| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 20 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde said mildly [mildly]" | | 1 | "Isolde said simply [simply]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 43 | | tagDensity | 0.465 | | leniency | 0.93 | | rawRatio | 0.1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.093 | |
| 87.58% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1208 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 50.33% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1208 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "footsteps" | | 1 | "perfect" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "flickered" | | 5 | "traced" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "could feel" | | 8 | "kaleidoscope" | | 9 | "beacon" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 84.94% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 96 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 42 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 2 | | totalWords | 1213 | | ratio | 0.002 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 53 | | wordCount | 812 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.97 | | worstName | "Isolde" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Silas | 3 | | Fae | 4 | | Grove | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Isolde | 16 | | Nyx | 2 | | Shade | 1 | | Aurora | 15 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Eva | 6 | | Dymas | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Silas" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Shade" | | 5 | "Aurora" | | 6 | "Eva" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Fae-forged" |
| | globalScore | 0.515 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 50.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "spirals that seemed to shift when she looked at them sideways" | | 1 | "spiral that seemed to pull her vision inward, deeper and deeper until" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.824 | | wordCount | 1213 | | matches | | 0 | "not as she remembered it, but as a wound, a bleeding gash in the fabric of reality" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 47 | | mean | 25.81 | | std | 18.9 | | cv | 0.732 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 35 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 72 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 57 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 35 | | 10 | 31 | | 11 | 39 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 52 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 54 | | 19 | 46 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 49 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 41 | | 27 | 41 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 51 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 47 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 48 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 37 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 39 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 72 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 23 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 18 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 25 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 153 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 23.81% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 96 | | ratio | 0.042 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colours — deep violets that bled into blues she had no name for, yellows that glowed like captured sunlight." | | 1 | "She traced one with her eyes — a spiral that seemed to pull her vision inward, deeper and deeper until—" | | 2 | "Beyond the ring of oaks, the forest pressed close, but the shadows between the trunks were wrong — deeper than they should be, moving with a slow, deliberate purpose." | | 3 | "She saw Dymas — not as she remembered it, but as a wound, a bleeding gash in the fabric of reality." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 813 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 26 | | adverbRatio | 0.03198031980319803 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01107011070110701 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 96 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 96 | | mean | 12.64 | | std | 8.19 | | cv | 0.648 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 5 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 24 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 35 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 20 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 60.42% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.40625 | | totalSentences | 96 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 14 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "She wore a gown of" | | 1 | "She jerked back, her hand" | | 2 | "She traced one with her" | | 3 | "Her fingers came away red." | | 4 | "They all turned." | | 5 | "She could still feel the" | | 6 | "She could feel the grove" | | 7 | "It was black, veined with" | | 8 | "She took Isolde's hand, and" | | 9 | "She saw Dymas — not" | | 10 | "She saw the Heartstone pulsing" | | 11 | "She saw a figure standing" | | 12 | "Her lungs burned." | | 13 | "Her vision swam with afterimages," |
| | ratio | 0.219 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 59 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora ducked under a curtain" | | 1 | "The world breathed differently here." | | 2 | "The air tasted of iron" | | 3 | "The Fae Grove opened before" | | 4 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colours" | | 5 | "The grass beneath their feet" | | 6 | "Aurora's Heartstone pendant pulsed warm" | | 7 | "Isolde stood at the grove's" | | 8 | "She wore a gown of" | | 9 | "The half-Fae left no footprints" | | 10 | "Eva glanced down at the" | | 11 | "Nyx drifted forward, their shadow-form" | | 12 | "The Shade's violet eyes flickered" | | 13 | "Aurora stepped onto the grass" | | 14 | "The moment her foot touched" | | 15 | "She jerked back, her hand" | | 16 | "Isolde said mildly" | | 17 | "Aurora kept her hand on" | | 18 | "Eva moved deeper into the" | | 19 | "The spiral carvings on its" |
| | ratio | 0.922 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "The grass beneath their feet was velvety soft, each blade standing straight and perfect as if painted individually." | | 1 | "She wore a gown of woven moonlight, pale lavender eyes fixed on the newcomers with an expression that might have been amusement, or hunger, or both." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 20 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Silas said, his voice tight" |
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| 80.23% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Eva whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Isolde agreed (agree)" | | 2 | "her shoulder snapped (snap)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 43 | | tagDensity | 0.302 | | leniency | 0.605 | | rawRatio | 0.231 | | effectiveRatio | 0.14 | |