| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 24 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 59 | | tagDensity | 0.407 | | leniency | 0.814 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 86.29% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1823 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "quickly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "carefully" | | 3 | "deliberately" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 72.57% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1823 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "stomach" | | 2 | "perfect" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "crystalline" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "tracing" | | 7 | "flicker" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 93 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 93 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 126 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 44 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 4 | | markdownWords | 4 | | totalWords | 1838 | | ratio | 0.002 | | matches | | 0 | "chérie" | | 1 | "Affair" | | 2 | "Relationship" | | 3 | "chérie" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 27 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 42 | | wordCount | 1314 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 0.99 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Shoreditch | 1 | | Moreau | 1 | | Rory | 13 | | Eva | 5 | | Lucien | 12 | | Mayfair | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Malphora | 1 | | Avaros | 1 | | Despite | 1 | | Purely | 1 | | Ptolemy | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Moreau" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Lucien" | | 4 | "Evan" | | 5 | "Ptolemy" |
| | places | | 0 | "Shoreditch" | | 1 | "Cardiff" | | 2 | "Avaros" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "something between relief and resignation" | | 1 | "quite read — something between relief and resignation" | | 2 | "felt like standing too close to a fire" | | 3 | "Not quite a smile, but close enough to make something in her chest constrict" | | 4 | "quite belong to this world" | | 5 | "quite a bow, but it was close" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.544 | | wordCount | 1838 | | matches | | 0 | "Not quite a smile, but close enough to make something in her chest constrict" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 57 | | mean | 32.25 | | std | 23.3 | | cv | 0.722 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 46 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 72 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 41 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 58 | | 7 | 82 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 44 | | 10 | 49 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 60 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 63 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 66 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 59 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 67 | | 21 | 49 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 27 | | 24 | 27 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 46 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 23 | | 30 | 54 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 33 | | 35 | 77 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 37 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 23 | | 40 | 55 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 56 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 32 | | 45 | 80 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 43 | | 48 | 58 | | 49 | 28 |
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| 86.40% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "was slicked" | | 1 | "was sprawled" | | 2 | "been broken" | | 3 | "were charmed" | | 4 | "been approached" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 209 | | matches | | 0 | "was still standing" | | 1 | "was bothering" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 15 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 126 | | ratio | 0.103 | | matches | | 0 | "Eva had installed all three after the incident with the skinwalker in Shoreditch, and the sound had become a kind of ritual — the world locking itself out, the flat sealing itself in." | | 1 | "The amber eye and the black eye fixed on her with an expression she couldn't quite read — something between relief and resignation." | | 2 | "\"A pleasure to see you too, _chérie_.\" The endearment slipped out with the ease of long habit, and she watched him register it a half-second too late — the slight tightening around his mismatched eyes, the way his gloved fingers flexed on the cane." | | 3 | "\"I'm aware.\" He shifted his weight, and she caught the almost imperceptible grimace — the one that meant his leg was bothering him." | | 4 | "Lucien moved past her with that fluid economy of motion that had always fascinated her — the cane barely seeming to touch the floor, his presence filling the cramped flat like smoke." | | 5 | "\"It's possible. But the contract's language suggests older grievances than a jilted ex-boyfriend.\" Lucien picked up a stray curl of paper from Eva's desk — a rubbing from some artifact or another — and turned it over in his fingers." | | 6 | "\"I omitted.\" He turned to face her fully, and there it was — the full weight of his attention, which had always felt like standing too close to a fire." | | 7 | "The flat smelled of old books and curry from the restaurant below and, faintly, of Lucien's cologne — sandalwood and something else, something that didn't quite belong to this world." | | 8 | "Despite everything — the contract, the danger, the three months of radio silence that had calcified into something resembling grief — Rory felt the urge to laugh." | | 9 | "\"I have never forced my presence on anyone, Aurora.\" The use of her full name was deliberate; he knew she hated it." | | 10 | "As if she hadn't seen him at his worst — the night terrors that left him shaking and gasping, the moments when his demonic heritage surged too close to the surface and his eyes went entirely black." | | 11 | "Inside were several typed pages of notes, written in Lucien's precise hand — observations about the contract's language, the timing of its reactivation, the types of assassins who might have been approached." | | 12 | "And despite everything — the danger, the history, the three deadbolts she still hadn't locked — Rory found that she didn't mind." |
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| 88.71% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1303 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "revealing long pale hands" |
| | adverbCount | 60 | | adverbRatio | 0.04604758250191865 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009976976208749041 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 126 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 126 | | mean | 14.59 | | std | 10.91 | | cv | 0.748 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 33 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 44 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 39 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 23 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 32 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 32 | | 28 | 28 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 21 | | 34 | 25 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 26 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 35 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 20 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 40 |
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| 59.79% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.42063492063492064 | | totalSentences | 126 | | uniqueOpeners | 53 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 83.29% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "His platinum hair was slicked" | | 1 | "He shifted his weight, and" | | 2 | "She knew this." | | 3 | "She'd rehearsed this exact scenario" | | 4 | "She stepped aside." | | 5 | "She wanted him to leave" | | 6 | "She needed him to." | | 7 | "His gloves came off next," | | 8 | "She knew the story behind" | | 9 | "She knew too much." | | 10 | "He turned to face her" | | 11 | "She suppressed it." | | 12 | "she told him" | | 13 | "He took a step toward" | | 14 | "She shook her head" | | 15 | "He was close enough now" | | 16 | "She could see the way" | | 17 | "She let the skepticism color" | | 18 | "He gestured toward the coffee" | | 19 | "It was thorough." |
| | ratio | 0.342 | |
| 42.28% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 66 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "The deadbolt turned with a" | | 1 | "Eva had installed all three" | | 2 | "Rory pulled the door open" | | 3 | "Lucien Moreau stood in the" | | 4 | "His platinum hair was slicked" | | 5 | "The amber eye and the" | | 6 | "Rory glanced over her shoulder." | | 7 | "The tabby was sprawled across" | | 8 | "The endearment slipped out with" | | 9 | "The suit was charcoal, as" | | 10 | "The rain had darkened the" | | 11 | "Rory recognized it as the" | | 12 | "He shifted his weight, and" | | 13 | "The left one, where the" | | 14 | "Rory should have closed the" | | 15 | "She knew this." | | 16 | "She'd rehearsed this exact scenario" | | 17 | "She stepped aside." | | 18 | "Lucien moved past her with" | | 19 | "Ptolemy lifted his head, regarded" |
| | ratio | 0.835 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "As if he hadn't once" | | 1 | "As if she hadn't seen" |
| | ratio | 0.025 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien moved past her with that fluid economy of motion that had always fascinated her — the cane barely seeming to touch the floor, his presence filling the cr…" | | 1 | "Ptolemy lifted his head, regarded the half-demon with the particular disdain cats reserved for creatures who didn't belong wholly to any one world, and went bac…" | | 2 | "His gloves came off next, one finger at a time, revealing long pale hands with knuckles that had been broken and reset more than once." | | 3 | "Ptolemy stretched and resettled, his tail flicking once before going still." | | 4 | "The flat smelled of old books and curry from the restaurant below and, faintly, of Lucien's cologne — sandalwood and something else, something that didn't quite…" | | 5 | "Despite everything — the contract, the danger, the three months of radio silence that had calcified into something resembling grief — Rory felt the urge to laug…" | | 6 | "He was close enough now that she could see the faint lines at the corners of his eyes, the ones that deepened when he was genuinely amused rather than performin…" | | 7 | "As if he hadn't once spent an entire night tracing the small crescent scar on her left wrist with his thumb, asking about the childhood accident that had caused…" | | 8 | "As if she hadn't seen him at his worst — the night terrors that left him shaking and gasping, the moments when his demonic heritage surged too close to the surf…" | | 9 | "Inside were several typed pages of notes, written in Lucien's precise hand — observations about the contract's language, the timing of its reactivation, the typ…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 24 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "He took, and the cane made its distinctive tap against the warped floorboards" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 59 | | tagDensity | 0.153 | | leniency | 0.305 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |