Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2FNC0QG53AE4J717Z7A5H4

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Duration:
35.5s
Cost:
$0.000690
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DeepSeek

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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The knock came at half past eleven, three sharp raps against the deadbolted door. Rory looked up from Eva's notes, Ptolemy stirring in her lap. No one knocked like that — polite, deliberate, unhurried. Eva used her keys. The landlord kicked at the bottom panel. And delivery drivers pressed the buzzer downstairs. She set the cat aside and crossed the cramped flat, stepping over stacks of research notes and empty takeaway containers. The peephole showed a sliver of charcoal wool and platinum blond hair. Rory's hand froze on the middle deadbolt. Lucien Moreau stood in the hallway, one hand resting on the ivory grip of his cane, the other raised as if preparing to knock again. He looked exactly as he had six months ago — tailored suit, slicked-back hair, that particular stillness that made him seem less like a man and more like a calculation waiting to be solved. She pulled the door open six inches and no more. "You have three seconds to explain why you're here before I close this door and pretend you're a ghost." Lucien's mouth curved — not quite a smile. "Hello, Aurora." "One second." "Eva sent me." Rory's grip tightened on the doorframe. "Eva's in Prague." "She was. She returned this morning." He tilted his head, and the light caught his mismatched eyes — one amber, one black as oil. "She asked me to deliver a message. I agreed because the message concerns you, and because I judged it unlikely you would answer your phone if you saw my name." He wasn't wrong. She'd deleted his contact four months ago. Blocked him on every platform two weeks after that. "What's the message?" "Insurance policies. Information that certain parties in the supernatural underworld would prefer to remain buried." He paused. "Also, there is a man named Crowley who has been asking questions about you. Questions that suggest he knows more about your move from Cardiff than he should." The air left her lungs in a slow, controlled exhale. Crowley. She'd heard the name from Eva — a low-level fixer with ambitions above his station and a reputation for getting creative with information extraction. "Come in." She stepped back and let the door swing open. Lucien moved past her into the flat, his cane tapping against the worn floorboards. He took in the space in a single sweep — the towers of books, the clutter of research, the single mattress pushed against the far wall with its rumpled sheets. "You're still sleeping on Eva's floor." "I'm still paying off Evan's debts." She closed the door and threw all three deadbolts. "Not all of us have a lucrative demonic inheritance to fall back on." Lucien turned to face her, and for a moment, something flickered in that amber eye. "I never offered you money as charity." "You offered it as something worse." The silence stretched between them, thick with things unsaid. Rory remembered the night in question — his flat in Soho, rain against the windows, the way he'd traced the scar on her wrist and told her he could make all her problems disappear. She'd known what he was offering. A deal. A debt. A tie to a half-demon fixer that would bind her to him in ways that had nothing to do with money and everything to do with power. She'd walked out. He'd let her. "Tea?" she said, because she needed to do something with her hands. "I don't—" "I know you don't drink tea. I was being polite." She filled the kettle anyway, setting it on the two-ring hob that served as Eva's kitchen. "Say what you came to say, Lucien. Then leave." He set his cane against the counter and removed his suit jacket, folding it with precise movements before draping it over the back of a chair. The gesture was so familiar, so infuriatingly domestic, that Rory had to look away. "Crowley has been paying visits to the Golden Empress," he said. "He asks about the delivery girl with the black hair and the blue eyes. He knows you work there. He knows you live above Silas' bar. He does not know about this flat — not yet." "And you want to keep it that way." "I want you to be careful. Crowley is not like the men in Cardiff. He is not like Evan." Lucien's voice dropped, losing its careful neutrality. "Evan wanted to hurt you because he could. Crowley wants to hurt you because he believes you have something he wants. The difference is significant." Rory leaned against the counter, arms crossed. "What does he think I have?" "Do you remember the package you delivered to the warehouse in Bermondsey three weeks ago? The one addressed to a Mr. Ashworth?" She remembered. A sealed manila envelope, paid for in cash, delivered to a man who hadn't met her eyes. Standard Golden Empress protocol for certain kinds of customers — no questions, no receipts, no record. "You're telling me that package was valuable." "You're telling me you didn't look inside." "I'm telling you I know better than to look inside packages people pay extra to have delivered without questions." She held his gaze. "You taught me that." Something shifted in his expression. A crack in the polished surface. "I taught you too many things, Aurora. I taught you to see the threads of the underworld without teaching you how to stay safe from the people who pull them." "You taught me to survive." "I taught you to run." The words hung between them. Rory heard what he didn't say — *I taught you to run from me.* "I'm not running anymore," she said quietly. "I'm staying in London. I'm paying off my debts. I'm building a life that doesn't belong to anyone else." "And what if the life you're building puts you in Crowley's path?" "Then I'll handle it." She pushed off from the counter, crossing the small space until she stood close enough to see the faint lines at the corners of his eyes, the single thread of silver in his platinum hair that hadn't been there six months ago. "I handled Evan. I handled the move. I handled the first three months sleeping on Eva's floor with nothing but a backpack and a burner phone. I don't need you to save me, Lucien." "I know." "Then why are you really here?" He looked at her for a long moment. The kettle boiled and clicked off. Ptolemy wound between their ankles, a warm brush of fur that neither of them acknowledged. "Because I have been awake for seventy-two hours tracking the movements of a man who wants to hurt you," Lucien said. "Because I have called in favors I will be repaying for years. Because when Eva called me from the airport and told me Crowley was asking questions, the only thing I could think about was the last time I saw you standing in my doorway, and how I let you leave without saying the one thing I should have said." Rory's throat tightened. "What thing?" "That I would have torn apart anyone who hurt you. That I would have burned down every corner of the underworld until you were safe." He reached out, slowly, giving her time to pull away, and his fingers brushed the crescent scar on her wrist. "That I let you leave not because I wanted you to go, but because I was afraid of what I would become if you stayed." Her breath caught. The scar tingled under his touch, a ghost of the old injury, the night she'd gotten it and the night he'd first noticed it, tracing the same line with the same careful reverence. "You should have said it." "I am saying it now." She looked at his hand on her wrist, at the contrast of his pale fingers against her skin. She looked up at his mismatched eyes, at the tension in his jaw, at the vulnerability he was showing her like a wound he'd learned to hide. "I'm still not going to let you pay my debts." "I know." "I'm still building my own life." "I know." "And I'm still angry that you let me walk out of your flat without fighting for me." His hand tightened around her wrist, gentle but insistent. "Then stay angry. Yell at me. Throw something. I will stand here and take every word you have to give, because I deserve them." He stepped closer, and now she could smell him — sandalwood and something darker, like smoke from a distant fire. "But do not ask me to leave when I have only just found you again." Rory stared at him. The kettle steamed. Ptolemy meowed and gave up on them, padding away to the mattress. "One cup of tea," she said. "And then you tell me everything you know about Crowley. And then we figure out what to do next." "And after that?" She held his gaze. "After that, we talk about what happened six months ago. The real talk. The one I walked out on." Lucien inclined his head, a gesture of acceptance that looked almost like relief. "I have waited six months for that conversation." "Good." She pulled her wrist free, but slowly, letting her fingers drag against his palm. "Then you can wait another ten minutes while I make this tea."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences62
tagDensity0.242
leniency0.484
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.032
90.34% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1552
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count2
highlights
0"really"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
77.45% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1552
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"standard"
count1
5
word"tracing"
count1
6
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"silence"
2"traced"
3"familiar"
4"standard"
5"tracing"
6"tension"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences71
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences118
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen60
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords7
totalWords1563
ratio0.004
matches
0"I taught you to run from me."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
95.39% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount824
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.09
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva4
Ptolemy3
Moreau1
Lucien7
Soho1
Rory9
Golden1
Empress1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Moreau"
3"Lucien"
4"Rory"
places
0"Soho"
globalScore0.954
windowScore1
50.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if preparing to knock again"
1"not quite a smile"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1563
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences118
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs66
mean23.68
std21.43
cv0.905
sampleLengths
014
138
232
37
459
510
619
710
82
93
109
1154
1219
133
1445
1535
162
1753
186
1928
2022
216
2280
236
2412
252
2635
2740
2847
298
3051
3113
3222
3335
347
357
3627
3741
385
395
4019
4126
4212
4380
442
456
4629
4781
485
4970
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs140
matches
0"was offering"
1"was showing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences118
ratio0.085
matches
0"No one knocked like that — polite, deliberate, unhurried."
1"He looked exactly as he had six months ago — tailored suit, slicked-back hair, that particular stillness that made him seem less like a man and more like a calculation waiting to be solved."
2"Lucien's mouth curved — not quite a smile."
3"\"She was. She returned this morning.\" He tilted his head, and the light caught his mismatched eyes — one amber, one black as oil."
4"She'd heard the name from Eva — a low-level fixer with ambitions above his station and a reputation for getting creative with information extraction."
5"He took in the space in a single sweep — the towers of books, the clutter of research, the single mattress pushed against the far wall with its rumpled sheets."
6"Rory remembered the night in question — his flat in Soho, rain against the windows, the way he'd traced the scar on her wrist and told her he could make all her problems disappear."
7"Standard Golden Empress protocol for certain kinds of customers — no questions, no receipts, no record."
8"Rory heard what he didn't say — *I taught you to run from me.*"
9"\"Then stay angry. Yell at me. Throw something. I will stand here and take every word you have to give, because I deserve them.\" He stepped closer, and now she could smell him — sandalwood and something darker, like smoke from a distant fire."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount818
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.02689486552567237
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.006112469437652812
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences118
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences118
mean13.25
std11.26
cv0.85
sampleLengths
014
111
29
34
47
57
620
712
87
925
1034
1110
1219
138
142
152
163
176
183
1924
2030
213
227
239
243
2517
2628
2710
281
2924
302
319
3214
3330
346
3515
3613
3715
387
396
409
4134
426
432
442
4527
463
473
4812
492
38.14% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.2966101694915254
totalSentences118
uniqueOpeners35
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
ratio0
42.22% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences63
matches
0"She set the cat aside"
1"He looked exactly as he"
2"She pulled the door open"
3"He tilted his head, and"
4"He wasn't wrong."
5"She'd deleted his contact four"
6"She'd heard the name from"
7"She stepped back and let"
8"He took in the space"
9"She closed the door and"
10"She'd known what he was"
11"She'd walked out."
12"He'd let her."
13"she said, because she needed"
14"She filled the kettle anyway,"
15"He set his cane against"
16"She held his gaze"
17"she said quietly"
18"She pushed off from the"
19"He looked at her for"
ratio0.444
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences63
matches
0"The knock came at half"
1"Rory looked up from Eva's"
2"Eva used her keys."
3"The landlord kicked at the"
4"She set the cat aside"
5"The peephole showed a sliver"
6"Rory's hand froze on the"
7"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
8"He looked exactly as he"
9"She pulled the door open"
10"Lucien's mouth curved — not"
11"Rory's grip tightened on the"
12"He tilted his head, and"
13"He wasn't wrong."
14"She'd deleted his contact four"
15"The air left her lungs"
16"She'd heard the name from"
17"She stepped back and let"
18"Lucien moved past her into"
19"He took in the space"
ratio0.937
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
ratio0
28.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Lucien Moreau stood in the hallway, one hand resting on the ivory grip of his cane, the other raised as if preparing to knock again."
1"He looked exactly as he had six months ago — tailored suit, slicked-back hair, that particular stillness that made him seem less like a man and more like a calc…"
2"A tie to a half-demon fixer that would bind her to him in ways that had nothing to do with money and everything to do with power."
3"Lucien inclined his head, a gesture of acceptance that looked almost like relief."
91.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He tilted, and the light caught his mismatched eyes — one amber, one black as oil"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences62
tagDensity0.081
leniency0.161
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
77.1256%