| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde’s voice echoed strangely [strangely]" | | 1 | "Isolde said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 42 | | tagDensity | 0.405 | | leniency | 0.81 | | rawRatio | 0.118 | | effectiveRatio | 0.095 | |
| 82.29% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1412 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "perfectly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "softly" | | 3 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 22.10% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1412 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silk" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "echo" | | 3 | "oppressive" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "depths" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "flickered" | | 8 | "comforting" | | 9 | "crystalline" | | 10 | "footsteps" | | 11 | "echoed" | | 12 | "unreadable" | | 13 | "crystal" | | 14 | "symphony" | | 15 | "resolved" | | 16 | "tension" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 89 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 113 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 60 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1422 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 57 | | wordCount | 1066 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.59 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Warm | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Grove | 3 | | Rory | 17 | | One | 3 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Nyx | 10 | | Unease | 1 | | Isolde | 12 | | Fae | 3 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Grove" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Blade" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.703 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 71.88% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "quite know what to make of them" | | 1 | "sounded like laughter" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.703 | | wordCount | 1422 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 48 | | mean | 29.63 | | std | 20.87 | | cv | 0.704 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 49 | | 2 | 38 | | 3 | 39 | | 4 | 33 | | 5 | 31 | | 6 | 72 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 40 | | 9 | 27 | | 10 | 48 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 50 | | 13 | 37 | | 14 | 40 | | 15 | 53 | | 16 | 64 | | 17 | 37 | | 18 | 31 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 45 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 42 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 64 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 41 | | 29 | 65 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 50 | | 32 | 53 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 34 | | 39 | 36 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 64 | | 42 | 24 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 55 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 6 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 192 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 113 | | ratio | 0.088 | | matches | | 0 | "Flowers bloomed in clusters that defied season — frost-blue roses beside summer marigolds, autumn chrysanthemums tangled with spring narcissus." | | 1 | "A brook chuckled somewhere to their left — actually chuckled, a low liquid giggle that raised the hairs on Rory’s arms." | | 2 | "One of the shapes broke the surface — a face formed of water and light, features shifting like reflections in a stirred pond." | | 3 | "A path opened where none had been — a corridor of arched roots leading downward into soft luminescence." | | 4 | "The air wafting up smelled of cinnamon and wet earth and something else — something that triggered a deep, primal part of her brain that remembered being prey." | | 5 | "One moment stone pressed close on all sides; the next, Rory stood in a cavern vast as a cathedral, its ceiling lost in darkness and its floor covered in a garden of crystalline flowers." | | 6 | "Their shadow-fingers passed through the petals, and the flower chimed — a single pure note that hung in the air and multiplied, bouncing between the crystals until the cavern sang with it." | | 7 | "A shape rose from behind a cluster of diamond-bloomed lilies — humanoid but wrong, its limbs too long, its joints bending in too many directions." | | 8 | "They flowed forward, drawn by the music, and Rory had no choice but to follow — past crystalline roses and frozen lilies, past blooms that wept ruby droplets and stems that coiled like serpents, deeper into a cavern that shouldn’t exist beneath a park in London, toward a memory-keeper whose face held nothing but hollows where its eyes should be." | | 9 | "The pendant burned against her chest, and somewhere in the distance — impossibly far, impossibly close — she smelled roasted meat and spilled wine." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 582 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 17 | | adverbRatio | 0.029209621993127148 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006872852233676976 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 113 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 113 | | mean | 12.58 | | std | 9.02 | | cv | 0.717 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 23 | | 33 | 27 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 21 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 25 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 21 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 28 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 67.85% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.46017699115044247 | | totalSentences | 113 | | uniqueOpeners | 52 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 13 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "She stumbled, catching herself against" | | 1 | "They materialized beside her, a" | | 2 | "She turned and found water" | | 3 | "It tilted its head at" | | 4 | "Their whisper-voice carried an edge" | | 5 | "Their violet eyes met Rory’s" | | 6 | "She watched it clean its" | | 7 | "She stepped forward." | | 8 | "Their shadow-fingers passed through the" | | 9 | "Its face was smooth as" | | 10 | "It tilted its head exactly" | | 11 | "They paused, listening" | | 12 | "They flowed forward, drawn by" |
| | ratio | 0.169 | |
| 18.44% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 68 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "The shift happened between one" | | 1 | "Rory’s boot pressed into damp" | | 2 | "The air in her lungs" | | 3 | "She stumbled, catching herself against" | | 4 | "Nyx whispered, their voice a" | | 5 | "They materialized beside her, a" | | 6 | "Isolde glided ahead, her silver" | | 7 | "The half-fae woman left no" | | 8 | "Rory straightened, fingers drifting to" | | 9 | "Pulses of heat radiated from" | | 10 | "Isolde lifted one pale hand," | | 11 | "The clearing stretched wider than" | | 12 | "Flowers bloomed in clusters that" | | 13 | "The air hummed with the" | | 14 | "Rory inhaled and tasted thunderstorms." | | 15 | "Nyx drifted closer, their violet" | | 16 | "The shade’s form rippled, edges" | | 17 | "Isolde laughed, a sound like" | | 18 | "A brook chuckled somewhere to" | | 19 | "She turned and found water" |
| | ratio | 0.883 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Ancient oaks spiraled upward in impossible geometries, their branches weaving a canopy that filtered light into strands of liquid gold." | | 1 | "Flowers bloomed in clusters that defied season — frost-blue roses beside summer marigolds, autumn chrysanthemums tangled with spring narcissus." | | 2 | "The air hummed with the drone of bees that glittered like chips of obsidian, their wings leaving trails of silver dust." | | 3 | "It tilted its head at Rory, blinked eyes that were perfectly round river stones, then dissolved back into the current with a splash that sounded like laughter." | | 4 | "The air wafting up smelled of cinnamon and wet earth and something else — something that triggered a deep, primal part of her brain that remembered being prey." | | 5 | "Phosphorescent fungi clustered on the walls, shedding pale blue light that made Nyx look almost solid and Isolde look like a ghost." | | 6 | "Their shadow-fingers passed through the petals, and the flower chimed — a single pure note that hung in the air and multiplied, bouncing between the crystals un…" | | 7 | "They flowed forward, drawn by the music, and Rory had no choice but to follow — past crystalline roses and frozen lilies, past blooms that wept ruby droplets an…" | | 8 | "Isolde stood slightly apart, silver hair floating as though underwater." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx whispered, their voice a brush of cold wind across her neck" | | 1 | "Rory straightened, fingers drifting to the pendant beneath her shirt" | | 2 | "Nyx drifted, their violet eyes narrowing" | | 3 | "Isolde pressed, and the tree groaned, shifting sideways with a sound of grinding stone" | | 4 | "Nyx drifted, bending to examine a crystalline rose" |
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| 54.76% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Isolde pressed (press)" | | 2 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "Rory breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 42 | | tagDensity | 0.143 | | leniency | 0.286 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.19 | |