Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2FZ2F039003M5T3ATSDMM7

Run Details

Duration:
29.8s
Cost:
$0.000629
Provider:
DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came at half past eleven, three sharp raps against the deadbolted wood. Rory looked up from the stack of delivery receipts spread across Eva’s coffee table, Ptolemy stirring in her lap with an irritated flick of his tail. She wasn’t expecting anyone. Eva was in Edinburgh for the weekend, hunting down a rare grimoire in some university library’s restricted section. The flat above the curry house was supposed to be quiet. Safe. The knock came again, harder this time. A rhythm she recognised. Rory’s blood went cold, then hot, then settled into something tight and wary in her chest. She set Ptolemy aside and crossed the cluttered living room, stepping over a collapsed tower of anthropology textbooks. The three deadbolts slid back one by one with metallic clicks that seemed too loud in the narrow hallway. She opened the door a crack, kept the chain on. Lucien Moreau stood under the flickering bulb of the landing, both hands resting on the ivory head of his cane. His charcoal suit was immaculate despite the late hour, not a hair out of place in that slicked-back platinum blond. The amber eye caught the light, warm and searching. The black one swallowed it. “Aurora.” His voice was low, smooth as polished marble. Rory didn’t unhook the chain. “You’re a long way from Soho, Frenchman.” “I came to speak with you.” He shifted his weight, and the cane tapped once against the floorboards. “I’ve been looking for three days.” “Three days,” she repeated, and the disbelief in her own voice sounded like an accusation. “You couldn’t have called? Sent a text? Hired a pigeon?” “Would you have answered?” She held his gaze. The answer sat between them, heavy and unspoken. She wouldn’t have. She’d blocked his number after the last time, after the warehouse in Bermondsey and the silver-tipped bullets and the way he’d walked out of the smoke without looking back. “What do you want, Lucien?” “To talk. Inside, if you’ll allow it.” He gestured with his free hand toward the deadbolts she’d already undone. “I didn’t come here to make a scene in a stairwell at midnight.” Rory pressed her forehead against the cool wood of the doorframe. The smell of curry and traffic floated up from the street below, mixing with the faint cologne he wore—bergamot and something darker, like smoked leather. She unhooked the chain. He stepped past her into the narrow hallway, and the flat suddenly felt smaller. Taller. He had that effect—filling space without trying, his presence a gravitational pull she’d spent the last four months learning to resist. Ptolemy appeared in the living room doorway, blinked once at Lucien, and retreated under the sofa. “The cat remembers me,” Lucien said, a ghost of a smile touching his mouth. “The cat has good instincts.” She closed the door, redid all three deadbolts. The clicks echoed in the silence. When she turned, he was studying the room—the stacks of books on the floor, the corkboard covered in string and photographs, the half-empty mug of tea growing cold beside her notes. “You’re still working for the Chinese restaurant,” he observed. “Part-time. Pays the bills.” “And the other part?” “None of your business.” He turned to face her fully, and the heterochromatic gaze pinned her in place. She’d forgotten how intense it was, the way he looked at a person like he was reading the fine print of their soul. One amber, one black. One warm, one depthless. “I wouldn’t have come if it weren’t important,” he said. “You said that already.” “Because it bears repeating.” He set the cane against the edge of the sofa and removed his suit jacket, folding it over his arm with practiced care. The gesture was almost domestic, and it threw her off balance. “There’s a woman dead in Camden. A demon-keeper. Someone carved her ribs open and left her heart on the kitchen counter.” Rory’s stomach turned. “Why are you telling me this?” “Because the only witness is a girl she was keeping in a basement. Seven years old. Speaks only Welsh.” The word hung in the air between them. Welsh. Her mother’s language, the one she’d grown up hearing in the kitchen of their Cardiff home, the lilt of it wrapped around Sunday dinners and bedtime stories. Lucien watched her face and saw the recognition flicker. “I need a translator,” he said. “Someone who can talk to her without a room full of badges and clipboards frightening her more than she already is.” Rory crossed her arms, but it was a shield she didn’t quite believe in anymore. “You have contacts. You know people who speak a dozen languages.” “I know people who speak French, Spanish, Arabic, Mandarin. I don’t know anyone who grew up in Cardiff with a Welsh teacher for a mother.” The silence stretched. Ptolemy crept out from under the sofa and wound between Lucien’s ankles. He didn’t look down. “Why should I trust you?” Rory asked. “You shouldn’t.” His voice dropped, and something raw surfaced beneath the polish. “I haven’t given you a reason to. I know that. But I’m not asking you to trust me, Aurora. I’m asking you to help a child.” She pressed the heels of her hands against her eyes until colours bloomed behind the lids. When she lowered them, he was still standing there, waiting, patient as stone. “One condition,” she said. “Name it.” “After this, you tell me exactly what happened in Bermondsey. Why you left. Why you didn’t come back.” His jaw tightened. The amber eye flickered, the black one remained still as a pool of oil. “That’s a high price.” “So is asking me to walk into a crime scene with a half-demon fixer I haven’t spoken to in four months.” He held her gaze for a long moment. Then he picked up his cane, slid his jacket back on, and straightened the lapels. “Deal.” Rory grabbed her coat from the hook by the door—a worn leather jacket she’d bought secondhand in Camden Market three years ago. She shoved her keys into the pocket and looked back at the flat, at the scattered papers and the cold tea and the life she’d been carefully rebuilding in the space he’d left empty. “The girl,” she said, pulling the door open. “Where is she?” “Safe house in Hackney. I’ll explain on the way.” She stepped onto the landing, and he followed. The stairwell light flickered again, casting his shadow long and strange against the wall—two shapes that didn’t quite align, the demon and the man wrestling for dominance in the slant of the bulb. Rory locked the door behind her. The deadbolts slid home with three metallic thuds, sealing away the quiet she’d been hoarding. They walked down the stairs side by side, close enough that she caught the smell of bergamot again. Neither of them spoke. The air between them was charged with all the things they hadn’t said in four months, and all the things they’d promised to say after tonight.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.316
leniency0.632
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.50% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1177
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
49.02% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1177
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"marble"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"unspoken"
count1
3
word"echoed"
count1
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"stomach"
count1
6
word"lilt"
count1
7
word"flicker"
count1
8
word"flickered"
count2
9
word"charged"
count1
highlights
0"marble"
1"weight"
2"unspoken"
3"echoed"
4"silence"
5"stomach"
6"lilt"
7"flicker"
8"flickered"
9"charged"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"blood went cold"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences73
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences73
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences99
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1172
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
97.98% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount865
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.04
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva2
Ptolemy4
Edinburgh1
Moreau1
Bermondsey1
Rory9
Lucien5
Cardiff1
Sunday1
Camden1
Market1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Moreau"
3"Rory"
4"Lucien"
places
0"Edinburgh"
1"Bermondsey"
2"Cardiff"
3"Camden"
globalScore0.98
windowScore1
2.94% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences51
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"sounded like an accusation"
1"quite believe in anymore"
2"quite align, the demon and the man wrestling for dominance in the slant of the bulb"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1172
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences99
matches
0"had that effect"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs55
mean21.31
std16.47
cv0.773
sampleLengths
040
134
211
353
410
554
61
78
812
924
1025
114
1244
135
1432
1536
164
1736
1816
1914
205
2145
229
234
244
254
2645
2710
284
2959
309
3119
3236
339
3427
3526
3625
3719
387
3938
4029
414
422
4318
4417
454
4621
4723
481
4956
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences73
matches
0"was supposed"
13.52% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs143
matches
0"wasn’t expecting"
1"was studying"
2"was reading"
3"was still standing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences99
ratio0.051
matches
0"The smell of curry and traffic floated up from the street below, mixing with the faint cologne he wore—bergamot and something darker, like smoked leather."
1"He had that effect—filling space without trying, his presence a gravitational pull she’d spent the last four months learning to resist."
2"When she turned, he was studying the room—the stacks of books on the floor, the corkboard covered in string and photographs, the half-empty mug of tea growing cold beside her notes."
3"Rory grabbed her coat from the hook by the door—a worn leather jacket she’d bought secondhand in Camden Market three years ago."
4"The stairwell light flickered again, casting his shadow long and strange against the wall—two shapes that didn’t quite align, the demon and the man wrestling for dominance in the slant of the bulb."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount873
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"growing cold beside her"
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.030927835051546393
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.003436426116838488
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences99
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences99
mean11.84
std8.25
cv0.697
sampleLengths
014
126
24
318
411
51
67
74
816
918
1019
1110
1220
1320
149
155
161
178
185
197
2018
216
2215
2310
244
254
268
273
2829
295
3019
3113
3211
3325
344
3514
361
3721
3816
3914
405
418
426
4331
449
454
464
474
4814
4923
58.92% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.3838383838383838
totalSentences99
uniqueOpeners38
51.28% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences65
matches
0"Then he picked up his"
ratio0.015
47.69% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences65
matches
0"She wasn’t expecting anyone."
1"She set Ptolemy aside and"
2"She opened the door a"
3"His charcoal suit was immaculate"
4"His voice was low, smooth"
5"He shifted his weight, and"
6"she repeated, and the disbelief"
7"She held his gaze."
8"She wouldn’t have."
9"She’d blocked his number after"
10"He gestured with his free"
11"She unhooked the chain."
12"He stepped past her into"
13"He had that effect—filling space"
14"She closed the door, redid"
15"He turned to face her"
16"She’d forgotten how intense it"
17"He set the cane against"
18"Her mother’s language, the one"
19"He didn’t look down."
ratio0.431
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences65
matches
0"The knock came at half"
1"Rory looked up from the"
2"She wasn’t expecting anyone."
3"Eva was in Edinburgh for"
4"The flat above the curry"
5"The knock came again, harder"
6"A rhythm she recognised."
7"Rory’s blood went cold, then"
8"She set Ptolemy aside and"
9"The three deadbolts slid back"
10"She opened the door a"
11"Lucien Moreau stood under the"
12"His charcoal suit was immaculate"
13"The amber eye caught the"
14"The black one swallowed it."
15"His voice was low, smooth"
16"Rory didn’t unhook the chain."
17"He shifted his weight, and"
18"she repeated, and the disbelief"
19"She held his gaze."
ratio0.923
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
ratio0
99.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The three deadbolts slid back one by one with metallic clicks that seemed too loud in the narrow hallway."
1"The stairwell light flickered again, casting his shadow long and strange against the wall—two shapes that didn’t quite align, the demon and the man wrestling fo…"
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"He shifted, and the cane tapped once against the floorboards"
1"Lucien said, a ghost of a smile touching his mouth"
97.37% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she repeated (repeat)"
1"he observed (observe)"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.211
leniency0.421
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.105
73.7377%