Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2F6NFZTT1XR66WQ3BM28BZ

Run Details

Duration:
56.3s
Cost:
$0.001641
Provider:
DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The gate at the edge of Richmond Park groaned open under her palm. Aurora Carter stepped through, her boots sinking into grass that felt too soft, too giving for December frost. She’d driven her delivery scooter as far as the tarmac allowed before the road dissolved into mud and old roots. The pendant around her neck pulsed once, a throb of warmth against her collarbone, then stilled. She didn’t speak. Didn’t call out. The message from Eva had been specific: meet her at the standing stones. Something urgent. Something she couldn’t explain over the phone. But the park lay empty. Streetlamps ended fifty yards back. Ahead, the ancient oaks that marked the Grove’s boundary stood black against a star-scrubbed sky. No moon. Aurora pulled her jacket tighter and walked. The cold had teeth. Not the clean bite of December air—something else. Something that crept beneath her skin and settled in the marrow. She’d been to the Grove twice before, both times with Eva, both times in daylight. Back then, wildflowers had spilled across the clearing in a riot of impossible color. The standing stones had worn their moss like velvet cloaks. The air had hummed with that peculiar Fae charge, electric and sweet. Now the silence pressed against her eardrums. Her footsteps made no sound. She noticed that on the third step past the boundary oaks. Grass bent under her weight, released when she lifted her foot—but the rustle she expected never came. She scuffed her heel against a patch of bare earth. Nothing. The sound existed in her throat, in the vibration of her bones, but died before it reached the air. Aurora stopped walking. “Eva?” Her voice came out flat and close, like speaking into a pillow. The word didn’t carry. It dropped from her lips and landed somewhere at her feet, swallowed by the hush. The pendant warmed again. Longer this time. She pressed her fingers to it and felt the thrum of its strange heartbeat, faster than her own. She should leave. Every instinct she’d honed through twenty-five years—through Evan’s tightening grip, through narrow alleys at midnight with a delivery bag slung over her shoulder—told her to turn around. But Eva was here. Somewhere. And the thing about Aurora was that she’d learned to walk toward the wrongness when someone she loved was in its path. The standing stones emerged from the dark like waiting shoulders. Five of them, rough-hewn oak petrified to stone-gray hardness, arranged in a circle that predated any map she’d ever seen. No moss tonight. The surfaces gleamed wet and dark, as if the stones themselves had begun to sweat. Aurora approached the nearest one and reached out. Cold. Not the cold of winter rock. Cold like a window onto deep water. She pulled her hand back and her fingers left prints in the condensation. Those prints began to fade, slowly, as if the stone were drinking them in. Movement at the edge of her vision. Aurora spun, heart slamming against her ribs. The clearing stretched empty in every direction. Wildflowers nodded in a breeze she couldn’t feel—foxgloves and nightshade and pale blooms she had no name for, all of them turned toward her like spectators in a darkened theatre. “Eva, this isn’t funny.” Her voice still wouldn’t travel. The words puddled around her boots and sank into the soil. Something answered anyway. A sound from the far side of the circle. Not a voice—too thin, too many notes layered over each other. Like wind through harp strings if the strings were made of something that had once been alive. It rose and fell and rose again, and in the spaces between notes, Aurora heard what might have been her own name. *Aurrrr-ora.* Stretched. Wrong vowel sounds. The R’s rolled too long across a tongue that didn’t fit a human mouth. She backed into the center of the circle. The pendant blazed now, hot enough to sting her skin through her shirt. She didn’t dare pull it out. Didn’t dare look down and break her line of sight on the shadows gathering between the stones. Because they were gathering. Not moving—she would have seen movement. One moment the gaps between the oaks were empty. The next, they held darker shapes that hadn’t been there before. Still as stone. Watching. “I know the rules,” Aurora said. “I was invited. I’m here at Eva’s request.” The shapes said nothing. The whisper-harp sound continued, and now she realized it was coming from above. She lifted her chin. The stars were wrong. She’d grown up in Cardiff, where light pollution bled the sky to amber gauze. She knew city stars and country stars. She knew the constellations her mother had pointed out on camping trips in the Brecon Beacons—Orion’s belt, the Plough, Cassiopeia’s crooked throne. None of those stars hung above her now. These burned colder, sharper, arranged in patterns her eyes couldn’t hold. Every time she tried to trace a shape, the stars slipped sideways, reforming into geometries that hurt to look at. And between them, a sound like harp strings stretched across the void. She dropped her gaze. The shapes between the stones had moved closer. Not walked. Not crawled. They simply occupied less distance than they had a moment before. Aurora’s brain fumbled for a comparison and landed on film cuts—jump scares where the monster teleports—but this was slow. Deliberate. A frame-by-frame slide that her eyes refused to process. She dug her nails into her palms. Pain flared, grounding her. “Eva!” she shouted, and this time the word carried further—three feet, maybe four—before the silence crushed it. One of the shapes tilted its head. The gesture was almost curious. Almost human. But the angle was wrong, the neck bending on an axis that didn’t exist in any anatomy she knew. Stars shone through the outline of it, faint and cold, as if it were made of smoked glass. “What are you?” The shape didn’t answer. But another sound joined the harp-whisper now—a low, rhythmic scraping. Stone on stone. Aurora looked down and saw the pendant swinging free of her shirt, its crimson gem casting a light that slipped across the ground in oily tendrils. The grass was growing toward her. Not growing. Reaching. Each blade of grass had turned, bending against its own grain, pointing to where she stood. The wildflowers on the clearing’s edge had stretched their stems to impossible lengths, their blooms craning toward her like faces straining for a better look. The scraping grew louder. She identified the source: the standing stones were turning. Imperceptibly slow, grinding against the earth in a rotation that should have been impossible, their flat faces reorienting until every one of them pointed inward. At her. Aurora’s breath misted in the air. She hadn’t noticed the cold anymore. She noticed the condensation now—her own exhale, hanging suspended instead of dispersing. It formed a small cloud in front of her face and stayed there, motionless, and inside that cloud something moved. A ripple. A suggestion of form where there should have been only vapor. She stepped backward and her heel caught on a root that hadn’t been there. She fell. The ground caught her—too soft, too giving—and the pendant swung up and hit her chin. The shock of it, the raw heat of the stone against her skin, broke whatever spell had been settling over her thoughts. She scrambled to her feet. The shapes between the stones had multiplied. Or she could see them more clearly now. Tall. Thin. Jointed in ways that suggested limbs but refused to confirm them. They wore the darkness like ceremonial robes, and they were watching her with an attention she could feel, a pressure against her temples, her throat, the soft place under her jaw. “I’m leaving,” she said. The harp sound stopped. In the silence that followed, Aurora heard something she knew. A familiar cadence. Footsteps—real footsteps, human footsteps, the crunch of gravel under sneakers—coming from beyond the circle. She turned toward the sound and saw a figure approaching through the trees. Slender. Dark hair. The right height. Eva. Relief flooded her so completely that she almost laughed. She took a step toward the figure, her hand raised, her mouth opening to call out— And stopped. Because the figure waved back. And its fingers were too long. Aurora ran.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.90% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1408
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
36.08% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1408
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"throb"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"velvet"
count1
4
word"electric"
count1
5
word"silence"
count3
6
word"footsteps"
count4
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count2
9
word"rhythmic"
count1
10
word"could feel"
count1
11
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"throb"
2"warmth"
3"velvet"
4"electric"
5"silence"
6"footsteps"
7"weight"
8"whisper"
9"rhythmic"
10"could feel"
11"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences149
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences149
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences153
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1390
ratio0.001
matches
0"Aurrrr-ora."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount1367
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity0.95
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Carter1
December2
Eva4
Grove2
Fae1
Evan1
Aurora13
Stretched1
Cardiff1
Brecon1
Beacons1
Orion1
Plough1
Cassiopeia1
One2
persons
0"Carter"
1"December"
2"Eva"
3"Evan"
4"Aurora"
5"Stretched"
6"Orion"
7"Cassiopeia"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Grove"
3"Cardiff"
4"Brecon"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences91
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1390
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences153
matches
0"was that she’d"
1"slide that her"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs59
mean23.56
std20.13
cv0.855
sampleLengths
013
154
228
35
429
574
67
763
83
91
1031
1125
1257
1310
1446
1514
1627
177
1844
194
2016
213
2259
231
2418
258
2636
2734
2814
2921
304
3143
328
3343
3412
3544
3611
3717
387
3944
403
4143
426
4344
4440
4557
4614
472
4842
4959
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences149
matches
0"were made"
1"were made"
52.51% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs226
matches
0"were drinking"
1"were gathering"
2"was coming"
3"were turning"
4"were watching"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount19
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences14
totalSentences153
ratio0.092
matches
0"Not the clean bite of December air—something else."
1"Grass bent under her weight, released when she lifted her foot—but the rustle she expected never came."
2"Every instinct she’d honed through twenty-five years—through Evan’s tightening grip, through narrow alleys at midnight with a delivery bag slung over her shoulder—told her to turn around."
3"Wildflowers nodded in a breeze she couldn’t feel—foxgloves and nightshade and pale blooms she had no name for, all of them turned toward her like spectators in a darkened theatre."
4"Not a voice—too thin, too many notes layered over each other."
5"Not moving—she would have seen movement."
6"She knew the constellations her mother had pointed out on camping trips in the Brecon Beacons—Orion’s belt, the Plough, Cassiopeia’s crooked throne."
7"Aurora’s brain fumbled for a comparison and landed on film cuts—jump scares where the monster teleports—but this was slow."
8"“Eva!” she shouted, and this time the word carried further—three feet, maybe four—before the silence crushed it."
9"But another sound joined the harp-whisper now—a low, rhythmic scraping."
10"She noticed the condensation now—her own exhale, hanging suspended instead of dispersing."
11"The ground caught her—too soft, too giving—and the pendant swung up and hit her chin."
12"Footsteps—real footsteps, human footsteps, the crunch of gravel under sneakers—coming from beyond the circle."
13"She took a step toward the figure, her hand raised, her mouth opening to call out—"
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1393
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount40
adverbRatio0.028715003589375447
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.005025125628140704
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences153
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences153
mean9.08
std6.84
cv0.753
sampleLengths
013
118
220
316
43
53
613
72
87
95
105
1115
122
137
144
158
1611
1715
1814
1910
2012
217
225
2311
2417
2510
261
2719
283
291
3012
314
3215
334
343
3518
363
3727
384
391
4022
4110
4220
433
4415
458
461
476
487
4913
54.68% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.3790849673202614
totalSentences153
uniqueOpeners58
27.10% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences123
matches
0"Imperceptibly slow, grinding against the"
ratio0.008
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences123
matches
0"She’d driven her delivery scooter"
1"She didn’t speak."
2"She’d been to the Grove"
3"Her footsteps made no sound."
4"She noticed that on the"
5"She scuffed her heel against"
6"Her voice came out flat"
7"It dropped from her lips"
8"She pressed her fingers to"
9"She should leave."
10"She pulled her hand back"
11"Her voice still wouldn’t travel."
12"It rose and fell and"
13"She backed into the center"
14"She didn’t dare pull it"
15"She lifted her chin."
16"She’d grown up in Cardiff,"
17"She knew city stars and"
18"She knew the constellations her"
19"She dropped her gaze."
ratio0.26
86.02% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount92
totalSentences123
matches
0"The gate at the edge"
1"Aurora Carter stepped through, her"
2"She’d driven her delivery scooter"
3"The pendant around her neck"
4"She didn’t speak."
5"The message from Eva had"
6"Something she couldn’t explain over"
7"Streetlamps ended fifty yards back."
8"Aurora pulled her jacket tighter"
9"The cold had teeth."
10"Something that crept beneath her"
11"She’d been to the Grove"
12"The standing stones had worn"
13"The air had hummed with"
14"Her footsteps made no sound."
15"She noticed that on the"
16"Grass bent under her weight,"
17"She scuffed her heel against"
18"The sound existed in her"
19"Aurora stopped walking."
ratio0.748
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences123
matches
0"Now the silence pressed against"
1"Because they were gathering."
2"Because the figure waved back."
ratio0.024
85.25% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences62
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Aurora Carter stepped through, her boots sinking into grass that felt too soft, too giving for December frost."
1"Ahead, the ancient oaks that marked the Grove’s boundary stood black against a star-scrubbed sky."
2"Aurora looked down and saw the pendant swinging free of her shirt, its crimson gem casting a light that slipped across the ground in oily tendrils."
3"The wildflowers on the clearing’s edge had stretched their stems to impossible lengths, their blooms craning toward her like faces straining for a better look."
4"Imperceptibly slow, grinding against the earth in a rotation that should have been impossible, their flat faces reorienting until every one of them pointed inwa…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
7.14% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she shouted (shout)"
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.286
84.7227%