Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2HJ5EFPSJFQJSWGREF7X6X

Run Details

Duration:
27.5s
Cost:
$0.000571
Provider:
DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came at half past ten on a Tuesday night, three sharp raps that made Ptolemy lift his head from where he’d been curled on a stack of research notes. Rory ignored it. Eva wasn’t due back until tomorrow morning, and the curry house downstairs had long since stopped delivering. Another knock. Harder this time. She set down her pen and crossed the cramped flat, the floorboards groaning under her weight. Three deadbolts. She slid the first one open, then paused at the second, her fingers resting on the cool metal. “Who is it?” A pause. Then a voice she hadn’t heard in eight months. Low, with that slight roll of the *r* that had once made her stomach tighten. “Aurora.” Her hand dropped from the lock. She stood there, palm flat against the cheap wood, and let the name settle into the spaces between her ribs. Aurora. Nobody called her that. Nobody except him, and he’d always said it like it meant something, like it was a secret he was letting her in on. She slid open the second bolt. Then the third. The door swung inward, and there he stood, Lucien Moreau, leaning on that ridiculous ivory-handled cane, his platinum hair catching the dim hallway light. He looked immaculate, as always. Charcoal suit, crisp white shirt, not a single crease to suggest he’d travelled any distance to get here. But his heterochromatic eyes were wrong—the amber one too bright, the black one too deep, and both fixed on her with an intensity that made her want to shut the door again. “You look well,” he said. “You look like you should be dead.” He smiled, a thin, humourless thing. “May I come in?” She stepped aside, because she’d never been able to say no to him, not really, and because the hallway was drafty and her flat slippers were doing nothing against the cold. He limped past her, the cane tapping against the floorboards, and she caught the faint scent of sandalwood and something metallic underneath. Blood, maybe. Or the residue of whatever hell he’d crawled out of. She closed the door and slid the bolts home one by one. The flat felt smaller with him in it. He stood in the centre of the main room, taking in the chaos of books and papers and Eva’s half-finished diagrams pinned to every available wall space. Ptolemy watched him from his perch, tail flicking once, twice, before deciding the intruder wasn’t worth the effort and going back to sleep. “Nice place,” he said. “It’s a shithole.” “I didn’t say it wasn’t.” She crossed her arms, leaned against the door frame, and waited. He turned to face her, and the lamplight caught the strange geometry of his features, the sharp cheekbones, the mouth she’d kissed more times than she cared to count. “You disappeared,” she said. “Eight months. No word. No—” She stopped herself, swallowed the rest of the sentence. *No explanation. No goodbye.* “I had business.” “You always have business.” He shifted his weight onto the cane, and for a fraction of a second, a grimace flickered across his face before he smoothed it away. “I also had a bullet in my thigh from a deal that went sour. Three weeks in a safe house in Lyon. Couldn’t move. Couldn’t send word.” The words landed like stones in her chest. She wanted to ask who shot him. Wanted to ask if it hurt. Wanted to ask why he was here now, standing in her friend’s shitty East London flat, telling her this like it explained everything. Instead, she said, “There are phones in Lyon, Lucien.” “There are demons in Lyon who trace phone calls.” She pushed off from the door frame, walked past him to the tiny kitchenette, and filled the kettle. The familiar motions gave her something to do with her hands. Flick the switch. Pull two mugs from the rack. She kept her back to him. “Why are you here?” “I came to warn you.” “Warn me.” She turned, one mug in each hand. “About what?” “The deal that went sour. It wasn’t mine.” He set the cane against the table and lowered himself into Eva’s worn armchair, wincing as he adjusted his leg. “I was working for someone. Tracking something. And what I found leads back to London. To a name you’re familiar with.” She set the mugs down, the ceramic clinking against the countertop. Her chest felt tight, her throat dry. “What name?” “Evan.” The kettle clicked off. The silence that followed was heavier than the steam curling from the spout. She stared at him, and he stared back, and eight months of anger and confusion and the slow, grinding process of moving on collapsed into a single, terrible moment. “Evan’s gone,” she said. “I left him. He doesn’t know where I am.” “He knows Eva’s name. He knows she’s your friend. And he’s looking for something you took from him.” “I didn’t take anything.” “You took yourself.” Lucien leaned forward, elbows on his knees, that mismatched gaze boring into her. “That’s the one thing he can’t replace. And he’s hell-bent on getting you back, Aurora. I’ve seen what he’s become. What he’s willing to do.” She pressed her palms flat against the countertop, the edge digging into her skin. The scar on her wrist, the crescent-shaped one from a childhood accident, caught the light. She’d told Lucien about it once. Late at night, tangled in his sheets, her fingers tracing the lines of his chest while he’d listened with that quiet, patient attention of his. “You should have told me sooner,” she said, and her voice came out steady, even though her hands were shaking. “I couldn’t.” “Bullshit.” “It’s not.” He stood, slowly, using the armchair for support, and the effort it cost him was plain. “I was compromised. Watched. If I’d contacted you, I would have led them straight to your door. I stayed away to keep you safe.” She laughed, a sharp, ugly sound that made Ptolemy lift his head again. “You stayed away because it was easier. Because you don’t know how to stay. You show up, you fix things, you leave. That’s your pattern, Lucien. That’s who you are.” He didn’t flinch. He stood there, leaning on the chair, his jaw tight, and let her words hit him. “You’re right,” he said. The admission caught her off guard. She blinked, opened her mouth to say something, and found she had nothing. “You’re right,” he repeated. “I run. I always have. It’s what I know. It’s what I was taught.” He took a step toward her, then another, his limp more pronounced without the cane. “But I came back. I came here. Not because I had to. Because I wanted to.” “You wanted to warn me.” “That too.” He stopped an arm’s length away, close enough that she could see the faint lines of exhaustion around his eyes, the shadow of stubble along his jaw that was so unlike his usual immaculate presentation. “But I could have sent a message. Could have paid someone else to deliver it. I didn’t.” She held his gaze. The amber eye, warm and searching. The black one, depthless and dark. She’d fallen into those eyes once, let herself drown in the mystery of him, and she’d spent the last eight months learning how to breathe again. “I don’t know what you want me to say,” she whispered. “Say you’ll let me stay.” His voice dropped, rough at the edges. “Say you’ll let me help. And when this is over, say you’ll give me a chance to explain. Properly. Without a door between us.” The kettle sat cold on the counter. The mugs waited, empty. Somewhere below, a car passed on Brick Lane, its headlights sweeping across the ceiling before vanishing. Rory looked at him, at the man who’d walked out of her life and then limped back into it, and felt the familiar ache settle into her bones. Trust was a muscle she’d let atrophy. But he was here, bleeding and tired and asking for something she wasn’t sure she had left to give. “Take off your jacket,” she said. He hesitated. “If you’re going to stay, I want to see the wound. I want to know exactly what I’m dealing with.” Something shifted in his expression. Relief, maybe. Or fear. They looked the same on him. He reached up and undid the first button of his jacket.
created_at"2026-04-25T14:44:08.787Z" 4/25/2026, 2:44:08 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He stood slowly [slowly]"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.383
leniency0.766
rawRatio0.056
effectiveRatio0.043
92.93% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1415
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
64.66% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1415
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"intensity"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count3
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"tracing"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"stomach"
2"intensity"
3"flickered"
4"familiar"
5"silence"
6"tracing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences93
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences93
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences122
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords5
totalWords1414
ratio0.004
matches
0"r"
1"No explanation. No goodbye."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions23
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions15
wordCount1039
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.29
worstName"Ptolemy"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Tuesday1
Ptolemy3
Lucien3
Moreau1
Eva3
East1
London1
Brick1
Lane1
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Eva"
places
0"East"
1"London"
2"Brick"
3"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1414
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences122
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean24.38
std20.89
cv0.857
sampleLengths
056
136
23
327
454
59
679
75
87
910
1065
1112
1258
134
143
155
1640
1722
183
194
2052
2144
229
239
2444
254
265
2711
2849
2920
301
3146
3213
3318
344
3541
3660
3720
382
391
4042
4143
4219
434
4419
4549
465
4754
4842
4911
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences93
matches
0"been curled"
92.47% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs186
matches
0"was letting"
1"were doing"
2"were shaking"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences122
ratio0.008
matches
0"But his heterochromatic eyes were wrong—the amber one too bright, the black one too deep, and both fixed on her with an intensity that made her want to shut the door again."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1043
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"ridiculous ivory-handled cane,"
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.032598274209012464
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0028763183125599234
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences122
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences122
mean11.59
std9.16
cv0.79
sampleLengths
031
13
217
32
43
516
62
718
83
92
109
1115
121
136
1420
151
164
1723
186
193
2024
215
2218
2332
245
257
266
274
2831
2922
302
3110
3212
338
3427
3523
364
373
385
3911
4029
414
4214
432
442
453
464
4725
4827
498
58.20% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.39344262295081966
totalSentences122
uniqueOpeners48
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences75
matches
0"Then a voice she hadn’t"
1"Then the third."
2"Instead, she said,"
3"Somewhere below, a car passed"
ratio0.053
17.33% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences75
matches
0"She set down her pen"
1"She slid the first one"
2"Her hand dropped from the"
3"She stood there, palm flat"
4"She slid open the second"
5"He looked immaculate, as always."
6"He smiled, a thin, humourless"
7"She stepped aside, because she’d"
8"He limped past her, the"
9"She closed the door and"
10"He stood in the centre"
11"She crossed her arms, leaned"
12"He turned to face her,"
13"She stopped herself, swallowed the"
14"He shifted his weight onto"
15"She wanted to ask who"
16"She pushed off from the"
17"She kept her back to"
18"She turned, one mug in"
19"He set the cane against"
ratio0.507
46.67% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences75
matches
0"The knock came at half"
1"Rory ignored it."
2"Eva wasn’t due back until"
3"She set down her pen"
4"She slid the first one"
5"Her hand dropped from the"
6"She stood there, palm flat"
7"Nobody called her that."
8"Nobody except him, and he’d"
9"She slid open the second"
10"The door swung inward, and"
11"He looked immaculate, as always."
12"Charcoal suit, crisp white shirt,"
13"He smiled, a thin, humourless"
14"She stepped aside, because she’d"
15"He limped past her, the"
16"She closed the door and"
17"The flat felt smaller with"
18"He stood in the centre"
19"Ptolemy watched him from his"
ratio0.827
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"But his heterochromatic eyes were wrong—the amber one too bright, the black one too deep, and both fixed on her with an intensity that made her want to shut the…"
1"Somewhere below, a car passed on Brick Lane, its headlights sweeping across the ceiling before vanishing."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he repeated (repeat)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.213
leniency0.426
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.085
88.8756%