| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 31 | | tagDensity | 0.355 | | leniency | 0.71 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 79.98% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1249 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sharply" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 55.96% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1249 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "perfect" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "rhythmic" | | 4 | "flickered" | | 5 | "stomach" | | 6 | "dancing" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "anticipating" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 144 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 144 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 162 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 30 | | totalWords | 1249 | | ratio | 0.024 | | matches | | 0 | "Never step inside a fairy ring, cariad. Never eat their food. Never give them your name." | | 1 | "The Heartstone knows what it seeks. Trust it, even when your eyes deceive you." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 22 | | wordCount | 1017 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 0.39 | | worstName | "Grove" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Click" | | discoveredNames | | Grove | 4 | | December | 1 | | Park | 2 | | Camden | 1 | | Mum | 1 | | Welsh | 1 | | Dymas | 3 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Easy | 1 | | Good | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Shapes | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Click | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Grove" | | 1 | "Mum" | | 2 | "Dymas" | | 3 | "Heartstone" | | 4 | "Shapes" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 39.71% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "shadows that seemed to breathe" | | 1 | "quite touch the ground" | | 2 | "quite focus on" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1249 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 162 | | matches | | 0 | "screaming that something" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 61 | | mean | 20.48 | | std | 16.91 | | cv | 0.826 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 8 | | 2 | 54 | | 3 | 51 | | 4 | 37 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 55 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 24 | | 11 | 42 | | 12 | 27 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 40 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 26 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 26 | | 23 | 56 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 43 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 59 | | 33 | 46 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 40 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 35 | | 41 | 20 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 21 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 45 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 25 |
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| 97.95% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 144 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "were gone" | | 2 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 180 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 162 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1023 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 28 | | adverbRatio | 0.02737047898338221 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005865102639296188 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 162 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 162 | | mean | 7.71 | | std | 6.54 | | cv | 0.848 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 2 | | 2 | 1 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 1 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 22 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 1 | | 48 | 1 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 57.61% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 25 | | diversityRatio | 0.4382716049382716 | | totalSentences | 162 | | uniqueOpeners | 71 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the twisted trees and" | | 1 | "Then a laugh, soft and" | | 2 | "Too many harmonics layered beneath" | | 3 | "Too many teeth." | | 4 | "Just the silver chain and" |
| | ratio | 0.046 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 31 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | | 0 | "I stood still, the silver" | | 1 | "I’d come for answers." | | 2 | "He’d also mentioned never to" | | 3 | "I pressed forward." | | 4 | "My grandmother’s stories surfaced unbidden," | | 5 | "I pulled my coat tighter" | | 6 | "I stopped moving." | | 7 | "I turned sharply, but my" | | 8 | "I didn’t turn this time." | | 9 | "My voice came out steady" | | 10 | "Her skin held the same" | | 11 | "Her eyes were black from" | | 12 | "My stomach dropped." | | 13 | "She circled me slowly" | | 14 | "Her feet didn’t quite touch" | | 15 | "I opened my mouth." | | 16 | "She drifted closer, close enough" | | 17 | "It smelled of honeysuckle and" | | 18 | "She tilted her head" | | 19 | "I stood now in a" |
| | ratio | 0.287 | |
| 57.22% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 87 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | | 0 | "The crunch of dead leaves" | | 1 | "I stood still, the silver" | | 2 | "The wildflowers glowed faintly, whites" | | 3 | "Richmond Park’s bare oaks had" | | 4 | "I’d come for answers." | | 5 | "The pendant had led me" | | 6 | "Dymas, the lore keeper at" | | 7 | "He’d also mentioned never to" | | 8 | "The Grove stretched deeper than" | | 9 | "Richmond Park was large, yes," | | 10 | "The air tasted of petrichor" | | 11 | "Copper stung my nostrils." | | 12 | "I pressed forward." | | 13 | "The standing stones behind me" | | 14 | "My grandmother’s stories surfaced unbidden," | | 15 | "A branch snapped to my" | | 16 | "The word fell flat." | | 17 | "The Grove absorbed it, swallowed" | | 18 | "I pulled my coat tighter" | | 19 | "The pendant’s warmth increased with" |
| | ratio | 0.806 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Her skin held the same phosphorescent glow as the moss, and her hair fell in sheets of silver that moved without wind." | | 1 | "I could see them now, all of them, dozens of pale figures crouched among the dead flowers, their faces a gallery of hunger and hate and something that looked al…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "them whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 31 | | tagDensity | 0.129 | | leniency | 0.258 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.065 | |