Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2HZS8DQMTM4X0800Z6GQZD

Run Details

Duration:
1m 37s
Cost:
$0.002889
Provider:
DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The delivery bag chafed against Aurora's shoulder, its worn canvas a familiar weight she’d hauled across half of London. Tonight, the last order had come with an address that made Yu-Fei avoid her eyes—*Richmond Park. The old oak stones. Leave it there.* The cash bonus, crisp and folded into her palm, had bought her silence. Now, picking her way through the black gut of the park, she understood why. The path dissolved into scrub grass that snagged at her jeans. No moon. No stars. A cloud ceiling pressed down like a held breath. She thumbed her flashlight on, and the beam swept over twisted branches and the sudden, pale faces of wildflowers. They shouldn’t be blooming. It was mid-October, and frost had silvered the city lawns that morning. Yet here they were, white and gold and deep violet, waxy petals turned up as if drinking the darkness. Aurora could find her way through any tangle of streets from Kings Cross to Croydon. But here, among trees that groaned under their own weight, her internal compass spun loose. She slowed at a line of oaks—four of them, ancient and knotted, their trunks wider than her arm span. The standing stones rose just beyond, slabs of rough-hewn granite arranged in a loose circle. She’d seen them once before, on a hungover Sunday walk with Eva, when the park had been full of dogs and cyclists and the air had smelled of cut grass. Now the air smelled of turned earth and something sharper, like ozone before lightning. She stepped between the stones. The heartstone pendant flared against her chest. Not the gentle, nagging warmth she’d grown used to—a sudden scorch that made her gasp. She fumbled at her collar, pulling the silver chain free. The gem pulsed, deep crimson light leaking between her fingers. She’d checked the pendant a dozen times since arriving in London, a gift she’d never asked for and never could discard. Its glow had meant something once, in another place. Here, in the grove, it felt like a warning. She let it fall back against her skin and advanced. “Someone ordered from the Empress,” she called into the stillness. Her voice sounded thin, swallowed by the massive dark. “Ginger beef. Spring rolls.” No response. She set the bag down next to the central stone, its surface slick with moisture that gleamed like oil in the flashlight beam. The silence was a physical thing. No wind whispered through branches. No fox screamed in the distance. Even her own breath seemed muted, trapped close to her face. She became aware of her heartbeat, then aware that she could *hear* it, a steady thump, and beneath it, something else. A rustle. Not leaves. Not grass. A skittering sound at the very edge of hearing, like needle legs on dry paper. She spun. The flashlight beam sliced across the clearing, and for a fraction of a second, she saw a shape. Tall. Thin. The proportions were wrong—arms too long, head tilted at an angle that spoke of broken vertebrae. But when she steadied the light, it was only an oak, its bark looking in the half-glow like twisted fabric. “All right,” she said, to the trees, to herself. “Delivery’s done.” She turned to leave and the pendant burned again. This time, she didn’t flinch. She pressed her hand flat against it, feeling the gem thrum in time with her quickening pulse. The logical part of her brain—the part that had parsed legal texts and plotted escape routes from a flat in Cathays—told her that the cold was making her jumpy, that isolation played tricks on the mind. The other part of her, the part that had learned to read the subtle cues of a man’s mood before the first blow fell, told her to run. She walked. Quickly, not running. Running was admission. Running was prey. The tree line refused to come closer. She fixed her eyes on a lightning-blasted oak that had marked the entrance, but with every step, it seemed to recede, ink bleeding into deeper ink. The wildflowers brushed her ankles now, and their scent—earlier sweet, almost pleasant—had curdled. Now it was the oversweet reek of decomposition, honey poured over spoiled meat. She stumbled, caught herself on a stone, and her palm came away gritty with something that wasn’t moss. Ash, perhaps. Or crushed bone. “Aurora.” Her name, spoken from behind. Not shouted. A whisper, soft and intimate, the voice a child might use when sharing a secret. She heard it not with her ears but inside her skull, a thought that wasn’t hers. The pendant pulsed once, hard, and the grove answered. The stones resonated, a low vibration that traveled up through the soles of her trainers, into her teeth. She didn’t turn. Every instinct screamed at her to look, to face the thing that had spoken, but she’d read the stories. Don’t look back. Don’t eat the food. Don’t give your name. But it already had her name. She had said it, carelessly, months ago in another clearing, or perhaps in a dream she’d dismissed. Laila, they’d called her then. And other names, older ones. She kept walking. The rustle grew louder, not behind her but all around, a dry susurration like insect wings. The flashlight stuttered. She smacked it once, twice, and the beam returned, but weaker, casting long, distorted shadows that moved on their own. One shadow bent at an impossible angle, reaching for her ankle. She sidestepped, and it melted back into the form of a fallen branch. A new sound joined the rustle—footsteps. Human footsteps, matching her pace from somewhere in the dark perimeter. When she stopped, they continued for one, two, three beats, then ceased. The silence that followed was worse. In it, she heard breathing. Not her own. A slow, wet exhalation, close enough that she felt the displaced air on the nape of her neck. She whirled. The flashlight died completely. In the absolute black, the heartstone blazed. Its red light painted the clearing in shades of blood, and by that unnatural glow, she saw them. At the edge of the stones, just visible between the oaks, figures stood watching. They were not human. They had once tried to be, perhaps, but the imitation had slipped. Limbs bent wrong. Faces too smooth, or too sharp, or missing features entirely, replaced by an expanse of skin like a stretched drum. Their eyes—the ones that had eyes—reflected the pendant’s light, not in red, but in silver, the color of a winter sky. She counted five. Then seven. Then too many, melting in and out of the darkness as if the dark was not absence but substance, a living fabric they wore. One figure stood closer than the rest. Its shape was almost a woman’s. A gown of something that might have been moss or rotted silk hung from shoulders that were not quite level. Its face was beautiful and wrong, like a sculpture viewed in a warped mirror. It tilted its head, and the motion was a jointless smooth glide, a flower turning toward a light source. “You brought us a gift.” The voice slid into her mind again, layered with harmonics that vibrated in her chest. “How kind. How long overdue.” The pendant’s heat became pain. Aurora clamped her hand around it, and the gem seared her palm, but she didn’t let go. The pain anchored her, a bright point of reality in a world that had slipped sideways. She thought of the delivery bag, the ginger beef, the ridiculous normalcy of it against this waking nightmare. She thought of Yu-Fei, who had refused to meet her eyes. “I brought exactly what was ordered,” she said, and her voice emerged steady, though her throat was raw. “That’s all.” The not-woman smiled. Its teeth were small and white and numerous, like a lamprey’s. “Is it?” The figures at the tree line shifted. A whispering rose among them, not words but the suggestion of words, a susurrus of hunger. The ground beneath Aurora’s feet softened, and she looked down to see the soil bubbling, black liquid welling up around the soles of her trainers. The wildflowers that had bloomed so unnaturally were decaying now, petals blackening and curling as she watched, as if the grove was shedding a pretense of beauty to reveal the rot beneath. The pendant flared brighter. The faces in the dark drew back, hissing—a sound like steam escaping a pipe. The not-woman’s smile flickered, and for an instant, its face was a skull, eye sockets deep and endless. “That trinket will not burn forever, little spark,” it said. “And you have been here before. You have danced in our grove and drunk our air. You are marked. Claimed.” “I don’t remember that,” Aurora said, and it was true. There were gaps in her memory, black spaces where things should have been. A night in Cardiff. A walk she didn’t recall finishing. The crescent scar on her wrist, which she’d earned, her mother said, from a fall as a child, but which sometimes ached when the pendant grew warm. “You will,” the voice promised. “You will remember everything, in time. Time is what we have. And you—you have so very little of it now.” The pendant’s light guttered. The darkness swept back in, and with it, the sensation of cold fingers brushing her spine, her cheek, the inside of her wrist where the scar lay white against her skin. She stood frozen in a sea of invisible touches, and she could not run, could not scream, could not do anything but clutch the dying star at her chest and listen to the soft, hungry laughter that filled the grove like a tide.
created_at"2026-04-25T14:51:35.057Z" 4/25/2026, 2:51:35 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.467
leniency0.933
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.76% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1634
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"quickly"
2"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
44.92% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1634
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"silence"
count3
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count2
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"resonated"
count1
8
word"footsteps"
count2
9
word"silk"
count1
10
word"vibrated"
count1
11
word"normalcy"
count1
12
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"weight"
2"silence"
3"warmth"
4"pulsed"
5"pulse"
6"whisper"
7"resonated"
8"footsteps"
9"silk"
10"vibrated"
11"normalcy"
12"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences136
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences136
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences144
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords10
totalWords1622
ratio0.006
matches
0"Richmond Park. The old oak stones. Leave it there."
1"hear"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"When she stopped, they continued for one, two, three beats, then ceased."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount1534
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.33
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Don"
discoveredNames
Aurora5
London2
Yu-Fei2
Park1
Kings1
Cross1
Croydon1
Sunday1
Eva1
Cathays1
Cardiff1
Don3
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Yu-Fei"
2"Park"
3"Eva"
places
0"London"
1"Kings"
2"Croydon"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
38.89% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences90
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"as if drinking the darkness"
1"felt like a warning"
2"seemed muted trapped close to her face"
3"not quite level"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches5
per1kWords3.083
wordCount1622
matches
0"not with her ears but inside her skull, a thought"
1"not behind her but all around, a dry susurration like insect wings"
2"not in red, but in silver, the color of a winter sky"
3"not absence but substance, a living fabric they wore"
4"not words but the suggestion of words, a susurrus of hunger"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences144
matches
0"jumpy, that isolation"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean52.32
std31.14
cv0.595
sampleLengths
069
178
2108
35
481
533
695
758
811
995
1011
1182
121
1365
1466
1566
1661
176
1899
1929
2066
2125
2267
2320
2416
2580
2636
2730
2860
2925
3078
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences136
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs240
matches
0"was making"
1"were decaying"
2"was shedding"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences144
ratio0.063
matches
0"Tonight, the last order had come with an address that made Yu-Fei avoid her eyes—*Richmond Park."
1"She slowed at a line of oaks—four of them, ancient and knotted, their trunks wider than her arm span."
2"Not the gentle, nagging warmth she’d grown used to—a sudden scorch that made her gasp."
3"The proportions were wrong—arms too long, head tilted at an angle that spoke of broken vertebrae."
4"The logical part of her brain—the part that had parsed legal texts and plotted escape routes from a flat in Cathays—told her that the cold was making her jumpy, that isolation played tricks on the mind."
5"The wildflowers brushed her ankles now, and their scent—earlier sweet, almost pleasant—had curdled."
6"A new sound joined the rustle—footsteps."
7"Their eyes—the ones that had eyes—reflected the pendant’s light, not in red, but in silver, the color of a winter sky."
8"The faces in the dark drew back, hissing—a sound like steam escaping a pipe."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1553
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"lay white against her"
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.028976175144880875
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.0038634900193174502
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences144
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences144
mean11.26
std8.18
cv0.726
sampleLengths
019
116
24
316
414
511
62
72
89
919
104
1112
1219
1315
1415
1519
1615
1730
1814
195
207
2115
2210
2310
2421
259
269
2710
2810
299
304
312
3223
336
345
356
3611
3721
382
392
402
4115
422
4318
441
451
4616
4720
489
492
41.20% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats19
diversityRatio0.3263888888888889
totalSentences144
uniqueOpeners47
82.64% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences121
matches
0"Even her own breath seemed"
1"Quickly, not running."
2"Then too many, melting in"
ratio0.025
91.07% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences121
matches
0"She thumbed her flashlight on,"
1"They shouldn’t be blooming."
2"It was mid-October, and frost"
3"She slowed at a line"
4"She’d seen them once before,"
5"She stepped between the stones."
6"She fumbled at her collar,"
7"She’d checked the pendant a"
8"Its glow had meant something"
9"She let it fall back"
10"she called into the stillness"
11"Her voice sounded thin, swallowed"
12"She set the bag down"
13"She became aware of her"
14"she said, to the trees,"
15"She turned to leave and"
16"She pressed her hand flat"
17"She fixed her eyes on"
18"She stumbled, caught herself on"
19"Her name, spoken from behind."
ratio0.322
71.57% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount94
totalSentences121
matches
0"The delivery bag chafed against"
1"Tonight, the last order had"
2"The old oak stones."
3"The path dissolved into scrub"
4"A cloud ceiling pressed down"
5"She thumbed her flashlight on,"
6"They shouldn’t be blooming."
7"It was mid-October, and frost"
8"Aurora could find her way"
9"She slowed at a line"
10"The standing stones rose just"
11"She’d seen them once before,"
12"She stepped between the stones."
13"The heartstone pendant flared against"
14"She fumbled at her collar,"
15"The gem pulsed, deep crimson"
16"She’d checked the pendant a"
17"Its glow had meant something"
18"Here, in the grove, it"
19"She let it fall back"
ratio0.777
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences121
matches
0"Now, picking her way through"
1"Now the air smelled of"
2"Now it was the oversweet"
ratio0.025
27.31% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences68
technicalSentenceCount11
matches
0"Tonight, the last order had come with an address that made Yu-Fei avoid her eyes—*Richmond Park."
1"The path dissolved into scrub grass that snagged at her jeans."
2"Yet here they were, white and gold and deep violet, waxy petals turned up as if drinking the darkness."
3"But here, among trees that groaned under their own weight, her internal compass spun loose."
4"She set the bag down next to the central stone, its surface slick with moisture that gleamed like oil in the flashlight beam."
5"The proportions were wrong—arms too long, head tilted at an angle that spoke of broken vertebrae."
6"The logical part of her brain—the part that had parsed legal texts and plotted escape routes from a flat in Cathays—told her that the cold was making her jumpy,…"
7"She fixed her eyes on a lightning-blasted oak that had marked the entrance, but with every step, it seemed to recede, ink bleeding into deeper ink."
8"She heard it not with her ears but inside her skull, a thought that wasn’t hers."
9"The wildflowers that had bloomed so unnaturally were decaying now, petals blackening and curling as she watched, as if the grove was shedding a pretense of beau…"
10"She stood frozen in a sea of invisible touches, and she could not run, could not scream, could not do anything but clutch the dying star at her chest and listen…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
83.33% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"the voice promised (promise)"
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.133
82.0902%