Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2G17S3S4WBCX0BFBFRN2M8

Run Details

Duration:
31.0s
Cost:
$0.000629
Provider:
DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory had just settled onto Eva's threadbare sofa with a cup of tea and Ptolemy purring in her lap when three sharp knocks rattled the door. She checked her phone. Nearly eleven. Eva wasn't due back until tomorrow. Ptolemy's ears swiveled. He glared at the door with the particular disdain cats reserved for interruptions. Another knock. Harder this time. Whoever it was knew the wood would splinter if they kept at it. Rory set her mug down, crossed the crammed living room in four strides, and slid the chain into place before cracking the door open. Lucien Moreau stood in the dim hallway light, rain glistening on the shoulders of his charcoal suit. His platinum hair had lost its architectural slickness, a few strands clinging to his forehead. The ivory handle of his cane caught the yellow glow from the naked bulb above. "Laila." The name hit her like a stone to the chest. No one called her that. Not anymore. Not since she'd left Cardiff. "What are you doing here?" "Inviting me in would be the civilised option." His mouth curved into something that wasn't quite a smile. "Though I suspect civility ranks low on your list of priorities regarding me." She held the door where it was. "Eva's not home." "I'm not here for Eva." The rain had plastered his shirt collar dark against his throat. Rain never suited him. He was the sort of man who belonged in candlelit rooms and underground clubs where the air smelled of expensive cologne and old secrets. Standing in a cheap hallway above Brick Lane, dripping onto Eva's welcome mat, he looked like a photograph from the wrong album. "How did you find this place?" "Please." He leaned on his cane, weight shifting. "You know what I do. Finding people is the simplest part of my work." "You could have called." "Would you have answered?" Rory held his gaze. Three years since she'd walked out of his flat in Soho. Three years since she'd told him she couldn't do it anymore — the half-truths, the midnight phone calls that sent him running into alleys, the blood he'd wipe from his knuckles before kissing her forehead goodnight. She'd told herself it was for the best. She'd told herself she wasn't running. She'd lied. "I'm not Laila anymore," she said. "You are to me." The softness in his voice was worse than anger would have been. She could have slammed the door in the face of fury. Tenderness required a different response, and she'd never learned to armour herself against it. Ptolemy wound between her ankles and meowed at Lucien with unexpected familiarity. "You have a cat now." He said it like she'd announced she'd taken up skydiving. "Eva's cat." "Eva hates cats." Rory sighed and unlatched the chain. "Five minutes. Then you leave." She stepped back, and he crossed the threshold with the careful grace of a man who'd learned to read every room for exits and weapons. His gaze swept the flat — the towers of stacked books, the corkboard covered in pinned photographs and handwritten notes, the half-eaten bowl of noodles on the coffee table. "Yu-Fei's," he said. "You still work for him." "Part-time. Delivery." "Delivery." He turned to face her, and in the flat's full light she saw the dark circles beneath his mismatched eyes, the tension in his jaw that hadn't been there before. "You deliver Chinese food across London while a demon-hunting cult puts bounties on every half-breed in the city." The water she'd been about to sip caught in her throat. "What?" "Three dead this week. Two in Whitechapel, one in Camden." He set his cane against the wall and shrugged off his jacket, revealing a shoulder holster beneath his suit. The leather creaked as he moved. "You left London, Laila. You changed your name, your number, your entire existence. I respected that. I stayed away." "Then why are you here?" "Because whoever is doing this is working through a list. Names. Addresses. Everything." He reached into his inner pocket and pulled out a folded piece of paper, creased and damp. "Your name is on it." Rory took the paper. Her fingers brushed his, and the contact sent a jolt through her — the same electricity she'd felt the first night at Silas's bar when he'd bought her a drink and she'd noticed his eyes didn't match and decided she didn't care. The paper was typed, clinical. Names and locations. Hers sat between a clairvoyant in Hackney and a hedge-witch in Kensal Green. *Aurora Carter. Flat 3B, 14 Brick Lane.* "This is a hit list." "They're not hits. They're acquisitions." He stepped closer. The space between them shrank to the width of his breath. "Someone's collecting us, Laila. Taking us alive. And the pattern suggests they're going in order." "Why would anyone want me? I'm not — I don't have powers. I'm not like you." "You see auras. You can read a person's true nature just by looking at them." His voice dropped. "You saw what I was the night we met, before I said a word. That's not nothing." She'd seen the demon in him, coiled beneath his skin like smoke under ice. She'd seen it and she'd stayed anyway. That was what had terrified her most. "I can protect myself." "With what? A bicycle and a delivery bag?" He caught her wrist — the left one, thumb pressing against the crescent-shaped scar. His touch was warm despite the rain. "I came here because I couldn't live with myself if something happened to you. Not again." "Again." The word came out sharp. "You mean you couldn't live with yourself if you lost your backup plan. If your safe option disappeared." "Is that what you think you were?" "You told me you loved me three weeks before I found the blood under your floorboards, Lucien. Three weeks of pretending you were just an information broker. Just a fixer. Just someone who made phone calls and collected favours." "I was protecting you." "You were lying." She pulled her wrist free. "And I can't — I can't do that again. I can't sit in a flat and wait for you to come home not knowing if you're bleeding out in some warehouse or if the person you killed was actually trying to kill you or if you just got paid enough to make them disappear." Ptolemy jumped onto the armchair and watched them both with unblinking feline judgment. "Three years," Lucien said quietly. "I've spent three years trying to convince myself I did the right thing letting you go. That you were safer without me. That whatever I felt for you was something I could bury." He lifted his hand, hesitated, then touched her chin with rain-cold fingers, tilting her face toward his. "I buried it badly." "Don't." "I never stopped loving you, Laila. I loved you when I should have let you hate me. I loved you when you changed your name and disappeared into a flat above a curry house. I loved you every time I didn't look you up, every time I told myself you were happy." "You have a strange way of showing it." "I'm showing it now. I'm standing in your doorway, soaked through, telling you that someone wants to take you apart piece by piece, and I will tear this city down before I let that happen." His hand dropped. "Stay or leave. Hate me or forgive me. I'll keep you alive regardless. That's the only promise I ever kept well." The rain hammered against the window. Somewhere below, a car splashed through a puddle. Rory looked at the paper in her hand, then at the man who'd broken her heart so thoroughly she'd rebuilt herself from the pieces. "What else aren't you telling me?" He held her gaze. "The three they took. They knew their names. Their addresses. Their childhood pets. Their ex-lovers. Every detail that could be used to find them." "And me?" "They know about Evan." The name hit her like a physical blow. She'd never told Lucien about Evan. Never told anyone except Eva. The black eye she'd explained as a fall. The fractured rib as a cycling accident. The way she'd flinch at loud voices as nothing at all. "How." "If they have your name, they have your history." He retrieved his jacket from the hook and shrugged it back on, wincing slightly as the damp fabric settled against his shoulders. "Evan moved to London six months ago. He doesn't know you're here yet, but whoever compiled this list does. They'll sell that information to anyone who pays." "So I'm trapped." "You're not trapped." He picked up his cane. "You're under my protection. Whether you want it or not." "And if I don't?" "Then I'll stand outside this door until they come through it, and I'll make sure they don't touch you." The flat felt smaller now, the walls pressing in. Ptolemy yawned and curled into a ball, unconcerned by the weight of the world pressing against the windows. Rory held her ground. "If I let you stay tonight — just tonight — you sleep on the floor. You don't touch me. And tomorrow we figure out what this list means." "Agreed." "One more thing." He raised an eyebrow. She stepped forward until she could smell the rain on his skin, feel the heat radiating off his body despite the cold. She looked up into those mismatched eyes — one amber, one black — and saw the same haunted want she'd been burying for three years. "I'm not Laila anymore," she said. "But I might be willing to show you who Rory is. If you prove you can be trusted." Something shifted in his expression. Not hope exactly. Something rawer. "I have nothing but time," he said.
created_at"2026-04-25T14:17:25.543Z" 4/25/2026, 2:17:25 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Lucien said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences70
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio0.05
effectiveRatio0.029
96.93% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1630
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
78.53% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1630
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"glistening"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"tenderness"
count1
3
word"tension"
count1
4
word"fractured"
count1
5
word"eyebrow"
count1
highlights
0"glistening"
1"weight"
2"tenderness"
3"tension"
4"fractured"
5"eyebrow"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"sent a jolt through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences89
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences139
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen54
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords7
totalWords1640
ratio0.004
matches
0"Aurora Carter. Flat 3B, 14 Brick Lane."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount919
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.76
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Eva4
Ptolemy5
Moreau1
Cardiff1
Brick2
Lane2
Rory7
Soho1
Lucien4
Silas1
Hackney1
Kensal1
Green1
Carter1
Evan1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Moreau"
3"Rory"
4"Lucien"
5"Silas"
6"Carter"
7"Evan"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
3"Soho"
4"Hackney"
5"Kensal"
globalScore1
windowScore1
59.09% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite a smile"
1"looked like a photograph from the wrong a"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1640
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences139
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs77
mean21.3
std18.96
cv0.89
sampleLengths
026
112
216
318
424
547
61
722
85
931
1010
115
1261
136
1422
154
164
1765
182
196
204
2137
2212
2315
242
253
2611
2754
288
292
3049
3112
3254
335
3435
3546
3628
375
3834
3916
4035
4128
424
4345
4424
457
4639
474
4862
4913
97.38% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences89
matches
0"was knew"
1"was typed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs161
matches
0"wasn't running"
40.08% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences139
ratio0.036
matches
0"Three years since she'd told him she couldn't do it anymore — the half-truths, the midnight phone calls that sent him running into alleys, the blood he'd wipe from his knuckles before kissing her forehead goodnight."
1"His gaze swept the flat — the towers of stacked books, the corkboard covered in pinned photographs and handwritten notes, the half-eaten bowl of noodles on the coffee table."
2"Her fingers brushed his, and the contact sent a jolt through her — the same electricity she'd felt the first night at Silas's bar when he'd bought her a drink and she'd noticed his eyes didn't match and decided she didn't care."
3"\"With what? A bicycle and a delivery bag?\" He caught her wrist — the left one, thumb pressing against the crescent-shaped scar."
4"She looked up into those mismatched eyes — one amber, one black — and saw the same haunted want she'd been burying for three years."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount918
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.02178649237472767
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.0054466230936819175
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences139
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences139
mean11.8
std10.84
cv0.919
sampleLengths
026
14
22
36
43
513
62
73
813
924
1017
1115
1215
131
1410
155
162
175
185
1918
2013
217
223
235
2411
254
2624
2722
286
298
3014
314
324
334
3411
3536
368
376
382
396
404
4112
4211
4314
4412
4515
462
473
486
495
61.39% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.4244604316546763
totalSentences139
uniqueOpeners59
42.19% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences79
matches
0"Somewhere below, a car splashed"
ratio0.013
47.85% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences79
matches
0"She checked her phone."
1"He glared at the door"
2"His platinum hair had lost"
3"His mouth curved into something"
4"She held the door where"
5"He was the sort of"
6"He leaned on his cane,"
7"She'd told herself it was"
8"She'd told herself she wasn't"
9"She could have slammed the"
10"He said it like she'd"
11"She stepped back, and he"
12"His gaze swept the flat"
13"He turned to face her,"
14"He set his cane against"
15"He reached into his inner"
16"Her fingers brushed his, and"
17"Hers sat between a clairvoyant"
18"He stepped closer"
19"His voice dropped"
ratio0.43
35.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences79
matches
0"Rory had just settled onto"
1"She checked her phone."
2"Eva wasn't due back until"
3"Ptolemy's ears swiveled."
4"He glared at the door"
5"Rory set her mug down,"
6"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
7"His platinum hair had lost"
8"The ivory handle of his"
9"The name hit her like"
10"His mouth curved into something"
11"She held the door where"
12"The rain had plastered his"
13"He was the sort of"
14"He leaned on his cane,"
15"Rory held his gaze."
16"She'd told herself it was"
17"She'd told herself she wasn't"
18"The softness in his voice"
19"She could have slammed the"
ratio0.848
63.29% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences79
matches
0"Whoever it was knew the"
ratio0.013
95.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He was the sort of man who belonged in candlelit rooms and underground clubs where the air smelled of expensive cologne and old secrets."
1"Three years since she'd told him she couldn't do it anymore — the half-truths, the midnight phone calls that sent him running into alleys, the blood he'd wipe f…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He leaned, weight shifting"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences70
tagDensity0.086
leniency0.171
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.2641%