"Tonight, the last order had come with an address that made Yu-Fei avoid her eyes—*Richmond Park."
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"She slowed at a line of oaks—four of them, ancient and knotted, their trunks wider than her arm span."
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"Not the gentle, nagging warmth she’d grown used to—a sudden scorch that made her gasp."
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"The proportions were wrong—arms too long, head tilted at an angle that spoke of broken vertebrae."
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"The logical part of her brain—the part that had parsed legal texts and plotted escape routes from a flat in Cathays—told her that the cold was making her jumpy, that isolation played tricks on the mind."
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"The wildflowers brushed her ankles now, and their scent—earlier sweet, almost pleasant—had curdled."
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"A new sound joined the rustle—footsteps."
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"Their eyes—the ones that had eyes—reflected the pendant’s light, not in red, but in silver, the color of a winter sky."
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"The faces in the dark drew back, hissing—a sound like steam escaping a pipe."
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"Tonight, the last order had come with an address that made Yu-Fei avoid her eyes—*Richmond Park."
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"The path dissolved into scrub grass that snagged at her jeans."
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"Yet here they were, white and gold and deep violet, waxy petals turned up as if drinking the darkness."
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"But here, among trees that groaned under their own weight, her internal compass spun loose."
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"She set the bag down next to the central stone, its surface slick with moisture that gleamed like oil in the flashlight beam."
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"The proportions were wrong—arms too long, head tilted at an angle that spoke of broken vertebrae."
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"The logical part of her brain—the part that had parsed legal texts and plotted escape routes from a flat in Cathays—told her that the cold was making her jumpy,…"
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"She fixed her eyes on a lightning-blasted oak that had marked the entrance, but with every step, it seemed to recede, ink bleeding into deeper ink."
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"She heard it not with her ears but inside her skull, a thought that wasn’t hers."
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"The wildflowers that had bloomed so unnaturally were decaying now, petals blackening and curling as she watched, as if the grove was shedding a pretense of beau…"
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"She stood frozen in a sea of invisible touches, and she could not run, could not scream, could not do anything but clutch the dying star at her chest and listen…"