Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2HK6HVZYEF3P9BG5GXV5WF

Run Details

Duration:
45.8s
Cost:
$0.008111
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The standing stones caught the moonlight like teeth. Aurora slowed her bicycle on the gravel path, breath misting in the October air. Richmond Park sprawled empty behind her, its deer-dotted grasslands swallowed by darkness hours ago. She’d lied to Eva about where she was going. A midnight delivery run. That was all. Nothing about the pendant burning against her collarbone, nothing about the pull she’d felt since sunset. She dismounted and leaned her bike against a gnarled oak. The stone circle ahead looked wrong in ways she couldn’t name. Not the arrangement—that matched every photo she’d studied during three sleepless nights of research. Something about the shadows they cast. The way the moonlight bent around them instead of falling straight. The Heartstone pulsed. Warmth spread across her sternum in a slow, rhythmic beat that didn’t match her own heart. "You wanted me here," she said to the empty air. "So here I am." Silence answered. Not the peaceful silence of a park at night—the heavy silence of something holding its breath. She stepped forward anyway. The grass beneath her trainers felt too soft, too springy for late autumn. Wildflowers she didn’t recognize brushed her ankles, pale blossoms that seemed to glow with their own faint luminescence. The pendant grew warmer with each step toward the stones. By her fourth step, the temperature dropped. Not the gradual cooling of an October night—a sudden plunge that made her gasp and see her own breath cloud before her face. The pendant seared against her skin now, hot enough that she fumbled at her collar to pull it free of her shirt. The crimson gem caught the moonlight and threw it back in blood-red fragments across the standing stones. "You came." Aurora spun. The voice had come from everywhere and nowhere, directionless as wind through dead leaves. The clearing behind her stood empty. Her bicycle remained where she’d left it, silver frame glinting. Beyond it, the gravel path led back toward the park entrance, toward streetlights and civilization. She could leave. Every instinct she’d honed during two years with Evan screamed at her to leave. The pendant pulsed. The warmth wasn’t just heat now—it carried something else. Anticipation, maybe. Or hunger. "What is this place?" Her voice came out steady. Good. She’d learned long ago not to let them hear the fear. "I followed the pull. I'm here. Now tell me why." The wildflowers rustled without wind. She turned back toward the stones and froze. The shadows between them had deepened into something almost solid, almost alive. They shifted when she looked directly at them and went still when she looked away. A trick of moonlight. A trick of eyes exhausted from hours of night cycling. A trick. "Right," she said, and stepped through the stone circle. The world inverted. For one sickening moment, Aurora felt herself falling in every direction at once. Her stomach lurched. Her ears popped. The pendant flared against her chest like a small sun—and then her feet hit solid ground again, and she stumbled forward into a grove that shouldn't exist. Oaks older than any she’d seen in Richmond arched overhead, their branches interlocking to form a canopy that blotted out the stars. The same pale wildflowers carpeted the ground, but here they grew in deliberate spirals and patterns that hurt to look at too long. The air tasted different—thicker, sweeter, carrying an undertone of decay like fruit left too long in the sun. And60;Silence again. Then, so faint she almost missed it: breathing. Not behind her. Not beside her. Above. Slow and deliberate, the rise and fall of lungs far larger than any human’s. Aurora didn’t look up. Something in her hindbrain, some ancient prey instinct she’d never needed in London, screamed at her not to look up. Instead she fixed her eyes on the center of the grove, where a pool of water lay perfectly still, reflecting a moon she couldn’t see through the canopy overhead. "I know what you are." She didn’t. Not really. But she’d read enough in the past three days to guess. Fae. The old stories got some things right, and one of them was that they respected boldness more than groveling. "I know this grove exists between. I know time doesn’t work here the way it does out there. And I know someone brought me here for a reason." The breathing paused. Then, from the edge of her vision, movement. Not the shadows this time—something pale and sinuous slipping between the oaks. It was tall, she registered that much without letting herself focus on it, and it moved wrong. Too many joints in the limbs. Too smooth a stride for something walking on ground. "You wear a thing of our realm." The voice came from the pool now, rippling across the water’s surface without disturbing it. Feminine. Curious. "You carry it into our grove as though you have the right." "I didn’t ask for it." The pendant’s heat had settled into a steady throb against her sternum, timed to her pulse now instead of its own rhythm. "It was given to me." "Given." The word hung in the thick air. The pale thing at the edge of her vision stopped moving. Aurora felt weight settle around her shoulders—not physical, but a pressure nonetheless, the sense of attention focusing on her like a magnifying glass concentrating sunlight. "Nothing of the Hel paths is given freely, little mortal." The pool’s surface remained glass-smooth despite the voice rippling from it. "You are claimed. You are marked. You walked into our grove carrying a Heartstone that has tasted your blood and knows the shape of your soul. Do you understand what you have done?" Aurora’s left wrist itched. The small crescent scar there, a childhood accident on a broken bottle, tingled as though freshly healed. She’d pricked her finger on the pendant’s setting three nights ago while examining it. A single drop of blood, quickly wiped away. "Oh," she said quietly. The pale thing at the edge of her vision smiled. She didn’t see it—still refused to look directly—but she felt it. The way a mouse feels the owl’s gaze before the talons close. A sharp-toothed expression of something that was not quite hunger and not quite welcome. "You begin to understand," the pool murmured. "Now. State your name, marked one. Your full name. And perhaps we shall bargain for what remains of your years."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
88.89% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.111
86.10% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1079
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"really"
2"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
16.59% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1079
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"pulsed"
count2
1
word"warmth"
count2
2
word"rhythmic"
count1
3
word"silence"
count4
4
word"glinting"
count1
5
word"anticipation"
count1
6
word"almost alive"
count1
7
word"stomach"
count1
8
word"lurched"
count1
9
word"throb"
count1
10
word"pulse"
count1
11
word"weight"
count1
12
word"sense of"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"warmth"
2"rhythmic"
3"silence"
4"glinting"
5"anticipation"
6"almost alive"
7"stomach"
8"lurched"
9"throb"
10"pulse"
11"weight"
12"sense of"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences93
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences93
filterMatches
0"hear"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences102
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1069
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount913
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.66
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
October2
Park1
Eva1
Heartstone1
Silence2
Evan1
Good1
Aurora6
Richmond2
London1
Feminine1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Silence"
2"Evan"
3"Aurora"
places
0"October"
1"Park"
2"Richmond"
3"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
68.03% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"blossoms that seemed to glow with their own faint luminescence"
1"not quite hunger and not quite welcome"
2"not quite welcome"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.935
wordCount1069
matches
0"not physical, but a pressure nonetheless, the sense of attention focusing on h"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences102
matches
0"was that they"
1"registered that much"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean30.54
std21.81
cv0.714
sampleLengths
08
160
252
319
414
518
645
769
82
916
1048
1116
1231
135
1449
152
169
173
1846
1963
202
2129
2253
2368
243
2552
2636
2732
281
2943
3054
3143
324
3347
3427
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs150
matches
0"was going"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences102
ratio0.098
matches
0"Not the arrangement—that matched every photo she’d studied during three sleepless nights of research."
1"Not the peaceful silence of a park at night—the heavy silence of something holding its breath."
2"Not the gradual cooling of an October night—a sudden plunge that made her gasp and see her own breath cloud before her face."
3"The warmth wasn’t just heat now—it carried something else."
4"The pendant flared against her chest like a small sun—and then her feet hit solid ground again, and she stumbled forward into a grove that shouldn't exist."
5"The air tasted different—thicker, sweeter, carrying an undertone of decay like fruit left too long in the sun."
6"And60;Silence again."
7"Not the shadows this time—something pale and sinuous slipping between the oaks."
8"Aurora felt weight settle around her shoulders—not physical, but a pressure nonetheless, the sense of attention focusing on her like a magnifying glass concentrating sunlight."
9"She didn’t see it—still refused to look directly—but she felt it."
86.52% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount927
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"different—thicker, sweeter, carrying"
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.04854368932038835
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.007551240560949299
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences102
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences102
mean10.48
std7.45
cv0.711
sampleLengths
08
114
214
39
44
53
616
710
811
914
106
1111
123
1316
1410
154
162
1716
184
1913
2018
2110
227
2323
2422
2517
262
272
2814
296
3010
3115
323
3314
343
359
362
372
389
391
4011
4110
425
438
4412
4515
464
4710
482
499
56.21% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.4019607843137255
totalSentences102
uniqueOpeners41
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences80
matches
0"Then, so faint she almost"
1"Instead she fixed her eyes"
2"Then, from the edge of"
3"Too many joints in the"
4"Too smooth a stride for"
ratio0.063
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences80
matches
0"She’d lied to Eva about"
1"She dismounted and leaned her"
2"she said to the empty"
3"She stepped forward anyway."
4"Her bicycle remained where she’d"
5"She could leave."
6"Her voice came out steady"
7"She’d learned long ago not"
8"She turned back toward the"
9"They shifted when she looked"
10"she said, and stepped through"
11"Her stomach lurched."
12"Her ears popped."
13"It was tall, she registered"
14"She’d pricked her finger on"
15"she said quietly"
16"She didn’t see it—still refused"
ratio0.213
60.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences80
matches
0"The standing stones caught the"
1"Aurora slowed her bicycle on"
2"Richmond Park sprawled empty behind"
3"She’d lied to Eva about"
4"A midnight delivery run."
5"That was all."
6"Nothing about the pendant burning"
7"She dismounted and leaned her"
8"The stone circle ahead looked"
9"Something about the shadows they"
10"The way the moonlight bent"
11"The Heartstone pulsed."
12"Warmth spread across her sternum"
13"she said to the empty"
14"She stepped forward anyway."
15"The grass beneath her trainers"
16"Wildflowers she didn’t recognize brushed"
17"The pendant grew warmer with"
18"The pendant seared against her"
19"The crimson gem caught the"
ratio0.8
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
ratio0
45.45% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Warmth spread across her sternum in a slow, rhythmic beat that didn’t match her own heart."
1"Wildflowers she didn’t recognize brushed her ankles, pale blossoms that seemed to glow with their own faint luminescence."
2"Not the gradual cooling of an October night—a sudden plunge that made her gasp and see her own breath cloud before her face."
3"The pendant flared against her chest like a small sun—and then her feet hit solid ground again, and she stumbled forward into a grove that shouldn't exist."
4"The same pale wildflowers carpeted the ground, but here they grew in deliberate spirals and patterns that hurt to look at too long."
5"A sharp-toothed expression of something that was not quite hunger and not quite welcome."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
94.44% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"the pool murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.222
leniency0.444
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.111
83.4081%