Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2FQ6Z6DTGP70104ZFQ9N7T

Run Details

Duration:
31.0s
Cost:
$0.000601
Provider:
DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The November wind carried the scent of damp earth and rotting leaves as Rory pushed through the last tangle of brambles. Richmond Park lay behind her, a sprawl of darkness and skeletal trees under a moonless sky. She’d followed the path three times before she found it — the gap in the hedge that shouldn’t have been there, the mossy arch that bent the light wrong. The Fae Grove opened around her like a held breath. Her trainers squelched on grass that felt too soft, too resilient, like walking on living velvet. The oak standing stones loomed at irregular intervals, their surfaces slick with moisture that caught the faint starlight. Wildflowers bloomed at her feet — foxgloves and nightshade and something she couldn’t name, petals that glowed with their own weak phosphorescence. The pendant lay cold against her chest. Rory pulled it from under her collar, frowning. The deep crimson gemstone sat dark and still. No warmth. That was why she’d come at all — it had pulsed hot against her skin at midnight, a rhythmic throb like a heartbeat calling her from her flat above Silas’ bar. She’d followed the pull through the deserted London streets, through the park gates the night watchman swore he’d locked, through the hedge that shouldn’t exist. And now the stone sat dead and cold as a frozen coal. “Right,” she whispered. Her breath fogged, though the air was mild. “This was a terrible idea.” A rustle came from her left. Rory snapped her head toward the sound. A patch of foxgloves quivered, their bell-shaped heads nodding. Nothing emerged. The wind had died the moment she stepped through the hedge — the air hung still and thick as syrup. A rustle meant something alive. Something moving. She waited. Counted her heartbeats. The grove settled into silence so complete she heard her own pulse, the rasp of her jeans, the click of her throat when she swallowed. The standing stones watched her with their blind, lichen-crusted faces. One looked like a woman with her arms raised. Another like a mouth open in a scream. “You’re imagining things,” she told the woman-stone. The stone said nothing. Rory walked deeper into the clearing. The grass changed underfoot — softer, slicker, like stepping on wet moss. She looked down. The stalks were darker here, almost black, with veins of deep purple running through them. They clung to her boots as she lifted each foot, releasing with small wet sounds. The pendant remained cold. A flicker at the edge of her vision — something darting between the standing stones, low to the ground. She spun. Nothing. Just the parade of silently screaming oaks, their bark corkscrewed and bulging in ways that made her stomach turn. One trunk had a face. She blinked and it was just knots. She rubbed her eyes with the heels of her palms. “The stone was warm. I didn’t imagine it.” Her voice fell flat against the still air. The grove swallowed the sound whole, digesting it into the silence. Another rustle. This time behind her. Rory whipped around, arm raised. No weapon. She’d come in pyjama bottoms under a coat, no phone — the battery had died, and she’d left in too much of a hurry. Her hand closed around nothing but air. A shape stood at the edge of the clearing. Human-shaped. A woman, maybe — long dark hair, a white dress that stirred despite the dead wind. She stood motionless between two of the standing stones, her face lost in shadow. “Hello?” Rory’s voice cracked. The woman didn’t move. Didn’t breathe. The dress hung limp one moment, then fluttered the next — but not with the rhythm of lungs expanding and contracting. It fluttered like sheets hung on a line in a breeze that came from nowhere. Rory took a step back. Her foot sank into the grass, and the ground gave way like mud, sucking at her boot. “I don’t want any trouble,” she said. “I’m just — I followed the pendant. It brought me here. I don’t know why.” The woman lifted her arm. The movement was wrong — too fluid, joints bending at angles that should have been impossible. Her hand pointed toward the center of the grove, where a patch of earth lay bare and dark, ringed by the oldest standing stones. Her fingers were too long. Rory looked where she pointed. The bare earth was perfectly circular, about six feet across. The grass around it grew in a spiral, curving inward like the ridges of a seashell. She hadn’t noticed it before. She should have noticed it. “Is that what I’m supposed to see?” The woman’s arm lowered. She made no sound — no footsteps, no rustle of fabric — but when Rory looked back, she had moved closer. Fifty feet away now. Still in shadow. Still wrong. Rory’s throat tightened. She forced herself to breathe. The pendant stayed cold. She walked to the bare earth circle. Her boots left deep impressions in the soft ground, and each step felt like pushing through water. The grove pressed in around her, the standing stones leaning closer, their shadows longer than they should have been. She reached the circle and knelt. The earth was dry. Crumbling. It flaked away when she touched it, revealing something beneath — a flat surface, smooth and dark. Stone. She scraped more dirt away, and the surface caught the starlight, glinting. Words. Carved into the stone in letters that looked ancient, worn smooth by time. Rory couldn’t read them — they weren’t English, weren’t anything she’d seen before — but they pulsed with a faint, deep red light. The same color as her pendant. The same rhythm as a heartbeat. The light matched her own pulse. She jerked her hand back. Behind her, a sound like paper tearing. Rory scrambled to her feet and turned. The woman stood three feet away. She had no face. The shadow that hid her features wasn’t shadow at all — there was a void where her face should have been, a smooth black oval that drank the starlight. Her white dress hung straight, and the hair that framed the void was silver-white in the dark, not black. It swayed gently, though no wind touched it. Rory’s breath caught. Her heart hammered against her ribs. The pendant warmed. Finally — a flicker of heat, weak and distant, like a dying ember. The woman’s head tilted. The gesture was curious, almost birdlike, and the void stared at Rory with a weight that made her skin crawl. She felt seen. Examined. Judged. “I don’t know what you want,” Rory managed. The void rippled. The woman’s hand rose again, and her too-long fingers pointed at Rory’s chest. At the pendant. The warmth grew. Spread. Flared. Rory looked down. The Heartstone glowed from within, the deep crimson gem suffused with light that seeped through her shirt, illuminating the bones of her chest. She could see the shadow of her ribs, the branching tree of her veins, the steady pulsing of her heart. The woman’s head tilted further. Too far. Her neck bent at an angle that should have snapped bone. And then she spoke — a voice that came from everywhere and nowhere, the sound of leaves scraping, the vibration of stone grinding against stone. *You carry his blood.* Rory’s blood ran cold. “Whose?” The void split — a mouth that shouldn’t exist, lips of black smoke parting to reveal nothing. *The one who imprisoned me.* The pendant blazed. Pain lanced through Rory’s chest, hot and sharp, and she stumbled backward. Her hand flew to the stone, searing her palm. The carved words in the earth circle blazed to life, the red light pulsing faster, faster, until the stones themselves began to hum. The woman stepped forward. Her bare feet touched the spiral grass, and the grass withered. Blackened. Died in a ring that spread outward from her toes. Rory turned and ran. The grove warped around her. The standing stones shifted, their positions wrong, the path she’d come through gone. Brambles grew where there had been grass. The hedge that led back to the park was a wall of thorns thick as her arm, closing her in. She crashed through them anyway, thorns tearing at her coat, her skin, her face. Behind her, the tearing sound came again. Louder now. She burst through the hedge into the park. The moonless sky vanished behind the canopy of dead trees. Richmond Park stretched out before her, quiet and dark and normal. The pendant went cold. Rory leaned against a gnarled oak and gasped for breath. Blood trickled down her cheek from a thorn scratch. She touched it, came away with red. And from behind her, muffled by the hedge, a voice like grinding stone: *You cannot hide what you carry.* Rory didn’t look back. She ran until her lungs burned, until the lights of the city bled through the trees, until she burst onto a road where a taxi sat at a red light. She pounded on the window. The driver rolled it down. “You alright, love? You look like you’ve seen a ghost.” Rory’s fingers closed around the pendant. Cold. Silent. Useless again. “Just get me home,” she said. “Please.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.538
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.45% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1527
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
27.96% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1527
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"velvet"
count1
1
word"loomed"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count2
3
word"pulsed"
count2
4
word"rhythmic"
count1
5
word"throb"
count1
6
word"quivered"
count1
7
word"silence"
count2
8
word"pulse"
count2
9
word"flicker"
count2
10
word"stomach"
count1
11
word"fluttered"
count2
12
word"footsteps"
count1
13
word"glinting"
count1
14
word"weight"
count1
15
word"searing"
count1
highlights
0"velvet"
1"loomed"
2"warmth"
3"pulsed"
4"rhythmic"
5"throb"
6"quivered"
7"silence"
8"pulse"
9"flicker"
10"stomach"
11"fluttered"
12"footsteps"
13"glinting"
14"weight"
15"searing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
highlights
0"blood ran cold"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences165
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences165
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences172
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords15
totalWords1547
ratio0.01
matches
0"You carry his blood."
1"The one who imprisoned me."
2"You cannot hide what you carry."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount1478
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.56
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
November1
Rory23
Park2
Fae1
Grove1
London1
English1
Heartstone1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Grove"
2"Heartstone"
places
0"Park"
1"Fae"
2"London"
globalScore0.722
windowScore0.667
95.05% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences91
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like a woman with her arms raised"
1"felt like pushing through water"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1547
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences172
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs70
mean22.1
std18.89
cv0.855
sampleLengths
066
110
256
37
474
512
616
76
845
95
1052
117
124
1351
144
1553
1610
178
1819
196
2038
219
2231
234
2442
2522
2622
2745
285
2941
307
3134
328
334
3443
356
3635
3749
386
395
4014
416
4260
439
4416
4529
468
4719
485
4946
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences165
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs257
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount19
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences17
totalSentences172
ratio0.099
matches
0"She’d followed the path three times before she found it — the gap in the hedge that shouldn’t have been there, the mossy arch that bent the light wrong."
1"Wildflowers bloomed at her feet — foxgloves and nightshade and something she couldn’t name, petals that glowed with their own weak phosphorescence."
2"That was why she’d come at all — it had pulsed hot against her skin at midnight, a rhythmic throb like a heartbeat calling her from her flat above Silas’ bar."
3"The wind had died the moment she stepped through the hedge — the air hung still and thick as syrup."
4"The grass changed underfoot — softer, slicker, like stepping on wet moss."
5"A flicker at the edge of her vision — something darting between the standing stones, low to the ground."
6"She’d come in pyjama bottoms under a coat, no phone — the battery had died, and she’d left in too much of a hurry."
7"A woman, maybe — long dark hair, a white dress that stirred despite the dead wind."
8"The dress hung limp one moment, then fluttered the next — but not with the rhythm of lungs expanding and contracting."
9"The movement was wrong — too fluid, joints bending at angles that should have been impossible."
10"She made no sound — no footsteps, no rustle of fabric — but when Rory looked back, she had moved closer."
11"It flaked away when she touched it, revealing something beneath — a flat surface, smooth and dark."
12"Rory couldn’t read them — they weren’t English, weren’t anything she’d seen before — but they pulsed with a faint, deep red light."
13"The shadow that hid her features wasn’t shadow at all — there was a void where her face should have been, a smooth black oval that drank the starlight."
14"Finally — a flicker of heat, weak and distant, like a dying ember."
15"And then she spoke — a voice that came from everywhere and nowhere, the sound of leaves scraping, the vibration of stone grinding against stone."
16"The void split — a mouth that shouldn’t exist, lips of black smoke parting to reveal nothing."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount227
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"lay cold against her"
adverbCount7
adverbRatio0.030837004405286344
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences172
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences172
mean8.99
std7.13
cv0.793
sampleLengths
021
116
229
310
416
518
622
77
88
98
102
1131
1225
1312
143
158
165
176
187
199
202
2120
225
232
242
253
2625
2710
289
298
307
314
326
3312
343
3515
3615
374
3819
392
401
4119
425
437
4410
458
468
4711
482
494
40.12% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.29651162790697677
totalSentences172
uniqueOpeners51
48.66% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences137
matches
0"Just the parade of silently"
1"Finally — a flicker of"
ratio0.015
94.45% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount43
totalSentences137
matches
0"She’d followed the path three"
1"Her trainers squelched on grass"
2"She’d followed the pull through"
3"Her breath fogged, though the"
4"she told the woman-stone"
5"She looked down."
6"They clung to her boots"
7"She blinked and it was"
8"She rubbed her eyes with"
9"Her voice fell flat against"
10"She’d come in pyjama bottoms"
11"Her hand closed around nothing"
12"She stood motionless between two"
13"It fluttered like sheets hung"
14"Her foot sank into the"
15"Her hand pointed toward the"
16"Her fingers were too long."
17"She hadn’t noticed it before."
18"She should have noticed it."
19"She made no sound —"
ratio0.314
14.74% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount122
totalSentences137
matches
0"The November wind carried the"
1"Richmond Park lay behind her,"
2"She’d followed the path three"
3"The Fae Grove opened around"
4"Her trainers squelched on grass"
5"The oak standing stones loomed"
6"Wildflowers bloomed at her feet"
7"The pendant lay cold against"
8"Rory pulled it from under"
9"The deep crimson gemstone sat"
10"That was why she’d come"
11"She’d followed the pull through"
12"Her breath fogged, though the"
13"A rustle came from her"
14"Rory snapped her head toward"
15"A patch of foxgloves quivered,"
16"The wind had died the"
17"A rustle meant something alive."
18"The grove settled into silence"
19"The standing stones watched her"
ratio0.891
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences137
matches(empty)
ratio0
33.90% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences59
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"Her trainers squelched on grass that felt too soft, too resilient, like walking on living velvet."
1"The oak standing stones loomed at irregular intervals, their surfaces slick with moisture that caught the faint starlight."
2"Wildflowers bloomed at her feet — foxgloves and nightshade and something she couldn’t name, petals that glowed with their own weak phosphorescence."
3"Just the parade of silently screaming oaks, their bark corkscrewed and bulging in ways that made her stomach turn."
4"The movement was wrong — too fluid, joints bending at angles that should have been impossible."
5"The shadow that hid her features wasn’t shadow at all — there was a void where her face should have been, a smooth black oval that drank the starlight."
6"Her white dress hung straight, and the hair that framed the void was silver-white in the dark, not black."
7"The Heartstone glowed from within, the deep crimson gem suffused with light that seeped through her shirt, illuminating the bones of her chest."
8"And then she spoke — a voice that came from everywhere and nowhere, the sound of leaves scraping, the vibration of stone grinding against stone."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
73.08% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.308
leniency0.615
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.154
79.4029%