Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2FV71KJERR4KB6ZB5JRFWQ

Run Details

Duration:
1m 33s
Cost:
$0.002782
Provider:
DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came at half past ten, three sharp raps that cut through the low hum of the bar downstairs. Aurora set her paperback on the arm of the threadbare sofa and waited. Nobody visited. Eva always texted first, Silas had his own key, and the delivery apps knew the side entrance. Another three beats, harder this time, rattled the deadbolt she’d installed herself after the last round of supernatural nonsense. She crossed the narrow living space, bare feet silent on the warped floorboards. The peephole showed a distorted fisheye view of the landing: a slice of charcoal wool, pale hair slicked back, the glint of an ivory crook. Her stomach dropped. She undid the chain with fingers that refused to tremble, twisted the lock, and pulled the door open just wide enough to block the threshold with her body. Lucien Moreau stood under the bare bulb of the hall light, one hand resting on the silver head of his cane. Rain had darkened the shoulders of his jacket and scattered droplets across the lenses of his absent spectacles—he must have pocketed them. His mismatched eyes, one amber and one the flat black of old coffee, tracked her face without blinking. “Rory.” The single syllable carried the same smoke-and-spice cadence she remembered. He gave no smile, no theatrical bow of the head. Just her name, weighted. She tightened her grip on the doorframe. “You’ve got the wrong address, Frenchman. Pawnshop’s two streets over.” “I’m not here to fence stolen goods.” “Then what?” He shifted his weight, the cane tapping once against the peeling linoleum. “A conversation. Perhaps over something warm. It’s rather damp.” Aurora let the silence stretch until the radiator in the stairwell clanked and hissed. Six weeks. Six weeks since she’d walked out of his townhouse in Mayfair with his parting words still ringing in her ears—*You knew what I was from the start, chérie. The monster didn’t sneak up on you.* She’d slammed the door on his arrogance and promised herself the next voice she heard would be Eva’s, or Yu-Fei’s, anyone’s but his. Yet here he stood, dripping onto her landing. “You’ve got nerve,” she said, voice flat. “I’ll give you that.” “I had a great deal of time to cultivate it. In Avaros, they say patience is the sharpest blade.” He tilted his head, the light catching the fine lines at the corner of his human eye. “May I come in, or shall I negotiate terms with the peeling paint?” Aurora stepped back, not because she wanted him inside, but because she refused to let him loom in the hallway like some brooding gargoyle. She flicked a hand toward the cluttered interior and left the door ajar. He entered with the same controlled economy he brought to everything, closing the door behind him and hooking his cane over the back of a kitchen chair. Without asking, he unbuttoned his wet jacket and draped it over the radiator, revealing a waistcoat the colour of steel. His shirtsleeves were rolled once at the cuff, and she noticed the skin of his left forearm, where the demonic script pulsed faintly beneath the surface—a detail he usually kept covered. She crossed her arms. “The kettle’s broken. Say what you came to say and then get out.” “The kettle isn’t broken. You simply unplugged it because the socket sparks.” He gestured at the cord trailing across the counter. “I watched you do the same thing after the hex-bomb in Chelsea. Habit.” The memory jolted her—smoke, shattered glass, Lucien hauling her to her feet while she coughed out a lungful of sulphur. She’d unplugged a kettle then too, hands shaking, desperate for a sliver of control. The fact that he remembered made her jaw clench. “You’re not here about kettles.” “No.” He moved to the window, looking out at the rain-slicked Brick Lane street. “Word reached me through certain channels. There’s a collector—a man named Castell—who’s acquired a reliquary containing something that doesn’t belong to him. He’s holding a private viewing tomorrow night. I need someone light-fingered who can pass as gallery staff.” “And you thought of me.” “You’re quick, you’re unobtrusive, and you owe me precisely nothing. That makes you trustworthy.” Aurora let out a laugh, short and bitter. “Trustworthy. After you stood in your study and told me my fear was nothing but ‘human squeamishness.’ After you let me walk out without a word to stop me.” He turned from the window, and for the briefest second, the amber eye flickered—just a pulse of deeper light, like a coal catching air. “I let you walk because holding you there would have proven my point. I am not in the business of keeping prisoners, Rory. I never was.” “Then what was I?” She hadn’t meant to ask it aloud. The question escaped before she could trap it behind her teeth. The rain drummed against the glass. Ptolemy, the tabby from Eva’s flat who’d taken to wandering through the building’s crawlspaces, chose that moment to slink out from behind the sofa and twine around Lucien’s ankles. He glanced down at the cat, then back at her. “You were the first person in a decade who looked at both of my eyes and didn’t flinch,” he said quietly. “You cannot imagine what that does to a man who’s trained himself to expect disgust.” She wanted to fire back something sharp, something to slice through the sudden ache in her chest. But the words caught on the memory of that first meeting, at the back table of the Golden Empress, when he’d removed his dark glasses and waited, perfectly still, for her to recoil. She hadn’t. She’d leaned forward instead, intrigued by the liquid shift of the black eye, the gold one so human it hurt. “You never said that before.” “There were many things I never said.” He took a step toward her, and the space between them contracted as if the walls had sighed inward. “I deal in information, Rory. Secrets, leverage, the careful arrangement of facts. But I have never learned how to hand someone the truth of what I feel without weighing the cost first. It is a failing. I know that.” Her arms stayed crossed, but her shoulders had lost their rigid set. The crescent scar on her left wrist prickled, the way it always did when her pulse ran high. She dropped her gaze to it, then back to his face. “You could have called.” “Would you have answered?” No. She wouldn’t have. She’d have let it ring until the voicemail picked up, then stared at the screen for an hour, thumb hovering over the delete button. That admission sat sour on her tongue. “The job,” she said instead, stepping sideways toward the kitchen counter, putting a physical barrier back between them. “Castell’s viewing. What’s the relic?” Lucien’s mouth curved—not quite a smile, but the ghost of one. “A fragment of a binding contract between three lesser lords of Avaros. Contested territory. If Castell presents it publicly, it triggers a clause that could start a rather unpleasant turf war in the shadow markets of South Bank. Your friend Eva’s flat is in the splash zone, among other things.” Damn him. He knew exactly which thread to pull. “You’re manipulating me.” “I’m informing you. The choice is entirely yours.” He retrieved his cane from the chair and slid the concealed blade a half-inch free, then clicked it home—a small, nervous gesture she’d seen him use only twice before. “I came tonight because you deserved to hear it from me rather than a third-hand rumour. And because I owed you more than silence.” Aurora watched the rain track down the windowpane, distorting the neon sign of the curry house next door into ribbons of orange. Six weeks of silence. Six weeks of replaying that last conversation, editing the script, wishing she’d been braver or he’d been softer. And now he stood in her kitchen, offering a job wrapped in a confession. She uncrossed her arms. “I’ll think about it.” “Fair.” “But if I agree, you’re not my handler. I don’t report to you. I don’t take your orders.” “Understood.” “And you stop wearing that waistcoat around me. It’s distracting.” The ghost of a smile became real for half a breath, and her chest tightened at the sight of it. He lifted his cane from the chair back and tapped it once against the floorboards. “Distracting in what manner?” “Don’t push your luck, Moreau.” He moved toward the door, pausing long enough to brush a raindrop from his sleeve. When he looked at her again, the amber eye held a warmth that had nothing to do with hellfire. “Thank you for opening the door.” She didn’t answer. She waited until his footsteps faded down the stairwell, then pressed her forehead against the cool wood of the doorframe and let out a breath she hadn’t realised she’d been holding. The cat meowed. The kettle stayed unplugged. And somewhere beneath her ribs, the careful wall she’d built started to show its first hairline crack.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he said quietly [quietly]"
1"she said instead [instead]"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.22
leniency0.439
rawRatio0.222
effectiveRatio0.098
93.42% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1520
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"precisely"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"precisely"
1"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.95% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1520
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"glint"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"silence"
count3
4
word"flicked"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count1
6
word"shattered"
count1
7
word"flickered"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count2
9
word"warmth"
count1
10
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"glint"
1"stomach"
2"weight"
3"silence"
4"flicked"
5"pulsed"
6"shattered"
7"flickered"
8"pulse"
9"warmth"
10"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
1
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
1"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences74
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences106
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen50
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords16
totalWords1512
ratio0.011
matches
0"You knew what I was from the start, chérie. The monster didn’t sneak up on you."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount1050
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.48
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Silas1
Moreau1
Mayfair1
Eva3
Yu-Fei1
Aurora5
Lucien4
Brick1
Lane1
Golden1
Empress1
Six4
persons
0"Silas"
1"Moreau"
2"Eva"
3"Yu-Fei"
4"Aurora"
5"Lucien"
places
0"Mayfair"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite a smile, but the ghost of one"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.661
wordCount1512
matches
0"not quite a smile, but the ghost of one"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences106
matches
0"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean28
std22.44
cv0.801
sampleLengths
020
151
238
33
428
561
61
724
817
97
102
1121
1282
1311
1449
1537
1678
1717
1834
1943
205
2153
225
2314
2437
2550
2622
2745
2836
2972
305
3165
3241
334
344
3535
3623
3761
389
393
4061
4158
428
431
4418
451
4610
4735
484
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"were rolled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs183
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences106
ratio0.066
matches
0"Rain had darkened the shoulders of his jacket and scattered droplets across the lenses of his absent spectacles—he must have pocketed them."
1"Six weeks since she’d walked out of his townhouse in Mayfair with his parting words still ringing in her ears—*You knew what I was from the start, chérie."
2"His shirtsleeves were rolled once at the cuff, and she noticed the skin of his left forearm, where the demonic script pulsed faintly beneath the surface—a detail he usually kept covered."
3"The memory jolted her—smoke, shattered glass, Lucien hauling her to her feet while she coughed out a lungful of sulphur."
4"He turned from the window, and for the briefest second, the amber eye flickered—just a pulse of deeper light, like a coal catching air."
5"Lucien’s mouth curved—not quite a smile, but the ghost of one."
6"“I’m informing you. The choice is entirely yours.” He retrieved his cane from the chair and slid the concealed blade a half-inch free, then clicked it home—a small, nervous gesture she’d seen him use only twice before."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1061
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.03298774740810556
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.005655042412818096
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences106
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences106
mean14.26
std10.28
cv0.721
sampleLengths
020
113
22
317
419
513
625
73
828
921
1022
1118
121
1310
1410
154
167
1710
187
192
2012
219
2214
232
2428
2530
268
277
284
2936
3013
3124
3213
3327
3420
3531
364
3713
3821
3913
4020
4114
429
435
4414
4539
465
4714
488
4929
49.37% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.3584905660377358
totalSentences106
uniqueOpeners38
48.31% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences69
matches
0"Just her name, weighted."
ratio0.014
17.10% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences69
matches
0"She crossed the narrow living"
1"Her stomach dropped."
2"She undid the chain with"
3"His mismatched eyes, one amber"
4"He gave no smile, no"
5"She tightened her grip on"
6"He shifted his weight, the"
7"she said, voice flat"
8"He tilted his head, the"
9"She flicked a hand toward"
10"He entered with the same"
11"His shirtsleeves were rolled once"
12"She crossed her arms."
13"He gestured at the cord"
14"She’d unplugged a kettle then"
15"He moved to the window,"
16"He turned from the window,"
17"She hadn’t meant to ask"
18"He glanced down at the"
19"he said quietly"
ratio0.507
32.46% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences69
matches
0"The knock came at half"
1"Aurora set her paperback on"
2"Eva always texted first, Silas"
3"Another three beats, harder this"
4"She crossed the narrow living"
5"The peephole showed a distorted"
6"Her stomach dropped."
7"She undid the chain with"
8"Lucien Moreau stood under the"
9"Rain had darkened the shoulders"
10"His mismatched eyes, one amber"
11"The single syllable carried the"
12"He gave no smile, no"
13"She tightened her grip on"
14"He shifted his weight, the"
15"Aurora let the silence stretch"
16"The monster didn’t sneak up"
17"she said, voice flat"
18"He tilted his head, the"
19"Aurora stepped back, not because"
ratio0.855
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The knock came at half past ten, three sharp raps that cut through the low hum of the bar downstairs."
69.44% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, voice flat"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.073
leniency0.146
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.1353%