Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2FAQDQ0Z7CJCEKE0PYFV0D

Run Details

Duration:
4m 38s
Cost:
$0.011828
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora flipped the third deadbolt and pulled open the door. Lucien Moreau leaned against the jamb, one hand resting on that ivory-handled cane, the other dangling a bottle of wine by its neck. His mismatched eyes swept over her face, her rumpled jumper, the sock bunched at her ankle. "Rory." Not Aurora. Not Miss Carter. *Rory*. The name he'd whispered against her throat in the back of his Bentley three months ago, right before she'd told him she never wanted to see him again. Ptolemy wound between her feet and chirruped at the visitor. "Traitor," she muttered. Lucien's mouth quirked. "The cat has better manners." "You've been feeding him." "Once or twice." He straightened. The motion brought with it a faint trace of sandalwood and something darker, something that didn't belong in Eva's cramped flat above a Brick Lane curry house. "May I come in?" She should say no. Slam the door. Slide the deadbolts home and pretend this visit never happened. Instead, her hand tightened on the doorknob until her knuckles ached. "What do you want?" "Straight to business." He tilted his head. A strand of platinum hair slipped free of its meticulous slick-back. "I have information. About Evan." The name hit like ice water. Aurora stepped back. Her heel crunched a stack of Eva's research notes, sending a loose page skidding across the floorboards. Lucien caught it before she could bend down—a sketch of some Mesopotamian sigil, smudged with charcoal. He set it carefully on the nearest pile without looking away from her face. "You've been gone three months," she said. "No calls. No messages. Silas said you'd left London entirely." "I did." "Paris?" "Lyon, then Avaros." He walked past her into the flat, his cane tapping once against the threshold. The sound was measured. Deliberate. Like everything about him. "My father's court had need of me." The door hung open behind him. Cold air from the stairwell carried the scent of cumin and turmeric. Aurora pushed it shut and flipped all three deadbolts with practiced efficiency. When she turned, Lucien was surveying the chaos of Eva's flat—the towers of books, the pinned-up maps, the half-empty mugs growing new civilizations of mold. "This is where you've been hiding." "I'm not hiding." "No?" He set the wine bottle on a stack of leather-bound tomes. "Three deadbolts suggest otherwise." "Eva's paranoid." "Eva's paranoid about the right things." His gaze caught on the crescent scar on her wrist, visible where her sleeve had ridden up. "That's new. Since I left." She tugged the sleeve down. "Childhood accident." "Liar." The word landed between them, soft and precise. She'd forgotten how he did that—how he peeled back layers without raising his voice. The demon half of him, maybe. Or just the Frenchman. "What happened?" he asked. "None of your business." "It became my business the moment I made it my business." He stepped closer. The cane tapped. "Evan found you." Aurora's throat tightened. She crossed to the kitchenette—a sink, a hob that only lit two burners, a mini-fridge that hummed like a dying bee—and busied herself filling the kettle. Her hands shook. She hoped he couldn't see. "He showed up at the Golden Empress two weeks ago. Yu-Fei chased him out with a cleaver. Haven't seen him since." "You should have called me." "I told you I didn't want to see you again." She yanked open a cupboard. Two mugs. One clean. "Remember?" Lucien's reflection materialized in the dark window above the sink. He'd moved without sound, without the tap of his cane. Ptolemy purred somewhere behind them, the traitor. "I remember a woman telling me she couldn't be involved with someone who existed in a world of shadows and blood. Someone whose very nature made her a target." His reflection tilted its head. "Then I remember she kissed me like she was drowning." The kettle rattled on its base. Aurora's hand jerked toward it, but Lucien reached past her and switched off the hob. "Rory." His voice dropped. "Look at me." She turned. He was too close. The proximity made her pulse stutter—that familiar, infuriating response she'd never been able to control. His heterochromatic eyes searched her face. One amber. One black. Both unnervingly perceptive. "You left," she said "He got quiet. Like he was weighing something heavy."Aurora," he says,14-year-old, she was so good at hiding, at holding herself in. That you might have32 "He got quiet, like he was weighing something heavy." "The kiss or you?" "Both." His jaw tightened. The motion drew her attention to his mouth, and she wrenched her gaze away too late. He'd seen. "You kissed me, then you said I was16 too dangerous to love," she said. "Then you vanished for three months. You don't get to show up with wine and concern and—" She pressed her palms flat against the counter. The laminate was peeling at the edges. "You said Evan found me. That's why you're here." "Among other reasons." "What other reasons?" Lucien reached into his jacket and withdrew a folded paper. Official-looking. Stamped with a seal that shimmered green in the kitchen's dim light. "The demon who fathered Evan's mother has petitioned the Avaros court for custody of Evan's debts." He set the paper on the counter between them. "Including16 "The demon who fathered Evan's mother has petitioned for custody of his debts." "Including any human soulbound to his bloodline through matrimonial or romantic bond." The words swam on the page. Aurora's vision narrowed to that green seal, pulsing faintly like a heartbeat. "That's not possible. I never married him." "Consummated romantic bond," Lucien read, his voice flat. "Broad language. The demon courts prefer it that way. Easier to claim." "We were together for eight months. That was two years ago. How can that—" "They're drafting the claim now. Three days, maybe four. Then your name appears on a docket in Avaros." He16 "He stepped back, giving her room to breathe" gave her space, the cane planted solid between them. "I can stop it. But I need something from you." She'd known. Of course she'd known. Lucien Moreau never did anything without a price. "What?" "A favor. Unspecified. To be called in when I need it." "You want a blank check." "I want your signature on a binding agreement that you will assist me in a matter of my choosing at a future date." The corner of his mouth lifted, but there was no humor in it. "You wanted me to71 "I want your agreement that you'll assist me with a matter of my choosing at a future date." No smile touched his mouth. " You wanted me to be honest about what I am. This is what I am." The kettle sat cold on the dead hob. Ptolemy had abandoned them for a sunny square of floor near the window. Somewhere downstairs, a door slammed and someone shouted in Bengali about a missing delivery. Aurora picked up the wine bottle. Read the label without seeing it. Bordeaux. The vintage Silas had served the night she'd met Lucien in the back room of his bar, two hours before a deal went sour and she'd watched the Frenchman break a man's arm in three places without spilling a drop of his drink. "If I say yes," she said, "do we go back to pretending nothing happened between us?" "What would you prefer?" "I'd prefer you answer the question." Lucien's hand tightened on the cane's ivory handle. For the first time since he'd appeared at her door, something flickered behind his careful composure. Annoyance. Or hunger. With him, it was hard to tell the difference. "I spent three months in Avaros," he said, " negotiating with beings who would flay me alive for the crime of existing. My father offered me a seat at his table if I renounced my mother's blood. I refused. I returned to London six hours ago, and my first action was not to sleep or eat or inform Silas I'd survived. It was to bring you that." He nodded at the paper. "What does that tell you?" The wine bottle grew heavier in her hands. Or maybe everything else grew lighter—the room, her bones, the careful walls she'd built since she'd walked away from him. "It tells me you're1964 "It tells me you're1766 "It tells me you're1964 It told her he was scared. Lucien Moreau, who'd stared down hellbeasts and demon lords and whatever crawled through the cracks between realms, was standing in her kitchen with a cane he didn't need for walking and making bargains because he didn't know how to do anything else. "Three days," she said. "Three days." "You'll16 "You'll68 "You'll stop the claim first. Then the favor." "No. The agreement first." Aurora set the bottle down. Stepped around the cane. His chin lifted, just slightly—the only tell he allowed himself. "What's the favor?" she asked. "I don't know yet." "Guess." "Rory." "Guess." His composure cracked. Just at the edges. A muscle jumped in his jaw. The black eye seemed to deepen, gathering shadows that didn't belong in the afternoon light. "I need to kill someone," he said quietly. "And I need a human to bear witness." The flat settled around them. Dust motes danced in Ptolemy's sunbeam. Downstairs, the curry house lunch rush rumbled to life. "Who?" she asked. "A member of my father's court. The one who drafted this claim." He tapped the paper. "He's been petitioning to bind human souls for centuries. Your case isn't unique. Just... personal." "You want to kill him because of me?" "I want to kill him because he's a monster." Lucien's voice roughened. "Because it's the right thing to do. But yes. I want to kill him because of you, too."
created_at"2026-04-25T14:05:10.075Z" 4/25/2026, 2:05:10 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags27
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences88
tagDensity0.307
leniency0.614
rawRatio0.037
effectiveRatio0.023
90.79% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1628
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"very"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
84.64% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1628
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"shimmered"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"pulse"
2"familiar"
3"shimmered"
4"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences109
matches
0"was scared"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences109
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences166
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen56
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1622
ratio0.001
matches
0"Rory"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions33
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions50
wordCount1010
uniqueNames19
maxNameDensity1.29
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau3
Aurora9
Miss1
Carter1
Bentley1
Lucien13
Eva3
Brick1
Lane1
Mesopotamian1
Frenchman2
Two1
You1
Evan1
Bengali1
Silas2
London1
Ptolemy4
One3
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Aurora"
2"Miss"
3"Carter"
4"Lucien"
5"Eva"
6"Frenchman"
7"You"
8"Evan"
9"Silas"
10"Ptolemy"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Bengali"
3"London"
globalScore0.856
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1622
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences166
matches
0"does that tell"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs94
mean17.26
std16.17
cv0.937
sampleLengths
010
139
21
334
410
53
68
74
836
928
104
1123
126
1350
1417
152
161
1733
1855
196
203
2116
222
2328
247
251
2632
274
284
2920
3037
3121
325
3320
3427
3544
3621
377
3834
3929
409
414
421
4321
4455
453
463
4723
4826
4913
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs185
matches
0"was surveying"
1"was standing"
22.38% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences166
ratio0.042
matches
0"Lucien caught it before she could bend down—a sketch of some Mesopotamian sigil, smudged with charcoal."
1"When she turned, Lucien was surveying the chaos of Eva's flat—the towers of books, the pinned-up maps, the half-empty mugs growing new civilizations of mold."
2"She'd forgotten how he did that—how he peeled back layers without raising his voice."
3"She crossed to the kitchenette—a sink, a hob that only lit two burners, a mini-fridge that hummed like a dying bee—and busied herself filling the kettle."
4"The proximity made her pulse stutter—that familiar, infuriating response she'd never been able to control."
5"The wine bottle grew heavier in her hands. Or maybe everything else grew lighter—the room, her bones, the careful walls she'd built since she'd walked away from him."
6"His chin lifted, just slightly—the only tell he allowed himself."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount974
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.027720739219712527
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.003080082135523614
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences166
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences166
mean9.77
std9.54
cv0.976
sampleLengths
010
123
216
31
42
53
61
728
810
93
103
115
124
135
1427
154
164
173
1810
1911
204
217
2211
235
246
253
2617
2716
2814
297
3010
312
321
3317
344
351
364
377
386
3912
4012
4125
426
433
4412
454
462
4723
485
495
54.02% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.3674698795180723
totalSentences166
uniqueOpeners61
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences89
matches
0"Instead, her hand tightened on"
1"Of course she'd known."
2"Just at the edges."
ratio0.034
76.18% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences89
matches
0"His mismatched eyes swept over"
1"She should say no."
2"He tilted his head"
3"Her heel crunched a stack"
4"He set it carefully on"
5"He walked past her into"
6"He set the wine bottle"
7"His gaze caught on the"
8"She tugged the sleeve down."
9"She'd forgotten how he did"
10"He stepped closer"
11"She crossed to the kitchenette—a"
12"Her hands shook."
13"She hoped he couldn't see."
14"She yanked open a cupboard"
15"He'd moved without sound, without"
16"His reflection tilted its head"
17"His voice dropped"
18"He was too close."
19"His heterochromatic eyes searched her"
ratio0.36
27.42% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount77
totalSentences89
matches
0"Aurora flipped the third deadbolt"
1"Lucien Moreau leaned against the"
2"His mismatched eyes swept over"
3"The name he'd whispered against"
4"Ptolemy wound between her feet"
5"Lucien's mouth quirked."
6"The motion brought with it"
7"She should say no."
8"He tilted his head"
9"A strand of platinum hair"
10"The name hit like ice"
11"Aurora stepped back."
12"Her heel crunched a stack"
13"Lucien caught it before she"
14"He set it carefully on"
15"He walked past her into"
16"The sound was measured."
17"The door hung open behind"
18"Aurora pushed it shut and"
19"He set the wine bottle"
ratio0.865
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
ratio0
34.63% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The motion brought with it a faint trace of sandalwood and something darker, something that didn't belong in Eva's cramped flat above a Brick Lane curry house."
1"She crossed to the kitchenette—a sink, a hob that only lit two burners, a mini-fridge that hummed like a dying bee—and busied herself filling the kettle."
2"Lucien reached into his jacket and withdrew a folded paper. Official-looking. Stamped with a seal that shimmered green in the kitchen's dim light."
3"Lucien Moreau, who'd stared down hellbeasts and demon lords and whatever crawled through the cracks between realms, was standing in her kitchen with a cane he d…"
4"The black eye seemed to deepen, gathering shadows that didn't belong in the afternoon light."
87.96% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags27
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"He walked, his cane tapping once against the threshold"
1"Lucien read, his voice flat"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences88
tagDensity0.114
leniency0.227
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.023
85.3782%