| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said aloud [aloud]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 30 | | tagDensity | 0.3 | | leniency | 0.6 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.067 | |
| 88.24% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1276 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "perfectly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 60.82% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1276 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "perfect" | | 2 | "silk" | | 3 | "flicked" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "throbbed" | | 6 | "depths" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "flickered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 118 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 118 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 139 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 77.90% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 13 | | markdownWords | 79 | | totalWords | 1294 | | ratio | 0.061 | | matches | | 0 | "That scent is fermenting honey and dying flowers. It masks worse things beneath." | | 1 | "The feasting halls," | | 2 | "Prince Belphegor’s domain. His kitchens never close." | | 3 | "He runs an empire of excess. There’s a difference." | | 4 | "We crossed their threshold uninvited," | | 5 | "Hospitality hasn’t been offered. We’re not guests. We’re ingredients." | | 6 | "Manipulate you," | | 7 | "Yes." | | 8 | "The trees are cultivated souls," | | 9 | "They were once gluttons. Now they feed others forever. An elegant punishment." | | 10 | "Demons appreciate irony." | | 11 | "Malphora." | | 12 | "The tree knows you. It knows what you carry." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 16 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 67.73% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 55 | | wordCount | 1094 | | uniqueNames | 18 | | maxNameDensity | 1.65 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 18 | | Shadow | 2 | | Isolde | 11 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Veil | 1 | | Covent | 1 | | Garden | 1 | | Nyx | 7 | | Belphegor | 1 | | Seer | 2 | | Ahead | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | One | 1 | | Surprise | 1 | | London | 1 | | Feast | 1 | | Halls | 1 | | Dymas | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Shadow" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Heartstone" | | 4 | "Nyx" | | 5 | "Belphegor" | | 6 | "Seer" | | 7 | "Dymas" |
| | places | | 0 | "Veil" | | 1 | "Covent" | | 2 | "Garden" | | 3 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.677 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1294 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 139 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 62 | | mean | 20.87 | | std | 17.11 | | cv | 0.82 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 28 | | 1 | 3 | | 2 | 41 | | 3 | 48 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 45 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 58 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 40 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 23 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 38 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 42 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 57 | | 25 | 35 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 45 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 36 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 44 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 37 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 25 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 33 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 34 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 51 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 52 |
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| 96.34% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | 0 | "been offered" | | 1 | "were wrapped" | | 2 | "was ridged" |
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| 96.91% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 194 | | matches | | 0 | "was working" | | 1 | "was blazing" | | 2 | "was not just glowing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 139 | | ratio | 0.086 | | matches | | 0 | "The air hit Rory first — sweet and cloying, like overripe fruit left too long in the sun." | | 1 | "Her silver hair caught light that shouldn’t have existed — there was no sun here, only that constant warm glow pressing down from everywhere at once." | | 2 | "They’d stepped through a tear in the Veil near Covent Garden — a jagged wound in reality that Nyx had sensed, Isolde had confirmed, and Rory had been stupid enough to agree to investigate." | | 3 | "A river cut through the valley — but it ran thick and slow, more syrup than water, catching the amber light and throwing it back in ribbons of gold and crimson." | | 4 | "The grass felt wrong under Rory’s boots — too soft, like walking on silk instead of vegetation." | | 5 | "Rory felt it then — the weight of observation." | | 6 | "She’d stopped at the edge of a courtyard that Rory hadn’t noticed materializing from the landscape — flagstones of polished obsidian, arranged in concentric circles around a fountain that flowed with something too thick to be water." | | 7 | "And the fruit —" | | 8 | "One of the branches dipped toward them as they passed — offering, Rory realized with sick fascination, a perfectly ripe fig." | | 9 | "Unlike the other trees, this one was enormous and genuinely ancient — gnarled bark thick with age, branches spreading like a cathedral ceiling overhead." | | 10 | "Rory winced and pulled it free of her shirt, and the crimson gem was not just glowing now — it was blazing, throwing red light across the clearing, painting the ancient oak in shades of blood and wine." | | 11 | "The violet light swallowed them whole — and the journey downward began, roots like tunnels, soil that wasn’t soil, the distant sound of something vast breathing in the darkness below." |
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| 96.29% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1085 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 48 | | adverbRatio | 0.04423963133640553 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011981566820276499 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 139 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 139 | | mean | 9.31 | | std | 7.97 | | cv | 0.856 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 3 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 26 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 34 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 31 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 24 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 66.19% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.45323741007194246 | | totalSentences | 139 | | uniqueOpeners | 63 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "Even the syrupy river seemed" | | 1 | "Just a suggestion of features" | | 2 | "Deeply, impossibly old." | | 3 | "Then the bark shifted, opening" |
| | ratio | 0.039 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 29 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "She pressed the back of" | | 1 | "It masks worse things beneath.*" | | 2 | "Her silver hair caught light" | | 3 | "It pulsed, hot and steady," | | 4 | "They’d stepped through a tear" | | 5 | "She stopped watching them after" | | 6 | "Their form had grown sharper" | | 7 | "His kitchens never close.*" | | 8 | "*He runs an empire of" | | 9 | "*We crossed their threshold uninvited,*" | | 10 | "We’re not guests." | | 11 | "She’d stopped at the edge" | | 12 | "Her throat was suddenly very" | | 13 | "she said aloud, more to" | | 14 | "It wore a chef’s apron" | | 15 | "It didn’t seem to see" | | 16 | "It passed through the colonnade" | | 17 | "They circled the courtyard, giving" | | 18 | "Their bark was ridged like" | | 19 | "Their roots pulsed with sluggish" |
| | ratio | 0.282 | |
| 57.09% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 83 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "The air hit Rory first" | | 1 | "She pressed the back of" | | 2 | "Nyx shifted beside her, their" | | 3 | "The Shadow’s voice slipped through" | | 4 | "*That scent is fermenting honey" | | 5 | "It masks worse things beneath.*" | | 6 | "Isolde glided ahead without leaving" | | 7 | "Her silver hair caught light" | | 8 | "Rory’s fingers found the Heartstone" | | 9 | "It pulsed, hot and steady," | | 10 | "They’d stepped through a tear" | | 11 | "The pendant had nearly burned" | | 12 | "Vineyards stretched in impossible spirals" | | 13 | "Orchards marched in perfect geometric" | | 14 | "A river cut through the" | | 15 | "The grass felt wrong under" | | 16 | "She stopped watching them after" | | 17 | "A sound rolled across the" | | 18 | "*The feasting halls,* Nyx murmured." | | 19 | "Their form had grown sharper" |
| | ratio | 0.806 | |
| 97.09% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "Now they stood on a" | | 1 | "Now they feed others forever." |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Her silver hair caught light that shouldn’t have existed — there was no sun here, only that constant warm glow pressing down from everywhere at once." | | 1 | "Orchards marched in perfect geometric patterns, their branches bending under fruit that glistened wetly." | | 2 | "The path curved around an orchard where pomegranates cracked open on their own, spilling seeds that wriggled like maggots before burrowing into the soil." | | 3 | "She’d stopped at the edge of a courtyard that Rory hadn’t noticed materializing from the landscape — flagstones of polished obsidian, arranged in concentric cir…" | | 4 | "It wore a chef’s apron over skin the color of old parchment, and its hands were wrapped around a cleaver that dripped something dark." | | 5 | "It passed through the colonnade and disappeared into a doorway that exhaled steam and screaming." | | 6 | "Then the bark shifted, opening seams that weren’t meant for human eyes, revealing a hollow space within that flickered with violet light." | | 7 | "The violet light swallowed them whole — and the journey downward began, roots like tunnels, soil that wasn’t soil, the distant sound of something vast breathing…" |
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| 69.44% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she said aloud, more to herself than anyone" |
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| 16.67% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Isolde corrected (correct)" | | 2 | "Isolde breathed (breathe)" | | 3 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 30 | | tagDensity | 0.267 | | leniency | 0.533 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.267 | |