Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2HPFX8Z57656BFNG534D4S

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Duration:
34.3s
Cost:
$0.000714
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DeepSeek

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon hummed above the entrance, bleeding its light into the wet pavement. Inside, the bar held its usual quiet—the clink of a glass against oak, the low murmur of a conversation near the back, the smell of old wood and spilled ale. Rory stood behind the counter, drying a pint glass with a cloth that had seen better days. The rag was grey and thin, but she worked it methodically, watching the glass go clear under the yellow light. The door swung open with a soft groan. A man stepped in, shaking rain from the shoulders of a charcoal overcoat. He was tall, broad-shouldered, with the kind of haircut that cost more than Rory’s weekly takeaway budget. He wiped a hand across his jaw, scanning the room with the easy confidence of someone who knew he belonged in places like this. Then his eyes found her. They stopped. His mouth opened, closed, opened again. A name slipped out, tentative, like he wasn't sure if he had the right to say it anymore. "Rory?" The glass in her hand caught the light. She set it down slow. "Liam." Five years. That was how long since she’d seen him. Five years since they’d sat in the back of a Cardiff pub, him with a law textbook open, her with a lipstick stain on a napkin she’d been using to map out escape routes from Evan’s flat. She remembered the way Liam had laughed then—too loud, too easy, filling the room like he owned it. This laugh was different. Shorter. Measured. "Christ, I thought that was you." He crossed the floor, bypassing the empty stools, and stopped a few feet short of the bar. His hands went into his coat pockets. "You look… different." "Different how?" He tilted his head, a gesture she remembered—assessing, lawyerly. "You cut your hair." She touched the black ends at her collarbone. "Yeah. Two years ago." "Suits you." "Thanks." Silence hung between them, filled by the distant hiss of a coffee machine from the back. Rory picked up another glass, found a smudge, and worked it with the cloth. "You work here now?" "I live upstairs. Help out Silas when he needs it." Liam glanced around, taking in the maps on the walls, the faded black-and-white photographs of men in suits and women with cigarettes. "Nice place. Bit different from the union bar." "Bit different from Cardiff." "Yeah." He pulled out a stool anyway, settling onto it with a sigh that spoke of a long day. "I was in the area for a case. Thought I'd grab a drink before the train." Rory reached for a bottle of his old favourite—a single malt she’d stocked because Silas liked it too. She poured a measure into a tumbler and slid it across the wood. He stared at it. "You remembered." "You always ordered it when you were trying to impress someone." "I was trying to impress everyone." He picked up the glass, swirled it once, and took a sip. A flicker of the old smile crossed his face before it settled back into something more guarded. "You were the only one who never bought the act." She didn't answer. She poured herself a tonic water, lime wedge pinched between her fingers, and leaned against the back counter. "How's the barrister life?" "Busy. Good. Partner track next year, if I don't screw it up." He said it like a rehearsed line, polished and worn. "Sophie and I bought a flat in Clapham. Three bedrooms, garden. Her mother hates the neighbourhood, but Sophie loves the bay window." Rory nodded. She’d never met Sophie. She’d heard about her through mutual friends—a solicitor from a good family, blonde, tennis player, exactly the kind of woman Liam’s mother had always wanted for him. "Good," she said. "That’s good." Liam set the glass down, turning it between his fingers. The gesture was familiar, but the rest of him wasn't. The softness had gone from his jaw. His shoulders were squared in a way that made him look armour-plated. "I heard about Evan," he said quietly. Rory’s hand stilled on the tonic bottle. "From who?" "Eva. She called me after you left. Wanted to know if I'd heard from you." "Eva talks too much." "She was worried. We all were." Rory looked at him then—really looked. The same crow’s feet at his eyes, the same way he bit his lower lip when he was holding something back. But there was a new line between his brows, etched deep, and the easy laughter that used to bubble under his skin had been replaced by something heavier. "You never called," he said. "No." "Why?" She took a long sip of her tonic, letting the cold burn her throat. "Because I didn't want to be the girl who needed saving. And you were the boy who always tried to save people." Liam flinched. It was small, barely a twitch, but she caught it. "That's not fair." "Maybe not. But it's true." He drained the rest of his whisky in one swallow. "I would have helped you. I would have—" "Gotten me a lawyer. Found me a shelter. Told me what to do with the rest of my life." She set her glass down. "I didn't need a plan, Liam. I needed someone to sit with me in the dark." The bar fell quiet again. A patron at the far end laughed, a sudden burst that made them both blink. Liam ran a hand through his hair—still the same gesture, still the same way he did it when he was lost. "I didn't know you were in that much pain." "You asked me once, after that pub night. You asked if I was okay. I said fine. You believed me." "I always believed you. You were the strongest person I knew." "I was the best liar you knew." He looked at his empty glass, then back at her. Something shifted in his eyes—not anger, not sadness, but a kind of recognition. The weight of time settling between them like dust. "I missed you," he said. "I missed you too." Neither of them said anything more for a long moment. The rain picked up outside, drumming against the window. The green neon cast a strange glow on Liam’s face, making him look older than he was. "You changed your name," he said. "Rory. I heard you go by that now." "Aurora was my mother's choice. Rory is mine." "It suits you." He smiled, but it was the small one—the one he used when he was sad. "I always thought Aurora sounded like a princess in a tower. Rory sounds like someone who climbs out the window." She almost laughed. Almost. "Something like that." He stood, leaving a twenty on the counter. "Keep the change. And… if you ever want to talk. For real. Not about the weather or the case. I'm still around." She picked up the note, folded it, and tucked it into the tip jar. "You know where to find me." He paused at the door, hand on the handle. The rain streaked the glass, blurring the world outside. "Rory." "Yeah?" "For what it's worth… I'm sorry." She didn't answer. She watched him push the door open, watched the cold air rush in and swirl around the warmth of the bar, and watched him disappear into the London dark. The green neon flickered once, twice, then held steady. Rory picked up his empty glass, ran the cloth around its rim, and set it in the rack. The weight of what they'd said—what they hadn't said—settled in her chest like stones. She poured herself a proper whisky this time, leaned against the counter, and let the silence hold her.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences55
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.036
96.16% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1302
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.76% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1302
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"scanning"
count1
1
word"measured"
count1
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"flicker"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"etched"
count1
6
word"weight"
count2
7
word"warmth"
count1
8
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"measured"
2"silence"
3"flicker"
4"familiar"
5"etched"
6"weight"
7"warmth"
8"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences80
matches
0"was sad"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences80
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences124
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1291
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount909
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.88
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory8
Cardiff1
Evan1
Liam7
Silas1
Sophie1
London1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Evan"
2"Liam"
3"Silas"
4"Sophie"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
45.08% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.549
wordCount1291
matches
0"not anger, not sadness, but a kind of recognition"
1"not sadness, but a kind of recognition"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences124
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs67
mean19.27
std17.95
cv0.931
sampleLengths
081
162
25
326
41
513
61
765
86
933
102
1113
1212
132
141
1530
164
1710
1830
194
2035
2131
226
2311
2445
2521
264
2744
2833
295
3039
317
329
3315
344
356
3655
375
381
391
4036
4115
425
4318
4440
4520
4630
4720
4811
497
96.49% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences80
matches
0"were squared"
1"been replaced"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs165
matches
0"was holding"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences124
ratio0.081
matches
0"Inside, the bar held its usual quiet—the clink of a glass against oak, the low murmur of a conversation near the back, the smell of old wood and spilled ale."
1"She remembered the way Liam had laughed then—too loud, too easy, filling the room like he owned it."
2"He tilted his head, a gesture she remembered—assessing, lawyerly."
3"Rory reached for a bottle of his old favourite—a single malt she’d stocked because Silas liked it too."
4"She’d heard about her through mutual friends—a solicitor from a good family, blonde, tennis player, exactly the kind of woman Liam’s mother had always wanted for him."
5"Rory looked at him then—really looked."
6"Liam ran a hand through his hair—still the same gesture, still the same way he did it when he was lost."
7"Something shifted in his eyes—not anger, not sadness, but a kind of recognition."
8"\"It suits you.\" He smiled, but it was the small one—the one he used when he was sad."
9"The weight of what they'd said—what they hadn't said—settled in her chest like stones."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount924
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.03463203463203463
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.008658008658008658
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences124
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences124
mean10.41
std7.72
cv0.741
sampleLengths
014
130
217
320
48
513
617
724
85
92
106
1118
121
138
145
151
162
178
1837
1918
204
211
221
2323
247
253
262
279
284
298
304
312
321
3316
3414
354
3610
3722
388
394
4019
4116
4218
4313
444
452
4611
4718
4817
4910
50.27% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.3548387096774194
totalSentences124
uniqueOpeners44
48.31% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences69
matches
0"Then his eyes found her."
ratio0.014
28.70% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences69
matches
0"He was tall, broad-shouldered, with"
1"He wiped a hand across"
2"His mouth opened, closed, opened"
3"She set it down slow."
4"She remembered the way Liam"
5"He crossed the floor, bypassing"
6"His hands went into his"
7"He tilted his head, a"
8"She touched the black ends"
9"He pulled out a stool"
10"She poured a measure into"
11"He stared at it."
12"He picked up the glass,"
13"She didn't answer."
14"She poured herself a tonic"
15"He said it like a"
16"She’d never met Sophie."
17"She’d heard about her through"
18"His shoulders were squared in"
19"he said quietly"
ratio0.478
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences69
matches
0"The green neon hummed above"
1"Rory stood behind the counter,"
2"The rag was grey and"
3"The door swung open with"
4"A man stepped in, shaking"
5"He was tall, broad-shouldered, with"
6"He wiped a hand across"
7"His mouth opened, closed, opened"
8"A name slipped out, tentative,"
9"The glass in her hand"
10"She set it down slow."
11"That was how long since"
12"She remembered the way Liam"
13"This laugh was different."
14"He crossed the floor, bypassing"
15"His hands went into his"
16"He tilted his head, a"
17"She touched the black ends"
18"Silence hung between them, filled"
19"Rory picked up another glass,"
ratio0.942
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
86.47% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"He was tall, broad-shouldered, with the kind of haircut that cost more than Rory’s weekly takeaway budget."
1"His shoulders were squared in a way that made him look armour-plated."
2"But there was a new line between his brows, etched deep, and the easy laughter that used to bubble under his skin had been replaced by something heavier."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences55
tagDensity0.109
leniency0.218
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.3076%