| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.538 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 93.45% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1527 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 27.96% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1527 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "velvet" | | 1 | "loomed" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "rhythmic" | | 5 | "throb" | | 6 | "quivered" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "flicker" | | 10 | "stomach" | | 11 | "fluttered" | | 12 | "footsteps" | | 13 | "glinting" | | 14 | "weight" | | 15 | "searing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "blood ran cold" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 165 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 165 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 172 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 15 | | totalWords | 1547 | | ratio | 0.01 | | matches | | 0 | "You carry his blood." | | 1 | "The one who imprisoned me." | | 2 | "You cannot hide what you carry." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 31 | | wordCount | 1478 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.56 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | November | 1 | | Rory | 23 | | Park | 2 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | London | 1 | | English | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Heartstone" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.722 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 95.05% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 91 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like a woman with her arms raised" | | 1 | "felt like pushing through water" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1547 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 172 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 70 | | mean | 22.1 | | std | 18.89 | | cv | 0.855 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 66 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 56 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 74 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 45 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 52 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 51 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 53 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 38 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 31 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 42 | | 25 | 22 | | 26 | 22 | | 27 | 45 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 41 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 34 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 43 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 35 | | 37 | 49 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 60 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 29 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 19 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 46 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 165 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 257 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 19 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 17 | | totalSentences | 172 | | ratio | 0.099 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d followed the path three times before she found it — the gap in the hedge that shouldn’t have been there, the mossy arch that bent the light wrong." | | 1 | "Wildflowers bloomed at her feet — foxgloves and nightshade and something she couldn’t name, petals that glowed with their own weak phosphorescence." | | 2 | "That was why she’d come at all — it had pulsed hot against her skin at midnight, a rhythmic throb like a heartbeat calling her from her flat above Silas’ bar." | | 3 | "The wind had died the moment she stepped through the hedge — the air hung still and thick as syrup." | | 4 | "The grass changed underfoot — softer, slicker, like stepping on wet moss." | | 5 | "A flicker at the edge of her vision — something darting between the standing stones, low to the ground." | | 6 | "She’d come in pyjama bottoms under a coat, no phone — the battery had died, and she’d left in too much of a hurry." | | 7 | "A woman, maybe — long dark hair, a white dress that stirred despite the dead wind." | | 8 | "The dress hung limp one moment, then fluttered the next — but not with the rhythm of lungs expanding and contracting." | | 9 | "The movement was wrong — too fluid, joints bending at angles that should have been impossible." | | 10 | "She made no sound — no footsteps, no rustle of fabric — but when Rory looked back, she had moved closer." | | 11 | "It flaked away when she touched it, revealing something beneath — a flat surface, smooth and dark." | | 12 | "Rory couldn’t read them — they weren’t English, weren’t anything she’d seen before — but they pulsed with a faint, deep red light." | | 13 | "The shadow that hid her features wasn’t shadow at all — there was a void where her face should have been, a smooth black oval that drank the starlight." | | 14 | "Finally — a flicker of heat, weak and distant, like a dying ember." | | 15 | "And then she spoke — a voice that came from everywhere and nowhere, the sound of leaves scraping, the vibration of stone grinding against stone." | | 16 | "The void split — a mouth that shouldn’t exist, lips of black smoke parting to reveal nothing." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 227 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | | adverbCount | 7 | | adverbRatio | 0.030837004405286344 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 172 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 172 | | mean | 8.99 | | std | 7.13 | | cv | 0.793 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 29 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 31 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 25 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 40.12% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 17 | | diversityRatio | 0.29651162790697677 | | totalSentences | 172 | | uniqueOpeners | 51 | |
| 48.66% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 137 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the parade of silently" | | 1 | "Finally — a flicker of" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 94.45% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 43 | | totalSentences | 137 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d followed the path three" | | 1 | "Her trainers squelched on grass" | | 2 | "She’d followed the pull through" | | 3 | "Her breath fogged, though the" | | 4 | "she told the woman-stone" | | 5 | "She looked down." | | 6 | "They clung to her boots" | | 7 | "She blinked and it was" | | 8 | "She rubbed her eyes with" | | 9 | "Her voice fell flat against" | | 10 | "She’d come in pyjama bottoms" | | 11 | "Her hand closed around nothing" | | 12 | "She stood motionless between two" | | 13 | "It fluttered like sheets hung" | | 14 | "Her foot sank into the" | | 15 | "Her hand pointed toward the" | | 16 | "Her fingers were too long." | | 17 | "She hadn’t noticed it before." | | 18 | "She should have noticed it." | | 19 | "She made no sound —" |
| | ratio | 0.314 | |
| 14.74% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 122 | | totalSentences | 137 | | matches | | 0 | "The November wind carried the" | | 1 | "Richmond Park lay behind her," | | 2 | "She’d followed the path three" | | 3 | "The Fae Grove opened around" | | 4 | "Her trainers squelched on grass" | | 5 | "The oak standing stones loomed" | | 6 | "Wildflowers bloomed at her feet" | | 7 | "The pendant lay cold against" | | 8 | "Rory pulled it from under" | | 9 | "The deep crimson gemstone sat" | | 10 | "That was why she’d come" | | 11 | "She’d followed the pull through" | | 12 | "Her breath fogged, though the" | | 13 | "A rustle came from her" | | 14 | "Rory snapped her head toward" | | 15 | "A patch of foxgloves quivered," | | 16 | "The wind had died the" | | 17 | "A rustle meant something alive." | | 18 | "The grove settled into silence" | | 19 | "The standing stones watched her" |
| | ratio | 0.891 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 137 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 33.90% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Her trainers squelched on grass that felt too soft, too resilient, like walking on living velvet." | | 1 | "The oak standing stones loomed at irregular intervals, their surfaces slick with moisture that caught the faint starlight." | | 2 | "Wildflowers bloomed at her feet — foxgloves and nightshade and something she couldn’t name, petals that glowed with their own weak phosphorescence." | | 3 | "Just the parade of silently screaming oaks, their bark corkscrewed and bulging in ways that made her stomach turn." | | 4 | "The movement was wrong — too fluid, joints bending at angles that should have been impossible." | | 5 | "The shadow that hid her features wasn’t shadow at all — there was a void where her face should have been, a smooth black oval that drank the starlight." | | 6 | "Her white dress hung straight, and the hair that framed the void was silver-white in the dark, not black." | | 7 | "The Heartstone glowed from within, the deep crimson gem suffused with light that seeped through her shirt, illuminating the bones of her chest." | | 8 | "And then she spoke — a voice that came from everywhere and nowhere, the sound of leaves scraping, the vibration of stone grinding against stone." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 73.08% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.308 | | leniency | 0.615 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.154 | |