| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.429 | | leniency | 0.857 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 95.07% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1014 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 55.62% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1014 | | totalAiIsms | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "symphony" | | 2 | "throbbed" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "shattered" | | 6 | "mosaic" | | 7 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 112 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 91.84% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 112 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 116 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 10 | | markdownWords | 51 | | totalWords | 1031 | | ratio | 0.049 | | matches | | 0 | "you come at dawn, you leave by noon, you never speak of what passes between the stones after sunset" | | 1 | "Leave" | | 2 | "Now." | | 3 | "You know what's buried in the grove. Come alone. Midnight." | | 4 | "alive" | | 5 | "Count them" | | 6 | "Count them again." | | 7 | "Leave. Leave now." | | 8 | "pushed" | | 9 | "never use it unless death is breathing down your neck" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 32 | | wordCount | 1001 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 0.7 | | worstName | "Heartstone" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Heartstone" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 7 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Richmond | 3 | | Isolde | 3 | | Eva | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Park | 2 | | Hollow | 1 | | Eight | 1 | | Rory | 7 | | Carter | 1 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Silas" | | 5 | "Rory" | | 6 | "Carter" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Golden" | | 3 | "Park" | | 4 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1031 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 47 | | mean | 21.94 | | std | 19.66 | | cv | 0.896 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 51 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 69 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 33 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 57 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 50 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 53 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 49 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 61 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 37 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 37 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 41 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 43 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 31 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 37 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 57 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 46 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 21 | | 46 | 18 |
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| 92.73% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "buried" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "were gone" | | 3 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 181 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 17 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 116 | | ratio | 0.095 | | matches | | 0 | "The Fae Grove hummed with its usual nocturnal symphony — crickets sawing away, wind threading through ancient oaks, the distant yap of a fox somewhere in Richmond's deeper woods." | | 1 | "The fae's rules were clear — *you come at dawn, you leave by noon, you never speak of what passes between the stones after sunset*." | | 2 | "Moonlight painted the grass an impossible silver-white, and the standing stones — those moss-crusted oaks that marked the boundary — seemed to lean inward, conspiring." | | 3 | "Not dramatically — no sudden shift in temperature, no screaming winds or flashing lights." | | 4 | "And the smell — copper and something sweet, like rotting fruit left in the sun too long." | | 5 | "The standing stones at its heart — normally arranged in a neat circle of seven — stood at odd angles now, as if they'd shifted positions while she wasn't looking." | | 6 | "Something held her rooted to the spot, not physically — nothing grabbed her — but deeper, like the grove had hooked its fingers into her spine and waited for permission to pull." | | 7 | "Rory gasped and stumbled back, and that stumble — that single break in her stillness — broke whatever held her." | | 8 | "Isolde had warned her — *never use it unless death is breathing down your neck* — but death felt close tonight." | | 9 | "The grove screamed — an actual sound, a harmonic shriek that shook the ground beneath her feet." | | 10 | "But the handprint burned into her chest — five fingers, too long, too thin — glowed faintly through her ruined shirt." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 990 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 34 | | adverbRatio | 0.03434343434343434 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00808080808080808 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 116 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 116 | | mean | 8.89 | | std | 7.75 | | cv | 0.872 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 7 | | 1 | 3 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 29 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 25 | | 11 | 26 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 24 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 34 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 25 | | 39 | 24 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 51.15% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 19 | | diversityRatio | 0.4051724137931034 | | totalSentences | 116 | | uniqueOpeners | 47 | |
| 73.26% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "Too large to be human," | | 1 | "Just trees and grass and" |
| | ratio | 0.022 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 12 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "It should have been warm" | | 1 | "She'd been here a dozen" | | 2 | "Her voice didn't carry." | | 3 | "It died in the air" | | 4 | "She'd found it tucked under" | | 5 | "*You know what's buried in" | | 6 | "Her voice came out wrong" | | 7 | "She forced herself to breathe," | | 8 | "She meant it to sound" | | 9 | "It came out thin." | | 10 | "She could move again." | | 11 | "She threw the Heartstone as" |
| | ratio | 0.132 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 63 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant went cold against" | | 1 | "That was wrong." | | 2 | "It should have been warm" | | 3 | "Rory pressed her palm flat" | | 4 | "The Fae Grove hummed with" | | 5 | "She'd been here a dozen" | | 6 | "The fae's rules were clear" | | 7 | "Today's delivery run had run" | | 8 | "Time had slipped." | | 9 | "The sun had set." | | 10 | "Rory whispered, more to steady" | | 11 | "Her voice didn't carry." | | 12 | "It died in the air" | | 13 | "The Heartstone throbbed." | | 14 | "Cream-coloured, expensive stock, sealed with" | | 15 | "She'd found it tucked under" | | 16 | "*You know what's buried in" | | 17 | "Someone had seen her that" | | 18 | "Someone had watched her touch" | | 19 | "Someone wanted her here." |
| | ratio | 0.692 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 55.75% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Cream-coloured, expensive stock, sealed with black wax that bore no emblem." | | 1 | "Moonlight painted the grass an impossible silver-white, and the standing stones — those moss-crusted oaks that marked the boundary — seemed to lean inward, cons…" | | 2 | "The fox's yapping ceased mid-bark, as though someone had pressed mute on reality." | | 3 | "Like speaking into an empty room that shouldn't have been empty." | | 4 | "The standing stones at its heart — normally arranged in a neat circle of seven — stood at odd angles now, as if they'd shifted positions while she wasn't lookin…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 7.14% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.143 | | leniency | 0.286 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.286 | |