| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 18 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Rory turned back [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 36 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.056 | | effectiveRatio | 0.056 | |
| 89.92% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1488 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "really" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 52.96% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1488 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "whisper" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "shimmered" | | 4 | "crystal" | | 5 | "tension" | | 6 | "desire" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "comforting" | | 9 | "stomach" | | 10 | "footsteps" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 79 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 79 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 97 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 54 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1477 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 18 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 58 | | wordCount | 1080 | | uniqueNames | 17 | | maxNameDensity | 1.67 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | English | 1 | | London | 3 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Rory | 18 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Eva | 7 | | God | 1 | | Isolde | 9 | | Silas | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Nyx | 8 | | Shade | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Gluttony | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Silas" | | 4 | "Nyx" | | 5 | "Shade" | | 6 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Heartstone" |
| | globalScore | 0.667 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like English soil" | | 1 | "whisper that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once" | | 2 | "spirals that seemed to shift when Rory looked directly at them" | | 3 | "as if reading her thoughts" | | 4 | "looked like liquid moonlight" | | 5 | "something like old grief in their whisper" |
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| 64.59% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.354 | | wordCount | 1477 | | matches | | 0 | "not oaks, but something older, their bark smooth" | | 1 | "not carved, but grown, the wood weaving itself into an archway" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 44 | | mean | 33.57 | | std | 20.2 | | cv | 0.602 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 55 | | 1 | 5 | | 2 | 42 | | 3 | 79 | | 4 | 26 | | 5 | 53 | | 6 | 37 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 60 | | 9 | 31 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 80 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 35 | | 14 | 37 | | 15 | 31 | | 16 | 64 | | 17 | 31 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 44 | | 22 | 51 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 51 | | 26 | 34 | | 27 | 31 | | 28 | 48 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 68 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 44 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 58 | | 36 | 33 | | 37 | 41 | | 38 | 26 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 48 | | 41 | 36 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 20 |
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| 96.38% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "was carpeted" | | 1 | "was carved" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 181 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 97 | | ratio | 0.103 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory felt the air change before she saw anything—a shift in pressure that pressed against her eardrums, then released with a soft pop." | | 1 | "Not frost—it was too warm for that, the late autumn air carrying the scent of honey and something floral she couldn't name." | | 2 | "In the daylight of the park, their form had been barely visible—a dark smudge against the trees." | | 3 | "Rory exchanged a glance with the third member of their group—Eva, who had insisted on coming despite Rory's protests." | | 4 | "Trees surrounded the space—not oaks, but something older, their bark smooth and pale as bone, their leaves a deep violet that rustled without wind." | | 5 | "The ground was carpeted in flowers—wild roses, bluebells, foxgloves, blooms that shouldn't exist in the same season, let alone the same soil." | | 6 | "Rory noticed that—the Shade's shadow fell sharp and dark across the flowers, while the flowers themselves cast none." | | 7 | "The water didn't reflect the amber sky—it reflected a star-filled night, deep and infinite." | | 8 | "A door formed—not carved, but grown, the wood weaving itself into an archway that opened onto a path descending into darkness." | | 9 | "The scent of roasting meat grew stronger, layered now with spices she couldn't identify—something sharp and floral, something rich and savory, something that made her mouth water despite herself." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1096 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 33 | | adverbRatio | 0.030109489051094892 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004562043795620438 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 97 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 97 | | mean | 15.23 | | std | 9.79 | | cv | 0.643 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 32 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 24 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 31 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 31 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 35 | | 19 | 25 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 24 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 32 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 22 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 24 | | 38 | 21 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 26 | | 47 | 23 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 76.63% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.4845360824742268 | | totalSentences | 97 | | uniqueOpeners | 47 | |
| 48.31% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, it made her stomach" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 13 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "Their voice emerged from the" | | 1 | "She stepped forward." | | 2 | "She moved between two of" | | 3 | "Their colors were too vivid," | | 4 | "It came from everywhere, soft" | | 5 | "They passed a pool of" | | 6 | "She felt an almost overwhelming" | | 7 | "She pressed her palm to" | | 8 | "She thought of Evan's fists," | | 9 | "It should have been comforting." | | 10 | "She reached into the folds" | | 11 | "It slid down her throat" | | 12 | "She stepped through the doorway." |
| | ratio | 0.188 | |
| 39.71% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 58 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory felt the air change" | | 1 | "The path through Richmond Park" | | 2 | "The grass had turned silver." | | 3 | "Each blade caught the strange" | | 4 | "Their voice emerged from the" | | 5 | "Here, under the amber-gold sky" | | 6 | "Rory's hand drifted to the" | | 7 | "The crimson gem pulsed with" | | 8 | "Isolde's voice came from ahead," | | 9 | "The Half-Fae woman stood at" | | 10 | "Rory exchanged a glance with" | | 11 | "Eva's hand rested on the" | | 12 | "Isolde turned, and for a" | | 13 | "Rory thought of the flat" | | 14 | "London felt very far away." | | 15 | "She stepped forward." | | 16 | "The clearing opened around them" | | 17 | "Trees surrounded the space—not oaks," | | 18 | "Nyx said, their whisper carrying" | | 19 | "Eva's voice was sharp, her" |
| | ratio | 0.841 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 20.91% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Here, under the amber-gold sky that didn't belong to London, they stood in sharp relief, a humanoid cutout of deepest black with twin points of violet where the…" | | 1 | "Trees surrounded the space—not oaks, but something older, their bark smooth and pale as bone, their leaves a deep violet that rustled without wind." | | 2 | "Isolde smiled, and there was something ancient in that expression, something that reminded Rory of deep water and older forests." | | 3 | "The ground was carpeted in flowers—wild roses, bluebells, foxgloves, blooms that shouldn't exist in the same season, let alone the same soil." | | 4 | "Butterflies with wings like stained glass drifted between them, leaving trails of golden dust that hung in the air for long moments before dissipating." | | 5 | "She thought of Evan's fists, of the flat in London that wasn't really home, of the growing certainty that something dark was moving beneath the surface of the w…" | | 6 | "The scent of roasting meat grew stronger, layered now with spices she couldn't identify—something sharp and floral, something rich and savory, something that ma…" |
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| 69.44% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 18 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx said, their whisper carrying a note of warning" | | 1 | "Nyx said, as if reading her thoughts" |
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| 66.67% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Eva muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "Isolde continued (continue)" | | 2 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 36 | | tagDensity | 0.306 | | leniency | 0.611 | | rawRatio | 0.273 | | effectiveRatio | 0.167 | |