| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 41 | | tagDensity | 0.39 | | leniency | 0.78 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 92.63% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1356 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 44.69% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1356 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "resonance" | | 1 | "vibrated" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "scanning" | | 4 | "cascading" | | 5 | "intensity" | | 6 | "shimmered" | | 7 | "silk" | | 8 | "perfect" | | 9 | "unravel" | | 10 | "whisper" | | 11 | "implication" | | 12 | "familiar" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 48.87% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "appeared to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "tried to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 100 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 14 | | totalWords | 1344 | | ratio | 0.01 | | matches | | 0 | "was" | | 1 | "informing" | | 2 | "Keep it safe. Keep it close. You'll know when to use it." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 44 | | wordCount | 941 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.91 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 1 | | English | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Nyx | 7 | | Stonehenge | 1 | | Rory | 18 | | Isolde | 11 | | Dymas | 1 | | Veil | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Dymas" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Veil" |
| | globalScore | 0.544 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 32.81% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like walking across a mattress" | | 1 | "quite a smile" | | 2 | "tasted like copper" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 2.976 | | wordCount | 1344 | | matches | | 0 | "neither cold nor" | | 1 | "not painful, but *informing*" | | 2 | "not tools to be used, but agreements to be honoured" | | 3 | "Not to offer you riddles, but to offer you answers" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 45 | | mean | 29.87 | | std | 20.15 | | cv | 0.675 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 66 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 62 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 63 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 59 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 42 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 35 | | 14 | 32 | | 15 | 35 | | 16 | 71 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 45 | | 20 | 28 | | 21 | 40 | | 22 | 54 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 43 | | 26 | 58 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 48 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 42 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 34 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 57 | | 36 | 29 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 63 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 26 | | 41 | 39 | | 42 | 27 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 20 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 173 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 100 | | ratio | 0.07 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora felt the shift before she saw it—a prickling along her arms, the fine hairs standing on end as though she'd walked through a cobweb." | | 1 | "The air hummed—a low, thrumming resonance that vibrated in her chest." | | 2 | "The woman—if that was the right word—stood taller than any human she'd ever met, her silver hair cascading past her waist like a waterfall frozen mid-plunge." | | 3 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in patches—bluebells, foxgloves, something that glowed with its own inner light like captured stars." | | 4 | "The moment she touched it, a jolt ran through her arm—not painful, but *informing*." | | 5 | "The branches spread in a perfect canopy, and from them hung fruits that glowed like miniature moons—pale, luminous orbs that cast their own light across the clearing." | | 6 | "Because somewhere, in the back of her mind, there was a memory—a woman's voice, soft and familiar, pressing the chain into her palm." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 956 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 31 | | adverbRatio | 0.032426778242677826 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006276150627615063 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 100 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 100 | | mean | 13.44 | | std | 7.17 | | cv | 0.533 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 27 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 26 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 24 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 22 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 19 | | 45 | 26 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 28 |
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| 74.33% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.47 | | totalSentences | 100 | | uniqueOpeners | 47 | |
| 46.30% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, she stepped onto moss" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 12 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "Her sneakers no longer squelched" | | 1 | "They rose in graceful arcs," | | 2 | "It pulsed warmly against her" | | 3 | "she said, noticing how the" | | 4 | "They weren't grey and weathered" | | 5 | "Her robes were the colour" | | 6 | "She left no footprints in" | | 7 | "It simply *was*, sliding over" | | 8 | "She gasped and pulled away." | | 9 | "Its trunk was wider than" | | 10 | "You'll know when to use" | | 11 | "She turned and gestured toward" |
| | ratio | 0.167 | |
| 50.28% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 59 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain-slicked pavement of Richmond" | | 1 | "Aurora felt the shift before" | | 2 | "The air thickened, grew heavy" | | 3 | "Her sneakers no longer squelched" | | 4 | "Nyx whispered from beside her," | | 5 | "The trees around them had" | | 6 | "They rose in graceful arcs," | | 7 | "The air hummed—a low, thrumming" | | 8 | "Rory touched the Heartstone pendant" | | 9 | "It pulsed warmly against her" | | 10 | "she said, noticing how the" | | 11 | "Nyx solidified beside her, their" | | 12 | "They weren't grey and weathered" | | 13 | "These were living oak, their" | | 14 | "The runes glowed faintly, pulsing" | | 15 | "A figure stepped forward, and" | | 16 | "The woman—if that was the" | | 17 | "Her robes were the colour" | | 18 | "She left no footprints in" | | 19 | "The voice came from everywhere" |
| | ratio | 0.819 | |
| 69.44% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "Because somewhere, in the back" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora felt the shift before she saw it—a prickling along her arms, the fine hairs standing on end as though she'd walked through a cobweb." | | 1 | "What had been London plane trees and English oaks were now silver-barked things with leaves that caught the light like scattered mirrors." | | 2 | "They rose in graceful arcs, their branches interweaving above to form a canopy that filtered the grey afternoon into something golden and dappled." | | 3 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in patches—bluebells, foxgloves, something that glowed with its own inner light like captured stars." | | 4 | "Images flashed behind her eyes: a sky of burning amethyst, mountains that walked on legs of stone, voices that spoke in colours and tasted like copper." | | 5 | "The branches spread in a perfect canopy, and from them hung fruits that glowed like miniature moons—pale, luminous orbs that cast their own light across the cle…" | | 6 | "The standing stones hummed, their runes flaring bright before dimming." | | 7 | "And somewhere beyond the veil of leaves and shimmering air, something answered with a sound that was almost a laugh." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx whispered, their shadow-form rippling at the edges" | | 1 | "Isolde moved, her robes whispering against the moss" | | 2 | "Isolde reached, though the branch hung twenty feet above her head" | | 3 | "Rory said, her voice steadier than she felt" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 41 | | tagDensity | 0.195 | | leniency | 0.39 | | rawRatio | 0.125 | | effectiveRatio | 0.049 | |