Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2FSWNKATBAY620TJJJG81T

Run Details

Duration:
1m 8s
Cost:
$0.002070
Provider:
DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The deadbolt slid back with a satisfying thunk, then another, then the third. Rory pulled the door open, already speaking. "Eva, I told you I'd text when—" The words died in her throat. Lucien Moreau stood in the narrow hallway, one hand resting on his ivory-handled cane, the other holding a bottle of wine by the neck. The amber of his right eye caught the dim corridor light while the black one seemed to swallow it whole. His charcoal suit fit him like a second skin, every line razor-sharp, the pale platinum of his hair slicked back from his forehead as if wind couldn't touch him. "Bonsoir, Aurora." Rory's hand tightened on the doorframe. She hadn't heard that voice in seven months. Not since she'd walked out of his office in Mayfair with her delivery bag clutched to her chest and his file on Evan still warm from his printer. "You've got some nerve." "I brought wine." He lifted the bottle. A 2012 Bordeaux. "Your favorite vintage." "My favorite vintage is anything under fifteen quid. That's a three-hundred-pound bottle." "Four-fifty." "And you think that changes anything?" "No." Lucien's grip shifted on his cane. "But I hoped it might buy me an opening line." Ptolemy wound between Rory's ankles, tail brushing her calf. The cat fixed its amber eyes on Lucien and let out a low, rumbling meow. "Even your cat judges me." "He's Eva's cat. And he's an excellent judge of character." Lucien inclined his head. The motion carried a weariness she'd never seen on him before. Gone was the smooth, unflappable fixer who brokered treaties between warring vampire covens and unearthed secrets that could topple minor dynasties. In his place stood a man who looked like he hadn't slept in a week. "I need your help." Rory laughed. The sound came out brittle and sharp. "That's rich." "I'm serious." "So was I. Seven months ago. When I asked you to help me deal with Evan and you handed me a folder and wished me luck." She stepped back from the door, hand already reaching for the deadbolt. "Find someone else." "I burned his operation to the ground." Her fingers froze on the brass. "Three weeks after you left." Lucien's heterochromatic gaze held her in place. "I called in every favor I had. Every marker. It took me that long to assemble enough leverage to crush his finances, his connections, his reputation. He fled to Manchester. He won't bother you again." Rory's chest constricted. She remembered those three weeks. Sleeping on Eva's worn corduroy sofa, jumping at every creak of the old building settling. Checking the deadbolts obsessively. Wondering if Evan's temper had finally curdled into something that would follow her across the Severn. "You never told me." "I didn't want to give you false hope if I failed." "You let me think—" She bit off the words. "You let me think you didn't care." Lucien's jaw tightened. "I cared. That was the problem." The confession hung between them, raw and unadorned. Rory became acutely aware of her own heartbeat, the worn rug beneath her socks, the curry-scented air drifting up from the restaurant below. "We can't have this conversation in the hallway." "I know." She stepped aside. He crossed the threshold with a slight hitch in his stride, favoring his right leg. A new injury, or an old one acting up. Rory catalogued it reflexively before she could stop herself. Seven months hadn't dulled the instinct to read him. Eva's flat swallowed them both. Books teetered in precarious stacks on every surface — the coffee table, the windowsill, even the floor around the radiator. Scrolls unfurled across the kitchen counter, their edges weighted down with empty tea mugs. A corkboard dominated one wall, pinned with maps and newspaper clippings connected by red string. "Your friend's research has expanded." Lucien surveyed the chaos with something approaching admiration. "What is she hunting now?" "Ley line intersections under the London Underground." "Naturally." Rory crossed her arms. "You said you needed my help." "I said I needed your help." He set the wine bottle on the least cluttered corner of the dining table. "I didn't say you'd like it." "When have I ever liked anything you've asked me to do?" A ghost of a smile flickered across his lips. "You liked the Chiswick job. The poltergeist who kept rearranging that accountant's tax filings." "That was funny." "I recall you laughed for ten minutes straight when the HMRC audit team showed up." The memory slipped between her ribs like a splinter. Working with Lucien had felt like an awakening. The supernatural world peeking through London's gray veneer — barghests in Hyde Park, a banshee who worked the night shift at a Walthamstow Tesco, a whole hidden economy of favors and debts and information brokered over espresso in Mayfair cafés. And Lucien at the center of it all, guiding her through it with that infuriating half-smile and his perfectly pressed suits. Until she'd asked him to help with the one human problem that terrified her more than any demon. "Stop." Her voice came out steadier than she felt. "You don't get to reminisce with me like we're old friends." "You're right." Lucien's gloved hand tightened on his cane. "Forgive me." The apology startled her more than his appearance had. Lucien Moreau didn't apologize. He negotiated. He bargained. He presented compelling arguments that made his desires seem indistinguishable from yours. "What happened to you?" "Someone I trusted fed me to a pack of ghouls in Camden Town. The betrayal was more painful than the teeth, if that tells you anything." Rory's stomach dropped. "Who?" "An associate named Dev. You never met him." Lucien's black eye seemed to deepen. "He's been providing information to a rival broker. Feeding them details about my operations, my contacts, my methods. I only discovered the scope of the leak three nights ago, when I walked into what was supposed to be a simple exchange and found six ghouls instead." "And you survived." "Barely." He tapped his cane against the floor. "I lost my emergency contacts list, my code phrases, and several useful items that were on my person at the time. I can't access half my safe houses because Dev knew the locations. I can't reach out to my usual allies because I don't know which of them has been compromised." Realization dawned, cold and unwelcome. "You came here because I'm not on any of your lists." "Because you were never officially part of my network." Lucien met her gaze without flinching. "We kept our arrangement between us. No paperwork. No records. You were a delivery driver who occasionally helped me with problems. That's all anyone would find if they dug." "I wasn't an arrangement." Rory's voice cracked. "I was—" She stopped herself. The words she wanted to say felt too large for this cluttered flat with its cat hair and tea stains and the ghost of every argument they'd never had. Lucien took a step closer. The scent of him reached her — bergamot and something darker, like woodsmoke after rain. "You were what?" "Don't." "Aurora." "My name is Rory." "I know your name." The softness of his tone nearly undid her. She turned away, navigating around a stack of books on Mesopotamian demonology to put the sofa between them. "What exactly do you need from me?" "I need you to access a safety deposit box at Barclays on Fleet Street. It's under a pseudonym I established years ago, before Dev entered my circle. The bank won't look twice at a human courier making a routine pickup. Inside, there's a set of backup credentials that will allow me to re-establish my network." Rory processed this. "You want me to be your errand girl again." "I want you to be the one person in London I can trust." "That's not an answer." "It's the only answer I have." Ptolemy leaped onto the sofa and settled into a loaf position, watching them both with feline disinterest. Outside, a siren wailed somewhere in the direction of Whitechapel High Street. The curry house below had started its evening rush; the smell of cardamom and cumin intensified. Rory thought about Evan. About the folder Lucien had given her — immigration records, financial statements, evidence of the kind that could send a man to prison if wielded correctly. She'd thought it was dismissal. A polite way of saying handle your own mess. "Why didn't you tell me you were going after him?" Lucien stared at the corkboard, at Eva's red strings and annotated maps. "Because I was ashamed." "Of what?" "That I'd made you wait. That I'd let you walk out of my office thinking I saw you as just another client." His fingers flexed on the cane. "When you asked for help with your ex, I should have dropped everything. Instead, I calculated. I weighed options. I treated your fear like a transaction to be optimized. By the time I realized what a monumental error that was, you were gone." The words settled over her like a weight and a release all at once. "I'm not going to apologize again," Lucien said. "It's beneath both of us. But I will ask you — this once — to help me. Not as a broker to a contact. As a man who had no right to knock on your door tonight and did it anyway." Rory looked at him. At the exhaustion carved into the hollows of his cheeks. At the way his weight listed slightly toward the cane. At the wine bottle on the table, a peace offering that must have cost more than her monthly rent. "I have conditions." "Name them." "You tell me everything. No more protecting me from hope or failure or whatever you think I can't handle." She uncrossed her arms. "And when this is over — if you survive — we have an actual conversation. About what we were. About what happened." Lucien's mismatched eyes held hers. "Agreed." "Good." Rory walked to the kitchen and pulled open a drawer. She extracted a corkscrew and held it up. "Then open your four-hundred-and-fifty-pound apology wine while I call Yu-Fei and tell her I won't be in for tomorrow's shift." For the first time since she'd opened the door, something unknotted in Lucien's expression. It wasn't quite a smile. It was the possibility of one. "You're not going to let me forget the price tag, are you?" "Not for the next fifty years."
created_at"2026-04-25T14:13:24.792Z" 4/25/2026, 2:13:24 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She stepped back [back]"
dialogueSentences82
tagDensity0.207
leniency0.415
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.024
94.26% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1741
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
77.02% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1741
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"navigating"
count1
3
word"processed"
count1
4
word"calculated"
count1
5
word"optimized"
count1
6
word"weight"
count2
highlights
0"flickered"
1"stomach"
2"navigating"
3"processed"
4"calculated"
5"optimized"
6"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences92
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences92
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences157
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen55
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1749
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
49.79% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions57
wordCount948
uniqueNames19
maxNameDensity2
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau2
Mayfair2
Evan3
Bordeaux1
Ptolemy2
Rory14
Lucien19
Eva3
Severn1
London1
Hyde1
Park1
Walthamstow1
Tesco1
Realization1
Mesopotamian1
Whitechapel1
High1
Street1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Evan"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Rory"
4"Lucien"
5"Eva"
6"Realization"
places
0"Mayfair"
1"Severn"
2"London"
3"Hyde"
4"Park"
5"Walthamstow"
6"Whitechapel"
7"High"
8"Street"
globalScore0.498
windowScore0.5
71.88% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like he hadn't slept in a week"
1"felt like an awakening"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1749
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences157
matches
0"heard that voice"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs88
mean19.88
std19.25
cv0.968
sampleLengths
020
17
26
373
42
542
64
713
812
91
106
1117
1224
135
1410
1551
164
1711
182
1941
207
216
2247
2343
244
2511
2616
279
2831
298
302
313
3242
3354
3418
357
361
3710
3826
3911
4023
413
4215
4378
4418
4520
4611
4729
484
4926
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs160
matches(empty)
51.87% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences157
ratio0.032
matches
0"Books teetered in precarious stacks on every surface — the coffee table, the windowsill, even the floor around the radiator."
1"The supernatural world peeking through London's gray veneer — barghests in Hyde Park, a banshee who worked the night shift at a Walthamstow Tesco, a whole hidden economy of favors and debts and information brokered over espresso in Mayfair cafés."
2"The scent of him reached her — bergamot and something darker, like woodsmoke after rain."
3"The curry house below had started its evening rush; the smell of cardamom and cumin intensified."
4"About the folder Lucien had given her — immigration records, financial statements, evidence of the kind that could send a man to prison if wielded correctly."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount948
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.03270042194092827
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.00949367088607595
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences157
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences157
mean11.14
std10.17
cv0.913
sampleLengths
013
17
27
36
424
520
629
72
86
98
1028
114
127
133
143
1512
161
176
187
1910
209
2115
225
2310
244
2511
2621
2715
284
292
307
312
322
3338
343
357
366
3712
3835
393
405
4115
424
4316
444
4511
469
477
483
496
59.02% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.3885350318471338
totalSentences157
uniqueOpeners61
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences88
matches
0"His charcoal suit fit him"
1"She hadn't heard that voice"
2"He lifted the bottle"
3"She stepped back from the"
4"Her fingers froze on the"
5"She remembered those three weeks."
6"She bit off the words"
7"She stepped aside."
8"He crossed the threshold with"
9"He set the wine bottle"
10"Her voice came out steadier"
11"He presented compelling arguments that"
12"He tapped his cane against"
13"She stopped herself."
14"She turned away, navigating around"
15"She'd thought it was dismissal."
16"His fingers flexed on the"
17"She uncrossed her arms"
18"She extracted a corkscrew and"
19"It wasn't quite a smile."
ratio0.239
50.91% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount72
totalSentences88
matches
0"The deadbolt slid back with"
1"Rory pulled the door open,"
2"The words died in her"
3"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
4"The amber of his right"
5"His charcoal suit fit him"
6"Rory's hand tightened on the"
7"She hadn't heard that voice"
8"He lifted the bottle"
9"A 2012 Bordeaux."
10"Lucien's grip shifted on his"
11"Ptolemy wound between Rory's ankles,"
12"The cat fixed its amber"
13"Lucien inclined his head."
14"The motion carried a weariness"
15"The sound came out brittle"
16"She stepped back from the"
17"Her fingers froze on the"
18"Lucien's heterochromatic gaze held her"
19"Rory's chest constricted."
ratio0.818
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
ratio0
34.63% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"His charcoal suit fit him like a second skin, every line razor-sharp, the pale platinum of his hair slicked back from his forehead as if wind couldn't touch him…"
1"Gone was the smooth, unflappable fixer who brokered treaties between warring vampire covens and unearthed secrets that could topple minor dynasties."
2"The supernatural world peeking through London's gray veneer — barghests in Hyde Park, a banshee who worked the night shift at a Walthamstow Tesco, a whole hidde…"
3"He presented compelling arguments that made his desires seem indistinguishable from yours."
4"About the folder Lucien had given her — immigration records, financial statements, evidence of the kind that could send a man to prison if wielded correctly."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences82
tagDensity0.012
leniency0.024
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.9792%