her time to pull away."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount826
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.02784503631961259
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.004842615012106538
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences103
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences103
mean10.92
std9.18
cv0.841
sampleLengths
020
115
210
322
47
57
616
76
824
912
1020
113
125
135
148
1516
163
1711
182
198
205
2116
2211
235
2413
254
263
2715
287
297
306
313
3210
337
347
3529
3632
374
385
3913
402
415
423
436
4424
458
464
477
4811
4926
56.31% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3786407766990291
totalSentences103
uniqueOpeners39
49.02% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences68
matches
0"Only Eva did."
ratio0.015
61.18% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences68
matches
0"She wiped her fingers on"
1"His cane rested against his"
2"She didn't close the door."
3"His voice carried the same"
4"He pulled out a folded"
5"She didn't take it."
6"He'd never called her that"
7"She stepped back, arms crossed,"
8"He moved through the flat"
9"He didn't pet Ptolemy."
10"He simply stepped around him."
11"He held out the photograph."
12"She took it."
13"she said, but her voice"
14"She dropped the photo onto"
15"He looked down at his"
16"He didn't push the cat"
17"His fingers found the scruff"
18"She remembered the heat of"
19"She remembered the way he'd"
ratio0.397
33.53% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount58
totalSentences68
matches
0"The knock came at half"
1"Aurora paused mid-bite over Eva's"
2"The cat's tail flicked as"
3"She wiped her fingers on"
4"Aurora jiggled the lock, yanked,"
5"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
6"The dim bulb above the"
7"His cane rested against his"
8"Aurora's stomach dropped."
9"She didn't close the door."
10"His voice carried the same"
11"The chain rattled as she"
12"Lucien reached into his breast"
13"He pulled out a folded"
14"She didn't take it."
15"The name hit like a"
16"He'd never called her that"
17"Aurora unhooked the chain and"
18"She stepped back, arms crossed,"
19"Lucien dipped his head in"
ratio0.853
73.53% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences68
matches
0"Whoever took it knew where"
ratio0.015
95.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The knock came at half past nine, three sharp raps against the wood that sent Ptolemy scrambling off the windowsill."
1"At the platinum hair that never fell out of place, the mismatched eyes that gave nothing away, the hand that kept moving against the cat's fur like he needed so…"
48.08% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she said, but her voice came out flat"
1"A laugh escaped, bitter"
98.72% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"he breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.179
leniency0.359
rawRatio0.286
effectiveRatio0.103
86.0098%