| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 23 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 66 | | tagDensity | 0.348 | | leniency | 0.697 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 85.91% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2129 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "lightly" | | 2 | "perfectly" | | 3 | "really" | | 4 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 38.94% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2129 | | totalAiIsms | 26 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "shimmered" | | 2 | "crystalline" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "could feel" | | 6 | "familiar" | | 7 | "crystal" | | 8 | "marble" | | 9 | "vibrated" | | 10 | "silk" | | 11 | "velvet" | | 12 | "stomach" | | 13 | "lurch" | | 14 | "whisper" | | 15 | "weight" | | 16 | "flickered" | | 17 | "absolutely" | | 18 | "warmth" | | 19 | "depths" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 218 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 218 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "started to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 258 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 50 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 2109 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 74 | | wordCount | 1465 | | uniqueNames | 21 | | maxNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | December | 1 | | Isolde | 12 | | Nyx | 8 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Fae-touched | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Eva | 7 | | Gold | 1 | | Watch-foot | 1 | | Ferns | 1 | | Rory | 22 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Sight | 1 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Silence | 1 | | Fae | 4 | | Ripples | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Sunday | 2 | | Living | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "December" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Gold" | | 5 | "Ferns" | | 6 | "Rory" | | 7 | "Sight" | | 8 | "Carter" | | 9 | "Living" |
| | places | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 0.749 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 50.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 100 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like they belonged" | | 1 | "luminescence that seemed to emanate from the flora itself, from the moss crusting the ancient oaks that ringed the clearing, from the very air" | | 2 | "looked like bluebells" | | 3 | "looked like a clearing was actually somet" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.474 | | wordCount | 2109 | | matches | | 0 | "not worn on the head, but fused to the skull, a circlet of bone" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 258 | | matches | | 0 | "told that these" | | 1 | "saw that the" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 96 | | mean | 21.97 | | std | 20.45 | | cv | 0.931 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 4 | | 1 | 47 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 50 | | 4 | 41 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 41 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 34 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 70 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 71 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 48 | | 19 | 34 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 56 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 28 | | 26 | 52 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 50 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 61 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 57 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 52 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 49 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 52 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 30 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 1 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 55 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 218 | | matches | | 0 | "being told" | | 1 | "was folded" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 268 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 19 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 16 | | totalSentences | 258 | | ratio | 0.062 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory felt it on her skin—a pressure drop, the way electricity gathers before a thunderstorm." | | 1 | "They shimmered beside her—a tall distortion in the air, a humanoid absence of light that the eye wanted to slide off." | | 2 | "Things she didn’t have names for—spiral-petaled and phosphorescent, pulsing with their own dim bioluminescence." | | 3 | "She’d thought it was at first glance—just Isolde’s sanctum, a pocket of Fae-touched wildness hidden in Richmond Park." | | 4 | "They manifested at her side in something approaching their physical shape—the tall silhouette, the faint violet gleam where eyes should be." | | 5 | "Not oak anymore—these were older, broader, their bark silvered and spiraling in patterns that hurt to look at directly." | | 6 | "It was crystal—smooth pillars of rose quartz and amethyst and something obsidian-black that drank the light, arranged in concentric rings around a central dais of white marble veined with gold." | | 7 | "No—not memory." | | 8 | "Her dress wasn’t fabric—it was living moss and spider silk and petals stitched together by design rather than accident." | | 9 | "Not physically—their positions remained fixed—but the spaces between them changed." | | 10 | "Veins of gold—real gold, molten and somehow still flowing—pulsed through it like a circulatory system." | | 11 | "The sleeve of her petal-dress fell away, revealing forearms covered in scars—thin white lines, hundreds of them, crisscrossing from wrist to elbow." | | 12 | "She’d gotten it at eight years old, she’d always believed—a fall from her bicycle, a jagged piece of glass on the pavement." | | 13 | "Not painfully—worse than pain." | | 14 | "It swirled with color—crimson and gold and a deep, bruised purple that made her teeth ache." | | 15 | "And24 a crown—not worn on the head, but fused to the skull, a circlet of bone and thorns that had grown into the flesh." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1284 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "pervasive silver-green luminescence" |
| | adverbCount | 45 | | adverbRatio | 0.035046728971962614 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007009345794392523 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 258 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 258 | | mean | 8.17 | | std | 7.58 | | cv | 0.927 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 4 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 28 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 67.44% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 16 | | diversityRatio | 0.4418604651162791 | | totalSentences | 258 | | uniqueOpeners | 114 | |
| 99.21% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 168 | | matches | | 0 | "Just a pervasive silver-green luminescence" | | 1 | "Then the trees fell away" | | 2 | "Of course she was." | | 3 | "Dimensionally compressed like origami." | | 4 | "Then everything went dark." |
| | ratio | 0.03 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 35 | | totalSentences | 168 | | matches | | 0 | "They shimmered beside her—a tall" | | 1 | "It painted everything in underwater" | | 2 | "Their heads tracked her movement." | | 3 | "She yanked her hand back" | | 4 | "It pulsed against her sternum." | | 5 | "She’d thought it was at" | | 6 | "They grew rather than stood." | | 7 | "They manifested at her side" | | 8 | "They gestured at the stream," | | 9 | "Her dark curls had already" | | 10 | "She could feel it humming" | | 11 | "Her crescent scar itched." | | 12 | "It wasn’t stone." | | 13 | "It was crystal—smooth pillars of" | | 14 | "They hummed at frequencies that" | | 15 | "They played in loops, silent" | | 16 | "She was barefoot." | | 17 | "Her dress wasn’t fabric—it was" | | 18 | "She moved without sound." | | 19 | "It waske a knife wrapped" |
| | ratio | 0.208 | |
| 87.98% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 125 | | totalSentences | 168 | | matches | | 0 | "The air changed first." | | 1 | "Rory felt it on her" | | 2 | "Something that carried the scent" | | 3 | "Nyx’s voice stirred against her" | | 4 | "They shimmered beside her—a tall" | | 5 | "Rory stepped forward." | | 6 | "Wildflowers brushed her ankles." | | 7 | "Year-round blooms, Isolde had said." | | 8 | "Lupines in purples so deep" | | 9 | "Poppies the color of fresh" | | 10 | "Things she didn’t have names" | | 11 | "It painted everything in underwater" | | 12 | "Eva crouched beside a cluster" | | 13 | "Their heads tracked her movement." | | 14 | "She yanked her hand back" | | 15 | "Nyx flowed past." | | 16 | "The flowers trilled disappointment." | | 17 | "A sound like tiny bells," | | 18 | "Rory’s hand drifted to the" | | 19 | "It pulsed against her sternum." |
| | ratio | 0.744 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 168 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 71.43% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Something that carried the scent of wildflowers and wet earth and a sweetness she couldn’t name." | | 1 | "Just a pervasive silver-green luminescence that seemed to emanate from the flora itself, from the moss crusting the ancient oaks that ringed the clearing, from …" | | 2 | "Her dark curls had already started to frizz in the grove’s humidity, and her expression hovered somewhere between awe and the particular wariness of someone who…" | | 3 | "Not oak anymore—these were older, broader, their bark silvered and spiraling in patterns that hurt to look at directly." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 23 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 89.39% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Eva breathed (breathe)" | | 2 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "Isolde whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 66 | | tagDensity | 0.121 | | leniency | 0.242 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.121 | |