| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 27 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 88 | | tagDensity | 0.307 | | leniency | 0.614 | | rawRatio | 0.037 | | effectiveRatio | 0.023 | |
| 90.79% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1628 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "carefully" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 84.64% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1628 | | totalAiIsms | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "measured" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "shimmered" | | 4 | "flickered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 109 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 109 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 166 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 56 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 1622 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 33 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 50 | | wordCount | 1010 | | uniqueNames | 19 | | maxNameDensity | 1.29 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Moreau | 3 | | Aurora | 9 | | Miss | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Bentley | 1 | | Lucien | 13 | | Eva | 3 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Mesopotamian | 1 | | Frenchman | 2 | | Two | 1 | | You | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Bengali | 1 | | Silas | 2 | | London | 1 | | Ptolemy | 4 | | One | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Moreau" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Miss" | | 3 | "Carter" | | 4 | "Lucien" | | 5 | "Eva" | | 6 | "Frenchman" | | 7 | "You" | | 8 | "Evan" | | 9 | "Silas" | | 10 | "Ptolemy" |
| | places | | 0 | "Brick" | | 1 | "Lane" | | 2 | "Bengali" | | 3 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.856 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1622 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 166 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 94 | | mean | 17.26 | | std | 16.17 | | cv | 0.937 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 39 | | 2 | 1 | | 3 | 34 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 36 | | 9 | 28 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 50 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 1 | | 17 | 33 | | 18 | 55 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 28 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 32 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 37 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 27 | | 35 | 44 | | 36 | 21 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 34 | | 39 | 29 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 21 | | 44 | 55 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 23 | | 48 | 26 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 185 | | matches | | 0 | "was surveying" | | 1 | "was standing" |
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| 22.38% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 166 | | ratio | 0.042 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien caught it before she could bend down—a sketch of some Mesopotamian sigil, smudged with charcoal." | | 1 | "When she turned, Lucien was surveying the chaos of Eva's flat—the towers of books, the pinned-up maps, the half-empty mugs growing new civilizations of mold." | | 2 | "She'd forgotten how he did that—how he peeled back layers without raising his voice." | | 3 | "She crossed to the kitchenette—a sink, a hob that only lit two burners, a mini-fridge that hummed like a dying bee—and busied herself filling the kettle." | | 4 | "The proximity made her pulse stutter—that familiar, infuriating response she'd never been able to control." | | 5 | "The wine bottle grew heavier in her hands. Or maybe everything else grew lighter—the room, her bones, the careful walls she'd built since she'd walked away from him." | | 6 | "His chin lifted, just slightly—the only tell he allowed himself." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 974 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 27 | | adverbRatio | 0.027720739219712527 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.003080082135523614 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 166 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 166 | | mean | 9.77 | | std | 9.54 | | cv | 0.976 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 1 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 1 | | 7 | 28 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 27 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 25 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 23 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 54.02% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.3674698795180723 | | totalSentences | 166 | | uniqueOpeners | 61 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, her hand tightened on" | | 1 | "Of course she'd known." | | 2 | "Just at the edges." |
| | ratio | 0.034 | |
| 76.18% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "His mismatched eyes swept over" | | 1 | "She should say no." | | 2 | "He tilted his head" | | 3 | "Her heel crunched a stack" | | 4 | "He set it carefully on" | | 5 | "He walked past her into" | | 6 | "He set the wine bottle" | | 7 | "His gaze caught on the" | | 8 | "She tugged the sleeve down." | | 9 | "She'd forgotten how he did" | | 10 | "He stepped closer" | | 11 | "She crossed to the kitchenette—a" | | 12 | "Her hands shook." | | 13 | "She hoped he couldn't see." | | 14 | "She yanked open a cupboard" | | 15 | "He'd moved without sound, without" | | 16 | "His reflection tilted its head" | | 17 | "His voice dropped" | | 18 | "He was too close." | | 19 | "His heterochromatic eyes searched her" |
| | ratio | 0.36 | |
| 27.42% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 77 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora flipped the third deadbolt" | | 1 | "Lucien Moreau leaned against the" | | 2 | "His mismatched eyes swept over" | | 3 | "The name he'd whispered against" | | 4 | "Ptolemy wound between her feet" | | 5 | "Lucien's mouth quirked." | | 6 | "The motion brought with it" | | 7 | "She should say no." | | 8 | "He tilted his head" | | 9 | "A strand of platinum hair" | | 10 | "The name hit like ice" | | 11 | "Aurora stepped back." | | 12 | "Her heel crunched a stack" | | 13 | "Lucien caught it before she" | | 14 | "He set it carefully on" | | 15 | "He walked past her into" | | 16 | "The sound was measured." | | 17 | "The door hung open behind" | | 18 | "Aurora pushed it shut and" | | 19 | "He set the wine bottle" |
| | ratio | 0.865 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 34.63% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 33 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The motion brought with it a faint trace of sandalwood and something darker, something that didn't belong in Eva's cramped flat above a Brick Lane curry house." | | 1 | "She crossed to the kitchenette—a sink, a hob that only lit two burners, a mini-fridge that hummed like a dying bee—and busied herself filling the kettle." | | 2 | "Lucien reached into his jacket and withdrew a folded paper. Official-looking. Stamped with a seal that shimmered green in the kitchen's dim light." | | 3 | "Lucien Moreau, who'd stared down hellbeasts and demon lords and whatever crawled through the cracks between realms, was standing in her kitchen with a cane he d…" | | 4 | "The black eye seemed to deepen, gathering shadows that didn't belong in the afternoon light." |
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| 87.96% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 27 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "He walked, his cane tapping once against the threshold" | | 1 | "Lucien read, his voice flat" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 88 | | tagDensity | 0.114 | | leniency | 0.227 | | rawRatio | 0.1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.023 | |