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Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2GNYTA4YJCVY9EPKGS7WMD
Run Details
Model:
DeepSeek V4 Flash (Reasoning)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
23.4s
Cost:
$0.001038
Provider:
DeepSeek
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
94.74%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
94.07%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
64.41%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
0.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
79.00%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
100.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
10.48%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
47.30%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
86.3332%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The knock came at half
past midnight. Three sharp raps, a pause, then two more. The Morse code for trouble. I’d
know that rhythm
anywhere.
The chain rattled as I
slid it free. One deadbolt. Two.
The third stuck — always
did in humid weather.
I wrenched it open with
my shoulder.
Lucien Moreau leaned against the
doorframe, impeccable as ever.
Charcoal suit, platinum hair catching
the dim hallway light, one hand resting on that ivory-handled cane.
The other hand held a
bottle of something amber. “Rory.”
His voice rolled over my
name like honey over broken glass. “You’re bleeding on my welcome mat.”
He glanced down at the
dark stain spreading across the grey fibres. “Apologies. May I come in before I ruin your floors as well?”
I should have shut the
door. Should have let him bleed out on Brick Lane for all I cared. But the crescent scar on my wrist
throbbed
— a phantom memory of the night he’d saved my life in a Camden alley, three years ago.
The night I’d walked away
without looking back. I stepped aside.
He moved past me, close
enough that I caught the copper sting of fresh blood beneath his usual bergamot cologne.
The cane clicked against the
floorboards.
My flat was a studio
above Silas’ bar — one room with a kitchenette and a bathroom barely large enough to turn around in.
Lucien made it feel smaller
just by existing in it. “Nice place.”
He set the bottle on
my counter. “Cozy.” “It’s a shoebox. You’re dripping.”
He unbuttoned his jacket with
practised ease. The white shirt underneath was slit clean across his ribs, the fabric dark and clinging.
He winced as he peeled
it away from the wound. “Silver blade,” he said. “Nasty stuff. Takes longer to heal.”
I grabbed the first aid
kit from under the sink. “You know where the hospital is.” “And you know I can’t go there.”
He sank onto the edge
of my bed — the only place to sit. “Half-demon with a stab wound gets a lot of questions I’d rather not answer.”
I knelt in front of
him and pressed gauze to the gash. He hissed through his teeth. “You’ve done this before,” he said. “Patched you up enough times to know the routine.”
My fingers worked swiftly, applying
pressure. “Difference is, I used to do it because I trusted you.” “And now?” I didn’t answer. The
silence
stretched, filled only by the distant bass from the bar downstairs. “I need your help,”
he said finally
. “Funny. Last time you said that, I ended up in a necromancer’s basement.” “That was business. This is personal.” “Everything with you is personal, Lucien. That’s the problem.” He caught my wrist.
His grip was gentle, but
his heterochromatic eyes — one amber, one black — pinned me in place. “Eva’s in trouble.” My heart stalled. “What?” “She went digging into something she shouldn’t have. Something connected to the Morrigan’s old network. She’s been missing for three days.” I pulled my hand free, but the gauze stayed pressed against his wound. “Eva knows better than to mess with fae death cults.” “She didn’t mess with them. She found a ledger. Names, dates, transactions. Someone wants it back badly enough to send a pack of silver-wielding thugs after me. And I was the decoy.” The air in the room changed.
Suddenly the bleeding man in
my flat wasn’t the victim — he was the warning. “Where’s the ledger now?” “Safe. But Eva isn’t. And I can’t get to her alone.” I looked at the blood seeping through the gauze. Looked at the bottle on my counter — some expensive French whiskey he’d brought because he knew it was my favourite. Manipulative bastard. “Why now?” My voice came out harder than I intended. “Three years. Not a word. Then you show up at my door, bleeding, asking for favours.” “I’m not asking.” His jaw tightened. “I’m begging.” Lucien Moreau didn’t beg. He bartered, blackmailed, and bargained. But he never begged. “Tell me where she is.” “It’s not that simple.” “Then make it simple.” I stood, putting distance between us. “You want my help? Start with the truth. Every ugly piece of it.” He reached into his jacket — slow, careful — and pulled out a folded piece of paper. Handwritten. The ink
was smudged
with dried blood. “This arrived at my flat yesterday.” He held it out. I took it. Unfolded it. One line, in Eva’s looping script: *Rory is the key. Tell her what you did.* I looked up. His face was
unreadable
, but the
tension
in his shoulders told me everything. “What did you do, Lucien?” The
silence
that followed was heavier than any answer he could have given.
Then, from the hallway, a
sound. Footsteps. Three sets, moving in unison, stopping outside my door. Lucien was on his feet in an instant, ignoring the fresh bloom of blood at his side. He pressed a finger to his lips. A knock. Not his rhythm. Harder. Official. “Miss Carter?” A voice muffled through the wood. “Open up. Police.”
created_at
"2026-04-25T14:28:44.496Z"
4/25/2026, 2:28:44 PM
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4155
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1629
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native_tokens_reasoning
442
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
94.74%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
12
adverbTagCount
2
adverbTags
0
"My fingers worked swiftly [swiftly]"
1
"he said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences
38
tagDensity
0.316
leniency
0.632
rawRatio
0.167
effectiveRatio
0.105
94.07%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
843
totalAiIsmAdverbs
1
found
0
adverb
"suddenly"
count
1
highlights
0
"suddenly"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
64.41%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
843
totalAiIsms
6
found
0
word
"throbbed"
count
1
1
word
"silence"
count
2
2
word
"unreadable"
count
1
3
word
"tension"
count
1
4
word
"footsteps"
count
1
highlights
0
"throbbed"
1
"silence"
2
"unreadable"
3
"tension"
4
"footsteps"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
74
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
74
filterMatches
0
"feel"
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
100
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
repeatedSegmentCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
33
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
1
markdownWords
9
totalWords
853
ratio
0.011
matches
0
"Rory is the key. Tell her what you did."
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
11
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
12
wordCount
568
uniqueNames
8
maxNameDensity
0.7
worstName
"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity
1
worstWindowName
"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Morse
1
Moreau
2
Brick
1
Lane
1
Camden
1
Lucien
4
French
1
Eva
1
persons
0
"Moreau"
1
"Lucien"
2
"Eva"
places
0
"Brick"
1
"Lane"
2
"Camden"
globalScore
1
windowScore
1
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
45
glossingSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
853
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
100
matches
0
"know that rhythm"
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
53
mean
16.09
std
11.77
cv
0.731
sampleLengths
0
20
1
5
2
27
3
34
4
12
5
6
6
24
7
45
8
8
9
3
10
60
11
10
12
5
13
32
14
10
15
16
16
35
17
17
18
6
19
26
20
2
21
16
22
7
23
13
24
6
25
9
26
25
27
4
28
21
29
23
30
32
31
21
32
4
33
11
34
30
35
2
36
26
37
8
38
13
39
5
40
4
41
23
42
25
43
10
44
11
45
9
46
16
47
5
48
13
49
16
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
74
matches
0
"was smudged"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
102
matches
(empty)
0.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
9
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
7
totalSentences
100
ratio
0.07
matches
0
"The third stuck — always did in humid weather."
1
"But the crescent scar on my wrist throbbed — a phantom memory of the night he’d saved my life in a Camden alley, three years ago."
2
"“And you know I can’t go there.” He sank onto the edge of my bed — the only place to sit."
3
"His grip was gentle, but his heterochromatic eyes — one amber, one black — pinned me in place."
4
"Suddenly the bleeding man in my flat wasn’t the victim — he was the warning."
5
"Looked at the bottle on my counter — some expensive French whiskey he’d brought because he knew it was my favourite."
6
"He reached into his jacket — slow, careful — and pulled out a folded piece of paper."
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
377
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
12
adverbRatio
0.03183023872679045
lyAdverbCount
2
lyAdverbRatio
0.005305039787798408
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
100
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
100
mean
8.53
std
6.03
cv
0.707
sampleLengths
0
7
1
8
2
5
3
5
4
8
5
2
6
1
7
9
8
7
9
9
10
16
11
9
12
12
13
6
14
12
15
12
16
6
17
13
18
26
19
8
20
3
21
20
22
6
23
24
24
10
25
9
26
1
27
5
28
7
29
15
30
10
31
4
32
6
33
10
34
6
35
21
36
14
37
12
38
5
39
6
40
15
41
11
42
2
43
3
44
13
45
7
46
13
47
6
48
9
49
4
79.00%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
1
diversityRatio
0.48
totalSentences
100
uniqueOpeners
48
100.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
2
totalSentences
63
matches
0
"Suddenly the bleeding man in"
1
"Then, from the hallway, a"
ratio
0.032
10.48%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
33
totalSentences
63
matches
0
"I’d know that rhythm anywhere."
1
"I wrenched it open with"
2
"His voice rolled over my"
3
"He glanced down at the"
4
"I should have shut the"
5
"I stepped aside."
6
"He moved past me, close"
7
"My flat was a studio"
8
"He set the bottle on"
9
"He unbuttoned his jacket with"
10
"He winced as he peeled"
11
"I grabbed the first aid"
12
"He sank onto the edge"
13
"I knelt in front of"
14
"He hissed through his teeth."
15
"My fingers worked swiftly, applying"
16
"I didn’t answer."
17
"he said finally"
18
"He caught my wrist."
19
"His grip was gentle, but"
ratio
0.524
47.30%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
52
totalSentences
63
matches
0
"The knock came at half"
1
"The Morse code for trouble."
2
"I’d know that rhythm anywhere."
3
"The chain rattled as I"
4
"The third stuck — always"
5
"I wrenched it open with"
6
"Lucien Moreau leaned against the"
7
"Charcoal suit, platinum hair catching"
8
"The other hand held a"
9
"His voice rolled over my"
10
"He glanced down at the"
11
"I should have shut the"
12
"The night I’d walked away"
13
"I stepped aside."
14
"He moved past me, close"
15
"The cane clicked against the"
16
"My flat was a studio"
17
"Lucien made it feel smaller"
18
"He set the bottle on"
19
"He unbuttoned his jacket with"
ratio
0.825
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
63
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
19
technicalSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
12
uselessAdditionCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
3
fancyCount
0
fancyTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
38
tagDensity
0.079
leniency
0.158
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
86.3332%