Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2H2H6N47A7G9C3PZFN25NW

Run Details

Duration:
1m 41s
Cost:
$0.021175
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain had not let up in hours. It slanted through the sodium glow of the Soho backstreets, jeweling Detective Harlow Quinn’s collar and running cold rivulets down the worn leather strap of her watch. She did not adjust it. She counted seconds by the second hand, still as the brickwork that hid her, eyes fixed on the green neon sign of the Raven’s Nest across the lane. Tomás Herrera came out alone. Quinn recognized the roll of his shoulders, the quick backward glance that didn’t quite find her. He pushed his hands into his coat pockets and began walking. Not fast. Just the pace of a man who has spent years not drawing attention. She had seen him three times before, always800 always slipping away from07 away from crime scenes or clandestine meetings, always just outside the reach of a warrant. Tonight she’d decided to close that gap. She stepped from the mouth of the alley, the movement a clean shift of05 shift of weight. “Tomás Herrera.” He didn’t stop. Didn’t turn. “Metropolitan Police.” She held up her badge, though the rain blurred the lettering. “I need a word.” His shoulders hitched a fraction. Then he ran. Quinn gave chase without a shout. A shout cost breath and gifted warning. Instead, she poured her speed into the gap between them, her boots slapping the wet pavement. Herrera darted left into a pedestrian cut-through lined with overflowing bins. She gained on him, close enough to see the water darken his curly hair, to hear the sharp intake of his breathing. He knocked a bin over in her path. She hurdled it, landing10 landing in a puddle that soaked her trouser leg. The cold barely registered. She had been18 been a soldier before she was a detective. Muscles remembered what the mind had filed away. He broke from the alley onto Greek Street, swerving between a taxi and a delivery van. Quinn followed, her jaw set hard enough to ache. Herrera cast a desperate look over his shoulder and his foot slipped on the slick curb. He stumbled. She lunged. Her fingers snatched the back of his wet collar, but he twisted out, shedding the jacket in her grip. The fabric came away heavy with rain. She flung it aside and pushed on, lungs burning,06 burning, the distance expanding again. He knew these streets. He00 He led her on a serpentine path through Soho, never toward the main thoroughfares where a patrol car might intercept. Quinn began to understand he wasn’t just fleeing—he was heading somewhere. They burst into a narrow cul-de-sac behind an old textile warehouse. A dead end. Quinn allowed herself a grim half-smile. Herrera scrabbled at something in the cobblestones—a cast-iron hatch she had missed entirely. He heaved it open. A vertical shaft exhaled stale, metallic air. He swung his legs in and vanished. Quinn reached the opening and peered down. The hatch framed a rusted ladder descending into05 into darkness broken only by a faint amber flicker far below. Her common sense whispered the list of regulations: no backup, no radio confirmation, no known environment. The book said secure the perimeter and call for the tactical unit. The book had never found justice for Morris. She holstered her radio, gripped the wet ladder, and climbed down. The rungs were slick with condensation. She counted them by feel—twenty-three—before her boots met solid ground. The tunnel stretched in both directions, arched and lined with Victorian brick. Small electric lamps had been strung along the walls, throwing the space into ochre shadow. The air smelled of damp earth and something sharper, like burnt sugar and animal musk. Far ahead, the echo of running footsteps. She drew her small flashlight and moved after him. She could hear him, not just his footfalls but the ragged edge to his breathing. He was tiring. She04 She quickened her stride, the beam of her torch catching the scarred walls, the graffiti that shifted from ordinary tags to symbols she didn’t recognize—interlocking triangles, crude eyes,05 eyes, the outline of a crescent moon. The tunnel sloped downward and the brickwork gave way to04 to rougher stone. She passed a threshold marked by00 marked by two heavy iron sconces, unlit, their cups filled with something that looked like blackened00 blackened wax. The06 The burnt-sugar smell intensified. The ground leveled out and the tunnel opened into a cavern. She stopped short. It was a market. But not the sort she had ever witnessed. The cavern—no, it was an old Tube station platform, she realized, the curved ceilings and abandoned tracks unmistakable—teemed with people and light. Stalls cobbled together from salvaged wood and corrugated iron filled the platforms and the tracks alike. Colored lamps hung from03 hung haphazard14 haphazard from the arches, bathing everything in a sickly mix of amber and violet. The traders did not cry their wares; they murmured, they crooned, their voices weaving through the steam that rose from06 from bubbling cauldrons and hissing braziers. She glimpsed05 glimpsed jars of floating things, bundles of feathers that shimmered with their own04 own light,05 light,05 light, vials of liquid that boiled without flame. Quinn pressed herself against a girder, scanning the crowd. Herrera was thirty meters ahead, weaving between a knot of hooded figures and a stall hung with05 with tarnished silver amulets. He05 He limped now, protecting his left side, and05 and she could see the glint of a small Saint Christopher medallion swinging against his chest. Three years since Morris had bled out in a place much like this, in a case that had never closed, a report she had never05 never0 never been able to write with a clear head. The official line was a gang hit. She knew better. There had been05 been symbols carved into the skin of the dead, patterns she had only seen once before, in a photograph from an unsolved arson file. That same symbol now adorned a banner over the nearest stall. Her radio was dead. No signal beneath these arches. Her backup was a world away. She could retrace her steps, call in a raid, risk the market dissolving before a team could mobilize—or she could04 could go forward and grab him herself, alone. Herrera had stopped. He stood at a stall hung with dried herbs and jars of something that might have been preserved organs, his chest heaving. He turned and looked directly at her, the warm brown of his eyes04 eyes readable4 readable even at this distance. He05 He shook his head slowly. Not a threat. A warning. Quinn felt the weight of the moment and let it settle. To follow meant stepping outside every protocol, every safety net, into05 into a world that her logical mind wanted to reject but her instincts screamed to accept. She thought of Morris’s daughter at his funeral. The blank stare of a child who didn’t understand why her father wasn’t coming home. She05 She pushed off the girder and walked into the Veil Market. The air changed as she stepped over the threshold where the tunnel ended and the05 the platform began—it thickened,05 thickened, pressing against her skin like a static charge. Several of the nearest vendors stopped their transactions. A woman with entirely white irises tilted her head, nostrils flaring. A05 A boy of perhaps ten,05 ten, swathed in gray rags, watched her04 her with a smile too old for his face. Quinn ignored them. Herrera didn’t move. When she closed to three meters, he spoke. His voice carried the soft accent of Seville. “You shouldn’t be here, Detective.” “Then you shouldn’t have run.” She kept her voice level, though her heart hammered. “You don’t understand what you’re08 you’re walking into.” He gestured with his chin toward the market. “They don’t welcome your kind.” “My kind?” She05 She stopped close enough to see the scar running along his left forearm, the05 the way he held that05 that arm defensively. “You mean police?” “I mean human.” He said it without irony. “This place is not for you.” Quinn04 Quinn took another step. “Tomás Herrera, you’re under arrest for obstruction, and for questioning in connection with05 with the illegal05 illegal trade of unlicensed medical practices. You’re coming with me. Now.” A nearby trader laughed, a low, rough sound. “She’s got no token,” someone murmured. The phrase rippled outward. “No token. Bone token.” The05 The crowd began to05 to shift their attention toward the2 toward them, a ring of04 of curious and hostile faces. Quinn felt the04 change in pressure, the way the05 the06 the air now hummed with05 with a05 a barely heard vibration, like the echo of a bell rung miles away. Herrera04 Herrera took a step back,04 back,04 back,05 back, hands half-raised. “Detective Quinn. I’m not the05 the one you want. I’m just the wound-binder.05 wound-binder. But if you05 you don’t leave, you’ll become the wound.” She should have felt fear. What washed over her instead was05 was a cold clarity. This suspect05 suspect had information—not just about the unlicensed stitching, but about the symbols, about the05 the deaths that ended with0400 on an official’s desk with a stamp of “unsolved.” Morris had whispered a name—the Veil—in his final moments. She had told herself it was a hallucination born of blood loss. “Three years ago,” she said,05 said,05 said, low enough that only he could04 hear, “a detective named Morris died in a place like this. You were07 were a medic. Maybe you know something.” Herrera’s expression flickered—surprise, then grief. His medallion05 medallion caught the light. “I didn’t05 didn’t know Morris. But I’ve heard the story. That was not your fault.” It05 It was the06 was the wrong thing to00 thing to say. Quinn’s05 Quinn’s jaw tightened to granite. “Come with me. Now.” From deeper in the market, a bell tolled—deep and07 and resonant. The05 The04 The crowd rippled, and a path opened through the stalls. Approaching was04 was a tall figure in a long coat, their face06 face concealed beneath a wide-brim hat. The05 The04 The ring of vendors fell silent. Herrera hissed through his teeth. “Now you’ve done it. The05 The Warden.” Quinn’s hand went to her holster,04 holster, but she didn’t draw. The figure stopped a few yards away and lifted its head. Its eyes were not05 not0 not entirely human—there was a luminosity, a yellow cast. “Who enters without token?” the Warden asked, a voice like gravel grinding under a door. Herrera interposed himself. “She’s with me. A mistake. She was just leaving.” The Warden05 Warden05 Warden’s06 Warden’s attention didn’t shift. “A bone token is the price of passage. She has neither token nor the look of05 of a trader. State your04 your purpose.” Quinn drew herself to her full height. Military bearing. “I am Detective Harlow Quinn of the Metropolitan Police Service. I’m04 I’m2 I’m removing a suspect from your premises. Then I’ll be glad to go.” No one laughed. The silence was heavier than05 than any sound. In it, she felt the pull, the decisive fork. She could still let go of Herrera, back away, find another way. Or she could plant her feet and see what the05 the04 the world of05 of closed-case photographs truly looked like when you05 you peeled off the skin. She04 She06 She thought of Morris. She didn’t back away. “I’m taking him,” she said, and05 and the words05 words fell into the06 the02 the quiet like stones into deep water.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She05 She stopped close [close]"
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.44
leniency0.88
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.08
94.79% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1920
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
63.54% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1920
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"clandestine"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"flicker"
count1
3
word"electric"
count1
4
word"echo"
count2
5
word"footsteps"
count1
6
word"quickened"
count1
7
word"shimmered"
count1
8
word"scanning"
count1
9
word"glint"
count1
10
word"flickered"
count1
11
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"clandestine"
1"weight"
2"flicker"
3"electric"
4"echo"
5"footsteps"
6"quickened"
7"shimmered"
8"scanning"
9"glint"
10"flickered"
11"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"the weight of the moment"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences145
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences145
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences159
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1904
ratio0
matches(empty)
83.33% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"When she closed to three meters, he spoke."
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions56
wordCount1687
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity1.01
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho2
Detective1
Harlow1
Quinn17
Raven1
Nest1
Herrera13
Greek1
Street1
Morris5
Victorian1
Tube1
Saint1
Christopher1
Veil2
Market1
Seville1
Warden5
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Raven"
3"Herrera"
4"Morris"
5"Saint"
6"Christopher"
7"Warden"
places
0"Soho"
1"Greek"
2"Street"
3"Veil"
4"Market"
5"Seville"
globalScore0.996
windowScore0.833
81.19% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences109
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"quite find her"
1"looked like blackened00 blackened wax"
2"looked like when you05 you peeled off the"
42.44% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords1.576
wordCount1904
matches
0"not just his footfalls but the ragged edge to his breathing"
1"not just about the unlicensed stitching, but about the symbols, about the05 the deaths"
2"neither token nor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences159
matches
0"close that gap"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean41.39
std29.01
cv0.701
sampleLengths
068
15
276
319
45
517
68
7106
845
976
1051
1154
128
1311
1474
1596
1614
17122
1855
1983
2043
2156
2261
2312
2472
2524
2614
2721
2828
2914
3032
3173
3235
3366
3433
3526
3622
3761
3836
3915
4012
4131
4234
4359
4410
4521
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences145
matches
0"been preserved"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs288
matches
0"was heading"
1"wasn’t just fleeing"
2"wasn’t coming"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount16
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences159
ratio0.075
matches
0"Quinn began to understand he wasn’t just fleeing—he was heading somewhere."
1"Herrera scrabbled at something in the cobblestones—a cast-iron hatch she had missed entirely."
2"She counted them by feel—twenty-three—before her boots met solid ground."
3"She04 She quickened her stride, the beam of her torch catching the scarred walls, the graffiti that shifted from ordinary tags to symbols she didn’t recognize—interlocking triangles, crude eyes,05 eyes, the outline of a crescent moon."
4"The cavern—no, it was an old Tube station platform, she realized, the curved ceilings and abandoned tracks unmistakable—teemed with people and light."
5"The traders did not cry their wares; they murmured, they crooned, their voices weaving through the steam that rose from06 from bubbling cauldrons and hissing braziers."
6"She could retrace her steps, call in a raid, risk the market dissolving before a team could mobilize—or she could04 could go forward and grab him herself, alone."
7"The air changed as she stepped over the threshold where the tunnel ended and the05 the platform began—it thickened,05 thickened, pressing against her skin like a static charge."
8"This suspect05 suspect had information—not just about the unlicensed stitching, but about the symbols, about the05 the deaths that ended with0400 on an official’s desk with a stamp of “unsolved.” Morris had whispered a name—the Veil—in his final moments."
9"Herrera’s expression flickered—surprise, then grief."
10"From deeper in the market, a bell tolled—deep and07 and resonant."
11"Its eyes were not05 not0 not entirely human—there was a luminosity, a yellow cast."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1712
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount47
adverbRatio0.027453271028037383
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.008177570093457943
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences159
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences159
mean11.97
std8.35
cv0.697
sampleLengths
08
127
25
328
45
516
611
72
813
927
107
1117
122
133
142
1513
164
175
183
196
207
2116
2211
2322
248
2513
264
2711
288
2916
309
3116
322
332
3419
357
3614
374
3821
3911
4011
413
426
4313
444
457
467
477
4819
4916
56.18% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3522012578616352
totalSentences159
uniqueOpeners56
72.46% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences138
matches
0"Just the pace of a"
1"Then he ran."
2"Instead, she poured her speed"
ratio0.022
77.97% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount49
totalSentences138
matches
0"It slanted through the sodium"
1"She did not adjust it."
2"She counted seconds by the"
3"He pushed his hands into"
4"She had seen him three"
5"She stepped from the mouth"
6"He didn’t stop."
7"She held up her badge,"
8"His shoulders hitched a fraction."
9"She gained on him, close"
10"He knocked a bin over"
11"She hurdled it, landing10 landing"
12"She had been18 been a"
13"He broke from the alley"
14"Her fingers snatched the back"
15"She flung it aside and"
16"He knew these streets."
17"They burst into a narrow"
18"He heaved it open."
19"He swung his legs in"
ratio0.355
28.84% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount119
totalSentences138
matches
0"The rain had not let"
1"It slanted through the sodium"
2"She did not adjust it."
3"She counted seconds by the"
4"Tomás Herrera came out alone."
5"Quinn recognized the roll of"
6"He pushed his hands into"
7"She had seen him three"
8"Tonight she’d decided to close"
9"She stepped from the mouth"
10"He didn’t stop."
11"She held up her badge,"
12"His shoulders hitched a fraction."
13"Quinn gave chase without a"
14"A shout cost breath and"
15"Herrera darted left into a"
16"She gained on him, close"
17"He knocked a bin over"
18"She hurdled it, landing10 landing"
19"The cold barely registered."
ratio0.862
36.23% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences138
matches
0"To follow meant stepping outside"
ratio0.007
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences66
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"She hurdled it, landing10 landing in a puddle that soaked her trouser leg."
1"She04 She quickened her stride, the beam of her torch catching the scarred walls, the graffiti that shifted from ordinary tags to symbols she didn’t recognize—i…"
2"She passed a threshold marked by00 marked by two heavy iron sconces, unlit, their cups filled with something that looked like blackened00 blackened wax."
3"The traders did not cry their wares; they murmured, they crooned, their voices weaving through the steam that rose from06 from bubbling cauldrons and hissing br…"
4"She glimpsed05 glimpsed jars of floating things, bundles of feathers that shimmered with their own04 own light,05 light,05 light, vials of liquid that boiled wi…"
5"He stood at a stall hung with dried herbs and jars of something that might have been preserved organs, his chest heaving."
34.09% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"She held up, though the rain blurred the lettering"
1"She kept, though her heart hammered"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"someone murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.08
81.0778%