Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2GV90WQPFK7CWSDRKKVEGB

Run Details

Duration:
25.6s
Cost:
$0.000515
Provider:
DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora ducked under a curtain of hanging moss and stopped dead. The world breathed differently here. The air tasted of iron and honey, thick enough to coat her tongue. Behind her, she heard Silas let out a low whistle, his footsteps faltering on the leaf-littered ground. “Bloody hell,” Eva whispered. “This isn't Richmond Park anymore.” The Fae Grove opened before them like a wound in reality. Ancient oaks ringed the clearing, their trunks carved with spirals that seemed to shift when she looked at them sideways. Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colours — deep violets that bled into blues she had no name for, yellows that glowed like captured sunlight. The grass beneath their feet was velvety soft, each blade standing straight and perfect as if painted individually. Aurora's Heartstone pendant pulsed warm against her collarbone, a steady rhythm like a second heartbeat. “Stay on the path,” came a voice like wind through reeds. Isolde stood at the grove's centre, her silver hair unbound and pooling around her waist. She wore a gown of woven moonlight, pale lavender eyes fixed on the newcomers with an expression that might have been amusement, or hunger, or both. The half-Fae left no footprints where she stood, the grass bending only slightly beneath her weight. “The path?” Eva glanced down at the dirt track beneath their feet. “You mean this barely visible suggestion of a trail?” “I mean the path you choose to walk,” Isolde said. “Every step you take here leaves an impression. The grove remembers. The grove *feels*.” Nyx drifted forward, their shadow-form rippling as they passed through a shaft of amber light filtering through the canopy. The Shade's violet eyes flickered with recognition. “This place is old. Older than the Fae Courts.” “Older than the Veil itself,” Isolde agreed. “The standing stones were placed before your kind learned to walk upright, shade-walker. They mark the boundary between what was and what might be.” Aurora stepped onto the grass proper. The moment her foot touched the ground, the wildflowers around her ankle twisted, reaching toward her skin like curious fingers. She jerked back, her hand going to the Fae-forged blade at her hip. “Don't,” Isolde said mildly. “They only want to know you. Violence here attracts attention.” “What kind of attention?” Aurora kept her hand on the dagger's hilt but didn't draw. “The kind that follows you home.” Eva moved deeper into the clearing, her fingers brushing the bark of one of the ancient oaks. The spiral carvings on its trunk began to glow faintly, a soft phosphorescent green that pulsed in time with Aurora's pendant. Eva snatched her hand back, but the glow remained, fading slowly like dying embers. “You woke it,” Silas said, his voice tight. “I barely touched it.” “The grove doesn't distinguish between intent and action.” Isolde glided toward them, her feet never quite touching the ground. “That tree remembers every hand that has ever marked its bark. It remembers the first cut, the last sacrifice, the tears of a Fae child who carved her name into its flesh three centuries ago.” Aurora studied the carvings. Some were geometric, precise patterns that hurt to look at directly. Others were crude, almost childlike, scratched into the wood with desperation. She traced one with her eyes — a spiral that seemed to pull her vision inward, deeper and deeper until— “Rory.” Eva's hand on her shoulder snapped her back. “Your nose is bleeding.” Aurora touched her upper lip. Her fingers came away red. “The grove doesn't like being studied,” Isolde said. “Look with your eyes, not your mind. See the shape of things, not their meaning.” Nyx had drifted to the edge of the clearing, where the light grew thin and grey. “There's something in the trees.” They all turned. Beyond the ring of oaks, the forest pressed close, but the shadows between the trunks were wrong — deeper than they should be, moving with a slow, deliberate purpose. Shapes shifted in the darkness, forms that might have been branches or might have been reaching hands. “The boundary,” Isolde said. “What lies beyond the grove is not for mortal eyes. Or shade eyes, for that matter.” “Then why are we here?” Aurora wiped the blood from her lip with the back of her hand. She could still feel the pull of those carvings, a faint tug at the edges of her consciousness. “You said you had answers.” “I said I had *a* vision.” Isolde's pale eyes locked onto Aurora's. “There is a difference. You came seeking knowledge about the Heartstone, about the rift in Dymas. I can show you what I saw. But seeing comes with a price.” “What price?” Silas stepped forward, his hand on Aurora's arm. “We're not trading pieces of ourselves for cryptic nonsense.” “The price is your fear,” Isolde said simply. “The grove feeds on it. Every doubt, every moment of uncertainty you carry — it drinks them down like wine. If you walk into my vision afraid, the grove will taste that fear and remember it. And when you leave, it will follow.” “Follow how?” Eva asked. Isolde smiled, a thin expression that didn't reach her eyes. “Have you ever felt watched in an empty room? Stepped onto a train and smelled flowers that shouldn't be there? Woken from a dream with the certainty that something was standing at the foot of your bed?” The silence that followed was answer enough. Aurora released her grip on the dagger. She could feel the grove pressing against her skin like a held breath, the wildflowers at her feet swaying even though no wind moved through the clearing. The Heartstone pulsed warm and steady against her chest, a tether to something solid. “Show me,” she said. Isolde raised a hand, palm open. A single petal fell from nowhere, drifting down to land in her offered palm. It was black, veined with silver, and it hummed with a frequency Aurora felt in her teeth. “Take my hand,” Isolde said. “And don't let go.” Aurora stepped forward. The grass parted around her feet, the wildflowers bowing as she passed. She took Isolde's hand, and the half-Fae's skin was cold, colder than it had any right to be, cold like river water in winter. The grove dissolved. The world became light and colour and sound, a kaleidoscope of sensation that pulled Aurora apart and stitched her back together. She saw Dymas — not as she remembered it, but as a wound, a bleeding gash in the fabric of reality. She saw the Heartstone pulsing like a beacon. She saw a figure standing at the edge of the rift, a man with no face and a smile made of teeth. And she saw herself, falling, falling, falling into an abyss that had no bottom. Isolde released her hand. Aurora stumbled backward, gasping. Her lungs burned. Her vision swam with afterimages, the ghost of that faceless man still burned into her retinas. “What was that?” she managed. “The future,” Isolde said. “Or one of them. The grove doesn't deal in certainties. It deals in possibilities.” “That thing. The man without a face.” Isolde's lavender eyes darkened. “The Warden of the Deep Gate. He's been waiting for you, Aurora Carter. He's been waiting for a very long time.”
created_at"2026-04-25T14:31:38.784Z" 4/25/2026, 2:31:38 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Isolde said mildly [mildly]"
1"Isolde said simply [simply]"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.465
leniency0.93
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.093
87.58% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1208
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
50.33% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1208
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"footsteps"
count1
1
word"perfect"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count3
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"traced"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"could feel"
count1
8
word"kaleidoscope"
count1
9
word"beacon"
count1
highlights
0"footsteps"
1"perfect"
2"pulsed"
3"weight"
4"flickered"
5"traced"
6"silence"
7"could feel"
8"kaleidoscope"
9"beacon"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences74
matches(empty)
84.94% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences74
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences96
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1213
ratio0.002
matches
0"feels"
1"a"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions53
wordCount812
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.97
worstName"Isolde"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Isolde"
discoveredNames
Silas3
Fae4
Grove1
Heartstone3
Isolde16
Nyx2
Shade1
Aurora15
Fae-forged1
Eva6
Dymas1
persons
0"Silas"
1"Heartstone"
2"Isolde"
3"Nyx"
4"Shade"
5"Aurora"
6"Eva"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Fae-forged"
globalScore0.515
windowScore0.5
50.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"spirals that seemed to shift when she looked at them sideways"
1"spiral that seemed to pull her vision inward, deeper and deeper until"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.824
wordCount1213
matches
0"not as she remembered it, but as a wound, a bleeding gash in the fabric of reality"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean25.81
std18.9
cv0.732
sampleLengths
011
135
29
372
415
511
657
721
824
935
1031
1139
1214
1315
146
1552
168
174
1854
1946
2013
2110
2223
2321
2449
2520
2641
2741
2819
2951
304
3147
327
3348
344
3537
369
3739
383
3972
4014
414
4223
435
4418
457
4625
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs153
matches(empty)
23.81% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences96
ratio0.042
matches
0"Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colours — deep violets that bled into blues she had no name for, yellows that glowed like captured sunlight."
1"She traced one with her eyes — a spiral that seemed to pull her vision inward, deeper and deeper until—"
2"Beyond the ring of oaks, the forest pressed close, but the shadows between the trunks were wrong — deeper than they should be, moving with a slow, deliberate purpose."
3"She saw Dymas — not as she remembered it, but as a wound, a bleeding gash in the fabric of reality."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount813
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.03198031980319803
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.01107011070110701
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences96
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences96
mean12.64
std8.19
cv0.648
sampleLengths
011
15
213
317
44
55
611
720
823
918
1015
1111
1215
1326
1416
1512
169
1710
1814
1919
207
219
227
2324
246
2520
2613
274
2810
2915
306
3117
3221
3314
348
354
3619
3735
384
3911
4011
4120
429
434
445
455
468
4715
4816
495
60.42% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.40625
totalSentences96
uniqueOpeners39
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences64
matches
0"She wore a gown of"
1"She jerked back, her hand"
2"She traced one with her"
3"Her fingers came away red."
4"They all turned."
5"She could still feel the"
6"She could feel the grove"
7"It was black, veined with"
8"She took Isolde's hand, and"
9"She saw Dymas — not"
10"She saw the Heartstone pulsing"
11"She saw a figure standing"
12"Her lungs burned."
13"Her vision swam with afterimages,"
ratio0.219
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences64
matches
0"Aurora ducked under a curtain"
1"The world breathed differently here."
2"The air tasted of iron"
3"The Fae Grove opened before"
4"Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colours"
5"The grass beneath their feet"
6"Aurora's Heartstone pendant pulsed warm"
7"Isolde stood at the grove's"
8"She wore a gown of"
9"The half-Fae left no footprints"
10"Eva glanced down at the"
11"Nyx drifted forward, their shadow-form"
12"The Shade's violet eyes flickered"
13"Aurora stepped onto the grass"
14"The moment her foot touched"
15"She jerked back, her hand"
16"Isolde said mildly"
17"Aurora kept her hand on"
18"Eva moved deeper into the"
19"The spiral carvings on its"
ratio0.922
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The grass beneath their feet was velvety soft, each blade standing straight and perfect as if painted individually."
1"She wore a gown of woven moonlight, pale lavender eyes fixed on the newcomers with an expression that might have been amusement, or hunger, or both."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Silas said, his voice tight"
80.23% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Eva whispered (whisper)"
1"Isolde agreed (agree)"
2"her shoulder snapped (snap)"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.302
leniency0.605
rawRatio0.231
effectiveRatio0.14
79.5772%