Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2GZX1NCAN9DGA9WHZS7185

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Duration:
32.1s
Cost:
$0.000441
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DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain had turned Soho into a mirror. Every streetlamp doubled itself in the wet asphalt, and the neon signs bled color across the puddles like wounds. Detective Harlow Quinn ran with her shoulders low and her breath coming in measured bursts, the soles of her brogues slapping against the slick pavement. Twenty yards ahead, the figure in the dark hoodie cut left onto Dean Street. Quinn had been watching the bar for three hours. The Raven's Nest, with its sickly green sign and its blacked-out windows. She'd clocked the exchange from the doorway of a closed tailor's shop: a leather satchel passed from a nervous man to the hooded figure, cash visible in the fold. Nothing she could arrest on, not yet. But enough to follow. The suspect had bolted the second Quinn stepped out of the shadows. She was faster. Eighteen years on the force, three of them as a detective, and she still ran five miles every morning before roll call. Her lungs were good. Her legs were good. The worn leather watch on her left wrist was a reminder: Morris had given it to her three weeks before he died in that warehouse. She never took it off. The suspect took a sharp turn into an alley. Quinn followed without hesitation, her right hand brushing the grip of her service weapon. The alley was narrow, choked with dumpsters and the greasy smell of old frying oil. Rain funneled through a broken gutter, hammering a rusted fire escape. The hooded figure was climbing. Quinn swore under her breath. Fire escapes were unstable, unpredictable. She'd broken a rib on one two years ago chasing a pickpocket in Whitechapel. But she didn't slow down. She grabbed the bottom ladder and hauled herself up, metal screeching against brick. Four flights. The suspect moved like something that knew the architecture intimately—feet finding rungs without looking, hands gripping rusted railings without slipping. Quinn lost sight of them for a moment as they scrambled onto the roof. She pulled herself up over the parapet, rain streaming into her eyes. London spread out below her, a grid of lights and wet darkness. The suspect was already crossing to the far edge of the building, moving toward a fire escape on the opposite side that led down to a smaller street. Quinn followed. Her shoes skidded on the wet tar. She grabbed a satellite dish to steady herself, the metal cold and unforgiving. The suspect dropped over the edge, and Quinn heard the clang of their feet hitting the iron landing two floors down. She reached the edge and looked. The street below was empty. No—a grate in the pavement, half-rolled back. A maintenance entrance, or something else. She went down the fire escape two steps at a time, her hands slipping on the wet rails. She hit the ground and drew her weapon, a Glock 17, holding it low and ready. The grate was open, revealing a shaft with a ladder bolted to the concrete wall. A faint light flickered from below. Voices. Murmurs. The smell of damp earth and incense. Quinn had heard rumors. Whispers from informants and former colleagues who'd gone off the grid. A market that moved with the full moon, hidden in the abandoned spaces beneath the city. She'd dismissed it as folklore, the kind of thing tired cops tell each other after third shift. This was the full moon. She holstered her weapon. Unwise to go into that with a gun drawn; she'd lose the tactical advantage, announce herself as hostile. Better to follow, observe, gather evidence. She checked her watch: 11:47 PM. Backup would take at least twenty minutes to get here, and she hadn't radioed her location—too much noise, too sloppy. The suspect was down there. The satchel was down there. Whatever the exchange was, it was happening now. Quinn took the ladder. The shaft went deep. Forty feet, maybe fifty. The light grew stronger as she descended, and the sounds resolved into a low hum of voices, footsteps, the clink of glass and metal. She stepped off the ladder onto a platform that had once been a Tube station platform—tiled walls, arched ceiling, tracks long since removed. But instead of empty darkness, the space was alive. Stalls lined the walls. Tables covered with velvet cloths, candles, strange trinkets that glowed or smoked or moved on their own. A man with a necklace of animal skulls sold vials of amber liquid. A woman with silver stitches across her mouth laid out tarot cards that shifted pattern when Quinn blinked. The air was thick with incense, with the weight of something ancient and indifferent. The suspect was thirty feet ahead, weaving through the crowd. Quinn pushed after them, keeping her head down, trying to look like she belonged. She didn't have a bone token—she didn't even know what that was—but no one stopped her. They were too busy, too absorbed in their own transactions. The suspect turned a corner into a narrower passage, away from the main market floor. Quinn followed, her hand brushing the wall. The tiles gave way to rough brick, then to exposed earth and rock. The voices grew quieter. A door, steel-reinforced, stood at the end of the passage. The suspect knocked—three quick, two slow. A slot opened, a pair of eyes scanned them, and the door swung inward. Quinn stopped. She stood in the wet darkness, rain still dripping from her hair, her heart hammering against her ribs. The door was a demarcation. She knew—with the certainty that came from eighteen years of chasing monsters, both human and otherwise—that whatever lay beyond that door was not something she could unsee. Not something the department would ever authorize. But Morris had seen something, hadn't he? Before he died in that warehouse. He'd whispered about lights, about a door that opened into somewhere else. She'd thought it was shock, confusion. She wasn't sure anymore. The suspect was inside now. The satchel was inside. And Quinn was standing in a flooded tunnel beneath Camden, wearing a leather jacket and a badge that meant nothing down here. She checked her watch. 11:52 PM. She reached for the door and knocked.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1042
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
56.81% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1042
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"reminder"
count1
2
word"streaming"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"resolved"
count1
5
word"footsteps"
count1
6
word"velvet"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"scanned"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"reminder"
2"streaming"
3"flickered"
4"resolved"
5"footsteps"
6"velvet"
7"weight"
8"scanned"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"The air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences98
matches(empty)
99.13% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences98
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences98
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1033
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
77.40% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount1033
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.45
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Harlow1
Quinn15
Dean1
Street1
Raven1
Nest1
Morris2
Whitechapel1
Glock1
Tube1
Camden1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Raven"
3"Morris"
4"Camden"
places
0"Soho"
1"Dean"
2"Street"
3"Whitechapel"
globalScore0.774
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1033
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean33.32
std22.2
cv0.666
sampleLengths
052
114
261
312
463
549
65
742
848
940
102
1147
1218
1364
1448
155
1654
1718
184
1964
2066
2150
2239
2330
242
2557
2631
274
2831
296
307
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
44.96% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs172
matches
0"was climbing"
1"was already crossing"
2"was happening"
3"was standing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences98
ratio0.082
matches
0"The suspect moved like something that knew the architecture intimately—feet finding rungs without looking, hands gripping rusted railings without slipping."
1"No—a grate in the pavement, half-rolled back."
2"Unwise to go into that with a gun drawn; she'd lose the tactical advantage, announce herself as hostile."
3"Backup would take at least twenty minutes to get here, and she hadn't radioed her location—too much noise, too sloppy."
4"She stepped off the ladder onto a platform that had once been a Tube station platform—tiled walls, arched ceiling, tracks long since removed."
5"She didn't have a bone token—she didn't even know what that was—but no one stopped her."
6"The suspect knocked—three quick, two slow."
7"She knew—with the certainty that came from eighteen years of chasing monsters, both human and otherwise—that whatever lay beyond that door was not something she could unsee."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1045
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.023923444976076555
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0019138755980861245
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences98
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences98
mean10.54
std6.84
cv0.648
sampleLengths
08
119
225
314
49
512
629
77
84
912
103
1122
124
134
1425
155
169
1714
1815
1911
205
215
225
2314
245
2513
262
2720
2814
2912
3012
3128
322
337
3413
3521
366
375
387
396
4018
4116
4215
436
441
451
467
474
4811
4916
47.96% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.336734693877551
totalSentences98
uniqueOpeners33
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences92
matches
0"She'd clocked the exchange from"
1"She was faster."
2"Her lungs were good."
3"Her legs were good."
4"She never took it off."
5"She'd broken a rib on"
6"She grabbed the bottom ladder"
7"She pulled herself up over"
8"Her shoes skidded on the"
9"She grabbed a satellite dish"
10"She reached the edge and"
11"She went down the fire"
12"She hit the ground and"
13"She'd dismissed it as folklore,"
14"She holstered her weapon."
15"She checked her watch: 11:47"
16"She stepped off the ladder"
17"She didn't have a bone"
18"They were too busy, too"
19"She stood in the wet"
ratio0.283
36.09% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount78
totalSentences92
matches
0"The rain had turned Soho"
1"Every streetlamp doubled itself in"
2"Detective Harlow Quinn ran with"
3"Quinn had been watching the"
4"The Raven's Nest, with its"
5"She'd clocked the exchange from"
6"Nothing she could arrest on,"
7"The suspect had bolted the"
8"She was faster."
9"Her lungs were good."
10"Her legs were good."
11"The worn leather watch on"
12"She never took it off."
13"The suspect took a sharp"
14"Quinn followed without hesitation, her"
15"The alley was narrow, choked"
16"Rain funneled through a broken"
17"The hooded figure was climbing."
18"Quinn swore under her breath."
19"She'd broken a rib on"
ratio0.848
54.35% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences92
matches
0"Before he died in that"
ratio0.011
49.69% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn ran with her shoulders low and her breath coming in measured bursts, the soles of her brogues slapping against the slick pavement."
1"The suspect moved like something that knew the architecture intimately—feet finding rungs without looking, hands gripping rusted railings without slipping."
2"The suspect was already crossing to the far edge of the building, moving toward a fire escape on the opposite side that led down to a smaller street."
3"A market that moved with the full moon, hidden in the abandoned spaces beneath the city."
4"She stood in the wet darkness, rain still dripping from her hair, her heart hammering against her ribs."
5"She knew—with the certainty that came from eighteen years of chasing monsters, both human and otherwise—that whatever lay beyond that door was not something she…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
82.2127%