Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2HNJC5JFVZS47TMDD45C01

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Duration:
25.9s
Cost:
$0.000567
Provider:
DeepSeek

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora ducked under a low-hanging branch and nearly stumbled into Nyx's back. "Stop," the Shade said, their voice barely a ripple in the still air. "We're here." Rory peered around them. Before her, the trees of Richmond Park opened into a clearing she'd walked past three times already without noticing. The fourth time, Nyx had gripped her arm and pulled her sideways through a gap between two oaks that hadn't existed a moment before. Now she stood at the edge of a space that felt *older* than anything she'd ever known. The grass beneath her feet wasn't the patchy green of an English autumn but a deep, almost indigo shade of emerald. Wildflowers dotted the ground—foxgloves the colour of spilled wine, roses that bloomed in shifting patterns of gold and silver, tiny blue blossoms that released puffs of luminescent pollen when her passage disturbed them. Above, the sky looked wrong. Not the grey October she'd left behind, but a deep twilight purple shot through with veins of pale amber. Stars peeked through gaps in the canopy, though Rory knew it was barely three in the afternoon. "It's still daytime outside," she breathed. Nyx moved past her, their shadow-form solidifying as they stepped onto the indigo grass. A faint violet luminescence traced the edges of their silhouette. "Time here answers to different masters." Rory clutched the Heartstone pendant at her throat. The deep crimson gem pulsed against her collarbone, warm and steady—a comfort against the creeping unease that prickled along her arms. She followed Nyx deeper into the clearing, her boots sinking slightly into earth that felt springy and alive beneath her tread. The air smelled of honey and wet stone and something floral she couldn't name. Each breath tasted sweet on her tongue, almost cloying. "Where's the Seer?" she asked. Nyx gestured with a hand that was barely visible against the deepening gloom. "Patience." Rory frowned but kept walking. The grove stretched farther than it should have—far wider than the clearing she'd glimpsed from outside. Standing stones ringed the space, massive slabs of oak-coloured granite etched with spiralling patterns that seemed to shift when she looked at them directly. Moss covered their bases, but the moss glowed—a soft, phosphorescent green that cast dancing shadows across the grass. She reached out and touched one of the stones. The world lurched. Sound rushed in from everywhere at once—whispers, laughter, music that played on instruments she couldn't name. Images flickered behind her closed eyelids: a court of figures made of light and shadow, a throne woven from living branches, a woman with silver hair and eyes like frozen violets. Rory yanked her hand back. The visions stopped. Her palm tingled where she'd touched the stone. "First time?" Nyx's whisper carried a hint of dark amusement. "Could have warned me." "Could have. Didn't." She shot them a look, but they'd already moved on, their incorporeal form gliding between the standing stones like smoke through fingers. Rory followed, more careful now, keeping her hands at her sides. The grove's centre opened into a circle of bare earth surrounded by the largest of the standing stones. In the exact middle grew a single tree—a massive willow whose leaves shimmered like strands of hammered silver. Its trunk was impossibly wide, easily the span of three people standing arm-to-arm, and its bark bore the same spiralling patterns as the standing stones. The branches hung low, trailing across the ground in curtains of metallic light. Beneath the tree sat a figure. Isolde rose as they approached, her silver hair pooling around her like water. She wore robes of pale grey that seemed to blend with the twilight air, and her lavender eyes caught the glow of the willow's leaves, reflecting them back like mirrors. "Aurora Carter." Her voice carried a melodic lilt, words wrapped in silk and thorns. "The Veil grows thin, and here you stand at its edge." Rory's heart hammered. "You know why I've come." Isolde smiled—a careful expression that revealed nothing. "I know many things. The question is which thread you wish me to pull." She swept a hand across the space before her. The air rippled, and suddenly Rory could see them—dozens of luminous threads hanging from the willow's branches, each one glowing with a different colour. Some pulsed with light, others lay dark and dormant. A few seemed to writhe like living things. "Fate's loom," Isolde said. "Every choice, every path, every fork in the road. Here they hang, waiting for hands to weave them." Nyx drifted closer to the threads, violet eyes reflecting the glow. "You show her too much." "The girl came seeking." Isolde's gaze never left Rory. "I show her only what she has earned." Rory stepped forward. One thread in particular caught her attention—a deep crimson strand that pulsed in time with her Heartstone. She reached for it, hesitated. "May I?" Isolde inclined her head. Rory touched the thread. Warmth flooded through her fingers, and the world dissolved. She stood in a narrow alley, rain slicking the cobblestones. Above, a sky the colour of bruised fruit churned with clouds that moved too fast. In the distance, a figure stood silhouetted against a door of black iron—tall, horned, watching her with eyes that burned like embers. *Belphegor.* The name rose unbidden. The vision shattered. Rory stumbled back, gasping. Nyx caught her, solid enough to steady her, and she felt the strange chill of their form against her back. "What did you see?" Nyx asked. Rory's throat worked. "The Prince of Gluttony. He's waiting for me." Isolde's expression remained unreadable, but something flickered in those lavender depths. "The threads converge. Dymas calls, and you must answer." She reached into her robe and produced a slender dagger—the Fae-Forged blade, its moonsilver surface catching the willow's glow. She pressed it into Rory's hand. "Take this. The road ahead carries sharp edges, and mortal steel will not suffice." Rory wrapped her fingers around the hilt. The blade was cold, impossibly cold, but it hummed against her palm like a living thing. "I don't even know how to get there." Isolde's smile sharpened. "You carry the key already." Her gaze dropped to the Heartstone pendant. "When the time comes, you'll know." A wind stirred through the grove, rustling the silver willow leaves. The sky shifted, the purple deepening toward true night. Somewhere in the distance, a bell tolled—a sound that seemed to come from both miles away and right beside Rory's ear. "The grove grows restless," Isolde said. "You should go before it decides to keep you." Rory tucked the dagger into her jacket. "Thank you." "Don't thank me yet, child." The Seer turned away, her robes merging with the shadows beneath the willow. "Thank me when you return." Nyx placed a hand on Rory's shoulder, guiding her back toward the edge of the clearing. The standing stones loomed as they passed, their carvings seeming to watch. Rory didn't look back. They slipped through the gap between oaks, and the grove vanished behind them. Autumn sunlight filtered through thinning leaves. A jogger passed on the path, oblivious. Rory exhaled, her breath misting in the cold air. The Heartstone pulsed warm against her chest. The dagger pressed cool against her ribs. Dymas called. She wasn't ready. But the threads were already weaving.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"The Seer turned away [away]"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.355
leniency0.71
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.065
91.85% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1227
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
10.35% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1227
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"traced"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count4
2
word"gloom"
count1
3
word"etched"
count1
4
word"dancing"
count1
5
word"lurched"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count2
7
word"whisper"
count1
8
word"shimmered"
count1
9
word"lilt"
count1
10
word"silk"
count1
11
word"warmth"
count1
12
word"churned"
count1
13
word"shattered"
count1
14
word"chill"
count1
15
word"unreadable"
count1
16
word"depths"
count1
17
word"loomed"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"pulsed"
2"gloom"
3"etched"
4"dancing"
5"lurched"
6"flickered"
7"whisper"
8"shimmered"
9"lilt"
10"silk"
11"warmth"
12"churned"
13"shattered"
14"chill"
15"unreadable"
16"depths"
17"loomed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences92
matches(empty)
80.75% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences92
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences111
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1215
ratio0.002
matches
0"older"
1"Belphegor."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount1039
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.92
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Nyx10
Shade1
Rory20
Richmond1
Park1
English1
October1
Heartstone4
Fae-Forged1
Seer1
Isolde8
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Shade"
2"Rory"
3"Seer"
4"Isolde"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Heartstone"
globalScore0.538
windowScore0.333
75.37% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"patterns that seemed to shift when she looked at them directly"
1"sound that seemed to come from both miles away and right beside Rory's ear"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.823
wordCount1215
matches
0"Not the grey October she'd left behind, but a deep twilight purple shot through with veins of pale amber"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences111
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean22.5
std18.2
cv0.809
sampleLengths
012
115
247
371
441
56
630
750
823
95
1014
1163
129
133
1447
1516
1610
174
183
1933
2074
216
2243
2325
248
2521
2650
2722
2816
2917
3025
312
324
3313
3447
355
3627
376
3811
3945
4014
4123
428
4321
4441
4515
469
4723
4832
4926
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs173
matches
0"were already weaving"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences111
ratio0.108
matches
0"Wildflowers dotted the ground—foxgloves the colour of spilled wine, roses that bloomed in shifting patterns of gold and silver, tiny blue blossoms that released puffs of luminescent pollen when her passage disturbed them."
1"The deep crimson gem pulsed against her collarbone, warm and steady—a comfort against the creeping unease that prickled along her arms."
2"The grove stretched farther than it should have—far wider than the clearing she'd glimpsed from outside."
3"Moss covered their bases, but the moss glowed—a soft, phosphorescent green that cast dancing shadows across the grass."
4"Sound rushed in from everywhere at once—whispers, laughter, music that played on instruments she couldn't name."
5"In the exact middle grew a single tree—a massive willow whose leaves shimmered like strands of hammered silver."
6"Isolde smiled—a careful expression that revealed nothing."
7"The air rippled, and suddenly Rory could see them—dozens of luminous threads hanging from the willow's branches, each one glowing with a different colour."
8"One thread in particular caught her attention—a deep crimson strand that pulsed in time with her Heartstone."
9"In the distance, a figure stood silhouetted against a door of black iron—tall, horned, watching her with eyes that burned like embers."
10"\"The threads converge. Dymas calls, and you must answer.\" She reached into her robe and produced a slender dagger—the Fae-Forged blade, its moonsilver surface catching the willow's glow."
11"Somewhere in the distance, a bell tolled—a sound that seemed to come from both miles away and right beside Rory's ear."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1057
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"silver, tiny blue blossoms"
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.02838221381267739
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.00946073793755913
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences111
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences111
mean10.95
std7.17
cv0.655
sampleLengths
012
113
22
34
419
524
617
721
833
95
1019
1117
126
1314
1410
156
168
1721
1821
1914
209
215
2213
231
245
2516
2624
2718
289
293
3016
3131
325
333
348
3510
364
373
3822
3911
4018
4118
4225
4313
446
4513
4630
4714
4811
493
71.77% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.44144144144144143
totalSentences111
uniqueOpeners49
38.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences86
matches
0"Somewhere in the distance, a"
ratio0.012
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences86
matches
0"She followed Nyx deeper into"
1"She reached out and touched"
2"Her palm tingled where she'd"
3"She shot them a look,"
4"Its trunk was impossibly wide,"
5"She wore robes of pale"
6"Her voice carried a melodic"
7"She swept a hand across"
8"She reached for it, hesitated."
9"She stood in a narrow"
10"She reached into her robe"
11"She pressed it into Rory's"
12"Her gaze dropped to the"
13"They slipped through the gap"
14"She wasn't ready."
ratio0.174
35.58% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount73
totalSentences86
matches
0"Aurora ducked under a low-hanging"
1"the Shade said, their voice"
2"Rory peered around them."
3"The fourth time, Nyx had"
4"The grass beneath her feet"
5"Wildflowers dotted the ground—foxgloves the"
6"Stars peeked through gaps in"
7"Nyx moved past her, their"
8"A faint violet luminescence traced"
9"Rory clutched the Heartstone pendant"
10"The deep crimson gem pulsed"
11"She followed Nyx deeper into"
12"The air smelled of honey"
13"Each breath tasted sweet on"
14"Nyx gestured with a hand"
15"Rory frowned but kept walking."
16"The grove stretched farther than"
17"Moss covered their bases, but"
18"She reached out and touched"
19"The world lurched."
ratio0.849
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences86
matches
0"Before her, the trees of"
1"Now she stood at the"
ratio0.023
55.75% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Wildflowers dotted the ground—foxgloves the colour of spilled wine, roses that bloomed in shifting patterns of gold and silver, tiny blue blossoms that released…"
1"The deep crimson gem pulsed against her collarbone, warm and steady—a comfort against the creeping unease that prickled along her arms."
2"She followed Nyx deeper into the clearing, her boots sinking slightly into earth that felt springy and alive beneath her tread."
3"Nyx gestured with a hand that was barely visible against the deepening gloom."
4"Standing stones ringed the space, massive slabs of oak-coloured granite etched with spiralling patterns that seemed to shift when she looked at them directly."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"the Shade said, their voice barely a ripple in the still air"
1"She reached, its moonsilver surface catching the willow's glow"
2"The Seer turned away, her robes merging with the shadows beneath the willow"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.194
leniency0.387
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.065
79.5838%