Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2GDKHHRAH340N3C2HY56PB

Run Details

Duration:
51.4s
Cost:
$0.001879
Provider:
DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon glow of The Raven’s Nest bled through the wet Soho pavement, distorting in the puddles like something half-remembered. Inside, the bar breathed its usual low hum—ice against glass, the murmur of conversations held in booths too dark for the streetlamps to reach. Old maps curled at their edges on the walls, and black-and-white photographs of people long dead watched from their frames with expressions that never changed. Rory pushed through the door with a package balanced against her hip, the residual warmth of the Golden Empress delivery bag still clinging to her jacket. She’d stopped bothering to change between shifts. The smell of fried rice had become a permanent accessory, and anyway, Silas didn’t care. “Rory.” Silas looked up from polishing a glass, the bar rag still in his hand. “You’re late.” “Busy night. Mr. Chen wanted fifteen orders in Chinatown alone.” She set the package on the counter. “Your dumplings. He threw in extra soy sauce.” Silas grunted and set the glass down, but his eyes had already moved past her to something—someone—near the back of the room. “There’s a woman in the corner booth. Arrived about an hour ago. Asked specifically if you worked here.” Rory’s hand stilled on the strap of her delivery bag. She didn’t turn around. “She give a name?” “Said she was an old friend.” Silas’s voice was careful in a way that made Rory’s stomach tighten. “Didn’t press. But she’s been nursing the same whiskey for forty minutes, and she looks like she’s run somewhere to get here.” Rory let the bag slide off her shoulder and onto the counter. The maps on the walls suddenly felt too much like they were waiting. “Alright.” She walked toward the corner booth past tables occupied by the usual crowd—a couple arguing in hushed French, a man in a trench coat reading a paperback, two students who’d been there since six arguing about a professor. The woman sat with her back to the room, but the way she held her shoulders, the particular angle of her neck as she stared into her glass—Rory’s feet slowed before her mind caught up. “Laila.” The woman turned, and the years collapsed and stretched simultaneously—a disorienting pull like a tide receding too fast. Laila Haddad had always been striking. At twenty-two, she’d walked into rooms and conversations stalled. Men forgot their own names. Women forgot their insecurities. She’d worn her beauty like a coat she’d been born in, careless and warm. The woman in the booth had hollowed out. Her cheekbones jutted where softness used to be. The skin beneath her dark eyes carried a bruised purple, the kind no amount of concealer could mask. Her hair—once a cascade of black curls that she’d toss over her shoulder with theatrical impatience—hung limp and unwashed, pulled back with a frayed elastic. She wore a grey jumper that swallowed her frame, sleeves pulled down over fingers that fidgeted with a paper napkin, shredding it into tiny white soldiers. “You still answer to Rory.” Laila’s voice came out rough, a half-octave lower than memory held. “When I asked at the bar, the man said that name like he owned it. Like you belonged here.” Rory slid into the opposite bench. The vinyl creaked under her. Up close, the changes registered with brutal clarity. A small scar split Laila’s right eyebrow—new, not yet faded to silver. The knuckles on her left hand bore faint yellow remnants of older bruises. “Three years,” Rory said. “You disappeared after Evan’s trial. I called. I messaged your brother. Nothing.” Laila’s mouth twitched—not quite a smile. “I was ashamed.” “Of what?” “Of not stopping him before you had to run.” Laila lifted her whiskey and drained what was left. The ice cubes clicked against her teeth. “I knew what he was, Rory. I’d known since the first time you showed up at my flat with that look on your face. The one where you’d rehearsed an excuse for the bruise but hadn’t quite sold it to yourself yet.” Rory’s hand moved instinctively to her left wrist, thumb finding the small crescent scar beneath her sleeve. Childhood accident. That’s what she told people. Laila was one of the few who knew it was the result of Evan’s keys gouging skin when she’d tried to leave the first time. “You weren’t responsible for him,” Rory said. “Weren’t I?” Laila pushed her glass aside. “I introduced you. At that party in Cardiff. You were nineteen and terrified of your father’s expectations and so desperate to disappoint him that you latched onto the first dangerous thing that smiled at you. I watched it happen. I practically orchestrated it.” The French couple paid their bill and left. Silas busied himself behind the bar, but Rory caught the way his eyes flicked toward the corner booth every few seconds. He’d positioned himself within hearing distance without being obvious about it. The old spy’s instincts never really retired. “Where have you been?” Rory asked. “Birmingham. Then Glasgow. Then a basement flat in Bristol that flooded every time it rained.” Laila’s fingers had shredded the napkin into confetti. She brushed the remnants into a small pile. “I got involved with someone. Someone who made Evan look like a cautionary tale with a happy ending.” The stillness that followed felt heavier than the words themselves. “I left him seven months ago,” Laila continued. Her voice had gone flat, the emotional equivalent of a closed shutter. “Took nothing. Ran with a duffel bag and two hundred pounds and a cracked rib that still aches when the weather turns. I’ve been moving ever since. Different cities. Different names.” “Different names.” “Malphora, last month. I don’t know why I picked it. It sounded like something from a story my grandmother used to tell.” Laila finally looked up, and her eyes—still the same deep brown, still capable of holding entire conversations without words—locked onto Rory’s. “The week before I left him, I was packing in secret. Hiding clothes in bin bags beneath the floorboards. And I kept thinking about you. About how you’d managed it. How you’d gotten out and stayed out.” Rory leaned back against the booth. The weight of the comparison pressed against her chest. She remembered those months after London—the sleeplessness, the way every slammed door or raised voice sent her heart into her throat. The nights she’d sat in this very bar while Silas said nothing, just kept her glass full and the jukebox playing and the outside world firmly outside. “I didn’t manage it,” Rory said. “I just didn’t go back. There’s a difference.” “Is there?” “I still check over my shoulder. I still flinch at certain cadences of male voices. I still can’t sleep with my back to a door.” Rory spread her hands on the table between them. “Getting out is easy. It’s staying out that hollows you.” Laila’s composure cracked. It wasn’t dramatic—no sobs, no breaking down. Just a tightening around her mouth, a tremor in her jaw that she fought and lost. She pressed her palm flat against her sternum, as if something inside her chest was trying to claw its way free. “I came here because I wanted to apologize,” Laila whispered. “And because I wanted to see if you looked better. If three years had made you whole again. If there was proof that I could—” She stopped. Swallowed. The napkin pile scattered as her sleeve caught the edge of it. “—that I could survive what comes after,” she finished. Rory looked at her old friend—at the scar splitting her eyebrow, the bruised knuckles, the jumper that hung off shoulders that used to carry confidence like a crown. She saw the girl who’d taught her how to sneak into university lectures without a pass. Who’d stayed up until four in the morning helping her memorize case law for a degree neither of them believed in. Who’d stood in the rain outside Evan’s flat the night Rory finally left, holding a cricket bat she’d stolen from her brother, ready to use it if Evan tried to follow. She saw what three years of running had taken. What it was still taking. “You’re not going back,” Rory said. It wasn’t a question. “Never.” “Then you’re staying here tonight.” She slid out of the booth and stood. The bar had emptied while they talked. Silas was wiping down the counter, the green neon from the window casting his face in pale light. “Silas keeps a spare room upstairs. It’s not much, but the door locks.” Laila stared up at her. The expression on her face was something Rory recognized—the look of someone who’d forgotten what being caught looked like. “You don’t owe me anything,” Laila said. “We’re past owing.” Rory extended her hand across the table. “We’re at surviving now.” Laila took it. Her grip was bony, cold, but it held on longer than necessary—a tether rather than a handshake. For a moment they stood there in the dim bar, maps of places neither of them had ever visited curling on the walls around them, photographs of strangers bearing silent witness. At the counter, Silas set the glass he’d been polishing down and reached for another.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.455
leniency0.909
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.34% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1552
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"really"
2"very"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Chen"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
77.45% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1552
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"eyebrow"
count2
3
word"flicked"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"firmly"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"stomach"
2"eyebrow"
3"flicked"
4"weight"
5"firmly"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences88
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences112
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1535
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions55
wordCount1059
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.89
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Laila"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Golden1
Empress1
Silas8
Rory20
French2
Haddad1
Laila15
Evan3
London1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Rory"
4"Haddad"
5"Laila"
6"Evan"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
globalScore0.556
windowScore0.333
73.08% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"not quite a smile"
1"looked like"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.651
wordCount1535
matches
0"not much, but the door locks"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences112
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean32.66
std24.82
cv0.76
sampleLengths
070
148
217
325
440
518
640
726
873
91
1056
118
1277
1335
1444
1516
169
172
1867
1949
207
2150
2247
236
2449
2510
2651
272
2880
2963
3014
312
3244
3347
3435
3515
369
3796
3814
3910
401
4151
4224
437
4414
4551
4615
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences88
matches
0"being caught"
55.86% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs185
matches
0"were waiting"
1"was trying"
2"was still taking"
3"was wiping"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount17
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences14
totalSentences112
ratio0.125
matches
0"Inside, the bar breathed its usual low hum—ice against glass, the murmur of conversations held in booths too dark for the streetlamps to reach."
1"Silas grunted and set the glass down, but his eyes had already moved past her to something—someone—near the back of the room."
2"She walked toward the corner booth past tables occupied by the usual crowd—a couple arguing in hushed French, a man in a trench coat reading a paperback, two students who’d been there since six arguing about a professor."
3"The woman sat with her back to the room, but the way she held her shoulders, the particular angle of her neck as she stared into her glass—Rory’s feet slowed before her mind caught up."
4"The woman turned, and the years collapsed and stretched simultaneously—a disorienting pull like a tide receding too fast."
5"Her hair—once a cascade of black curls that she’d toss over her shoulder with theatrical impatience—hung limp and unwashed, pulled back with a frayed elastic."
6"A small scar split Laila’s right eyebrow—new, not yet faded to silver."
7"Laila’s mouth twitched—not quite a smile."
8"“Malphora, last month. I don’t know why I picked it. It sounded like something from a story my grandmother used to tell.” Laila finally looked up, and her eyes—still the same deep brown, still capable of holding entire conversations without words—locked onto Rory’s."
9"She remembered those months after London—the sleeplessness, the way every slammed door or raised voice sent her heart into her throat."
10"It wasn’t dramatic—no sobs, no breaking down."
11"Rory looked at her old friend—at the scar splitting her eyebrow, the bruised knuckles, the jumper that hung off shoulders that used to carry confidence like a crown."
12"The expression on her face was something Rory recognized—the look of someone who’d forgotten what being caught looked like."
13"Her grip was bony, cold, but it held on longer than necessary—a tether rather than a handshake."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1081
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.030527289546716005
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.0064754856614246065
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences112
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences112
mean13.71
std10.09
cv0.737
sampleLengths
021
124
225
326
47
515
615
72
817
98
1022
1118
1210
134
144
1518
1622
1712
1813
191
2038
2135
221
2318
246
259
265
274
2814
298
308
3118
3225
3326
3416
3519
366
375
388
3912
4013
414
4212
436
443
452
4618
477
4842
4917
61.61% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.4017857142857143
totalSentences112
uniqueOpeners45
43.86% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences76
matches
0"Just a tightening around her"
ratio0.013
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences76
matches
0"She’d stopped bothering to change"
1"She set the package on"
2"She didn’t turn around."
3"She walked toward the corner"
4"She’d worn her beauty like"
5"Her cheekbones jutted where softness"
6"Her hair—once a cascade of"
7"She wore a grey jumper"
8"He’d positioned himself within hearing"
9"She brushed the remnants into"
10"Her voice had gone flat,"
11"She remembered those months after"
12"It wasn’t dramatic—no sobs, no"
13"She pressed her palm flat"
14"She saw the girl who’d"
15"She saw what three years"
16"It wasn’t a question."
17"She slid out of the"
18"Her grip was bony, cold,"
ratio0.25
25.79% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences76
matches
0"The green neon glow of"
1"Rory pushed through the door"
2"She’d stopped bothering to change"
3"The smell of fried rice"
4"Silas looked up from polishing"
5"She set the package on"
6"Silas grunted and set the"
7"Rory’s hand stilled on the"
8"She didn’t turn around."
9"Silas’s voice was careful in"
10"Rory let the bag slide"
11"The maps on the walls"
12"She walked toward the corner"
13"The woman sat with her"
14"The woman turned, and the"
15"Laila Haddad had always been"
16"Men forgot their own names."
17"Women forgot their insecurities."
18"She’d worn her beauty like"
19"The woman in the booth"
ratio0.868
65.79% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences76
matches
0"What it was still taking."
ratio0.013
51.28% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"She walked toward the corner booth past tables occupied by the usual crowd—a couple arguing in hushed French, a man in a trench coat reading a paperback, two st…"
1"She wore a grey jumper that swallowed her frame, sleeves pulled down over fingers that fidgeted with a paper napkin, shredding it into tiny white soldiers."
2"She pressed her palm flat against her sternum, as if something inside her chest was trying to claw its way free."
3"Rory looked at her old friend—at the scar splitting her eyebrow, the bruised knuckles, the jumper that hung off shoulders that used to carry confidence like a c…"
4"The expression on her face was something Rory recognized—the look of someone who’d forgotten what being caught looked like."
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Silas looked up, the bar rag still in his hand"
1"Laila’s voice came out, a half-octave lower than memory held"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Laila continued (continue)"
1"Laila whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.182
leniency0.364
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.091
81.1126%