| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde stepped back [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 36 | | tagDensity | 0.361 | | leniency | 0.722 | | rawRatio | 0.077 | | effectiveRatio | 0.056 | |
| 95.87% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1212 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 33.99% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1212 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "chill" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "flicker" | | 6 | "perfect" | | 7 | "cascading" | | 8 | "flickered" | | 9 | "silk" | | 10 | "trembled" | | 11 | "stomach" | | 12 | "pulsed" | | 13 | "could feel" | | 14 | "fractured" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 104 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1199 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 16.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 49 | | wordCount | 785 | | uniqueNames | 18 | | maxNameDensity | 1.78 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4.5 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Tuesday | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Dymas | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Sound | 1 | | Rory | 14 | | Nyx | 8 | | Cardiff | 1 | | London | 1 | | Isolde | 11 | | Fae | 2 | | Veil | 1 | | Grove | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Blade" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Grove" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Hel" | | 4 | "Dymas" | | 5 | "Cardiff" | | 6 | "London" | | 7 | "Veil" |
| | globalScore | 0.608 | | windowScore | 0.167 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.834 | | wordCount | 1199 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 44 | | mean | 27.25 | | std | 19 | | cv | 0.697 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 42 | | 1 | 40 | | 2 | 39 | | 3 | 46 | | 4 | 45 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 40 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 48 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 53 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 69 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 24 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 42 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 46 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 32 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 62 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 46 | | 28 | 34 | | 29 | 38 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 48 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 43 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 41 | | 37 | 27 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 65 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 22 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 10 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 151 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 104 | | ratio | 0.077 | | matches | | 0 | "Its surface wasn't rough like the oak bark it mimicked—it felt smooth, almost oily, and hummed with a vibration she felt in her molars rather than her ears." | | 1 | "The gem remained cool—no pulse of warmth to signal a portal to Hel." | | 2 | "Sound carried strangely here—her words seemed to hang in the air an extra heartbeat before dispersing." | | 3 | "The path wasn’t a path—more a suggestion of a trail winding between moss-covered roots that rose and fell like the ribs of a buried giant." | | 4 | "She had no idea if they’d walked for minutes or hours when the trees opened abruptly into a circle of standing stones—older than the ones at the entrance, older than anything she’d seen in Cardiff or London." | | 5 | "It pulsed—warm, insistent." | | 6 | "Their violet eyes held no answers—only an ancient, patient wariness." | | 7 | "Isolde laughed—a sound like breaking glass." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 867 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "tall, violet-eyed silhouette." | | 1 | "beside frost-white heather." |
| | adverbCount | 29 | | adverbRatio | 0.03344867358708189 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008073817762399077 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 104 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 104 | | mean | 11.53 | | std | 9.07 | | cv | 0.787 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 28 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 26 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 25 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 37 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 62.18% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.41346153846153844 | | totalSentences | 104 | | uniqueOpeners | 43 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 15 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "Its surface wasn't rough like" | | 1 | "Their shadow-form pooled at the" | | 2 | "She didn’t whisper" | | 3 | "It carried a sound so" | | 4 | "She followed it." | | 5 | "She had no idea if" | | 6 | "They were quartz, veined with" | | 7 | "She didn't turn." | | 8 | "She’d worn it because it" | | 9 | "It didn’t reach her eyes." | | 10 | "Her gaze slid to Nyx" | | 11 | "It pulsed—warm, insistent." | | 12 | "She could feel it tugging," | | 13 | "She met Isolde’s gaze." | | 14 | "Their violet eyes held no" |
| | ratio | 0.203 | |
| 14.05% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 66 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "The air thickened as they" | | 1 | "Rory pressed her palm flat" | | 2 | "Its surface wasn't rough like" | | 3 | "Nyx’s voice came from all" | | 4 | "Their shadow-form pooled at the" | | 5 | "The grove opened before them" | | 6 | "Wildflowers bloomed in clusters that" | | 7 | "The grass underfoot felt too" | | 8 | "Rory touched the Heartstone Pendant" | | 9 | "The gem remained cool—no pulse" | | 10 | "That at least meant they" | | 11 | "She didn’t whisper" | | 12 | "Sound carried strangely here—her words" | | 13 | "Nyx tilted their head, shadows" | | 14 | "A breeze that smelled of" | | 15 | "It carried a sound so" | | 16 | "She followed it." | | 17 | "The path wasn’t a path—more" | | 18 | "Each step pressed into ground" | | 19 | "Flowers bent to brush her" |
| | ratio | 0.892 | |
| 67.57% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "Because it hummed against her" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 15.31% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 28 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers bloomed in clusters that defied season: bluebells tangled with snowdrops, poppies bled crimson beside frost-white heather." | | 1 | "The grass underfoot felt too springy, as if it remembered being walked on a thousand years ago and still held the impression." | | 2 | "Nyx tilted their head, shadows rippling across a face that had no fixed features." | | 3 | "It carried a sound so faint Rory almost missed it: a melody, wordless and old, sung by something that had learned music before humans invented flutes." | | 4 | "Isolde tilted her head, studying Rory like a hawk sizing up a field mouse." |
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| 48.08% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "a note slipped, the pendant wrapped in black silk, no signature" | | 1 | "Isolde stepped back, her feet leaving no dent in the flowers" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 36 | | tagDensity | 0.083 | | leniency | 0.167 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |