Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2HBFQ3G6QQTJPP26BEXABY

Run Details

Duration:
1m 12s
Cost:
$0.001999
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DeepSeek

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The smell of turmeric and cumin drifted up through the floorboards, a permanent perfume of Brick Lane that no amount of incense could mask. Rory balanced a sheaf of leather-bound papers in one hand and a mug of cold tea in the other when the first knock came. She ignored it. Eva’s flat attracted all manner of researchers at odd hours — academics who couldn’t read a clock, couriers with dubious packages, the occasional lost soul who’d mistaken the curry house below for a takeaway. The second knock came harder. Three sharp raps. Rory set the mug on a teetering stack of grimoires and padded to the door. Muscle memory made her check the deadbolts — all three still thrown — before pressing her eye to the peephole. Platinum hair. Charcoal lapels. A flash of amber iris visible even through the fisheye warp of the lens. Her stomach dropped. “I know you’re there, Aurora. The light shifted under the door.” That voice. Low, edged with a Marseille accent that rounded his vowels like river stones. She hadn’t heard it in eighteen months. Hadn’t wanted to. Rory’s hand hovered over the top deadbolt. Ptolemy wound between her ankles, purring traitorously. “This isn’t my flat,” she said through the wood. “You have no business here.” “I have business with you. That makes it the right address.” She rested her forehead against the doorframe. Through the cheap paint she could almost feel him on the other side, that coiled stillness he carried like a second skin. The way he’d stand with his weight on his cane, patient as a spider. “Eva’s in Prague. Whatever you’re selling — ” “Open the door, Rory.” Not *Laila*, the false name she’d used the night they met. Not *Carter*, clipped and professional. Rory. The name only Eva used, which meant he’d done his homework. Which meant this wasn’t a social call, wasn’t chance, wasn’t anything but deliberately, meticulously planned. She threw the deadbolts. The door swung inward and there he stood. Lucien Moreau filled Eva’s cramped hallway like a wolf in a rabbit hutch, immaculate in a three-piece suit that had no business existing in the sticky August heat. His cane — ivory handle gleaming, thin blade tucked inside — tapped once against the threshold. The heterochromatic eyes hit her harder than she’d prepared for. One amber as aged whiskey, one black as a lightless room. They travelled from her messy ponytail to her bare feet and back up again, cataloguing every inch. “You look well,” he lied. Rory crossed her arms. “You look like you’ve been sleeping in that suit.” A ghost of something — amusement, irritation — flickered across his sharp features. “May I come in, or shall we conduct this in the hallway where your neighbours can enjoy the spectacle?” She stepped aside. Lucien moved past her with that fluid, soundless gait that always unsettled her. The cane didn’t click against the floorboards. It never did. In the cramped living room he became an immediate imposition, too polished for the chaos of Eva’s research notes and Ptolemy’s shed fur. He surveyed the space with the same expression he’d once used to assess a dead body in a Soho alleyway — clinical, detached, filing details for later use. “Tea?” Rory asked, because English politeness died hard. “No.” “Right. Straight to business, then. Some things don’t change.” Lucien turned. The black eye caught the dim light strangely, swallowing it. “Some things do. You’ve been avoiding my calls for eighteen months. My letters. My intermediaries.” “Did it occur to you that I didn’t want to be found?” “Frequently.” He set his cane against Eva’s overflowing bookshelf. “Unfortunately, circumstances have rendered your preferences irrelevant.” Rory’s jaw tightened. “I don’t work for you anymore.” “You never worked *for* me.” The correction came sharp as a blade. “We collaborated. There’s a distinction.” “Is that what you’re calling it now?” The words landed between them like a thrown gauntlet. Lucien’s expression didn’t shift, but something behind it went very, very still. The kind of stillness that preceded violence in the circles he moved through. Rory had seen men twice his size back away from that stillness. She didn’t back away. “You walked out,” he said quietly. “No explanation. No forwarding address. I had to learn from Eva that you’d even left London.” “I left Evan. London came after.” “And what came after that? Delivery driver for a noodle shop? Hiding in this — ” he gestured at the academic squalor surrounding them, “ — library of mould and good intentions?” Rory’s chin came up. “It’s honest work.” “It’s beneath you.” Lucien stepped closer. The scent of him reached her — bergamot and something darker, something that wasn’t quite cologne. “You could have called. You could have told me what happened.” “Could I?” The laugh that escaped her was short and bitter. “You made it very clear where we stood. *Collaborators*. Nothing more.” “I was trying to protect you.” “From what?” “From me.” The confession hung in the dusty air. Ptolemy leapt onto the windowsill, disturbed by the sudden tension, scattering a pile of Eva’s handwritten notes. Neither of them moved to pick them up. Rory studied his face — truly studied it, the way she hadn’t allowed herself to during those months they’d worked together. The faint lines around his amber eye that deepened when he was tired. The way his jaw clenched when he said something he couldn’t take back. The slight tremor in his left hand before he stilled it against his thigh. “I know what you are,” she said. “I’ve always known.” “You know the lineage. You don’t know what it means.” Lucien’s voice dropped. “What it could mean for someone close to me. The realm of Avaros doesn’t release its children without stipulations, and I — ” He stopped. Started again. “When Evan put his hands on you, I felt it. Across the city, through every ward and binding I’d placed around you without your knowledge. I felt the impact of his fist on your jaw.” Rory’s hand drifted unconsciously to her face, though the bruise had faded over a year ago. “That’s not protection,” she said. “That’s surveillance.” “It’s both.” No apology in his tone. No shame. “And it’s why I kept my distance, even when keeping it felt like swallowing glass. You deserved someone who could offer you a normal life. A human life. Not an arrangement with a half-demon who might one day — ” He broke off, jaw working around words he refused to release. “Might one day what?” Lucien reached for his cane, thought better of it, let his hand drop. “My father’s blood carries certain expectations. Bonds that transfer. If I were to allow myself to care for you the way I — “ A pause. “The way I do, you would become entangled in obligations that predate your entire bloodline. I couldn’t do that to you. So I kept you at arm’s length. Colleagues. *Collaborators*.” The word she’d thrown back at him, now laid bare as the shield it had always been. Rory’s heart hammered against her ribs. “And now?” “Now I need your help with something that requires someone clever, unregistered in any supernatural census, and expendable enough that no one will miss her.” He held up a hand before she could speak. “That’s the job description. That’s not how I see you.” “Then how do you see me?” Lucien closed the distance between them in two strides. His hand came up, hesitated a centimetre from her cheek, then cupped her jaw with a gentleness that contradicted every word he’d just spoken. His palm was cool against her skin. “As the only person in this wretched city who ever looked at both of my eyes and didn’t flinch,” he said. “As a woman who deserved better than a monster for a lover and got one anyway, and survived it. As someone I have thought about every single day since she disappeared from my life.” Rory’s throat constricted. “Luc — ” “I am not asking you to forgive my absence. I am not asking you to understand my reasons. I am asking you to come back to London — properly, this time — and help me stop something that is going to get a lot of innocent people killed.” His thumb traced the line of her jawbone. “After that, if you want me to walk away, I will. No surveillance. No intermediaries. Just silence.” “And if I don’t want you to walk away?” The amber eye brightened. The black one remained depthless, unreadable, but his hand on her face trembled almost imperceptibly. “Then I will spend the rest of my existence trying to deserve you,” Lucien said. “And failing. And trying again.” Ptolemy meowed from the windowsill, shattering the moment. Rory blinked, suddenly aware of how close they were standing, of the heat radiating from his body despite the cool hand still cradling her face. She stepped back, and his arm fell to his side without resistance. “I need to think,” she said. “Take the time you need.” “And I need you to be honest with me. No more wards I don’t know about. No more keeping me at arm’s length for my own good.” Lucien inclined his head. “Agreed.” “And I need tea. Proper tea. Not whatever that was going to be.” She retrieved her abandoned mug from the stack of grimoires and headed toward Eva’s cluttered kitchenette. At the doorway she paused, not turning around. “There’s Earl Grey in the cupboard. You can make yourself useful.” Behind her, she heard the soft exhale of breath he’d been holding. The rustle of expensive fabric as he shed his jacket. The tap of his cane — audible now, deliberately so — as he followed her into the kitchen.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences62
tagDensity0.258
leniency0.516
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.032
78.35% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1617
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"deliberately"
count2
1
adverb"very"
count3
2
adverb"truly"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"deliberately"
1"very"
2"truly"
3"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
65.99% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1617
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"gleaming"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"unsettled"
count1
5
word"tension"
count1
6
word"jaw clenched"
count1
7
word"traced"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"unreadable"
count1
10
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"weight"
2"gleaming"
3"flickered"
4"unsettled"
5"tension"
6"jaw clenched"
7"traced"
8"silence"
9"unreadable"
10"trembled"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
1
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
1"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences96
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences140
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen54
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords5
totalWords1638
ratio0.003
matches
0"Laila"
1"Carter"
2"for"
3"Collaborators"
4"Collaborators"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
76.32% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount950
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.47
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Brick1
Lane1
Marseille1
Eva7
Moreau1
August1
Rory14
Ptolemy4
Soho1
English1
Lucien10
Started1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Rory"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Lucien"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Marseille"
3"Soho"
globalScore0.763
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite cologne"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1638
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences140
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs69
mean23.74
std21.52
cv0.907
sampleLengths
085
18
235
318
43
511
625
714
814
911
1043
118
124
1343
144
1552
1638
175
1813
1932
203
2174
228
231
249
2527
2612
2716
289
2917
307
3146
324
3322
346
3532
367
3733
3822
396
402
412
4232
4361
4410
4575
4616
477
4860
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs163
matches
0"were standing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences140
ratio0.057
matches
0"Eva’s flat attracted all manner of researchers at odd hours — academics who couldn’t read a clock, couriers with dubious packages, the occasional lost soul who’d mistaken the curry house below for a takeaway."
1"Muscle memory made her check the deadbolts — all three still thrown — before pressing her eye to the peephole."
2"His cane — ivory handle gleaming, thin blade tucked inside — tapped once against the threshold."
3"A ghost of something — amusement, irritation — flickered across his sharp features."
4"He surveyed the space with the same expression he’d once used to assess a dead body in a Soho alleyway — clinical, detached, filing details for later use."
5"The scent of him reached her — bergamot and something darker, something that wasn’t quite cologne."
6"Rory studied his face — truly studied it, the way she hadn’t allowed herself to during those months they’d worked together."
7"The tap of his cane — audible now, deliberately so — as he followed her into the kitchen."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount677
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.026587887740029542
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.004431314623338257
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences140
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences140
mean11.7
std9.56
cv0.817
sampleLengths
024
124
23
334
45
53
615
720
82
92
1014
113
1211
132
1413
157
163
177
187
199
205
2111
227
2322
2414
258
264
2711
285
291
3011
3115
324
338
3428
3516
3610
3711
3817
395
404
419
4213
4319
443
4513
467
473
4823
4928
59.29% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.40714285714285714
totalSentences140
uniqueOpeners57
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences83
matches
0"She ignored it."
1"Her stomach dropped."
2"She hadn’t heard it in"
3"she said through the wood"
4"She rested her forehead against"
5"She threw the deadbolts."
6"His cane — ivory handle"
7"They travelled from her messy"
8"She stepped aside."
9"It never did."
10"He surveyed the space with"
11"He set his cane against"
12"She didn’t back away."
13"he said quietly"
14"He held up a hand"
15"His hand came up, hesitated"
16"His palm was cool against"
17"His thumb traced the line"
18"She stepped back, and his"
19"She retrieved her abandoned mug"
ratio0.241
32.29% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences83
matches
0"The smell of turmeric and"
1"Rory balanced a sheaf of"
2"She ignored it."
3"Eva’s flat attracted all manner"
4"The second knock came harder."
5"Rory set the mug on"
6"Muscle memory made her check"
7"A flash of amber iris"
8"Her stomach dropped."
9"She hadn’t heard it in"
10"Rory’s hand hovered over the"
11"Ptolemy wound between her ankles,"
12"she said through the wood"
13"She rested her forehead against"
14"The way he’d stand with"
15"The name only Eva used,"
16"She threw the deadbolts."
17"The door swung inward and"
18"Lucien Moreau filled Eva’s cramped"
19"His cane — ivory handle"
ratio0.855
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
ratio0
55.75% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Eva’s flat attracted all manner of researchers at odd hours — academics who couldn’t read a clock, couriers with dubious packages, the occasional lost soul who’…"
1"Low, edged with a Marseille accent that rounded his vowels like river stones."
2"Lucien Moreau filled Eva’s cramped hallway like a wolf in a rabbit hutch, immaculate in a three-piece suit that had no business existing in the sticky August he…"
3"The scent of him reached her — bergamot and something darker, something that wasn’t quite cologne."
4"His hand came up, hesitated a centimetre from her cheek, then cupped her jaw with a gentleness that contradicted every word he’d just spoken."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he lied (lie)"
dialogueSentences62
tagDensity0.145
leniency0.29
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.032
81.1549%