| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 0 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 78.99% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1190 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "sharply" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 45.38% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1190 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "dancing" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "flicker" | | 4 | "glint" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "shimmered" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "flickered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 118 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 118 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 118 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 1174 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 19 | | wordCount | 1165 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.86 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 2 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Rory | 10 | | Carter | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Grove" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Carter" | | 3 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Cardiff" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "shape that seemed to unfold from the shadow between two oaks, then vanish before her eyes could confirm its edges" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.852 | | wordCount | 1174 | | matches | | 0 | "not honey, but the cloying sweetness of overripe fruit, the kind" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 46 | | mean | 25.52 | | std | 19.79 | | cv | 0.775 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 45 | | 2 | 50 | | 3 | 67 | | 4 | 44 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 40 | | 8 | 46 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 27 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 58 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 53 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 54 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 30 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 60 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 52 | | 29 | 30 | | 30 | 48 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 61 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 25 | | 37 | 30 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 39 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 25 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 39 | | 45 | 35 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 189 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 16 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 118 | | ratio | 0.102 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory had been here a dozen times in daylight—motes of gold dust dancing through shafts of sun, wildflowers nodding in a breeze that smelled of honey and something older, something just beneath the skin of the world." | | 1 | "The wildflowers still bloomed, but their colours bled into the dark—bruised purples, vein-blue, a white that glowed like bone under UV." | | 2 | "A ring of small bones—bird, maybe, or rabbit—lay arranged in a spiral at the base of the nearest standing stone." | | 3 | "Her peripheral vision caught a flicker of motion in the opposite direction—a glint, like light on polished bone, there and gone." | | 4 | "Its surface was rough, lichen-crusted, but a fresh groove had been cut into it—a spiral that matched the bone arrangement on the ground." | | 5 | "She’d learned that lesson too—from Evan, from the shadows that followed her through the streets of Cardiff, from the night she’d packed a bag and never looked back." | | 6 | "The standing stones shimmered—just a flicker, their edges blurring as if seen through heat haze." | | 7 | "The air thickened, grew heavy with the scent of wet earth and something floral—not honey, but the cloying sweetness of overripe fruit, the kind that drew flies." | | 8 | "Human-shaped, but wrong in the proportions—too narrow at the waist, too long in the arms." | | 9 | "She opened her mouth to speak—what, she didn’t know—but the air in her throat thickened, turned cloying, and the words died before they could form." | | 10 | "Fingers—too many or too few, she couldn’t count them—curved in an unmistakable gesture." | | 11 | "She turned and walked—did not run, because running gave the dark things power—out of the Fae Grove, her hand pressed to the cold pendant, her heart a drum that had not yet learned to slow." |
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| 90.96% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 138 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | | adverbCount | 6 | | adverbRatio | 0.043478260869565216 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 118 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 118 | | mean | 9.95 | | std | 8.04 | | cv | 0.808 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 37 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 30 | | 9 | 29 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 21 | | 36 | 21 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 19 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 23 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 42.37% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 15 | | diversityRatio | 0.3305084745762712 | | totalSentences | 118 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 99.01% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "Too fluid, too deliberate." | | 1 | "Only the dark between the" | | 2 | "Just a silhouette, the suggestion" |
| | ratio | 0.03 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 29 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "It had started pulsing an" | | 1 | "She’d followed the sensation through" | | 2 | "She came because something had" | | 3 | "It was listening." | | 4 | "Her boot crunched on something" | | 5 | "She looked down." | | 6 | "She didn’t remember seeing that" | | 7 | "Her thumb found the pendant’s" | | 8 | "It was hot now, almost" | | 9 | "She looked up." | | 10 | "Her peripheral vision caught a" | | 11 | "She circled the stone ring" | | 12 | "She stopped at the stone" | | 13 | "Its surface was rough, lichen-crusted," | | 14 | "It lasted three seconds, then" | | 15 | "Her hand left the stone." | | 16 | "It pressed against her eardrums," | | 17 | "She forced herself to breathe." | | 18 | "Her cool-headedness was the only" | | 19 | "She’d learned that lesson too—from" |
| | ratio | 0.287 | |
| 63.96% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 80 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "The Fae Grove wasn’t supposed" | | 1 | "Rory had been here a" | | 2 | "A place of quiet wonder." | | 3 | "A pocket between." | | 4 | "The standing stones threw shadows" | | 5 | "The wildflowers still bloomed, but" | | 6 | "The Heartstone pendant lay warm" | | 7 | "It had started pulsing an" | | 8 | "She’d followed the sensation through" | | 9 | "She came because something had" | | 10 | "The air was too still." | | 11 | "The grove had sealed itself" | | 12 | "It was listening." | | 13 | "Rory took a step forward." | | 14 | "Her boot crunched on something" | | 15 | "She looked down." | | 16 | "A ring of small bones—bird," | | 17 | "The marrow still gleamed wetly" | | 18 | "She didn’t remember seeing that" | | 19 | "Her thumb found the pendant’s" |
| | ratio | 0.792 | |
| 99.01% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "Because the pendant had never" | | 1 | "Now she stood at the" |
| | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 71.43% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory had been here a dozen times in daylight—motes of gold dust dancing through shafts of sun, wildflowers nodding in a breeze that smelled of honey and somethi…" | | 1 | "The wildflowers still bloomed, but their colours bled into the dark—bruised purples, vein-blue, a white that glowed like bone under UV." | | 2 | "Its surface was rough, lichen-crusted, but a fresh groove had been cut into it—a spiral that matched the bone arrangement on the ground." | | 3 | "It pressed against her eardrums, a pressure that had no source." | | 4 | "The silhouette flickered, dissolving into the same shadow that had birthed it." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |