| 88.89% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.111 | |
| 86.10% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1079 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "perfectly" | | 1 | "really" | | 2 | "quickly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 16.59% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1079 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "rhythmic" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "glinting" | | 5 | "anticipation" | | 6 | "almost alive" | | 7 | "stomach" | | 8 | "lurched" | | 9 | "throb" | | 10 | "pulse" | | 11 | "weight" | | 12 | "sense of" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 93 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 93 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 102 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1069 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 19 | | wordCount | 913 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.66 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | October | 2 | | Park | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Silence | 2 | | Evan | 1 | | Good | 1 | | Aurora | 6 | | Richmond | 2 | | London | 1 | | Feminine | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Silence" | | 2 | "Evan" | | 3 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | 0 | "October" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 68.03% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "blossoms that seemed to glow with their own faint luminescence" | | 1 | "not quite hunger and not quite welcome" | | 2 | "not quite welcome" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.935 | | wordCount | 1069 | | matches | | 0 | "not physical, but a pressure nonetheless, the sense of attention focusing on h" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | 0 | "was that they" | | 1 | "registered that much" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 35 | | mean | 30.54 | | std | 21.81 | | cv | 0.714 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 60 | | 2 | 52 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 45 | | 7 | 69 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 48 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 31 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 49 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 46 | | 19 | 63 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 29 | | 22 | 53 | | 23 | 68 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 52 | | 26 | 36 | | 27 | 32 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 43 | | 30 | 54 | | 31 | 43 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 47 | | 34 | 27 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 150 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 102 | | ratio | 0.098 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the arrangement—that matched every photo she’d studied during three sleepless nights of research." | | 1 | "Not the peaceful silence of a park at night—the heavy silence of something holding its breath." | | 2 | "Not the gradual cooling of an October night—a sudden plunge that made her gasp and see her own breath cloud before her face." | | 3 | "The warmth wasn’t just heat now—it carried something else." | | 4 | "The pendant flared against her chest like a small sun—and then her feet hit solid ground again, and she stumbled forward into a grove that shouldn't exist." | | 5 | "The air tasted different—thicker, sweeter, carrying an undertone of decay like fruit left too long in the sun." | | 6 | "And60;Silence again." | | 7 | "Not the shadows this time—something pale and sinuous slipping between the oaks." | | 8 | "Aurora felt weight settle around her shoulders—not physical, but a pressure nonetheless, the sense of attention focusing on her like a magnifying glass concentrating sunlight." | | 9 | "She didn’t see it—still refused to look directly—but she felt it." |
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| 86.52% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 927 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "different—thicker, sweeter, carrying" |
| | adverbCount | 45 | | adverbRatio | 0.04854368932038835 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007551240560949299 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 102 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 102 | | mean | 10.48 | | std | 7.45 | | cv | 0.711 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 23 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 56.21% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.4019607843137255 | | totalSentences | 102 | | uniqueOpeners | 41 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, so faint she almost" | | 1 | "Instead she fixed her eyes" | | 2 | "Then, from the edge of" | | 3 | "Too many joints in the" | | 4 | "Too smooth a stride for" |
| | ratio | 0.063 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d lied to Eva about" | | 1 | "She dismounted and leaned her" | | 2 | "she said to the empty" | | 3 | "She stepped forward anyway." | | 4 | "Her bicycle remained where she’d" | | 5 | "She could leave." | | 6 | "Her voice came out steady" | | 7 | "She’d learned long ago not" | | 8 | "She turned back toward the" | | 9 | "They shifted when she looked" | | 10 | "she said, and stepped through" | | 11 | "Her stomach lurched." | | 12 | "Her ears popped." | | 13 | "It was tall, she registered" | | 14 | "She’d pricked her finger on" | | 15 | "she said quietly" | | 16 | "She didn’t see it—still refused" |
| | ratio | 0.213 | |
| 60.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 64 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones caught the" | | 1 | "Aurora slowed her bicycle on" | | 2 | "Richmond Park sprawled empty behind" | | 3 | "She’d lied to Eva about" | | 4 | "A midnight delivery run." | | 5 | "That was all." | | 6 | "Nothing about the pendant burning" | | 7 | "She dismounted and leaned her" | | 8 | "The stone circle ahead looked" | | 9 | "Something about the shadows they" | | 10 | "The way the moonlight bent" | | 11 | "The Heartstone pulsed." | | 12 | "Warmth spread across her sternum" | | 13 | "she said to the empty" | | 14 | "She stepped forward anyway." | | 15 | "The grass beneath her trainers" | | 16 | "Wildflowers she didn’t recognize brushed" | | 17 | "The pendant grew warmer with" | | 18 | "The pendant seared against her" | | 19 | "The crimson gem caught the" |
| | ratio | 0.8 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 45.45% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Warmth spread across her sternum in a slow, rhythmic beat that didn’t match her own heart." | | 1 | "Wildflowers she didn’t recognize brushed her ankles, pale blossoms that seemed to glow with their own faint luminescence." | | 2 | "Not the gradual cooling of an October night—a sudden plunge that made her gasp and see her own breath cloud before her face." | | 3 | "The pendant flared against her chest like a small sun—and then her feet hit solid ground again, and she stumbled forward into a grove that shouldn't exist." | | 4 | "The same pale wildflowers carpeted the ground, but here they grew in deliberate spirals and patterns that hurt to look at too long." | | 5 | "A sharp-toothed expression of something that was not quite hunger and not quite welcome." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.44% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "the pool murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.222 | | leniency | 0.444 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.111 | |