Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2GCMN9E4JK2ARGYJMYQG80

Run Details

Duration:
1m 49s
Cost:
$0.003332
Provider:
DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon of The Raven’s Nest buzzed against the wet Soho pavement. Inside, the light bled through the warped glass of the front window, painting the old maps and black-and-white photographs in a jaundiced glow. The air clung thick with the smell of spilled stout and lemon polish. Silas stood behind the bar, a rag moving in slow circles over a whisky tumbler, his bad leg propped on a crate beneath the till. The signet ring on his right hand caught the light with each pass of the cloth. Aurora sat at the end of the bar, a half-empty pint of lager going warm at her elbow. She’d peeled the label off the bottle of HP sauce, the shreds arranged in a neat line. Her delivery jacket hung on the back of the stool, the Golden Empress logo a fading golden dragon across the shoulders. Outside, a black cab sloshed past, and the door to the bar swung open with a jangle of the overhead bell. A man stepped in, shaking rain from the collar of a waxed jacket. He was mid-twenties, with the careful stubble and too-white trainers of someone who’d only recently left the provinces. He scanned the room, eyes skipping over the snug booths, the muted television above the optics, and then he froze on Aurora’s face. “Rory? Christ, is that you?” His voice yanked her from the dregs of her thoughts. She looked up, her bright blue eyes narrowing before recognition widened them. Three years dissolved in a heartbeat. “Liam.” He crossed the room with the jittery energy of a man who’d stumbled on a ghost. He stopped two feet from her stool, as if the distance held an electric fence. “I don’t… I mean, what are the chances? I’m in town for a conference, got a hotel around the corner. Thought I’d pop in for a quick one and—bloody hell, Rory.” She noted the way he said her name, like a question he’d long given up asking. “It’s a small city.” “Not that small.” He gestured at her, at the jacket, the lager, the sauce label confetti. “You look different. The hair. It was down to your waist in uni.” She touched the ends of her straight black hair, now brushing her collarbone. “Easier to manage.” Liam’s gaze flicked to her left wrist, where a small crescent-shaped scar sat pale against her skin. He’d been there the day she’d fallen from the climbing frame in Bute Park, seven years old and bleeding into her father’s handkerchief. The scar hadn’t changed, but the woman wearing it had. She’d shed some softness in Cardiff, left it in a flat with a slammed door and a man whose name she wouldn’t speak. Silas poured a fresh pint of lager without being asked and slid it across the bar. The foam settled in a perfect white cap. “Friend of yours, Rory?” “Was,” she said, then caught herself. “Is. Liam, this is Silas. He owns the place.” Silas extended a hand, the grip brief but appraising. “Any friend of Aurora’s gets the first one on the house.” He limped back to his glassware, but his hazel eyes never quite left the pair. Liam took the stool beside her, shrugging off his jacket. The smell of rain and some generic body spray enveloped him. “Aurora? You go by your full name now?” “When it suits.” “Right.” He took a long pull of the lager, his Adam’s apple bobbing. “I tried looking for you, you know. After you left. Your phone went dead, your flat was empty. Eva wouldn’t say a word.” “I asked her not to.” The words fell flat. He twisted the pint glass on the beer mat, a clockwise rotation that matched the slow churn of old memories. “Evan’s engaged.” She didn’t flinch. The name landed and dissolved, like a paracetamol in a glass of water. “Good for him.” “To a nurse. Met her in A&E after a rugby accident. Dislocated shoulder.” Liam’s tone strained for lightness. “He stopped drinking. Goes to meetings and everything.” “Glad to hear it.” “Are you, though?” He leaned closer, lowering his voice. “You ghosted everyone. Your dad came looking for you at my place. I had to tell Brendan I didn’t know where his daughter was.” For the first time, a crack showed in her composure. Her knuckles whitened around the pint glass. “Brendan and I speak every Sunday.” “Now. But back then?” Frustration edged his words. “You vanished. No note, no goodbye. I thought—we all thought you were dead in a ditch somewhere.” Behind the bar, Silas set down a whisky bottle with a deliberate clink. The sound cut through the tension like a minor chord. Aurora glanced toward him, and something passed between them—a silent transaction of loyalty and debt. “I needed a clean break,” she said. “Evan made that impossible in Cardiff.” Liam’s face softened, the harsh lines around his mouth slackening. “I knew he was rough with you. I should’ve done more. Said more.” “You couldn’t have stopped it.” She turned on her stool, facing him fully for the first time. “You were a good friend. You listened. That was enough.” “Then why cut me out, too?” The question hung between them, raw and unpolished. He wasn’t angry; he was bewildered, a man still standing in the rubble of a friendship he hadn’t seen demolished. She picked up a beer mat and bent it between her fingers, the cardboard creasing into a soft V. “Because every time I looked at you, I saw the girl who stayed. The one who made excuses for him, who laughed off the bruises as ‘clumsy.’ I hated her. And I couldn’t be her anymore.” Liam drained his pint. Silas appeared with another before the glass hit the bar. “On the house as well,” the older man said, his voice carrying the weight of a man who’d heard a thousand confessions between the hours of closing time. “You’ve changed,” Liam said, studying her. “You used to be all plans and checklists. Barrister by thirty, remember? Now you’re…” He nodded at the delivery jacket. “Now I’m what?” “I don’t know. Sharper. Quieter. Like you’re always watching the exits.” A ghost of a smile tugged at her mouth. “Old habit.” The maps on the walls seemed to press closer, the faded cartography of places Silas had once operated in, places where disappearances were a feature, not a bug. The black-and-white photographs stared down with their sepia-toned judgment. A fly buzzed against the neon sign outside, its shadow flickering across the ceiling. Liam set his glass down, the foam clinging to the sides. “I’m not here to drag you back. I just—I needed to see you were okay. That you’d landed somewhere safe.” “I’m safe.” She said it like a fact, not a reassurance. “Silas makes sure of that.” At the mention of his name, the bar owner turned, a flicker of amusement in his eyes. “She doesn’t need me. She’s a quick study.” Liam looked between them, the unspoken history a third presence at the bar. He’d never pictured Rory in a place like this, with a man like Silas—a grey-streaked relic of a world he couldn’t fathom. She’d belonged to lecture halls and debating chambers, to pints in the student union and Sunday roasts at her parents’ house in Pontcanna. This version of her wore a leather cuff over the crescent scar and kept her silences closer than her friends. “I’m staying the weekend,” he said. “Maybe we could get a coffee. Catch up properly. No ghosts.” Aurora traced the rim of her glass with a fingertip, the pitch of the sound a low hum. “Maybe.” The word was a door left ajar, not open. Liam heard the hollow note and accepted it. He pulled a business card from his wallet—some law firm in Bristol—and slid it across the bar. “My number’s the same. In case you ever feel like answering.” She palmed the card without looking at it. “Thanks.” He stood, shrugging back into his waxed jacket. The rain had stopped, the pavement outside now a slick mirror of the green neon. “It was good to see you, Rory. Really.” “You too, Liam.” He hesitated, as if weighing the cost of another question, then thought better of it. The bell jangled, and he was gone, swallowed by the night and the distant rumble of a night bus. Silas leaned against the back counter, arms folded. “University friend?” “Something like that.” She flicked the crumpled beer mat into the ashtray. “We lost touch after I left Cardiff.” “He seemed decent.” “He was. Is.” She slipped the business card into her pocket, the edge biting against her knuckle. “He just remembers a version of me I’d rather forget.” Silas poured himself two fingers of the whisky and knocked it back in one. “We’re all mosaics of who we used to be. Nothing wrong with breaking a few tiles.” She didn’t answer. Outside, the green neon sputtered once, then held steady, casting its sickly glow over the empty street. The maps watched, and the photographs, and the fly at the window, and Aurora sat in the middle of it all, a woman carved from the ruins of a girl who’d once believed in checklists and barristers and the kind of love that didn’t leave marks. The weight of time settled like dust after a slammed door. She finished her lager and slid the glass toward Silas. “Another?” He raised an eyebrow but reached for the tap. “That’s the worst part of the past, isn’t it? It keeps walking in uninvited.” The fresh pint bloomed gold and bitter under the neon hum. She wrapped her fingers around it, the chill seeping into the scar she never hid anymore. “At least this time, I knew how to show him the door.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He limped back [back]"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.3
leniency0.6
rawRatio0.056
effectiveRatio0.033
96.97% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1650
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.58% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1650
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"electric"
count1
2
word"flicked"
count2
3
word"perfect"
count1
4
word"churn"
count1
5
word"tension"
count1
6
word"weight"
count2
7
word"flicker"
count1
8
word"unspoken"
count1
9
word"traced"
count1
10
word"eyebrow"
count1
11
word"chill"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"electric"
2"flicked"
3"perfect"
4"churn"
5"tension"
6"weight"
7"flicker"
8"unspoken"
9"traced"
10"eyebrow"
11"chill"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"a flicker of amusement"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences88
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences131
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1643
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount1167
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.86
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Liam"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Golden1
Empress1
Aurora5
Bute1
Park1
Cardiff1
Silas10
Liam9
Adam1
Rory1
Sunday1
Bristol1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Aurora"
3"Silas"
4"Liam"
5"Adam"
6"Rory"
places
0"Soho"
1"Bute"
2"Park"
3"Cardiff"
4"Bristol"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences78
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if weighing the cost of another question, then thought better of it"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1643
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences131
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs57
mean28.82
std20.34
cv0.706
sampleLengths
090
177
254
35
428
51
662
720
829
916
1073
1128
1215
1335
1429
153
1636
175
1826
1919
2026
214
2233
2323
2425
2538
2613
2723
2827
2934
3055
3142
3226
333
3411
3511
3651
3731
3816
3925
4078
4117
4219
4345
449
4531
463
4734
4810
4919
93.30% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences88
matches
0"being asked"
1"was bewildered"
2"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs178
matches(empty)
55.62% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences131
ratio0.031
matches
0"Aurora glanced toward him, and something passed between them—a silent transaction of loyalty and debt."
1"He wasn’t angry; he was bewildered, a man still standing in the rubble of a friendship he hadn’t seen demolished."
2"He’d never pictured Rory in a place like this, with a man like Silas—a grey-streaked relic of a world he couldn’t fathom."
3"He pulled a business card from his wallet—some law firm in Bristol—and slid it across the bar."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount951
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.02103049421661409
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.005257623554153523
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences131
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences131
mean12.54
std7.55
cv0.602
sampleLengths
013
123
213
325
416
518
617
721
821
913
1018
1123
125
1310
1412
156
161
1716
1815
1931
2016
214
2216
2313
2413
253
2617
2723
2810
2923
3016
318
324
336
349
359
3626
3710
3811
398
403
4113
4223
435
444
4520
462
473
4813
493
52.16% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.35877862595419846
totalSentences131
uniqueOpeners47
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
ratio0
47.91% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences86
matches
0"She’d peeled the label off"
1"Her delivery jacket hung on"
2"He was mid-twenties, with the"
3"He scanned the room, eyes"
4"His voice yanked her from"
5"She looked up, her bright"
6"He crossed the room with"
7"He stopped two feet from"
8"She noted the way he"
9"He gestured at her, at"
10"She touched the ends of"
11"He’d been there the day"
12"She’d shed some softness in"
13"she said, then caught herself"
14"He limped back to his"
15"He took a long pull"
16"He twisted the pint glass"
17"She didn’t flinch."
18"He leaned closer, lowering his"
19"Her knuckles whitened around the"
ratio0.43
0.70% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount79
totalSentences86
matches
0"The green neon of The"
1"The air clung thick with"
2"Silas stood behind the bar,"
3"The signet ring on his"
4"Aurora sat at the end"
5"She’d peeled the label off"
6"Her delivery jacket hung on"
7"A man stepped in, shaking"
8"He was mid-twenties, with the"
9"He scanned the room, eyes"
10"His voice yanked her from"
11"She looked up, her bright"
12"He crossed the room with"
13"He stopped two feet from"
14"She noted the way he"
15"He gestured at her, at"
16"She touched the ends of"
17"Liam’s gaze flicked to her"
18"He’d been there the day"
19"The scar hadn’t changed, but"
ratio0.919
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"He was mid-twenties, with the careful stubble and too-white trainers of someone who’d only recently left the provinces."
1"He twisted the pint glass on the beer mat, a clockwise rotation that matched the slow churn of old memories."
2"The maps watched, and the photographs, and the fly at the window, and Aurora sat in the middle of it all, a woman carved from the ruins of a girl who’d once bel…"
69.44% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"He took, his Adam’s apple bobbing"
1"She slipped, the edge biting against her knuckle"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She’d (would)"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.117
leniency0.233
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.033
82.2558%