Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2H1HR99QB7881KMEY0PTJ0

Run Details

Duration:
3m 4s
Cost:
$0.028163
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under the strip of police tape that fluttered across the service entrance of the old Camden tube station, her torch beam slicing through the dark like a blade. The air was thick with60 of rust and something else—ozone, maybe, or the copper tang of old blood. She checked her worn leather watch. 02:17. Eighteen minutes since the call. Her close-cropped salt-and-pepper hair didn't stir in the stale24 breeze, and her sharp jaw was set, the face of someone who'd learned that every crime scene was a liar waiting to be caught out. A PC she didn't recognise stood by the old tracks,16 pale under the emergency lights that had been strung along the platform. "Detective Quinn. The body's this way." She followed, her footsteps silent on the cracked24 tiles. The platform stretched ahead, columns disappearing into24 blackness. Graffiti covered the walls, layer upon layer, but her eyes picked out24 patterns that didn't fit—sigils sprayed in24 angular scripts,24 that24 seemed to24 shimmer when her torch hit them at the wrong angle. The body lay near the24 edge, a man face-down with his arms24 out as if he'd been running when he fell. DS Thacker was already crouched beside him, his bulk24 a dark outline. When he looked up, his face24 carried24 that24 expression he always wore when he'd already decided the case was simple. "Quinn." He gestured. "Possible24 mugging. No wallet, no ID. Single stab wound to the back,24 probably a2424. I've seen a dozen this month. Nothing to24 it." Harlow didn't answer. She walked the perimeter first. Her torch caught24 the24 marks on the24 ground—a scuffle, yes, but the scrapes were too24 long, as if the body had been dragged not from the entrance but toward it. She crouched. The24 dust had24 settled in24 patterns that suggested24 something24 had24 moved through here before the body had fallen—something2424 that left no footprints of its own. "Have you checked his pockets?" she asked. "Standard procedure. Empty. They took everything." She24 lifted the man's2424 coat. The wool was24 expensive,24 a24. His shoes were leather-soled,24. This24 was no24 random24. She turned the body. In the24 man's left hand, rigid with rigor mortis,24 something white and curved. She pried the fingers open. A bone token, no bigger than a shilling, carved with symbols that her mind tried to reject as24 something24 her eyes couldn't focus on. The edges were24 smooth, worn by touch. Thacker leaned over her shoulder. "Looks like a game piece. Dice. Maybe24 he was a gambler." Harlow slipped the token into an evidence bag. Then her fingers found a hard shape in the man's inside pocket. She drew it out. A small brass compass, its casing thick with a patina of verdigris that had taken decades to grow. The face was etched with protective sigils—she knew that term because she'd seen markings like them before. Three years ago, in the personal effects of DS Morris after the24 that had taken him. The compass was24 warm to the touch. She clicked it open. The needle wasn't pointing north. It quivered, then swung firmly toward the far wall of the platform, a solid brick24 expanse that went nowhere. "Needle's jammed," Thacker said. "It's24 not pointing north. It's pointing at that wall." "Probably24 a factory defect. Or magnetic interference. There's old wiring everywhere down here." Harlow stood and walked toward the wall, the compass held level. The needle held true. As she neared the24 bricks, it24 wobbled, then swung24 hard right,24 as if she'd passed an invisible threshold. She took a step back. The needle returned to24 pointing past her shoulder,24 toward the24800. She24 felt a draft, impossibly cold, coming from a crack in the24 wall that should have been24 sealed. She24 turned to Thacker. "This man wasn't the victim of a random mugging. He was24 coming here. He was2424 to24 access something." Thacker24 shrugged. "It's an abandoned tube station. There was talk of turning it into a nightclub in the 90s. He could've been24 some urban explorer." "He's wearing a24 overcoat, leather shoes. He25's not24. And why's the24 wound24." She knelt by the body again, lifting the coat. The24 stab wound was24 a single24 puncture, precisely placed between the ribs,24 right into the heart. But what made her stop was the fabric around it: the wool was24 singed, the fibres24 melted into a hard24 black rim as if the24 had been24 driven through at24 a temperature that24 didn't belong to any knife. There was hardly any blood—the wound itself looked cauterized. Thacker came closer. His24 face changed when he saw it. "That's... that's not right. Maybe he fell onto24 something." "There's nothing here to fall onto. And a fall wouldn't24 cauterize." At that moment, a figure emerged from24 the shadows near the old tracks. Eva Kowalski, her red curls escaping from under a24 knitted hat, her round glasses reflecting the24 torchlight. She carried a worn leather satchel stuffed with books. The PC24 moved to stop her, but she24 held up a24 laminated badge. "Dr. Kowalski. British Museum. I was24... in the area." Harlow24 had met her once before. An occult researcher who'd consulted on a24 case involving stolen24 artifacts. The woman's face was a24 map of freckles, and she had a24 habit of tucking her hair behind her left ear when she was nervous, which she did now. Eva crouched beside the body,24 uninvited, and24 examined the24. "The token," she said,41 "is a Veil token. It's used as an entry requirement for a24 particular24... establishment." Thacker24 blinked. "What kind of establishment?" "The Veil Market. It's a... myth, mostly. A traveling black market that moves locations every full moon. They sell enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, information. I've only ever read about it in24 restricted archives." She looked up at Harlow, her green eyes24 searching. "But this token is24 real. I can feel it." Thacker snorted. "Now we're taking24 folklore as evidence?" Eva2424 straightened, tucking her hair. "I'm not24 saying it's24. I'm saying there are24 people who24 believe. Maybe24 this man was a collector of esoterica. Or a2424. He could've been killed for24 a24 item he wanted to buy. The compass is probably24 part of his collection—a24 Shade-crafted compass,24 according to24." She pointed to the24. "It's2424 worth a lot to certain24." Harlow opened the compass again. The needle still pointed toward the wall. "Dr. Kowalski, what does this compass do?" "It's called a Veil Compass. It's24 supposed to point toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal. If you believe in24 that sort of thing." "Rift like a doorway?" "Yes. Like where the Veil Market24 would open." Thacker24 laughed04. "You expect us24 to believe there's some magical24 door in that wall?" Harlow walked toward the wall, compass in hand. The needle24 pulled24 like a dog on a leash24. At the24 spot where the24 draft was strongest, right at a24 crack in the24 brick, the compass needle24 started24 circling,24. She put her palm flat against the24 wall. The stone was24 cold,24 but24 she felt24 a vibration, deep24, like a24. "The24 token allowed entry," she said24 to the24 air. "He had a token. He was2424 to enter. But someone stopped him. Someone who24 didn't want him inside." Eva2424 stepped to her side. "If it's real, the market42. The24 Market opens only24 during the24 full moon, and the location changes every month. The24 next one is supposed to be under Camden. That's what my research says. But24 you'd need a24ter. Harlow turned to Thacker. "We need to24 dust this entire wall for prints. And24 I want24. I24 want to know24." "What24 are you24 thinking?" Thacker asked. She looked at the compass, then at the24. "I think24 this man was killed because he24 knew about this place. And24 whoever killed him used a24 that24 doesn't exist24. I'm not24 saying it's magic. I'm saying24 someone24 believes24. And24 I want to know24 who." Eva24 looked at the24. "He was holding the token. The24. Maybe he24 tried to24. Harlow24 saw24. She24. She began to see what others had missed—not just a crime scene, but a24 pattern that stretched24. She24 would24. She24 held the compass. It pointed. She would24. She24. She24.
created_at"2026-04-25T14:35:47.272Z" 4/25/2026, 2:35:47 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.361
leniency0.722
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.32% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1359
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"precisely"
count1
highlights
0"precisely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
74.25% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1359
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"fluttered"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"standard"
count1
3
word"etched"
count1
4
word"quivered"
count1
5
word"firmly"
count1
6
word"magnetic"
count1
highlights
0"fluttered"
1"footsteps"
2"standard"
3"etched"
4"quivered"
5"firmly"
6"magnetic"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"The air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences100
matches
0"was nervous"
71.43% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences100
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences123
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen50
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1351
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount928
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.19
worstName"Thacker"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Harlow10
Quinn1
Camden1
Thacker11
Morris1
Kowalski1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Thacker"
3"Morris"
4"Kowalski"
places(empty)
globalScore0.907
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
51.96% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.48
wordCount1351
matches
0"not from the entrance but toward it"
1"not just a crime scene, but a24 pattern"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences123
matches
0"learned that every"
1"knew that term"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean27.02
std23.12
cv0.856
sampleLengths
096
128
250
353
426
565
67
76
818
953
1016
1175
127
1328
144
159
1613
1766
1822
1925
2012
2172
2219
2311
2452
259
2646
279
2818
296
3052
318
3259
3319
3424
354
368
3714
3857
3927
4042
4120
426
4344
4414
453
4619
478
481
491
98.25% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences100
matches
0"been dragged"
1"was etched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs165
matches
0"wasn't pointing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences123
ratio0.057
matches
0"The air was thick with60 of rust and something else—ozone, maybe, or the copper tang of old blood."
1"Graffiti covered the walls, layer upon layer, but her eyes picked out24 patterns that didn't fit—sigils sprayed in24 angular scripts,24 that24 seemed to24 shimmer when her torch hit them at the wrong angle."
2"Her torch caught24 the24 marks on the24 ground—a scuffle, yes, but the scrapes were too24 long, as if the body had been dragged not from the entrance but toward it."
3"The24 dust had24 settled in24 patterns that suggested24 something24 had24 moved through here before the body had fallen—something2424 that left no footprints of its own."
4"The face was etched with protective sigils—she knew that term because she'd seen markings like them before."
5"There was hardly any blood—the wound itself looked cauterized."
6"She began to see what others had missed—not just a crime scene, but a24 pattern that stretched24."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount947
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.023231256599788808
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.004223864836325237
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences123
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences123
mean10.98
std9.37
cv0.854
sampleLengths
032
118
26
31
45
534
622
76
89
98
1033
1121
1212
1320
143
1523
163
175
1830
192
2025
217
226
235
245
254
264
274
2813
295
3024
317
325
3311
348
3512
364
3718
3817
3916
407
414
425
4319
444
459
4613
4711
484
4918
67.76% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.4262295081967213
totalSentences122
uniqueOpeners52
82.30% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences81
matches
0"Then her fingers found a"
1"Maybe he24 tried to24."
ratio0.025
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences81
matches
0"She checked her worn leather"
1"Her close-cropped salt-and-pepper hair didn't"
2"She followed, her footsteps silent"
3"She walked the perimeter first."
4"Her torch caught24 the24 marks"
5"His shoes were leather-soled,24."
6"She turned the body."
7"She pried the fingers open."
8"She drew it out."
9"She clicked it open."
10"It quivered, then swung firmly"
11"She took a step back."
12"She knelt by the body"
13"She carried a worn leather"
14"She looked up at Harlow,"
15"She pointed to the24"
16"She put her palm flat"
17"she said24 to the24 air"
18"She looked at the compass,"
19"I'm not24 saying it's magic."
ratio0.272
27.90% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences81
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under"
1"The air was thick with60"
2"She checked her worn leather"
3"Her close-cropped salt-and-pepper hair didn't"
4"A PC she didn't recognise"
5"She followed, her footsteps silent"
6"The platform stretched ahead, columns"
7"Graffiti covered the walls, layer"
8"The body lay near the24"
9"DS Thacker was already crouched"
10"Harlow didn't answer."
11"She walked the perimeter first."
12"Her torch caught24 the24 marks"
13"The24 dust had24 settled in24"
14"She24 lifted the man's2424 coat."
15"The wool was24 expensive,24 a24."
16"His shoes were leather-soled,24."
17"This24 was no24 random24."
18"She turned the body."
19"She pried the fingers open."
ratio0.864
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
ratio0
8.93% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under the strip of police tape that fluttered across the service entrance of the old Camden tube station, her torch beam slicing t…"
1"Her close-cropped salt-and-pepper hair didn't stir in the stale24 breeze, and her sharp jaw was set, the face of someone who'd learned that every crime scene wa…"
2"Graffiti covered the walls, layer upon layer, but her eyes picked out24 patterns that didn't fit—sigils sprayed in24 angular scripts,24 that24 seemed to24 shimm…"
3"The body lay near the24 edge, a man face-down with his arms24 out as if he'd been running when he fell."
4"A small brass compass, its casing thick with a patina of verdigris that had taken decades to grow."
5"An occult researcher who'd consulted on a24 case involving stolen24 artifacts."
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She looked up, her green eyes24 searching"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.111
leniency0.222
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.2477%