Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2HEA36H61JAGAEJ6ZQ843B

Run Details

Duration:
42.2s
Cost:
$0.000891
Provider:
DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came at half past ten, three sharp raps against the reinforced door of Eva’s flat. Rory looked up from the stack of Eva’s research notes, Ptolemy the tabby stirring in her lap. The deadbolts were all thrown. She’d put them there herself after Eva had left for Edinburgh, a precaution that felt absurd now. No one came to Brick Lane at this hour unless they wanted something. She crossed the creaking floorboards and peered through the spyhole. The fisheye lens distorted the figure on the landing, but she’d recognise that silhouette anywhere. Tailored shoulders. Platinum hair slicked back. The curve of an ivory cane. Rory’s hand froze on the second bolt. Lucien Moreau. She hadn’t seen him in eight months. Not since the night she’d walked out of his flat in Mayfair with blood on her hands and his name stuck in her throat. He’d let her go. Didn’t follow. Didn’t call. And she’d told herself it was for the best—that a half-demon fixer and a woman running from an abusive ex couldn’t mix without leaving scorch marks. But here he was, standing on the doormat, patient as a gargoyle. She pulled the first bolt. Then the second. The third slid with a metallic grate. She opened the door a crack, chain still on, and met his mismatched eyes through the gap. “Rory.” His voice was low, a little rough at the edges. The way it always sounded when he’d been smoking or fighting or both. “Lucien.” She didn’t smile. “You’re a long way from Soho.” “I need to talk to you.” “Talk.” She let the word sit. “You’ve had eight months to talk.” His jaw tightened. He looked different—thinner in the face, shadows under his good eye. The black one, that pupil-less abyss, seemed to swallow the dim hallway light. His suit was charcoal, immaculate as ever, but his shirt collar was undone. No tie. That was a first. “Can I come in, or do we do this in the corridor?” Rory considered the question. The landing smelled of cumin and fried onions from the curry house below. A car backfired somewhere on Brick Lane. The cat had followed her to the door and was now weaving between her ankles, curious. She unchained the door and stepped back. He didn’t move right away. He stood there, cane planted, watching her with an intensity she remembered too well. Then he stepped over the threshold, closing the door behind him with a soft click. The flat suddenly felt smaller. Hotter. Ptolemy mewed and pressed his head against Lucien’s polished Oxford. Lucien ignored him. “Eva’s not here,” Rory said, crossing her arms. “She’s in Edinburgh till Sunday. You want her, you’ll have to wait.” “I don’t want Eva.” The words landed in the space between them, heavy and bare. Rory’s stomach flipped, but she kept her face neutral. “Then what do you want?” He set the cane against the edge of the cluttered coffee table. The ivory handle gleamed under the single lamp. He took off his jacket, draped it over the back of a chair, and the motion was too familiar. She’d seen him do that a hundred times in his own flat, always with that same precise efficiency. It felt like trespass. “I’ve been looking for you,” he said. “You knew where I was. Eva’s address isn’t classified.” “I knew where you were. I didn’t know if you wanted to be found.” Rory let out a short breath. “So you decided to just show up at my door at night? That’s not creepy at all.” “You’re not answering your phone.” She hadn’t had a working phone in three weeks. The last one had gone through the wall of her room above Silas’s bar during a nightmare. She’d been dreaming of Evan’s hands around her throat. Lucid. Helpless. She hadn’t told anyone. “Phone’s dead,” she said. “Everything about this is dead, Rory. The way you talk. The way you look at me. Like I’m a ghost.” She flinched. He noticed. “That night—” he started. “Don’t.” “You walked out. You didn’t say a word. You stood in my kitchen, covered in ichor, and you just… left. I didn’t know if you were hurt. I didn’t know if you hated me. I waited three days before I called Eva, and she told me you were fine.” His voice dropped. “Fine. That was the word she used.” “What was I supposed to do, Lucien? Stay and have tea?” He moved closer. One step. Then another. The flat’s cramped layout meant the coffee table was the only real barrier between them. He stopped at its edge, fingers resting on a pile of Eva’s notes. The top page was covered in cramped handwriting—translations of a medieval Welsh grimoire. “That job in Whitechapel,” he said. “I didn’t know the target was tied to your ex. If I’d known—” “You still would have taken it.” Her voice came out steadier than she expected. “You’re a fixer. You don’t ask questions.” “I ask questions when it involves you.” His gaze locked onto hers. “I always have.” The silence stretched. Ptolemy leaped onto the armchair and started grooming his paw, indifferent. Outside, a siren wailed somewhere in the direction of Spitalfields. Rory broke first. She turned away, walked to the kitchenette, and poured herself a glass of water she didn’t want. The tap coughed. The pipes in this place were ancient. “Why now?” she asked, back to him. “Why tonight?” “Because I heard something.” His footsteps were soft on the linoleum. He’d followed her. “About Evan.” Rory’s hand tightened on the glass. The name still had teeth. “He’s out,” Lucien said. “Parole. Three weeks ago.” She set the glass down slowly. The kitchen counter was covered in tea stains and loose sugar. She stared at a brown ring, counting her breaths. “I had people watching him,” Lucien continued. “They lost him two days ago. He’s not in London. But he’s heading this way. I don’t know where, exactly, but I know he’s looking for you.” Rory turned. Lucien stood two feet away, close enough that she could smell the leather of his coat and something darker, faintly sulphuric. The half-demon in him. The part he never talked about. “You came to warn me,” she said. “I came to protect you.” The word hung between them. Protect. Like the time he’d thrown himself in front of a revenant’s claws and taken a gash across his ribs that would’ve killed a human. Like the time he’d spent three hours convincing a Fae lord not to trade her soul for a scrap of information. Like every single thing he’d done in the six months they’d known each other before she’d ruined it. “I don’t need your protection,” she said. “Rory—” “I mean it. I’ve been running from men who think they need to save me my whole life. Evan. My father. You.” She gestured between them. “You’re all the same. You see a broken thing and you want to fix it.” His expression didn’t change, but something shifted in his amber eye. A crack. “I never saw you as broken,” he said. “I saw you as someone who deserved better than the hand she was dealt. And I wanted to help. Not fix. Help.” “You didn’t help. You made it worse.” Her voice cracked. “That night in your flat—when I killed that thing, you looked at me like I was something dangerous. Something to manage.” “I looked at you like I was terrified I’d lost you.” The admission hit her square in the chest. She opened her mouth, but no words came. He reached out. Slowly. His hand hovered near her wrist, not touching. The crescent scar from her childhood seemed to pulse under the kitchen light. “I’m not here to manage you,” he said. “I’m here because I can’t stop thinking about you. Because I walked into Eva’s building tonight not knowing if you’d slam the door in my face or let me in, and I came anyway. Because you’re the only person in this city who makes me feel like I’m not just half a monster.” Rory’s throat tightened. She looked down at his hand—the fine bones, the silver ring on his thumb, the faint calluses from fighting things that shouldn’t exist. She didn’t pull away. “You should have called first,” she whispered. “Would you have answered?” “No.” He smiled. It was a small, tired thing, but it transformed his face. She’d only seen it a handful of times. “Then I’m glad I didn’t call,” he said. Ptolemy meowed loudly from the armchair, demanding attention. Rory laughed—a surprised, wet sound—and Lucien’s smile widened. “Let me stay,” he said. “Just tonight. I’ll take the floor. I won’t touch you unless you ask. But I’m not leaving you alone with him out there.” She looked at him. At the dark circles under his eyes. At the way his fingers still hovered near her wrist, patient, offering a choice. She thought of Evan’s hands. Of the door she’d walked through eight months ago. Of the door she’d just opened. “The sofa’s lumpy,” she said. “I’ve slept on worse.” “The cat sleeps on your face.” “I’ll risk it.” She turned and grabbed a spare blanket from the cupboard—frayed, floral, something Eva had thrifted in Camden. She tossed it at him. He caught it without looking. “One night,” she said. “One night.” She didn’t believe him. But when she walked back to the bedroom and closed the door, she left it unlocked. And when she lay down under the covers, she listened to his footsteps on the other side, the creak of the sofa springs, the cat’s soft purr as he settled on Lucien’s chest. She didn’t sleep well. But for the first time in three weeks, she didn’t dream.
created_at"2026-04-25T14:42:02.475Z" 4/25/2026, 2:42:02 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences62
tagDensity0.371
leniency0.742
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.88% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1644
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count2
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
78.71% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1644
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"intensity"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"footsteps"
count2
5
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"intensity"
1"stomach"
2"familiar"
3"silence"
4"footsteps"
5"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences142
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences142
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences178
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen53
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1636
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions27
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions46
wordCount1108
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity0.99
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva5
Ptolemy4
Edinburgh1
Brick2
Lane2
Moreau1
Mayfair1
Lucien8
Oxford1
Rory11
Silas1
Evan2
Welsh1
Spitalfields1
Fae1
Camden1
Like3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Moreau"
3"Lucien"
4"Rory"
5"Silas"
6"Evan"
places
0"Edinburgh"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
3"Mayfair"
4"Oxford"
5"Camden"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1636
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences178
matches
0"recognise that silhouette"
1"do that a"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs81
mean20.2
std17.57
cv0.87
sampleLengths
069
137
27
32
465
512
632
724
810
96
1012
1146
1212
1340
147
1540
1613
1720
184
1920
205
2161
227
239
2414
2523
265
2741
284
2920
304
314
321
3359
3411
3548
3619
3721
3815
3924
4030
419
4216
4311
448
4526
4634
4733
487
495
97.85% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences142
matches
0"was undone"
1"was covered"
2"was covered"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs200
matches
0"was, standing"
46.55% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences178
ratio0.034
matches
0"And she’d told herself it was for the best—that a half-demon fixer and a woman running from an abusive ex couldn’t mix without leaving scorch marks."
1"He looked different—thinner in the face, shadows under his good eye."
2"The top page was covered in cramped handwriting—translations of a medieval Welsh grimoire."
3"She looked down at his hand—the fine bones, the silver ring on his thumb, the faint calluses from fighting things that shouldn’t exist."
4"Rory laughed—a surprised, wet sound—and Lucien’s smile widened."
5"She turned and grabbed a spare blanket from the cupboard—frayed, floral, something Eva had thrifted in Camden."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1117
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.03312444046553268
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.006266786034019696
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences178
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences178
mean9.19
std7.77
cv0.846
sampleLengths
017
117
25
317
413
510
615
72
84
96
107
112
127
1324
144
152
162
1726
1812
195
203
217
2217
2311
2413
254
266
276
286
296
303
3111
3213
3313
342
354
3612
374
3813
397
4016
417
425
4314
4415
455
461
4710
483
498
41.01% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.2640449438202247
totalSentences178
uniqueOpeners47
60.61% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences110
matches
0"Then the second."
1"Then he stepped over the"
ratio0.018
38.18% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount50
totalSentences110
matches
0"She’d put them there herself"
1"She crossed the creaking floorboards"
2"She hadn’t seen him in"
3"He’d let her go."
4"She pulled the first bolt."
5"She opened the door a"
6"His voice was low, a"
7"She didn’t smile"
8"She let the word sit"
9"His jaw tightened."
10"He looked different—thinner in the"
11"His suit was charcoal, immaculate"
12"She unchained the door and"
13"He didn’t move right away."
14"He stood there, cane planted,"
15"He set the cane against"
16"He took off his jacket,"
17"She’d seen him do that"
18"It felt like trespass."
19"She hadn’t had a working"
ratio0.455
37.27% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount93
totalSentences110
matches
0"The knock came at half"
1"Rory looked up from the"
2"The deadbolts were all thrown."
3"She’d put them there herself"
4"She crossed the creaking floorboards"
5"The fisheye lens distorted the"
6"Platinum hair slicked back."
7"The curve of an ivory"
8"Rory’s hand froze on the"
9"She hadn’t seen him in"
10"He’d let her go."
11"She pulled the first bolt."
12"The third slid with a"
13"She opened the door a"
14"His voice was low, a"
15"The way it always sounded"
16"She didn’t smile"
17"She let the word sit"
18"His jaw tightened."
19"He looked different—thinner in the"
ratio0.845
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences110
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She looked down at his hand—the fine bones, the silver ring on his thumb, the faint calluses from fighting things that shouldn’t exist."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Lucien continued (continue)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences62
tagDensity0.242
leniency0.484
rawRatio0.133
effectiveRatio0.065
86.3686%