| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 17 | | tagDensity | 0.235 | | leniency | 0.471 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 84.79% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1315 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "deliberately" | | 2 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 39.16% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1315 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "charm" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "chill" | | 3 | "crystal" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "wavering" | | 6 | "shimmered" | | 7 | "down her spine" | | 8 | "flicker" | | 9 | "comforting" | | 10 | "whisper" | | 11 | "silence" | | 12 | "dance" | | 13 | "pulse" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 85.71% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 75 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 88 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 65 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1299 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 75.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "When she fully faced it, it snapped back into proper alignment, as if caught in some small treason." |
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| 91.44% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 30 | | wordCount | 1110 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.17 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 13 | | Nyx | 8 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 2 | | January | 1 | | Isolde | 2 | | Varga | 1 | | Half-Fae | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Varga" | | 3 | "Half-Fae" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Isolde" |
| | globalScore | 0.914 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 70.63% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "wood that seemed to wink, and once, a soft chime of laughter—a child’s laughter—drifted between the trunks, sourceless" | | 1 | "something close to reverence" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 3.079 | | wordCount | 1299 | | matches | | 0 | "not through her ears but directly inside her skull: “Do you feel the air yet" | | 1 | "not a flash but a folding: the world she knew simply turned inside out" | | 2 | "not a true sound but a frequency felt in the sternum" | | 3 | "not hostile, but immense, like standing before a mountain" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 29 | | mean | 44.79 | | std | 26.81 | | cv | 0.599 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 90 | | 1 | 59 | | 2 | 41 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 80 | | 5 | 25 | | 6 | 58 | | 7 | 74 | | 8 | 40 | | 9 | 33 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 79 | | 12 | 34 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 72 | | 15 | 27 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 78 | | 18 | 37 | | 19 | 36 | | 20 | 26 | | 21 | 58 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 80 | | 25 | 45 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 87 | | 28 | 63 |
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| 95.91% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "was lit" | | 1 | "was unblemished" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 179 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 10 | | flaggedSentences | 20 | | totalSentences | 88 | | ratio | 0.227 | | matches | | 0 | "She had learned, in her months in London, that the park’s wildness was a cultivated thing—but tonight, under a sky bruising toward a deep violet, it felt ancient and indifferent." | | 1 | "The heartstone pendant beneath her jacket was a small, dead stone; she pressed a thumb to it out of habit, as one might touch a lucky charm, but no warmth responded." | | 2 | "The stones were not the common granite of the park; they bore veins of crystal that pulsed faintly, like a slow heartbeat." | | 3 | "A warmth settled over her shoulders like a mantle, and light—a soft, sourceless amber—replaced the dusk." | | 4 | "Above, a sky of pale violet held unfamiliar constellations that wheeled slowly; no moon, yet the grove was lit." | | 5 | "The air tasted of jasmine and something older—damp stone, incense." | | 6 | "Rory’s footfalls made no sound; when she deliberately scraped her boot over a stone, it produced a small, clear chime that hung in the air longer than it should." | | 7 | "The groaning hum of the earth rose around them—not a true sound but a frequency felt in the sternum." | | 8 | "The moss behind them was unblemished—no footprints, no crushed flowers, as if they had never passed." | | 9 | "She saw knots in the wood that seemed to wink, and once, a soft chime of laughter—a child’s laughter—drifted between the trunks, sourceless." | | 10 | "The flowered moss gave way to a carpet of tiny puffball mushrooms that released spores of pale blue light when her passing disturbed them; the spores clung to her boots like glowing dust." | | 11 | "Ahead, the air itself began to shimmer—a faint, visible distortion like heat waves over a highway, yet cold to the eye." | | 12 | "They soon came to a shallow vale where a brook—black water over black stones—flowed uphill in absolute silence." | | 13 | "The water produced no splash, no ripple; it simply slid upward, as if the land were a tilted mirror." | | 14 | "Its trunk was wide enough to swallow a car; its bark was a pale, pearlescent silver that shed its own light." | | 15 | "The presence she’d felt at the edge of her awareness now pressed fully upon her—not hostile, but immense, like standing before a mountain that might deign to notice you." | | 16 | "She wanted suddenly to kneel, or run; she did neither." | | 17 | "Her feet were bare and left no impression on the moss; where she walked, the world held its breath." | | 18 | "Isolde Varga’s pale lavender eyes found Rory’s and held them, and a shiver—not cold—ran through Rory’s spine." | | 19 | "When the Half-Fae spoke, her voice was a melody just off-key, intimate as a whisper yet carried on the hum of the grove: “Two souls cross a threshold not meant for them. One carries the heart’s question wrapped in fear; the other is a question itself, wearing a memory of human shape. Which of you will ask first what you dare not know?”" |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1133 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 34 | | adverbRatio | 0.03000882612533098 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01147396293027361 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 88 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 88 | | mean | 14.76 | | std | 9.77 | | cv | 0.662 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 30 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 1 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 31 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 35 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 29 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 24 | | 49 | 18 |
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| 55.30% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.3522727272727273 | | totalSentences | 88 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 46.30% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, a layer beneath: a" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 97.78% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "She had learned, in her" | | 1 | "Its crimson gem remained cold" | | 2 | "Their violet eyes, faint as" | | 3 | "She stood on moss the" | | 4 | "She crouched, touching a flower." | | 5 | "Its petals, cool and velvety," | | 6 | "She yanked her hand back" | | 7 | "They moved deeper." | | 8 | "It stretched out behind her," | | 9 | "She stared at it, breath" | | 10 | "They walked on." | | 11 | "She saw knots in the" | | 12 | "She slowed, lifting a hand." | | 13 | "They soon came to a" | | 14 | "She stopped at the bank," | | 15 | "she murmured, more to herself" | | 16 | "She crossed via a footbridge" | | 17 | "Its trunk was wide enough" | | 18 | "She wanted suddenly to kneel," | | 19 | "She was clad in a" |
| | ratio | 0.306 | |
| 43.33% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 60 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "The final copper-amber of daylight" | | 1 | "She had learned, in her" | | 2 | "The heartstone pendant beneath her" | | 3 | "Its crimson gem remained cold" | | 4 | "Nyx walked at her left," | | 5 | "Their violet eyes, faint as" | | 6 | "The shade’s voice arrived not" | | 7 | "Rory halted and drew a" | | 8 | "The path narrowed between two" | | 9 | "The stones were not the" | | 10 | "Rory recognized the standing stones" | | 11 | "Nyx moved through the ring" | | 12 | "Rory passed between two boulders." | | 13 | "The transition was not a" | | 14 | "The distant traffic of London" | | 15 | "A warmth settled over her" | | 16 | "She stood on moss the" | | 17 | "The oaks behind her were" | | 18 | "The air tasted of jasmine" | | 19 | "She crouched, touching a flower." |
| | ratio | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | technicalSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx walked at her left, a shape of condensed darkness that blurred at the edges like heat-shimmer over asphalt." | | 1 | "Then, a layer beneath: a sharp sweetness, like overripe plums and a metallic tang that raised the hair on her arms." | | 2 | "Beyond them, a small clearing held a rough ring of thirteen boulders, each half-sunk in the soil and coated with a patina of silvered moss that glowed with its …" | | 3 | "She stood on moss the color of sea foam, dotted with star-shaped flowers that blazed with a faint blue radiance." | | 4 | "Above, a sky of pale violet held unfamiliar constellations that wheeled slowly; no moon, yet the grove was lit." | | 5 | "Rory’s footfalls made no sound; when she deliberately scraped her boot over a stone, it produced a small, clear chime that hung in the air longer than it should…" | | 6 | "The moss behind them was unblemished—no footprints, no crushed flowers, as if they had never passed." | | 7 | "The trees grew closer, their bark now exhaling thin tendrils of silver mist that smelled of nutmeg and ozone." | | 8 | "She crossed via a footbridge of woven roots that had not been there a moment before, pausing only when the great oak came into full view." | | 9 | "From the branches hung filaments like spun glass that came alive with a soft chime as they approached." | | 10 | "The presence she’d felt at the edge of her awareness now pressed fully upon her—not hostile, but immense, like standing before a mountain that might deign to no…" | | 11 | "Her hair fell to her waist in a sheet of silver that caught no highlights, as if it absorbed the light." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she murmured, more to herself" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "the Half-Fae spoke (speak)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 17 | | tagDensity | 0.176 | | leniency | 0.353 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.353 | |