| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.441 | | leniency | 0.882 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 77.78% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1350 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "quickly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "gently" | | 3 | "carefully" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 59.26% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1350 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "whisper" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "furrowed" | | 3 | "perfect" | | 4 | "shimmered" | | 5 | "depths" | | 6 | "silk" | | 7 | "could feel" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "lilt" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 91 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 91 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 110 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 46 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1336 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 31 | | wordCount | 1035 | | uniqueNames | 4 | | maxNameDensity | 1.64 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Nyx | 10 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Rory | 17 | | Isolde | 3 |
| | persons | | | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.679 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 27.05% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "spirals that seemed to move when she wasn't looking directly at them" | | 1 | "seemed deliberate as if planted by an artist" | | 2 | "not quite touching" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1336 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 43 | | mean | 31.07 | | std | 22.58 | | cv | 0.727 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 43 | | 1 | 7 | | 2 | 87 | | 3 | 31 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 39 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 76 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 54 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 50 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 50 | | 17 | 62 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 31 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 46 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 23 | | 25 | 94 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 28 | | 28 | 33 | | 29 | 62 | | 30 | 50 | | 31 | 36 | | 32 | 24 | | 33 | 27 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 29 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 45 | | 38 | 34 | | 39 | 35 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 53 |
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| 93.70% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "was furrowed" | | 2 | "were fixed" |
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| 84.39% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 173 | | matches | | 0 | "was beating" | | 1 | "wasn't looking" | | 2 | "was glowing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 110 | | ratio | 0.109 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory noticed it first—a beech tree with bark that spiralled like a corkscrew, its leaves a shade of silver-green she'd never seen in any forest." | | 1 | "Dusk had settled quickly—too quickly." | | 2 | "Nyx raised a hand—a gesture that was more suggestion than motion, their fingers dissolving into wisps of violet-edged darkness." | | 3 | "Not just brighter—different constellations." | | 4 | "The stone was warm—impossibly warm, like it had been sitting in direct sunlight, though the grove lay under deep shadow." | | 5 | "For a moment, she saw a different landscape beyond—rolling hills covered in violet grass, a sky of deep amber, towers that twisted like petrified roots—and then it vanished, replaced once more by the grove's tangled oaks and silver-green leaves." | | 6 | "A brook cut across the path, its water clear as glass but dark—a deep, mirror-like black that reflected nothing, not even the sky above." | | 7 | "The moment her foot touched the far bank, the brook's surface rippled, and she could have sworn she saw a face looking up from the depths—pale, with eyes like empty sockets—before it dissolved into the current." | | 8 | "The air had grown cooler, carrying a scent of damp earth and something floral—jasmine, maybe, but deeper and sweeter." | | 9 | "Wildflowers covered the ground in a riot of colours—deep purples, blues that verged on black, whites that luminesced faintly." | | 10 | "Her face was ageless—smooth, with high cheekbones and pale lavender eyes that were fixed on Rory with an unnerving stillness." | | 11 | "The woman smiled—a small, knowing curve." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1057 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 41 | | adverbRatio | 0.03878902554399243 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01229895931882687 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 110 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 110 | | mean | 12.15 | | std | 8.71 | | cv | 0.717 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 5 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 25 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 30 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 25 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 46 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 20 |
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| 57.88% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.36363636363636365 | | totalSentences | 110 | | uniqueOpeners | 40 | |
| 41.15% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "Slowly, she pulled the pendant" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 61.98% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "She stopped, and Nyx halted" | | 1 | "It wasn't a question." | | 2 | "She turned in a slow" | | 3 | "They'd been walking for maybe" | | 4 | "It pulsed warm against her" | | 5 | "It was beating faster now." | | 6 | "Their voice came from everywhere," | | 7 | "Their bark was furrowed deep," | | 8 | "She exhaled slowly." | | 9 | "She crouched and touched one." | | 10 | "Its petals were cold, almost" | | 11 | "She looked up at the" | | 12 | "She'd never seen them before." | | 13 | "She hesitated, then placed her" | | 14 | "She pulled it out." | | 15 | "She let the pendant fall" | | 16 | "She stepped over it carefully." | | 17 | "She kept her voice low" | | 18 | "She pushed through a curtain" | | 19 | "It was circular, perhaps fifty" |
| | ratio | 0.395 | |
| 9.38% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 73 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "The leaves overhead turned wrong." | | 1 | "Rory noticed it first—a beech" | | 2 | "She stopped, and Nyx halted" | | 3 | "It wasn't a question." | | 4 | "The air had changed." | | 5 | "The only sound was her" | | 6 | "She turned in a slow" | | 7 | "The oak trees around them" | | 8 | "Dusk had settled quickly—too quickly." | | 9 | "They'd been walking for maybe" | | 10 | "Rory touched the Heartstone pendant" | | 11 | "It pulsed warm against her" | | 12 | "It was beating faster now." | | 13 | "Nyx raised a hand—a gesture" | | 14 | "Their voice came from everywhere," | | 15 | "The path she'd walked was" | | 16 | "Their bark was furrowed deep," | | 17 | "She exhaled slowly." | | 18 | "Rory stepped forward." | | 19 | "The grass underfoot was thick" |
| | ratio | 0.901 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 32.97% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory noticed it first—a beech tree with bark that spiralled like a corkscrew, its leaves a shade of silver-green she'd never seen in any forest." | | 1 | "They'd been walking for maybe ten minutes since leaving the main path, but the sky now held a purple hue that belonged deeper into evening." | | 2 | "Nyx raised a hand—a gesture that was more suggestion than motion, their fingers dissolving into wisps of violet-edged darkness." | | 3 | "Between two of them, a low wall of rough-hewn stone jutted from the earth, its surface carved with spirals that seemed to move when she wasn't looking directly …" | | 4 | "Moss covered its base, but the upper half was polished, and it caught the unnatural starlight and reflected it in silver beams that crisscrossed the clearing li…" | | 5 | "She was silver-haired, dressed in grey robes that blended with the stone." |
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| 58.33% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Their voice came, a dry rustle like dead leaves skittering across pavement" | | 1 | "the woman said, her voice carrying clearly across the clearing despite the distance" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.235 | | leniency | 0.471 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |