Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2FJB3BBYJW3PVSMQYMPYN1

Run Details

Duration:
24.3s
Cost:
$0.000514
Provider:
DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Fae Grove wasn’t supposed to feel like this at night. Rory had been here a dozen times in daylight—motes of gold dust dancing through shafts of sun, wildflowers nodding in a breeze that smelled of honey and something older, something just beneath the skin of the world. A place of quiet wonder. A pocket between. But now, under a moon that hung fat and silver through the canopy, the grove had turned inward. The standing stones threw shadows that didn’t align with the light. The wildflowers still bloomed, but their colours bled into the dark—bruised purples, vein-blue, a white that glowed like bone under UV. The Heartstone pendant lay warm against her collarbone. It had started pulsing an hour ago, a steady thrum like a second heartbeat, pulling her away from her flat above Silas’ bar and out into the sticky London night. She’d followed the sensation through the park, past the locked gates she knew how to slip, through the deer trails that twisted in ways they didn’t during the day. She came because something had changed. Because the pendant had never guided her anywhere before, not once in the three weeks since it appeared on her pillow. And because Rory Carter had learned the hard way that ignoring strange signs only made them stranger. Now she stood at the edge of the stone circle, her breath shallow, and waited for the grove to make sense. It didn’t. The air was too still. No rasp of wind through oak leaves. No distant hum of the city bleeding through the boundary. The grove had sealed itself off, and the silence that filled it was not empty. It was listening. Rory took a step forward. Her boot crunched on something that wasn’t stone. She looked down. A ring of small bones—bird, maybe, or rabbit—lay arranged in a spiral at the base of the nearest standing stone. Deliberate. Fresh. The marrow still gleamed wetly in the moonlight. She didn’t remember seeing that on her last visit. Her thumb found the pendant’s gem. It was hot now, almost uncomfortable, the pulse quickening to match the speed of her heart. A warning, or a welcome. She looked up. Something moved at the far edge of the clearing. Not a deer. Too fluid, too deliberate. A shape that seemed to unfold from the shadow between two oaks, then vanish before her eyes could confirm its edges. Her peripheral vision caught a flicker of motion in the opposite direction—a glint, like light on polished bone, there and gone. Rory didn’t call out. Whatever this place had become, she wasn’t about to announce herself to it. She circled the stone ring slowly, keeping her back to no single point for more than a few seconds. The wildflowers rustled at her feet, but there was no wind. The movement followed her. Each step she took, the grass and petals stirred in her wake as if something unseen breathed across them. The pendant beat against her chest. One-two. One-two. Steady. She stopped at the stone directly opposite the entrance path. Its surface was rough, lichen-crusted, but a fresh groove had been cut into it—a spiral that matched the bone arrangement on the ground. Deep enough to fit her fingertip. The edges were smooth, as if worn by centuries of touch, not carved hours ago. Rory pressed her palm flat against the groove. The stone was warm. A sound broke the silence. Low. Resonant. A hum that came from beneath the earth, vibrating through her bones, through the very air. It lasted three seconds, then cut off. Her hand left the stone. The humming stopped. But the silence that returned was different. Expectant. It pressed against her eardrums, a pressure that had no source. Behind her, something exhaled. Very soft. Very close. Rory spun. Nothing. Only the dark between the trees, the wildflowers swaying without wind, the moon hanging fat and indifferent. The pendant pulsed once, sharply, like a spike of heat. She forced herself to breathe. Slow. Steady. Her cool-headedness was the only thing keeping her from bolting, and bolting was exactly what whatever this was wanted. She’d learned that lesson too—from Evan, from the shadows that followed her through the streets of Cardiff, from the night she’d packed a bag and never looked back. Running gave the dark things power. So she stayed. And the grove answered. A second hum, deeper this time, rolled up through the soles of her boots. The standing stones shimmered—just a flicker, their edges blurring as if seen through heat haze. The wildflowers around the central clearing rose and fell in a wave, moving from the centre outward, a ripple that had no cause. Rory’s skin prickled. The air thickened, grew heavy with the scent of wet earth and something floral—not honey, but the cloying sweetness of overripe fruit, the kind that drew flies. She wanted to check her phone. Wanted to see if time had slipped, if an hour inside had become something worse outside. But her hand wouldn’t move. The pendant had her attention, and the grove had her body, and between them they held her rooted to the spot. At the edge of her vision, the shape came again. This time it didn’t vanish. It coalesced, a figure woven from shadow and pale light, standing between two of the standing stones. No distinct features. Just a silhouette, the suggestion of shoulders, the tilt of a head. It was taller than her, but not impossibly so. Human-shaped, but wrong in the proportions—too narrow at the waist, too long in the arms. It did not move. Rory stared. The silhouette stared back. The pendant thrummed a slow, deliberate beat, like a heart coming to rest. She opened her mouth to speak—what, she didn’t know—but the air in her throat thickened, turned cloying, and the words died before they could form. The silhouette raised one arm. A hand, or the suggestion of one, extended toward her, palm open. Fingers—too many or too few, she couldn’t count them—curved in an unmistakable gesture. *Come.* Rory’s foot lifted without her permission. She set it down, hard, forced her weight forward instead of toward the figure. The movement broke something. The air thinned. The silhouette flickered, dissolving into the same shadow that had birthed it. The grove exhaled. And she was alone again, the pendant cool against her skin, the wildflowers still, the moon high and quiet. But at her feet, a single wildflower had uprooted itself. It lay curled on the earth, its petals bruised to black, its stem snapped clean. She hadn’t touched it. Rory backed away, step by step, until she reached the entrance path. The grove did not stop her. The standing stones did not hum. The silence was ordinary now, just the ordinary hush of a London park at night. She turned and walked—did not run, because running gave the dark things power—out of the Fae Grove, her hand pressed to the cold pendant, her heart a drum that had not yet learned to slow.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences0
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
78.99% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1190
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count3
2
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"very"
2"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
45.38% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1190
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"dancing"
count1
1
word"silence"
count4
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"flicker"
count2
4
word"glint"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count1
6
word"shimmered"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"dancing"
1"silence"
2"pulse"
3"flicker"
4"glint"
5"pulsed"
6"shimmered"
7"weight"
8"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences118
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences118
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tended to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences118
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1174
ratio0.001
matches
0"Come."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount1165
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.86
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Fae2
Grove2
Heartstone1
Rory10
Carter1
Evan1
Cardiff1
London1
persons
0"Grove"
1"Rory"
2"Carter"
3"Evan"
places
0"Fae"
1"Cardiff"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"shape that seemed to unfold from the shadow between two oaks, then vanish before her eyes could confirm its edges"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.852
wordCount1174
matches
0"not honey, but the cloying sweetness of overripe fruit, the kind"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences118
matches
0"learned that lesson"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean25.52
std19.79
cv0.775
sampleLengths
011
145
250
367
444
521
62
740
846
99
1027
113
1258
1317
1453
159
1654
1712
1830
198
2023
214
222
2318
2410
2560
263
274
2852
2930
3048
3110
3261
334
346
3513
3625
3730
381
3939
403
4119
4225
434
4439
4535
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences118
matches
0"was wanted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs189
matches
0"was listening"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount16
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences118
ratio0.102
matches
0"Rory had been here a dozen times in daylight—motes of gold dust dancing through shafts of sun, wildflowers nodding in a breeze that smelled of honey and something older, something just beneath the skin of the world."
1"The wildflowers still bloomed, but their colours bled into the dark—bruised purples, vein-blue, a white that glowed like bone under UV."
2"A ring of small bones—bird, maybe, or rabbit—lay arranged in a spiral at the base of the nearest standing stone."
3"Her peripheral vision caught a flicker of motion in the opposite direction—a glint, like light on polished bone, there and gone."
4"Its surface was rough, lichen-crusted, but a fresh groove had been cut into it—a spiral that matched the bone arrangement on the ground."
5"She’d learned that lesson too—from Evan, from the shadows that followed her through the streets of Cardiff, from the night she’d packed a bag and never looked back."
6"The standing stones shimmered—just a flicker, their edges blurring as if seen through heat haze."
7"The air thickened, grew heavy with the scent of wet earth and something floral—not honey, but the cloying sweetness of overripe fruit, the kind that drew flies."
8"Human-shaped, but wrong in the proportions—too narrow at the waist, too long in the arms."
9"She opened her mouth to speak—what, she didn’t know—but the air in her throat thickened, turned cloying, and the words died before they could form."
10"Fingers—too many or too few, she couldn’t count them—curved in an unmistakable gesture."
11"She turned and walked—did not run, because running gave the dark things power—out of the Fae Grove, her hand pressed to the cold pendant, her heart a drum that had not yet learned to slow."
90.96% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount138
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"lay warm against her"
adverbCount6
adverbRatio0.043478260869565216
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences118
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences118
mean9.95
std8.04
cv0.808
sampleLengths
011
137
25
33
418
511
621
78
830
929
106
1121
1217
1321
142
155
167
1710
1815
193
205
218
223
2320
241
251
268
279
286
2916
305
313
329
333
344
3521
3621
374
3813
3919
4011
414
4219
436
441
451
461
4710
4823
496
42.37% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.3305084745762712
totalSentences118
uniqueOpeners39
99.01% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences101
matches
0"Too fluid, too deliberate."
1"Only the dark between the"
2"Just a silhouette, the suggestion"
ratio0.03
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences101
matches
0"It had started pulsing an"
1"She’d followed the sensation through"
2"She came because something had"
3"It was listening."
4"Her boot crunched on something"
5"She looked down."
6"She didn’t remember seeing that"
7"Her thumb found the pendant’s"
8"It was hot now, almost"
9"She looked up."
10"Her peripheral vision caught a"
11"She circled the stone ring"
12"She stopped at the stone"
13"Its surface was rough, lichen-crusted,"
14"It lasted three seconds, then"
15"Her hand left the stone."
16"It pressed against her eardrums,"
17"She forced herself to breathe."
18"Her cool-headedness was the only"
19"She’d learned that lesson too—from"
ratio0.287
63.96% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount80
totalSentences101
matches
0"The Fae Grove wasn’t supposed"
1"Rory had been here a"
2"A place of quiet wonder."
3"A pocket between."
4"The standing stones threw shadows"
5"The wildflowers still bloomed, but"
6"The Heartstone pendant lay warm"
7"It had started pulsing an"
8"She’d followed the sensation through"
9"She came because something had"
10"The air was too still."
11"The grove had sealed itself"
12"It was listening."
13"Rory took a step forward."
14"Her boot crunched on something"
15"She looked down."
16"A ring of small bones—bird,"
17"The marrow still gleamed wetly"
18"She didn’t remember seeing that"
19"Her thumb found the pendant’s"
ratio0.792
99.01% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences101
matches
0"Because the pendant had never"
1"Now she stood at the"
ratio0.02
71.43% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Rory had been here a dozen times in daylight—motes of gold dust dancing through shafts of sun, wildflowers nodding in a breeze that smelled of honey and somethi…"
1"The wildflowers still bloomed, but their colours bled into the dark—bruised purples, vein-blue, a white that glowed like bone under UV."
2"Its surface was rough, lichen-crusted, but a fresh groove had been cut into it—a spiral that matched the bone arrangement on the ground."
3"It pressed against her eardrums, a pressure that had no source."
4"The silhouette flickered, dissolving into the same shadow that had birthed it."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
89.7036%