| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.448 | | leniency | 0.897 | | rawRatio | 0.077 | | effectiveRatio | 0.069 | |
| 77.68% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1344 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "carefully" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "softly" | | 3 | "sharply" | | 4 | "barely above a whisper" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1344 | | totalAiIsms | 30 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "sentinels" | | 1 | "rhythmic" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "scanned" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "lurched" | | 6 | "profound" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "remarkable" | | 9 | "almost alive" | | 10 | "pulse" | | 11 | "cascading" | | 12 | "flickered" | | 13 | "perfect" | | 14 | "marble" | | 15 | "resonance" | | 16 | "unreadable" | | 17 | "vibrated" | | 18 | "trembled" | | 19 | "enigmatic" | | 20 | "weight" | | 21 | "loomed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 90 | | matches | | |
| 95.24% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 90 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 104 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 1329 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 43 | | wordCount | 1069 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.59 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | December | 2 | | Rory | 17 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Nyx | 9 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | London | 1 | | Isolde | 9 | | Shade | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Shade" |
| | places | | 0 | "December" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Pendant" | | 4 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.705 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 38.06% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "knots that seemed to shift when she wasn’t looking directly at them" | | 1 | "shadows that seemed to move with a life of their own" | | 2 | "not quite understand" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1329 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 37 | | mean | 35.92 | | std | 21.3 | | cv | 0.593 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 82 | | 1 | 39 | | 2 | 35 | | 3 | 53 | | 4 | 67 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 63 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 26 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 84 | | 11 | 28 | | 12 | 52 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 43 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 29 | | 19 | 48 | | 20 | 74 | | 21 | 25 | | 22 | 54 | | 23 | 32 | | 24 | 36 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 55 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 52 | | 29 | 29 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 34 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 36 | | 35 | 61 | | 36 | 29 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 168 | | matches | | 0 | "were looking" | | 1 | "wasn’t looking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 104 | | ratio | 0.096 | | matches | | 0 | "Their form was barely solid tonight—more a suggestion of a figure than a person, though the faint violet glow of their eyes anchored them in the world." | | 1 | "Instead of the deepening purple of a winter evening, the sky held a soft amber hue—warm, liquid, as if she were looking through a pane of stained glass." | | 2 | "The air smelled different—honey, crushed grass, and something metallic, like ozone after a storm." | | 3 | "The distant hum of London traffic, the rustle of wind through branches—all gone." | | 4 | "The ground was carpeted with wildflowers—bluebells, foxgloves, tiny yellow blooms she didn’t recognize—all in full bloom despite the season." | | 5 | "The Shade said nothing, but their violet eyes flickered—curiosity, perhaps, or caution." | | 6 | "It was cool and smooth, like marble, but she felt a pulse beneath it—slow, deep, rhythmic, like the heartbeat of a sleeping giant." | | 7 | "“That is for you to discover.” Isolde’s gaze drifted to the pendant, then to the blade at Rory’s hip—the cold moonsilver dagger she had given her weeks ago." | | 8 | "From somewhere in the canopy above, a voice—soft, female, ancient—breathed a single word:" | | 9 | "The grove hummed around her, and she knew—deep in her gut—that she had crossed a line from which there was no returning." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1084 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "unknown pressing against her" |
| | adverbCount | 37 | | adverbRatio | 0.03413284132841329 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01107011070110701 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 104 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 104 | | mean | 12.78 | | std | 7.69 | | cv | 0.602 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 26 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 28 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 24 | | 36 | 28 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 23 | | 48 | 18 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 60.26% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.38461538461538464 | | totalSentences | 104 | | uniqueOpeners | 40 | |
| 42.19% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead of the deepening purple" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 83.29% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "Their form was barely solid" | | 1 | "She touched the Heartstone Pendant" | | 2 | "It had been pulsing with" | | 3 | "Its trunk was wider than" | | 4 | "She walked toward them." | | 5 | "She looked down." | | 6 | "Their petals glowed with a" | | 7 | "She raised her head." | | 8 | "They were too bright, too" | | 9 | "She stepped between two of" | | 10 | "They had solidified slightly, their" | | 11 | "They released a heady perfume" | | 12 | "She touched the nearest stone" | | 13 | "It was warm, almost alive," | | 14 | "She wore a simple dress" | | 15 | "She did not smile, but" | | 16 | "They moved together, following Isolde" | | 17 | "It was an oak, but" | | 18 | "Its trunk was massive, easily" | | 19 | "Its branches spread in a" |
| | ratio | 0.342 | |
| 35.95% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 67 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "The December air bit through" | | 1 | "The grass was crisp with" | | 2 | "Their form was barely solid" | | 3 | "Rory asked, her breath pluming" | | 4 | "She touched the Heartstone Pendant" | | 5 | "It had been pulsing with" | | 6 | "Nyx tilted their head." | | 7 | "The motion was liquid, like" | | 8 | "Rory scanned the tree line," | | 9 | "Its trunk was wider than" | | 10 | "She walked toward them." | | 11 | "The grass underfoot changed: first" | | 12 | "She looked down." | | 13 | "The frost had vanished." | | 14 | "Their petals glowed with a" | | 15 | "Nyx’s voice was a low" | | 16 | "She raised her head." | | 17 | "Stars peeked through, but they" | | 18 | "They were too bright, too" | | 19 | "Rory took a breath." |
| | ratio | 0.848 | |
| 63.29% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "To her left, Nyx moved" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 69.97% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Around the base of the great oak, the ground was damp and dark, studded with tiny white flowers that should not have been blooming in December." | | 1 | "Instead of the deepening purple of a winter evening, the sky held a soft amber hue—warm, liquid, as if she were looking through a pane of stained glass." | | 2 | "The amber sky was now a ceiling of dappled light, as if she stood beneath a canopy of leaves, but there were no leaves." | | 3 | "The oaks behind her had become towering pillars of pale stone, carved with spirals and interlocking knots that seemed to shift when she wasn’t looking directly …" | | 4 | "The wildflowers at her feet trembled, and the stream’s flow slowed, as if the entire valley held its breath." |
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| 9.62% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory asked, her breath pluming white" | | 1 | "they said, their whisper carrying an edge of unease" | | 2 | "Rory asked, her voice barely above a whisper" |
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| 81.03% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Isolde continued (continue)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.31 | | leniency | 0.621 | | rawRatio | 0.222 | | effectiveRatio | 0.138 | |