Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2H2SWCAS6W2V4JQTWD4VR5

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Duration:
33.2s
Cost:
$0.000679
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DeepSeek

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air thickened as they stepped past the first standing stone. Behind them, Richmond Park’s familiar autumn chill faded like a half-remembered dream. Ahead, the world stretched into amber twilight that had no business existing in the middle of a Tuesday afternoon. Rory pressed her palm flat against the second stone. Its surface wasn't rough like the oak bark it mimicked—it felt smooth, almost oily, and hummed with a vibration she felt in her molars rather than her ears. “This isn’t right.” “No.” Nyx’s voice came from all directions at once, the whisper curling around the edges of the clearing. Their shadow-form pooled at the base of the stones before solidifying into a tall, violet-eyed silhouette. “It’s not right. It’s Fae.” The grove opened before them in layers. Wildflowers bloomed in clusters that defied season: bluebells tangled with snowdrops, poppies bled crimson beside frost-white heather. The grass underfoot felt too springy, as if it remembered being walked on a thousand years ago and still held the impression. Rory touched the Heartstone Pendant beneath her collar. The gem remained cool—no pulse of warmth to signal a portal to Hel. Good. That at least meant they weren’t stepping into Dymas. Still, her fingers found the Fae-Forged Blade strapped to her thigh. Cold as ever. “We’re being watched.” She didn’t whisper. Sound carried strangely here—her words seemed to hang in the air an extra heartbeat before dispersing. Nyx tilted their head, shadows rippling across a face that had no fixed features. “The Grove remembers. It’s tasting you.” A breeze that smelled of honey and wet stone curled between the standing stones. It carried a sound so faint Rory almost missed it: a melody, wordless and old, sung by something that had learned music before humans invented flutes. She followed it. The path wasn’t a path—more a suggestion of a trail winding between moss-covered roots that rose and fell like the ribs of a buried giant. Each step pressed into ground that felt alive, resilient. Flowers bent to brush her boots. The pendant grew fractionally warmer against her collarbone. “Isolde?” she called. No answer but the singing. A flicker of silver between two wych elms. Rory moved toward it, Nyx a liquid shadow at her heels. The trees leaned in, branches interlaced overhead, blocking the amber sky until only dappled light reached the forest floor. The air turned cool, then cold, then cold enough to raise goosebumps along her arms. Time stretched. She had no idea if they’d walked for minutes or hours when the trees opened abruptly into a circle of standing stones—older than the ones at the entrance, older than anything she’d seen in Cardiff or London. These stones weren’t oak. They were quartz, veined with silver, arranged in a perfect circle fifty feet across. In the centre, a single yew tree grew from a bed of white flowers. The singing stopped. A figure stood at the base of the yew, silver hair cascading past her waist, robes the colour of bruised dusk. She didn't turn. “You carry betrayal in your pocket, Aurora Carter.” Rory’s hand went to the pendant. “I carry a gift from a friend.” “Friend.” The word dripped with dry amusement. Isolde turned, and her lavender eyes caught the glow of the quartz stones, refracting light like a cat’s. No footprints marked the white flowers where she’d stood. “Friends don’t send Heartstones without naming the giver.” Nyx’s form flickered, solidifying closer to Rory’s side. “The Seer speaks true. The pendant—who gave it to you?” Rory hesitated. The truth was thin: a note slipped under the door of her flat above Silas’ bar, the pendant wrapped in black silk, no signature. She’d worn it because it felt important. Because it hummed against her skin like a secret waiting to be told. “I don’t know.” Isolde smiled. It didn’t reach her eyes. “Ignorance is a currency the Fae spend freely. You’ve walked into my Grove wearing a demon-touched stone, girl. Do you know what that makes you?” Rory’s spine straightened. “Someone who needs answers.” “Answers.” Isolde gestured, and the white flowers at her feet trembled, rising in a spiral of petals that caught the amber light and spun into a miniature whirlwind. “I see your thread, Aurora. It’s knotted—one end in the mortal world, the other trailing into Hel. And there’s a shadow wrapped around the middle.” Her gaze slid to Nyx. “Old shadow. Angry shadow.” Nyx didn’t flinch. “I’ve earned my rage.” “Haven’t we all.” Isolde lowered her hand. The petals fell, drifting to rest in a pattern that looked almost like a map. “But you didn’t come to hear about my past. You came because the Veil is thinning, and someone wants you to care about it.” Rory stepped closer to the yew. The Fae blade’s cold seared through the leather sheath. “The pendant reacted when I got near a tear in the Veil in Shoreditch. It led me here. Why?” Isolde tilted her head, studying Rory like a hawk sizing up a field mouse. “The Heartstone is a tracker. It marks you for the realm it’s attuned to. That one pulses for Dymas—the Gluttony domain. Prince Belphegor’s territory.” Rory’s stomach tightened. “Why would someone give me a tracker to a demon prince’s realm?” “That,” Isolde said, “is the question you should be asking. Unfortunately, I cannot answer it. My sight has limits, and your thread goes dark where the Courts of Hel begin.” She raised a slender hand, palm open. “But I can offer you a blade that cuts through lies.” Rory didn’t move. “I already have a blade.” “One of mine.” Isolde’s smile deepened. “The Fae-Forged steel you carry was a gift from me to you—though you didn’t know it then. I placed it in the hands of a courier who owed me a favour. You were meant to find it.” The air in the grove grew heavier. The scent of honey turned cloying. Nyx spoke softly. “The Seer plays long games, Rory. Every gift comes with a price.” “Indeed.” Isolde’s lavender eyes glittered. “But the price isn’t due today. Today, I offer you a truth: the one who gave you that pendant is not your friend. They mean to use you as a key. The lock waits in Dymas.” Rory’s hand drifted to the pendant again. It pulsed—warm, insistent. She could feel it tugging, as if the stone itself wanted to drag her toward the Veil. She met Isolde’s gaze. “How do I find the lock?” “Follow the stone. It will lead you to a doorway beneath the Thames, where an old rift scars the riverbed. Beyond that—Dymas.” Isolde stepped back, her feet leaving no dent in the flowers. “But know this: once you cross, the Veil will close behind you. You’ll be trapped in Hel until you find a way out, or until someone opens the door from this side.” Rory looked at Nyx. Their violet eyes held no answers—only an ancient, patient wariness. The Grove hummed around her. The flowers swayed. The quartz stones caught the amber light and threw it back in fractured rainbows. “Then I’d better bring a key,” she said. Isolde laughed—a sound like breaking glass. “You’re already wearing one.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Isolde stepped back [back]"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.361
leniency0.722
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.056
95.87% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1212
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
33.99% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1212
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"whisper"
count2
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count1
5
word"flicker"
count1
6
word"perfect"
count1
7
word"cascading"
count1
8
word"flickered"
count1
9
word"silk"
count1
10
word"trembled"
count1
11
word"stomach"
count1
12
word"pulsed"
count1
13
word"could feel"
count1
14
word"fractured"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"chill"
2"whisper"
3"pulse"
4"warmth"
5"flicker"
6"perfect"
7"cascading"
8"flickered"
9"silk"
10"trembled"
11"stomach"
12"pulsed"
13"could feel"
14"fractured"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences80
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences80
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences104
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1199
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount785
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity1.78
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Isolde"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Tuesday1
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Hel1
Dymas1
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Sound1
Rory14
Nyx8
Cardiff1
London1
Isolde11
Fae2
Veil1
Grove1
persons
0"Blade"
1"Rory"
2"Nyx"
3"Isolde"
4"Grove"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Pendant"
3"Hel"
4"Dymas"
5"Cardiff"
6"London"
7"Veil"
globalScore0.608
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.834
wordCount1199
matches
0"No answer but"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean27.25
std19
cv0.697
sampleLengths
042
140
239
346
445
522
620
740
83
948
103
115
1253
132
1469
153
1624
178
1813
1942
2018
2146
223
2332
247
2562
267
2746
2834
2938
3015
3148
328
3343
3413
3515
3641
3727
3810
3965
4014
4122
428
4310
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"being walked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs151
matches
0"weren’t stepping"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences104
ratio0.077
matches
0"Its surface wasn't rough like the oak bark it mimicked—it felt smooth, almost oily, and hummed with a vibration she felt in her molars rather than her ears."
1"The gem remained cool—no pulse of warmth to signal a portal to Hel."
2"Sound carried strangely here—her words seemed to hang in the air an extra heartbeat before dispersing."
3"The path wasn’t a path—more a suggestion of a trail winding between moss-covered roots that rose and fell like the ribs of a buried giant."
4"She had no idea if they’d walked for minutes or hours when the trees opened abruptly into a circle of standing stones—older than the ones at the entrance, older than anything she’d seen in Cardiff or London."
5"It pulsed—warm, insistent."
6"Their violet eyes held no answers—only an ancient, patient wariness."
7"Isolde laughed—a sound like breaking glass."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount867
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"tall, violet-eyed silhouette."
1"beside frost-white heather."
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.03344867358708189
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.008073817762399077
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences104
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences104
mean11.53
std9.07
cv0.787
sampleLengths
011
112
219
39
428
53
618
716
85
97
1017
1122
128
1313
141
159
1611
173
186
1916
2014
216
2214
2326
243
2525
269
276
288
293
305
318
3211
3319
3415
352
3637
374
3814
3914
403
4121
423
438
446
457
467
4718
489
498
62.18% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.41346153846153844
totalSentences104
uniqueOpeners43
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences74
matches
0"Its surface wasn't rough like"
1"Their shadow-form pooled at the"
2"She didn’t whisper"
3"It carried a sound so"
4"She followed it."
5"She had no idea if"
6"They were quartz, veined with"
7"She didn't turn."
8"She’d worn it because it"
9"It didn’t reach her eyes."
10"Her gaze slid to Nyx"
11"It pulsed—warm, insistent."
12"She could feel it tugging,"
13"She met Isolde’s gaze."
14"Their violet eyes held no"
ratio0.203
14.05% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences74
matches
0"The air thickened as they"
1"Rory pressed her palm flat"
2"Its surface wasn't rough like"
3"Nyx’s voice came from all"
4"Their shadow-form pooled at the"
5"The grove opened before them"
6"Wildflowers bloomed in clusters that"
7"The grass underfoot felt too"
8"Rory touched the Heartstone Pendant"
9"The gem remained cool—no pulse"
10"That at least meant they"
11"She didn’t whisper"
12"Sound carried strangely here—her words"
13"Nyx tilted their head, shadows"
14"A breeze that smelled of"
15"It carried a sound so"
16"She followed it."
17"The path wasn’t a path—more"
18"Each step pressed into ground"
19"Flowers bent to brush her"
ratio0.892
67.57% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"Because it hummed against her"
ratio0.014
15.31% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Wildflowers bloomed in clusters that defied season: bluebells tangled with snowdrops, poppies bled crimson beside frost-white heather."
1"The grass underfoot felt too springy, as if it remembered being walked on a thousand years ago and still held the impression."
2"Nyx tilted their head, shadows rippling across a face that had no fixed features."
3"It carried a sound so faint Rory almost missed it: a melody, wordless and old, sung by something that had learned music before humans invented flutes."
4"Isolde tilted her head, studying Rory like a hawk sizing up a field mouse."
48.08% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"a note slipped, the pendant wrapped in black silk, no signature"
1"Isolde stepped back, her feet leaving no dent in the flowers"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.083
leniency0.167
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
78.0573%