| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.429 | | leniency | 0.857 | | rawRatio | 0.083 | | effectiveRatio | 0.071 | |
| 85.60% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2083 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sharply" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 68.80% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2083 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "footsteps" | | 3 | "aftermath" | | 4 | "electric" | | 5 | "firmly" | | 6 | "glinting" | | 7 | "lilt" | | 8 | "flickered" | | 9 | "synchronized" | | 10 | "etched" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 159 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 159 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 175 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 51 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 5 | | totalWords | 2072 | | ratio | 0.002 | | matches | | 0 | "Like Morris." | | 1 | "The Veil Market." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "It moved every full moon, they said." |
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| 99.52% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 58 | | wordCount | 1783 | | uniqueNames | 26 | | maxNameDensity | 1.01 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Tomás" | | discoveredNames | | Harlow | 2 | | Quinn | 18 | | Old | 2 | | Compton | 2 | | Street | 3 | | Soho | 1 | | Raven | 2 | | Nest | 2 | | Berwick | 1 | | Friday | 1 | | Silence | 1 | | Victorian | 1 | | Tactical | 1 | | Morris | 3 | | Tube | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | London | 1 | | Londoners | 1 | | Whitechapel | 1 | | Herrera | 2 | | Saint | 1 | | Christopher | 1 | | Seville | 1 | | Spain | 1 | | Tomás | 6 | | Green | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Raven" | | 3 | "Nest" | | 4 | "Morris" | | 5 | "Veil" | | 6 | "Londoners" | | 7 | "Herrera" | | 8 | "Saint" | | 9 | "Christopher" | | 10 | "Tomás" |
| | places | | 0 | "Old" | | 1 | "Compton" | | 2 | "Street" | | 3 | "Soho" | | 4 | "Berwick" | | 5 | "Tactical" | | 6 | "London" | | 7 | "Whitechapel" | | 8 | "Seville" | | 9 | "Spain" |
| | globalScore | 0.995 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 108 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like a man who had been expecting" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 2072 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 175 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 57 | | mean | 36.35 | | std | 29.85 | | cv | 0.821 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 76 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 73 | | 5 | 74 | | 6 | 65 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 33 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 90 | | 13 | 33 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 98 | | 16 | 52 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 115 | | 19 | 82 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 63 | | 22 | 53 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 69 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 79 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 57 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 90 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 26 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 61 | | 37 | 30 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 40 | | 42 | 22 | | 43 | 67 | | 44 | 53 | | 45 | 22 | | 46 | 49 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 69 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 98.64% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 159 | | matches | | 0 | "got killed" | | 1 | "were draped" | | 2 | "was equipped" |
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| 35.68% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 7 | | totalVerbs | 284 | | matches | | 0 | "was killing" | | 1 | "was having" | | 2 | "was chasing" | | 3 | "was screaming" | | 4 | "was shoving" | | 5 | "were happening" | | 6 | "wasn’t coming" |
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| 28.57% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 175 | | ratio | 0.04 | | matches | | 0 | "The night’s downpour had turned Soho into a smear of neon reflections—ruby red from the noodle shop sign, acid green from The Raven’s Nest across the way, amber from the streetlamps bleeding through the drizzle." | | 1 | "The man she was chasing—mid-thirties, gaunt, a grey hoodie plastered to his frame—had bolted from a break-in on Berwick Street with a messenger bag full of something that jingled." | | 2 | "The watch on her left wrist—her father’s, the leather softened to the texture of old skin—read half past eleven." | | 3 | "The stairwell emptied into a vast underground chamber—an abandoned Tube station, she realized, the architecture unmistakable once her eyes adjusted." | | 4 | "She stood at the base of the stairs,14 rain still dripping from her coat onto floor tiles that showed through the rugs—original tiles, pre-war, geometric patterns in faded green and cream." | | 5 | "Reactions varied—wariness, amusement, something that might have been respect." | | 6 | "Harlow Quinn was many things—stubborn, precise, haunted—but she was not stupid." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1574 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "Real, marrow-deep terror." | | 1 | "same bone-deep certainty" |
| | adverbCount | 49 | | adverbRatio | 0.031130876747141042 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009529860228716646 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 175 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 175 | | mean | 11.84 | | std | 10.11 | | cv | 0.853 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 35 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 29 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 30 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 24 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 59.05% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 20 | | diversityRatio | 0.4228571428571429 | | totalSentences | 175 | | uniqueOpeners | 74 | |
| 46.95% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 142 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, from somewhere below, a" | | 1 | "Just brickwork, old and unbroken,40" 1/1/2040, 12:00:00 AM |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 37 | | totalSentences | 142 | | matches | | 0 | "Her quarry was thirty yards" | | 1 | "She registered the bar’s distinctive" | | 2 | "she barked into the radio" | | 3 | "She’d been in tougher spots" | | 4 | "She pushed harder, her lungs" | | 5 | "She’d learned to trust the" | | 6 | "she called into the gap" | | 7 | "She could smell something now:" | | 8 | "She should stop." | | 9 | "She should wait for backup," | | 10 | "She kept going." | | 11 | "It moved every full moon," | | 12 | "It required a token to" | | 13 | "She stood at the base" | | 14 | "He glanced back." | | 15 | "Their eyes met across the" | | 16 | "He disappeared into the darkness" | | 17 | "She thought about Morris." | | 18 | "She thought about the vials" | | 19 | "Her backup wasn’t coming." |
| | ratio | 0.261 | |
| 48.03% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 117 | | totalSentences | 142 | | matches | | 0 | "Her quarry was thirty yards" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn rounded the" | | 2 | "The night’s downpour had turned" | | 3 | "She registered the bar’s distinctive" | | 4 | "she barked into the radio" | | 5 | "Nothing but static in return." | | 6 | "The rain was killing the" | | 7 | "She’d been in tougher spots" | | 8 | "The man she was chasing—mid—thirties," | | 9 | "Jewelry, her initial assessment had" | | 10 | "Nothing a jeweler would stock." | | 11 | "Nothing she recognized." | | 12 | "She pushed harder, her lungs" | | 13 | "The watch on her left" | | 14 | "The streets were thinner than" | | 15 | "The rain, maybe." | | 16 | "She’d learned to trust the" | | 17 | "The suspect cut left into" | | 18 | "Quinn slowed at the mouth" | | 19 | "Alleys like this were where" |
| | ratio | 0.824 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 142 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 6.80% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | technicalSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "The man she was chasing—mid-thirties, gaunt, a grey hoodie plastered to his frame—had bolted from a break-in on Berwick Street with a messenger bag full of some…" | | 1 | "Quinn shouldered through and started descending, her footsteps ringing in the enclosed space." | | 2 | "Lanterns hung from the arched ceiling on chains, burning with a light that was too steady and too blue to be gas or electric." | | 3 | "Every cop who worked vice or organised crime in central London heard whispers eventually." | | 4 | "A floating black market that catered to the strange, the wealthy, and the desperate." | | 5 | "The look of a man who had stolen from something he was now desperately afraid of displeasing." | | 6 | "The05 conversations around her were happening in languages she didn’t recognize, and the geometry of the station seemed subtly wrong, the arches206 just slightl…" | | 7 | "But18 she had a suspect in flight, evidence in play, and the same bone-deep certainty that had driven her for eighteen years: the truth was204 the truth, no mat…" | | 8 | "Reactions varied—wariness, amusement, something that might have been respect." | | 9 | "She passed a table of weapons that looked forged from bone, a cage holding something that chittered wetly in the shadows, and finally a tent of thick canvas tha…" | | 10 | "The exhaustion in his posture that spoke to someone who had been stitching up problems in the dark for a very long time." | | 11 | "Every instinct that had kept her alive for eighteen years on the force, that had whispered warnings in alleys and interview rooms and darkened stairwells, said …" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.286 | | leniency | 0.571 | | rawRatio | 0.125 | | effectiveRatio | 0.071 | |