Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2HN07FDXYM9PZ01WZ3MD1S

Run Details

Duration:
1m 2s
Cost:
$0.001816
Provider:
DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The trees breathed. Rory Carter felt the shift the moment she stepped between the ancient oaks. Not a sound—not yet—but a pressure change, like walking from a quiet street into a room where someone held their breath. Her boots crunched frosted grass, and the night air tasted of wild honeysuckle that had no business blooming in late October. She touched the pendant beneath her jacket. Warm. Not the fiery pulse Eva had described when a Hel portal lurked nearby, but a steady heat that pressed against her sternum like a whispered warning. The standing stones loomed ahead, their surfaces rippling with moss and silver lichen. Moonlight caught the edges, made them gleam wet and black like oil-slicked teeth. She'd been here twice before—once with Eva and Silas, once alone in daylight to deliver a package for Yu-Fei that had smelled of ginger and old parchment. Both times, the grove had felt strange but welcoming, a pocket of elsewhere that hummed with drowsy contentment. Tonight, the humming had stopped. "You wanted me here," Rory said, her voice smaller than she intended. "So here I am." The pendant had woken her at 3:17 a.m. Not the gentle warmth she'd grown accustomed to, but a sharp, insistent heat that bordered on painful. The chain left a red mark on her collarbone. She'd dressed in the dark—jeans, boots, her canvas jacket with the torn lining—and cycled through empty streets to Richmond Park. The gate had been unlocked. That was wrong. The park closed at dusk, the iron gates secured with heavy chains that rattled like bones in the wind. Tonight, the gate hung open. Waiting. Now, in the clearing, Rory catalogued details with the detached precision she'd learned from her father's cross-examinations. The standing stones cast shadows that didn't align with the moon's position. The wildflowers—foxgloves, bluebells, things that shouldn't coexist in one season—bent away from her as she passed. The silence pressed against her eardrums, thick and cottony. A twig snapped. Behind her. Rory spun. The tree line stood empty, a dark scribble against the lighter dark of the sky. Nothing moved. She held her breath and counted to ten, the way Eva had taught her when the anxiety clawed up her throat. *One. Two. Three.* The pendant's warmth crept up to her collarbones. *Four. Five.* She could hear her own heartbeat, too fast, a rabbit-pulse in her wrists. *Six.* Something exhaled. Close. Wet and rattling, like breath through fluid-filled lungs. Rory's mouth went dry. "Isolde?" The name came out cracked. "Silas said you'd be here. He said you needed to see the pendant." Silence. Then, from somewhere in the dark between the stones, a voice—too many voices, layered like sediment, old and young and something in between. *"Not Isolde."* The pendant flared. Heat seared through her shirt, and Rory gasped, fumbling at the chain. The crimson stone glowed against her palm, bright as a fresh wound. "You're not supposed to be here," she said, and her voice didn't waver. Good. That was good. *"Neither are you."* The words came from everywhere now. The soil beneath her feet. The air. Inside her own skull, rattling against bone like loose teeth. Rory pressed her free hand to her temple and felt her pulse hammering there. She'd faced things before—the thing in the basement on Mercer Street, the drowned girls in the canal, the Hel-hound that had stalked her for three blocks until Silas spoke words that made the air taste like copper. She'd learned to read the shape of fear, to distinguish the sharp edge of genuine danger from the dull ache of her own anxiety. This was different. This was old. Movement in her peripheral vision. Rory turned her head, slow, the way you move in dreams when your limbs are made of honey. The wildflowers had straightened. Every stem, every petal, every delicate furled bloom now pointed toward her like a hundred watching eyes. "Right." She let out a breath that misted in front of her face. The temperature had dropped. When had the temperature dropped? "I'm going to leave now. Whatever you are, whatever you want—the pendant isn't yours." *"We know what it is."* The voice had moved closer. No—the *voices* had separated, individual threads pulling apart from the chorus. One high and fluting, almost childish. One low as shifting earth. One that crackled like dead leaves. *"Dymas-made."* *"Blood-bound."* *"Stolen."* "I didn't steal it." Rory backed toward the tree line, one careful step at a time. The pendant had grown so hot she could feel blisters forming on her palm, but she didn't let go. Eva had told her never to let go. "It was given to me." *"Given."* *"Given."* *"Given by whom?"* The question stopped her. She didn't know. That was the truth she'd been avoiding for three months, the splinter she couldn't dig out. The pendant had appeared on her nightstand one morning in a velvet box the color of dried blood. No note. No explanation. Just the stone, warm as a living thing, and the certainty that it belonged to her now. Eva had theories. Silas had suspicions. Rory had nightmares about hands—long-fingered, too many joints—pressing the chain into her palm while she slept. "I don't know," she admitted. The wildflowers rustled. Not in wind—the air had gone dead still, heavy as water. They rustled like things laughing. *"Liar."* The word slapped into her chest. Physical force. Rory staggered, her shoulder blades hitting rough bark. She hadn't realized she'd retreated that far. The tree behind her was one of the boundary oaks, its trunk wide as a cathedral door. She could feel it breathing—slow, deep, the respiration of something ancient and patient. *"You know."* *"You've always known."* *"Say his name."* Rory's scar throbbed. The small crescent on her left wrist, long healed, long forgotten—she'd gotten it falling from a swing set when she was seven, that was the story, that was always the story—now burned with the same heat as the pendant. She looked down and saw the scar tissue *moving*, the skin rippling like water struck by a stone. "Stop it." *"Say his name."* "No." *"SAY IT."* The command shattered the silence. Birds exploded from the canopy, dark shapes against darker sky. Somewhere in the distance, a fox screamed—that awful, humanlike sound that had startled her as a child in Cardiff, made her run to her parents' room. The wildflowers bowed in unison, their petals brushing the soil like penitents before an altar. And in the space between the standing stones, something *shifted*. Rory saw it. Not clearly—she would never remember it clearly, no matter how many times Eva or Silas asked her to recount this night—but she saw the absence of light, the negative space shaped like a figure, tall and wrong-angled and crowned with something that might have been antlers or might have been bone. The pendant went cold. That was worse than the heat. The sudden absence of warmth, the way the crimson light guttered and died. In her palm, the stone felt like a dead thing. "I don't know his name," Rory whispered. "I don't." The figure didn't move. Didn't speak. But she felt its attention on her like a weight, like drowning, like the moment before her ex's fist connected with the wall beside her head—that terrible suspended certainty of harm. Then, from the tree line behind her, a different voice. Human. Familiar. Wrong in its own way because it shouldn't have been there, couldn't have been there, not at this hour, not in this place. "Rory." She knew that voice. She'd fled London to escape it. Cardiff. The flat on Albany Road. The smell of whiskey and stale cigarettes. Hands that looked gentle until they weren't. Evan. She didn't turn. If she turned, she would see him standing between the oaks, his boyish smile, his apologetic eyes, the face she'd loved before she learned to fear it. She knew it wasn't real. The grove was pulling memories from her, fishing in the dark water of her mind and showing her what it caught. *"Say his name,"* the voices crooned. *"The one who gave you the stone. Say it, and we will let you leave."* Rory's hand closed around the dead pendant. "No," she said. "But I'll tell you something else." She stepped forward, away from the tree, toward the standing stones and the waiting dark. Her legs shook. Her scar ached. The fox's scream had faded into silence so complete she could hear her own blood moving. "I'm not afraid of him," she said. "Whatever he is. Whatever *you* are. I've survived worse than shadows." The figure tilted its head. The antlers—if they were antlers—scraped against the sky. *"Have you?"* The question held genuine curiosity. And that, more than anything else, made Rory's stomach drop.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.297
leniency0.595
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1488
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
36.16% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1488
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"pulse"
count3
1
word"loomed"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count3
3
word"silence"
count4
4
word"could feel"
count2
5
word"velvet"
count1
6
word"throbbed"
count1
7
word"shattered"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"familiar"
count1
10
word"stomach"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"loomed"
2"warmth"
3"silence"
4"could feel"
5"velvet"
6"throbbed"
7"shattered"
8"weight"
9"familiar"
10"stomach"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences140
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences140
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences167
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen54
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans25
markdownWords62
totalWords1464
ratio0.042
matches
0"One. Two. Three."
1"Four. Five."
2"Six."
3"\"Not Isolde.\""
4"\"Neither are you.\""
5"\"We know what it is.\""
6"voices"
7"\"Dymas-made.\""
8"\"Blood-bound.\""
9"\"Stolen.\""
10"\"Given.\""
11"\"Given.\""
12"\"Given by whom?\""
13"\"Liar.\""
14"\"You know.\""
15"\"You've always known.\""
16"\"Say his name.\""
17"moving"
18"\"Say his name.\""
19"\"SAY IT.\""
20"shifted"
21"\"Say his name,\""
22"\"The one who gave you the stone. Say it, and we will let you leave.\""
23"you"
24"\"Have you?\""
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
89.44% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount1321
uniqueNames19
maxNameDensity1.21
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter1
October1
Eva6
Hel2
Silas4
Yu-Fei1
Richmond1
Park1
Rory16
Silence1
Good1
Mercer1
Street1
Hel-hound1
Cardiff2
London1
Albany1
Road1
One4
persons
0"Carter"
1"Eva"
2"Silas"
3"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Mercer"
3"Street"
4"Cardiff"
5"London"
6"Albany"
7"Road"
8"One"
globalScore0.894
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences75
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a dead thing"
63.39% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.366
wordCount1464
matches
0"Not the fiery pulse Eva had described when a Hel portal lurked nearby, but a steady heat"
1"Not the gentle warmth she'd grown accustomed to, but a sharp, insistent heat"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences167
matches
0"knew that voice"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs68
mean21.53
std22.16
cv1.029
sampleLengths
03
155
234
371
45
516
681
76
854
95
1067
1111
1223
1324
142
1527
1617
173
1837
1961
203
213
2244
2336
245
2533
261
271
281
2948
301
311
323
3362
3422
355
3619
371
3853
392
403
413
4260
432
443
451
462
4756
4810
4954
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences140
matches
0"been unlocked"
1"are made"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs226
matches
0"was pulling"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount23
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences15
totalSentences167
ratio0.09
matches
0"Not a sound—not yet—but a pressure change, like walking from a quiet street into a room where someone held their breath."
1"She'd been here twice before—once with Eva and Silas, once alone in daylight to deliver a package for Yu-Fei that had smelled of ginger and old parchment."
2"She'd dressed in the dark—jeans, boots, her canvas jacket with the torn lining—and cycled through empty streets to Richmond Park."
3"The wildflowers—foxgloves, bluebells, things that shouldn't coexist in one season—bent away from her as she passed."
4"Then, from somewhere in the dark between the stones, a voice—too many voices, layered like sediment, old and young and something in between."
5"She'd faced things before—the thing in the basement on Mercer Street, the drowned girls in the canal, the Hel-hound that had stalked her for three blocks until Silas spoke words that made the air taste like copper."
6"No—the *voices* had separated, individual threads pulling apart from the chorus."
7"Rory had nightmares about hands—long-fingered, too many joints—pressing the chain into her palm while she slept."
8"Not in wind—the air had gone dead still, heavy as water."
9"She could feel it breathing—slow, deep, the respiration of something ancient and patient."
10"The small crescent on her left wrist, long healed, long forgotten—she'd gotten it falling from a swing set when she was seven, that was the story, that was always the story—now burned with the same heat as the pendant."
11"Somewhere in the distance, a fox screamed—that awful, humanlike sound that had startled her as a child in Cardiff, made her run to her parents' room."
12"Not clearly—she would never remember it clearly, no matter how many times Eva or Silas asked her to recount this night—but she saw the absence of light, the negative space shaped like a figure, tall and wrong-angled and crowned with something that might have been antlers or might have been bone."
13"But she felt its attention on her like a weight, like drowning, like the moment before her ex's fist connected with the wall beside her head—that terrible suspended certainty of harm."
14"The antlers—if they were antlers—scraped against the sky."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1026
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.023391812865497075
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences167
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences167
mean8.77
std8.27
cv0.943
sampleLengths
03
113
221
321
47
51
626
713
813
927
1018
115
1212
134
148
1517
169
1720
185
193
2019
215
221
2317
2412
2516
269
273
282
292
3015
312
3221
331
341
359
361
3714
381
392
401
418
424
436
4413
451
4623
472
483
4912
58.68% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.41317365269461076
totalSentences167
uniqueOpeners69
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences114
matches
0"Then, from somewhere in the"
1"Just the stone, warm as"
2"Somewhere in the distance, a"
3"Then, from the tree line"
ratio0.035
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences114
matches
0"Her boots crunched frosted grass,"
1"She touched the pendant beneath"
2"She'd been here twice before—once"
3"She'd dressed in the dark—jeans,"
4"She held her breath and"
5"she said, and her voice"
6"She'd faced things before—the thing"
7"She'd learned to read the"
8"She let out a breath"
9"She didn't know."
10"They rustled like things laughing."
11"She hadn't realized she'd retreated"
12"She could feel it breathing—slow,"
13"She looked down and saw"
14"She knew that voice."
15"She'd fled London to escape"
16"She didn't turn."
17"She knew it wasn't real."
18"She stepped forward, away from"
19"Her legs shook."
ratio0.184
69.65% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount89
totalSentences114
matches
0"The trees breathed."
1"Rory Carter felt the shift"
2"Her boots crunched frosted grass,"
3"She touched the pendant beneath"
4"The standing stones loomed ahead,"
5"Moonlight caught the edges, made"
6"She'd been here twice before—once"
7"Both times, the grove had"
8"Tonight, the humming had stopped."
9"Rory said, her voice smaller"
10"The pendant had woken her"
11"The chain left a red"
12"She'd dressed in the dark—jeans,"
13"The gate had been unlocked."
14"That was wrong."
15"The park closed at dusk,"
16"Tonight, the gate hung open."
17"The standing stones cast shadows"
18"The wildflowers—foxgloves, bluebells, things that"
19"The silence pressed against her"
ratio0.781
87.72% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences114
matches
0"Now, in the clearing, Rory"
1"If she turned, she would"
ratio0.018
46.70% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences52
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Her boots crunched frosted grass, and the night air tasted of wild honeysuckle that had no business blooming in late October."
1"She'd been here twice before—once with Eva and Silas, once alone in daylight to deliver a package for Yu-Fei that had smelled of ginger and old parchment."
2"Not the gentle warmth she'd grown accustomed to, but a sharp, insistent heat that bordered on painful."
3"The wildflowers—foxgloves, bluebells, things that shouldn't coexist in one season—bent away from her as she passed."
4"She'd faced things before—the thing in the basement on Mercer Street, the drowned girls in the canal, the Hel-hound that had stalked her for three blocks until …"
5"The small crescent on her left wrist, long healed, long forgotten—she'd gotten it falling from a swing set when she was seven, that was the story, that was alwa…"
6"Not clearly—she would never remember it clearly, no matter how many times Eva or Silas asked her to recount this night—but she saw the absence of light, the neg…"
79.55% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Rory said, her voice smaller than she intended"
68.92% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she admitted (admit)"
1"a fox screamed (scream)"
2"Rory whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.189
leniency0.378
rawRatio0.429
effectiveRatio0.162
86.6734%