Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2F8R9G5155Q81RE6TV0WH2

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Duration:
29.3s
Cost:
$0.000591
Provider:
DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came at half past eleven, three sharp raps against the wood. Aurora scowled at the curry house menu spread across Eva’s coffee table. Ptolemy lifted his head from a stack of notes, ears swivelling. She ignored it. Eva had forgotten her keys again, but the girl knew the deadbolts were a three-step process. This knock was impatient, wrong rhythm. A second round. Harder. Aurora pushed off the sofa and crossed the cramped flat, bare feet padding on worn floorboards. She peered through the peephole and her breath caught. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing, rain darkening the shoulders of his charcoal suit. His platinum hair was slicked flat against his scalp. He held his ivory-handled cane in one hand, the other raised for another knock. She had not seen his face in eight months. Not since the night at the Serpentine, when she’d told him she couldn’t keep lying to herself about what he was. What she was to him. The third knock never came. He lowered his hand, tilted his head, and fixed his mismatched stare straight into the peephole—amber and black, unblinking. “I know you’re in there, Rory.” Her throat tightened. She flicked the first deadbolt, then the second, then the third. The door swung inward, and cold air rolled in like a tide. He looked the same. Impeccable. Controlled. The scent of wet wool and sandalwood washed over her. “You’re soaked,” she said, and hated that those were the first words out of her mouth. “It’s raining.” He gestured with his cane toward the street below. “May I come in?” She stepped aside. Not out of courtesy. Out of the hollow knowledge that if she turned him away, he would simply find another way. Lucien did not take no for an answer; he just made you think you had a choice. He limped past her—the old injury that never healed—and surveyed the flat with the calm assessment of a man cataloguing exits. Books stacked in precarious towers. A half-eaten bowl of noodles. Eva’s research notes pinned to every wall like the inside of a detective’s skull. “You look well,” he said. The lie was polite. “I look exhausted. Say what you came to say.” He turned to face her, and the silence between them pulled taut. She remembered the way his fingers had curled around her wrist that night by the water, the way he’d whispered her name like a confession. Aurora. Not Rory. He never shortened things. “I need your help,” he said. “No.” “You haven’t heard the request.” “I don’t need to. Last time we spoke, you told me I was being naive. That my loyalty to Eva was misplaced. That I didn’t understand the world I’d stumbled into.” “I was trying to protect you.” “You were trying to control the narrative.” She crossed her arms, felt the crescent scar on her wrist press against her skin. “What changed?” Lucien set his cane against the wall and shrugged off his jacket, draping it over the back of Eva’s armchair. The movement revealed the holster beneath, the slim blade he kept at his ribs. He was a creature of careful habits. “Eva is missing.” The words hit her low in the stomach. She steadied herself against the doorframe, but she refused to sit. “Missing how? When?” “Three days ago. She was meant to deliver a package to a client in Whitechapel. She never arrived. Her phone has been off since.” “And you’re just now telling me?” The anger came hot and quick, burning away the shock. “You know where I live. You know I have a right to—” “I know.” His voice dipped, softer than she’d ever heard it. “I should have come sooner. I tried to find her on my own.” “You tried to clean up a mess without involving me. That’s your way, isn’t it? Handle everything alone, treat everyone else like liabilities.” He flinched. Barely. A tick at the corner of that black eye. “You’re not a liability, Aurora. You never were.” She looked away, focused on the rain streaking the window. Ptolemy jumped from the table and wound around her ankles, a warm anchor. “Why now? What changed your mind?” “Because I found her mobile.” He reached into his inner pocket and pulled out a plastic bag. Inside was Eva’s phone, the screen cracked, the case smudged with something dark. “It was in a drainage ditch near the old Bethnal Green tube station. There’s a message she never sent.” He held the bag out. She took it, her fingers brushing his. A static charge, familiar and unwelcome. She peered through the plastic. The message was half-typed, characters glitching on the broken screen: *rory dont trust lucien he is* “The rest is cut off,” she said, her voice flat. “Yes.” “She was warning me about you.” “It appears so.” She looked up and met his mismatched gaze. The amber eye burned with something raw and unguarded. The black one swallowed light. “If she was warning me, why would you bring me the phone?” Lucien stepped forward, close enough that she could see the rain still clinging to his collar, the faint stubble along his jaw. He did not reach for her. He never reached first. “Because I’ve spent eight months regretting the way I left things. Because I care about Eva too, and because I will not let her die alone in some underground tunnel while pride keeps us apart.” His voice cracked on the last word. A fissure in that perfect composure. Aurora studied him. The demon blood in him was old and patient, but the man standing in her friend’s flat was bone-tired and scared. She knew that look. She’d worn it in the mirror every morning since Evan. She held the phone tighter. “Start from the beginning,” she said. “Leave nothing out.” A flicker of relief crossed his face, gone before it could settle. “We should get off the street,” he said. “And you should put on shoes.” She glanced down at her bare feet, then back at him. The old bitterness had not vanished, but it had made room for something rawer. “Don’t tell me what to do, Moreau.” He almost smiled. “I wouldn’t dream of it.” She grabbed her trainers from beside the door and sat on the arm of the sofa to pull them on. Ptolemy mewed once, then curled up on Eva’s notes, keeping watch. Lucien retrieved his jacket and checked the blade at his ribs. The rain kept falling. The night kept pressing in. Aurora stood and faced him, close enough to feel the chill radiating off his skin, close enough to see the slight irregularity in his pupils—the mark of his father’s realm. “One condition,” she said. “If we find her, and if I survive this, you and I are going to have a very long conversation about that night at the Serpentine. No more running. No more control.” He held her gaze. The black eye seemed to soften, impossibly. “Agreed.” She grabbed her coat from the hook. The door closed behind them with a click, and the flat fell silent, save for the rain and the cat and the words Eva had left unsaid.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.3
leniency0.6
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.86% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1207
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
71.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1207
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"flicked"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"perfect"
count1
5
word"flicker"
count1
6
word"chill"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
1"silence"
2"stomach"
3"familiar"
4"perfect"
5"flicker"
6"chill"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences95
matches
0"A flicker of relief"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences95
filterMatches
0"think"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences123
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords6
totalWords1203
ratio0.005
matches
0"rory dont trust lucien he is"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount869
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.81
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Eva7
Moreau1
Serpentine1
Rory1
Lucien5
Evan1
Aurora5
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Rory"
3"Lucien"
4"Evan"
5"Aurora"
6"Ptolemy"
places
0"Serpentine"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1203
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences123
matches
0"hated that those"
1"knew that look"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs63
mean19.1
std12.96
cv0.679
sampleLengths
036
125
24
325
437
535
624
76
826
916
1016
1115
1241
1345
149
159
1644
176
181
195
2031
216
2224
2341
243
2519
263
2724
2828
2924
3023
3112
328
3323
346
3549
3618
3715
386
3910
401
416
423
4322
4412
4532
4635
4713
4838
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences95
matches
0"was slicked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs154
matches(empty)
49.94% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences123
ratio0.033
matches
0"He lowered his hand, tilted his head, and fixed his mismatched stare straight into the peephole—amber and black, unblinking."
1"Lucien did not take no for an answer; he just made you think you had a choice."
2"He limped past her—the old injury that never healed—and surveyed the flat with the calm assessment of a man cataloguing exits."
3"Aurora stood and faced him, close enough to feel the chill radiating off his skin, close enough to see the slight irregularity in his pupils—the mark of his father’s realm."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount878
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.02733485193621868
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.003416856492027335
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences123
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences123
mean9.78
std7.29
cv0.745
sampleLengths
013
112
211
33
416
56
63
71
816
99
1014
119
1214
139
1421
155
165
1719
186
193
2011
2112
224
231
241
2510
2616
2711
284
293
304
3117
3217
3321
345
355
3614
375
384
399
4012
4125
421
432
444
456
461
475
4831
496
47.15% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3170731707317073
totalSentences123
uniqueOpeners39
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
ratio0
36.87% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences83
matches
0"She ignored it."
1"She peered through the peephole"
2"His platinum hair was slicked"
3"He held his ivory-handled cane"
4"She had not seen his"
5"He lowered his hand, tilted"
6"Her throat tightened."
7"She flicked the first deadbolt,"
8"He looked the same."
9"she said, and hated that"
10"He gestured with his cane"
11"She stepped aside."
12"He limped past her—the old"
13"He turned to face her,"
14"She remembered the way his"
15"He never shortened things."
16"She crossed her arms, felt"
17"He was a creature of"
18"She steadied herself against the"
19"His voice dipped, softer than"
ratio0.458
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount78
totalSentences83
matches
0"The knock came at half"
1"Aurora scowled at the curry"
2"Ptolemy lifted his head from"
3"She ignored it."
4"Eva had forgotten her keys"
5"This knock was impatient, wrong"
6"A second round."
7"Aurora pushed off the sofa"
8"She peered through the peephole"
9"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
10"His platinum hair was slicked"
11"He held his ivory-handled cane"
12"She had not seen his"
13"The third knock never came."
14"He lowered his hand, tilted"
15"Her throat tightened."
16"She flicked the first deadbolt,"
17"The door swung inward, and"
18"He looked the same."
19"The scent of wet wool"
ratio0.94
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
83.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, her voice flat"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.175
leniency0.35
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.8052%