| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 93.24% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1479 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | adverb | "reluctantly" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "completely" | | 1 | "reluctantly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 59.43% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1479 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | word | "practiced ease" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "throb" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "velvet" | | 5 | "practiced ease" | | 6 | "scanning" | | 7 | "unreadable" | | 8 | "could feel" | | 9 | "simmering" | | 10 | "stomach" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 108 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 108 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 111 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 1468 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 52 | | wordCount | 1444 | | uniqueNames | 16 | | maxNameDensity | 1.25 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Devlin" | | discoveredNames | | Soho | 1 | | Old | 1 | | Compton | 1 | | Street | 3 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 18 | | Brewer | 1 | | Devlin | 15 | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Dean | 1 | | Glock | 2 | | Morris | 3 | | Tube | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Market | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Devlin" | | 3 | "Raven" | | 4 | "Nest" | | 5 | "Morris" | | 6 | "Market" |
| | places | | 0 | "Soho" | | 1 | "Old" | | 2 | "Compton" | | 3 | "Street" | | 4 | "Brewer" | | 5 | "Dean" |
| | globalScore | 0.877 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 9.55% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 89 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "quite a smile" | | 1 | "doorway that seemed to inhale the alley's light" | | 2 | "looked like nothing Quinn had ever seen" | | 3 | "knife that seemed to ripple in the light" | | 4 | "sounded like breaking glass" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1468 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 41 | | mean | 35.8 | | std | 27.79 | | cv | 0.776 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 58 | | 1 | 108 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 65 | | 4 | 74 | | 5 | 58 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 59 | | 9 | 30 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 73 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 62 | | 17 | 71 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 50 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 76 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 76 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 54 | | 27 | 42 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 60 | | 30 | 62 | | 31 | 53 | | 32 | 38 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 54 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 25 | | 38 | 30 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 5 |
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| 89.02% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | | 0 | "was swallowed" | | 1 | "was arched" | | 2 | "been answered" | | 3 | "was obscured" | | 4 | "were covered" | | 5 | "been filed" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 9 | | totalVerbs | 226 | | matches | | 0 | "was running" | | 1 | "wasn't heading" | | 2 | "was heading" | | 3 | "was gaining" | | 4 | "was holding" | | 5 | "was standing" | | 6 | "was standing" | | 7 | "were conducting" | | 8 | "was heading" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 111 | | ratio | 0.09 | | matches | | 0 | "Detective Harlow Quinn ran with her service weapon still holstered—she wasn't about to fire into a crowded district, not yet, not until she had something solid." | | 1 | "She'd recognized the face from a dozen surveillance photos—a low-level errand boy for the clique she'd been tracking for six months." | | 2 | "Now Quinn was running—hard, but controlled." | | 3 | "Devlin's boots were heavier than hers—work boots, she guessed, with worn treads that slipped on the wet stone." | | 4 | "He was holding something in his right hand—a small object, white, the size of a domino." | | 5 | "Beyond the threshold, a faint, sickly amber glow flickered, and Quinn heard the murmur of voices—dozens of them, layered and dissonant, like a crowd speaking in tongues." | | 6 | "Stalls lined the platform—tables draped in velvet, crates overflowing with dried herbs and animal bones, glass cases containing objects that hummed with a faint, subsonic vibration." | | 7 | "And she was standing in the middle of it, unarmed in principle—though her Glock was still on her hip—and completely out of her depth." | | 8 | "The crowd parted reluctantly—some of the patrons turned to stare at her with flat, unreadable eyes." | | 9 | "He reached the robed figures, and one of them turned—a tall man whose face was obscured by a hood, but whose hands were covered in silver rings that caught the light." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1465 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 36 | | adverbRatio | 0.024573378839590442 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00477815699658703 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 111 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 111 | | mean | 13.23 | | std | 7.98 | | cv | 0.603 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 32 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 27 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 22 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 27 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 26 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 43.54% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.3153153153153153 | | totalSentences | 111 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 63.49% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "Just a courier who carried" | | 1 | "Then the doorway sealed behind" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 98.10% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd recognized the face from" | | 1 | "He'd seen her almost immediately." | | 2 | "Their eyes had met through" | | 3 | "Her leather-soled brogues skimmed the" | | 4 | "He was heading deeper into" | | 5 | "she shouted, but her voice" | | 6 | "He was young, maybe twenty-five," | | 7 | "She was gaining." | | 8 | "He stumbled at the entrance" | | 9 | "He stopped at a dead" | | 10 | "He was holding something in" | | 11 | "He pressed the white object" | | 12 | "His eyes met Quinn's for" | | 13 | "She had eighteen years on" | | 14 | "She had seen men shot," | | 15 | "She had watched her partner," | | 16 | "Her only lead." | | 17 | "She holstered her weapon and" | | 18 | "It was thick as honey," | | 19 | "She stumbled, caught herself on" |
| | ratio | 0.305 | |
| 36.19% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 89 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain had turned Soho" | | 1 | "Every streetlight bled across the" | | 2 | "Detective Harlow Quinn ran with" | | 3 | "The figure ahead of her" | | 4 | "Quinn had spotted him fifteen" | | 5 | "She'd recognized the face from" | | 6 | "Name was Devlin, no known" | | 7 | "He'd seen her almost immediately." | | 8 | "Their eyes had met through" | | 9 | "Her leather-soled brogues skimmed the" | | 10 | "Devlin wasn't heading for the" | | 11 | "He was heading deeper into" | | 12 | "she shouted, but her voice" | | 13 | "Devlin didn't even glance back." | | 14 | "He was young, maybe twenty-five," | | 15 | "A rusted fire escape rattled" | | 16 | "She was gaining." | | 17 | "Devlin's boots were heavier than" | | 18 | "He stumbled at the entrance" | | 19 | "The motion sent a shudder" |
| | ratio | 0.848 | |
| 95.24% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "Now Quinn was running—hard, but" | | 1 | "Before Morris, she'd believed in" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 54.95% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The figure ahead of her was a blur of dark coat and wet denim, moving with the kind of practiced urgency that came from years of flight." | | 1 | "He was young, maybe twenty-five, with a wiry frame that let him slip through gaps Quinn had to shoulder her way through." | | 2 | "She had watched her partner, DS Morris, die in a warehouse that smelled of ozone and iron, his body unmarked but his eyes turned to milk." | | 3 | "She stumbled, caught herself on a wall that was damp and rough-cut, like unfinished rock." | | 4 | "Stalls lined the platform—tables draped in velvet, crates overflowing with dried herbs and animal bones, glass cases containing objects that hummed with a faint…" | | 5 | "A supernatural black market that changed location every full moon." | | 6 | "In the center, a group of figures in dark robes were conducting some kind of transaction near a water fountain that had been dry for decades." | | 7 | "She could feel the weight of every gaze on her, the simmering hostility that came from an intruder in a closed world." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she shouted, but her voice was swallowed by the hiss of rain and the distant throb of bass from a basement club" | | 1 | "she called out, her voice steady" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she shouted (shout)" | | 1 | "she called out (call out)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.8 | |