Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2HKJ7WNKQSP9XTXZX5MCQS

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Duration:
32.3s
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$0.000666
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DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The smell hit Harlow Quinn before she reached the bottom of the stairs. Damp earth, stale air, something metallic that wasn't blood—or wasn't only blood. She pulled the torch from her coat pocket and swept the beam across the abandoned platform. DC Miller stood near the body, his silhouette sharp against the emergency lights strung along the tunnel. He'd rigged them himself, she guessed. The kid was thorough if nothing else. "Time of death?" She stepped off the last stair, her boots crunching on debris. "Medical examiner's still en route." Miller gestured with his chin. "But the uniform who found him said the body was cold. Been here a while." Quinn crouched. The victim lay on his back, arms at his sides, legs straight. A man in his fifties, expensive overcoat, polished shoes. No visible wounds. The pool of water beneath him had seeped into the wool, darkening it to black. "Who called it in?" "Night shift maintenance worker. Heard a noise, came down to check." Miller flipped open his notebook. "Says he saw someone running toward the old ventilation shaft. Couldn't get a description—too dark." Quinn ran her torch over the body. The hands caught her attention. Clean nails. No dirt, no grime, no scratches. Not even a callus. She leaned closer. The cuffs were starched, the shirt pristine except where the water had touched. "Miller, look at his coat. The back is soaked through. The front is dry." Miller frowned, stepped nearer. "He fell backward into the water. That's why the back's wet." "He fell backward, but his hands are clean. No defensive wounds. No struggle." Quinn straightened. "If he fell, he'd have tried to catch himself. His palms would be scraped, his sleeves would have water marks from bracing. None of that." "Maybe he was pushed. Didn't have time to react." "Then his heels would have scuffed the concrete. His shoes are polished. Not a mark." She gestured to the platform floor. "There's no dirt trail. No drag marks. He was placed here, Miller. Laid out like a mannequin." Miller flipped his notebook closed, his expression shifting from deferential to doubtful. "So we're looking at a secondary crime scene. Body dumped. That doesn't make it unusual. Happens all the time." Quinn didn't answer. She circled the body, her torch beam sweeping the platform. The walls were coated in decades of grime, the tiles cracked and missing in places. A rat scurried along the track bed. Nothing remarkable. Except the smell. That metallic tang clung to the air, but it wasn't the familiar copper of blood. It was sharper, almost electric. Like ozone after a lightning strike. "Did you bag his belongings?" "Just the wallet. Empty. No ID, no cards, no cash. Either he was robbed before or after death." Miller held up a clear evidence bag. "No phone, no keys. Whoever did this cleaned him out." Quinn took the bag, held it to the light. Fine leather, Italian. Stitching was hand-done, the initials stamped in gold leaf: H.G. Monogrammed. Whoever he was, he had money. She handed it back. "Check missing persons for an H.G. reported in the last seventy-two hours." "Already on it." Quinn knelt again, this time closer to the victim's face. The skin was waxy, but not the waxy of death alone. There was a film—a powdery residue on his cheeks, his forehead. She touched it with her gloved fingertip, rubbed. Grey. Fine. Like stone dust. "What've you got?" Miller asked. "Not sure." She stood, scanned the platform again. The emergency lights cast long shadows, pooling in the corners. The ventilation shaft Miller mentioned was a black mouth at the far end, rusted grating hanging loose. "You check that shaft?" "Briefly. Leads to a maintenance crawlspace. Dead end. No sign of forced entry." Quinn moved toward it, her torch probing the darkness. The beam caught something on the floor near the shaft entrance: a faint circular impression in the dust. Not a footprint. A perfect ring, about a foot in diameter, the edges sharply defined. She crouched, ran her gloved fingers over it. The dust was compressed, but not dirty. Clean, almost polished. Like something had been placed there recently, then removed. "Miller, bring the light over here." He joined her, his torch adding to the illumination. The ring pattern was more visible now—faint traces of silver where the dust had been pressed. She tilted her head, squinted. There were symbols in the ring, too small to make out clearly. Lines and curves, almost like writing. "What is that?" Miller asked. "I don't know." She pulled out her phone, snapped a photo. The camera struggled in the low light, the image coming out grainy. She'd need better equipment. "You think it's related to the body?" "Too precise to be coincidence." She stood, brushed the dust from her knees. "The victim was placed on that spot, not near it. The ring is centered exactly where his body lay. He was arranged to align with this." Miller stared at the floor, then back at the body. "So what, some kind of ritual? We're looking at occult stuff now?" Quinn didn't answer. She reached into her coat pocket and pulled out a small brass compass—one she'd found tucked under the victim's hip when she first knelt. She hadn't mentioned it to Miller yet. The casing had a green patina, and the face was etched with symbols, like the ones on the floor. The needle spun in slow, erratic circles, never settling. She hadn't seen a compass act like that before. It wasn't magnetic interference—she'd checked. The needle moved as if pulled by something beyond the earth. "Find something?" Miller asked, noticing the compass in her hand. "Probably nothing." She slipped it back into her pocket. "Bag the body. Tell the ME to check for unusual residue under the fingernails and in the lungs. I want a full tox screen." "You think he was poisoned?" "I think he was killed somewhere else and brought here. And whoever brought him wanted him in that exact spot, laid out that exact way." She looked at the ventilation shaft again. "Check the crawlspace for traces of that grey dust. And get a team to sweep the entire station." Miller nodded, pulling out his radio. Quinn turned back to the body. The torchlight caught the victim's face, the eyes half-open, staring at nothing. She'd seen death before. Hundreds of times. This one felt different. The compass in her pocket hummed—a faint, almost imperceptible vibration against her thigh. She pressed her palm over it, felt the warmth spread. She didn't believe in the supernatural. Not yet. But she knew a wrong note when she heard one, and this whole scene sang false from the first chord. "Quinn?" Miller's voice cut through the quiet. "You coming up?" "In a minute." She waited until his footsteps faded up the stairs, then pulled the compass out again. The needle had stopped spinning. It pointed due east, toward the ventilation shaft. Toward the hidden tunnels beneath Camden. Toward something she was going to find, whether she understood it or not.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.385
leniency0.769
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.80% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1190
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.98% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1190
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"pristine"
count1
1
word"remarkable"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"electric"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"perfect"
count1
6
word"etched"
count1
7
word"magnetic"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count1
9
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"pristine"
1"remarkable"
2"familiar"
3"electric"
4"scanned"
5"perfect"
6"etched"
7"magnetic"
8"warmth"
9"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences99
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences99
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences122
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1183
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
61.62% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount792
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.77
worstName"Miller"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn10
Miller14
Italian1
Camden1
Like3
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Miller"
3"Like"
places(empty)
globalScore0.616
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1183
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences122
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean25.17
std14.89
cv0.591
sampleLengths
041
130
214
325
441
54
631
740
814
915
1040
119
1238
1331
1437
1529
165
1735
1829
1916
203
2145
225
2335
244
2513
2642
2727
286
2948
305
3127
327
3339
3422
3562
3625
3710
3833
395
4050
4135
4223
4328
4410
4537
4613
84.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences99
matches
0"were starched"
1"were coated"
2"was compressed"
3"been placed"
4"been pressed"
5"was etched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs143
matches(empty)
2.34% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences122
ratio0.049
matches
0"Damp earth, stale air, something metallic that wasn't blood—or wasn't only blood."
1"There was a film—a powdery residue on his cheeks, his forehead."
2"The ring pattern was more visible now—faint traces of silver where the dust had been pressed."
3"She reached into her coat pocket and pulled out a small brass compass—one she'd found tucked under the victim's hip when she first knelt."
4"It wasn't magnetic interference—she'd checked."
5"The compass in her pocket hummed—a faint, almost imperceptible vibration against her thigh."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount800
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.02375
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.005
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences122
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences122
mean9.7
std6.09
cv0.628
sampleLengths
013
112
216
317
46
57
614
710
815
92
1012
119
123
1315
144
1516
1615
177
185
192
206
214
223
2313
2414
254
2611
2715
2825
299
3021
3117
3212
3319
343
3510
3615
377
382
393
4015
415
426
435
4425
4510
469
473
4810
491
61.20% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.4016393442622951
totalSentences122
uniqueOpeners49
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
ratio0
98.65% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences89
matches
0"She pulled the torch from"
1"He'd rigged them himself, she"
2"She stepped off the last"
3"She leaned closer."
4"She gestured to the platform"
5"She circled the body, her"
6"It was sharper, almost electric."
7"She handed it back."
8"She touched it with her"
9"She stood, scanned the platform"
10"She crouched, ran her gloved"
11"He joined her, his torch"
12"She tilted her head, squinted."
13"She pulled out her phone,"
14"She'd need better equipment."
15"She stood, brushed the dust"
16"She reached into her coat"
17"She hadn't mentioned it to"
18"She hadn't seen a compass"
19"It wasn't magnetic interference—she'd checked."
ratio0.303
55.51% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount72
totalSentences89
matches
0"The smell hit Harlow Quinn"
1"She pulled the torch from"
2"DC Miller stood near the"
3"He'd rigged them himself, she"
4"The kid was thorough if"
5"She stepped off the last"
6"Miller gestured with his chin"
7"The victim lay on his"
8"A man in his fifties,"
9"The pool of water beneath"
10"Miller flipped open his notebook"
11"Quinn ran her torch over"
12"The hands caught her attention."
13"She leaned closer."
14"The cuffs were starched, the"
15"Miller frowned, stepped nearer."
16"She gestured to the platform"
17"Miller flipped his notebook closed,"
18"Quinn didn't answer."
19"She circled the body, her"
ratio0.809
56.18% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences89
matches
0"Whoever he was, he had"
ratio0.011
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
91.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She stepped, her boots crunching on debris"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.077
leniency0.154
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.4981%