Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2GZQQK6QDEK582DSA3DB6N

Run Details

Duration:
34.7s
Cost:
$0.000747
Provider:
DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The neon-green sign above The Raven’s Nest hummed against the damp Soho evening, casting a sickly glow on the pavement. Inside, the air was thick with the scent of old wood, spilled ale, and the ghosts of a hundred quiet deals. Silas Blackwood stood behind the bar, polishing a glass with a rag that had seen better decades. His limp flared tonight, a dull throb in his left knee that promised rain by morning. The door swung open, bringing a gust of traffic noise and exhaust. A man hesitated on the threshold, silhouetted against the streetlight. Silas didn’t look up at first—he’d learned long ago that most entrances meant nothing. But the man didn’t move toward the counter. He stood there, scanning the room like he was counting exits and threats by instinct. Silas set the glass down. The rag hung from his fingers. The man stepped forward, and the dim light caught his face—hollow cheeks, a nose that had been broken more than once and set badly, eyes that had gone from calculating to haunted. He wore a cheap raincoat, frayed at the cuffs. His posture had lost its old knife-edge. “Marcus.” The name came out flat, but something tightened in Silas’ chest. Marcus Reid stopped a few feet from the bar. He tried a smile that didn’t reach his eyes. “Si. You look… older.” Silas picked up another glass, more to have something to do with his hands. “I am older. So are you. You look like you’ve been sleeping in your car.” “Not far off.” Marcus slid onto a stool, the leather creaking. “You got anything that’ll burn the last five years out of my throat?” Silas poured two fingers of single malt, slid it across the worn oak. “On the house.” Marcus took it, didn’t sip. He just held the glass, watching the amber liquid sway. The bar was quiet—only a couple in the corner, heads bent together, and an old man nursing a pint near the window. The jukebox played something low and melancholy that Silas couldn’t name. “I heard you got out after Prague,” Marcus said finally. “Heard you opened this place.” “Word travels.” “Word travels when you know where to listen.” Marcus took a drink this time, a long pull that emptied half the glass. He set it down with a thud. “I don’t listen much anymore. Got tired of hearing the things I didn’t want to know.” Silas leaned his forearms on the bar, letting his weight settle. The knee complained. “What happened to you, Marcus? Last I saw, you were Directorate liaison. You had a wife. A garden. You used to send me photos of your tomatoes.” Marcus laughed, but it was a dry, broken sound. “Gone. All of it. The tomatoes went first—some blight. Then the wife. Then the job. In that order, more or less.” “They fired you?” “I quit. Walked out one morning, left my badge on the desk, and didn’t look back.” He finished the whisky, pushed the glass toward Silas for another. “You know what they were asking me to do, Si. The new protocols. Extraction without oversight. Renditions in the gray zones. I was good at it—too good. That was the problem.” Silas poured a second measure. “You always had a conscience. I told you it’d get you killed.” “Didn’t kill me. Just hollowed me out.” Marcus held up the fresh glass, not drinking. “You, on the other hand. You always seemed comfortable with the gray.” “Comfortable?” Silas touched the signet ring on his right hand, turned it once. “I learned to live in it. There’s a difference. I did what I had to, and when I couldn’t stand the weight anymore, I found a way to set it down. This bar—it’s a kind of penance. A place where people come to forget. And I help them.” “Is that what you think you’re doing?” Marcus’ eyes sharpened, a flicker of the old operative. “You’re not helping anyone forget, Silas. You’re just hiding in plain sight. Same as me, only your hiding place has better whiskey.” The accusation hung in the air. Silas felt the familiar heat rise in his chest, the quick temper he’d learned to leash over decades. But he held it. He breathed. He saw the lines in Marcus’ face, the tremor in his hand when he lifted the glass. “Maybe,” Silas said. “But I still sleep at night.” “Do you?” Marcus met his gaze. “Do you really? Or do you lie awake replaying the ones you couldn’t save? Like that asset in Minsk. The girl in the safe house. The one you told to stay put, and she didn’t.” Silas’ hand stilled on the rag. The name came back—a whisper in a language he’d tried to forget. He’d been thirty-three then, still fast, still sure. He’d given an order. She’d disobeyed. Her body had washed up three days later in the Dnieper. “That was a long time ago,” Silas said quietly. “It’s always a long time ago,” Marcus said. “That’s the point. The past doesn’t get shorter. It just gets heavier.” They sat in silence. The jukebox clicked, fell silent. The couple in the corner rose and left, the door sighing shut behind them. The old man at the window had fallen asleep, head on the table. Silas poured himself a drink now. He didn’t usually, but tonight the rules bent. “I heard about your knee,” Marcus said. “Prague. Bad business.” “I got careless.” “No. You got betrayed. Same thing happened to me, in the end. Someone I trusted decided I was a liability. Fed me bad intel. Sent me into a room that was wired to the ceiling.” Marcus paused, rubbed his face. “I got out. Barely. But I left something in that room. Part of myself. You ever feel like that? Like you’re walking around with a piece missing?” Silas nodded slowly. “Every day.” “I thought coming here might help. Seeing you. Someone who knew me before.” Marcus stared at his glass. “But you’re not really here either, are you? You’re still back in Prague, or Minsk, or that alley in Istanbul. We’re both ghosts propped up in the present.” “Then why come?” Marcus shrugged. “Because I’m tired of being alone with it. And you’re the only one who’d understand without me having to explain.” Silas let that settle. He thought about the years before the bar, before the knee, when he’d believed in something—country, justice, the thin line between order and chaos. Now he believed in rent, whiskey suppliers, and not letting the past pull him under. But standing here, looking at Marcus, he felt the undertow. “You could stay,” Silas said. “I need a barman on Fridays. It’s not much, but it’s a place to hang your coat.” Marcus looked up, surprise flickering across his worn face. “You serious?” “I don’t offer things I don’t mean.” A long pause. Then Marcus nodded, once. “Alright. I’ll think about it.” Silas extended his hand across the bar. Marcus took it. The grip was still strong, still capable, but there was a tremor in it, a hesitation that hadn’t been there twenty years ago. “You know,” Marcus said, letting go, “when we were young, I thought we’d be the ones to change things. Fix the system from the inside. Make a difference.” Silas shook his head. “We did make a difference. Just not the one we intended.” Marcus laughed again, but this time it had a little warmth in it, like embers stirred in ash. “Same old Silas. Always the realist.” “And you always the idealist. Look where it got us.” “Here,” Marcus said. “It got us here. Sitting in a Soho bar, drinking your good whiskey, pretending we’re just two old friends catching up.” Silas raised his glass. “Then let’s pretend. For tonight, at least.” They drank. The rain started, a soft patter against the windows, washing the neon glow into streaks of green. The old man at the window stirred, muttered in his sleep, and settled again. Outside, London hummed on, indifferent to the two ghosts leaning into the warmth of the bar. And for a moment, the weight of the years felt almost bearable.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Marcus said finally [finally]"
1"Silas said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.346
leniency0.692
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.077
89.08% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1374
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"really"
count2
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"slowly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
49.05% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1374
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"throb"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"calculating"
count1
3
word"weight"
count3
4
word"comfortable"
count2
5
word"flicker"
count1
6
word"familiar"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"warmth"
count2
highlights
0"throb"
1"scanning"
2"calculating"
3"weight"
4"comfortable"
5"flicker"
6"familiar"
7"whisper"
8"silence"
9"warmth"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"the air was thick with"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences80
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences80
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences116
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen49
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1366
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount732
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity2.73
worstName"Marcus"
maxWindowNameDensity6
worstWindowName"Marcus"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Blackwood1
Marcus20
Reid1
Silas20
Dnieper1
London1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Blackwood"
3"Marcus"
4"Reid"
5"Silas"
places
0"Soho"
1"Dnieper"
2"London"
globalScore0.134
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences49
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.732
wordCount1366
matches
0"not much, but it’s a place to hang your coat"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences116
matches
0"let that settle"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean27.32
std18.82
cv0.689
sampleLengths
074
159
211
348
412
522
629
724
816
948
1015
112
1245
1341
1430
153
1658
1717
1827
1961
2038
2147
229
2341
2443
259
2620
2736
2814
2910
303
3167
325
3346
343
3522
3653
3722
3811
397
4012
4133
4228
4315
4424
4510
4624
4711
4849
4912
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"been broken"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs139
matches
0"was counting"
19.70% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences116
ratio0.043
matches
0"Silas didn’t look up at first—he’d learned long ago that most entrances meant nothing."
1"The man stepped forward, and the dim light caught his face—hollow cheeks, a nose that had been broken more than once and set badly, eyes that had gone from calculating to haunted."
2"The bar was quiet—only a couple in the corner, heads bent together, and an old man nursing a pint near the window."
3"The name came back—a whisper in a language he’d tried to forget."
4"He thought about the years before the bar, before the knee, when he’d believed in something—country, justice, the thin line between order and chaos."
98.08% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount711
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.04219409282700422
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.009845288326300985
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences116
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences116
mean11.78
std8.71
cv0.74
sampleLengths
020
121
217
316
412
510
614
78
815
95
106
1132
129
137
1412
159
169
174
1814
1915
2011
2113
2213
233
245
2510
2622
2711
2810
295
302
3122
327
3316
3411
353
3627
379
3821
393
4027
4131
425
4312
4415
4512
4613
4748
4816
4922
47.41% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.33620689655172414
totalSentences116
uniqueOpeners39
46.95% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences71
matches
0"Then Marcus nodded, once."
ratio0.014
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences71
matches
0"His limp flared tonight, a"
1"He stood there, scanning the"
2"He wore a cheap raincoat,"
3"His posture had lost its"
4"He tried a smile that"
5"He just held the glass,"
6"He set it down with"
7"He finished the whisky, pushed"
8"He saw the lines in"
9"He’d been thirty-three then, still"
10"He’d given an order."
11"Her body had washed up"
12"They sat in silence."
13"He didn’t usually, but tonight"
14"He thought about the years"
ratio0.211
16.34% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences71
matches
0"The neon-green sign above The"
1"Silas Blackwood stood behind the"
2"His limp flared tonight, a"
3"The door swung open, bringing"
4"A man hesitated on the"
5"Silas didn’t look up at"
6"He stood there, scanning the"
7"Silas set the glass down."
8"The rag hung from his"
9"The man stepped forward, and"
10"He wore a cheap raincoat,"
11"His posture had lost its"
12"The name came out flat,"
13"Marcus Reid stopped a few"
14"He tried a smile that"
15"Silas picked up another glass,"
16"Marcus slid onto a stool,"
17"Silas poured two fingers of"
18"Marcus took it, didn’t sip."
19"He just held the glass,"
ratio0.887
70.42% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences71
matches
0"Now he believed in rent,"
ratio0.014
68.97% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Silas Blackwood stood behind the bar, polishing a glass with a rag that had seen better decades."
1"His limp flared tonight, a dull throb in his left knee that promised rain by morning."
2"The man stepped forward, and the dim light caught his face—hollow cheeks, a nose that had been broken more than once and set badly, eyes that had gone from calc…"
69.44% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Marcus slid, the leather creaking"
1"Marcus held up, not drinking"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.154
leniency0.308
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.7374%