Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2J0Q9B9HY4TTRVVER44V12

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Duration:
31.8s
Cost:
$0.000619
Provider:
DeepSeek

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You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Veil peeled apart like wet silk. Aurora felt it first in her chest—a pressure that had nothing to do with the cold autumn air of Richmond Park. The Heartstone pendant against her collarbone pulsed once, twice, then settled into a steady warmth that spread through her ribs like mulled wine. Beside her, Nyx shifted. Their shadow-form rippled, edges fraying and reforming as though the boundary between solid and mist had become difficult to maintain. “It does not like this place,” Nyx whispered, their voice scraping the air like dry leaves across stone. “Too much light.” Isolde stepped through first. The half-Fae woman made no sound. Her silver hair caught something that wasn’t sunlight, refracting into faint prisms that danced across the bark of the ancient oaks standing in a rough circle around the clearing. She wore robes the colour of rain on slate, and when she turned to face them, her pale lavender eyes held no reflection. “You are early,” she said. Aurora blinked. They had walked through the park for barely twenty minutes. “Early?” “The Grove measures breath, not hours.” Isolde gestured with one slender hand toward the centre of the stone ring. “Come. Step fully, or the boundary will hold you between.” Aurora exchanged a glance with Nyx—or tried to. The Shade had become little more than a dark smudge against the amber light that now permeated the air. She gripped the Fae-forged blade at her hip, the cold silver handle grounding her, and stepped over the threshold of the standing stones. The world changed. The shift wasn't violent. It was like surfacing from deep water: a pop in her ears, a sudden clarity of scent and sound that made her head spin. Wildflowers bloomed in impossible profusion underfoot—violets and foxgloves and something that glowed faintly blue, all tangled together in a carpet that stretched between the oaks. The air was thick with the smell of damp earth, honey, and something metallic she couldn't place. Above, the sky was not sky. It was a canopy of leaves so dense and layered that no patch of open air remained, yet the light that filtered through was warm and golden, as if the sun itself had been crushed and suspended in the branches. “This is the Grove,” Isolde said, her voice softer now, almost reverent. “A wound in the Veil that never healed. It bleeds between worlds.” Nyx solidified slightly, their violet eyes flickering like embers in the dim. “I can feel the other side pressing in. Something hungry.” “Many things are hungry in the spaces between.” Isolde began to walk, her feet leaving no impression on the flowers. “Follow. Do not stray from my path. The Grove remembers trespassers.” Aurora followed, her boots crushing petals that released a sharp, sweet scent. The flowers seemed to close behind Isolde's steps, as though the ground itself was swallowing her passage. She reached out and touched one of the standing stones as she passed. It was warm. Not sun-warm. Alive-warm. A vibration hummed through the stone and up her arm, settling in her teeth. “It's like a heartbeat,” she said. “It is,” Isolde replied without turning. “The heart of the old Fae realm. Mortal masons cut these stones from the bones of a Titan and planted them here to anchor a gate. They succeeded. The Titan did not survive.” Aurora pulled her hand away. They walked deeper into the Grove. The oaks grew thicker, their trunks twisted into shapes that seemed almost deliberate—a face here, an outstretched arm there. Moss hung in long grey curtains, and from somewhere ahead came the sound of water running over stone, but the rhythm was wrong. It didn't flow consistently. It stuttered, paused, reversed for a beat, then resumed. “Time,” Nyx said, their gaze fixed on a patch of air where a butterfly hovered, wings beating in reverse. “It loops here.” “The Fae Courts are not bound by linear time,” Isolde said. “This pocket is a frayed thread. You may experience an hour as a day, or a day as a breath. I cannot control which.” Aurora's stomach tightened. “We came here for answers. Eva is missing. The portal opened in her flat, and I—” “I know why you came.” Isolde stopped beside a pool of water so clear it was almost invisible, its surface reflecting the canopy above. The pool was perfectly circular, perhaps twenty feet across, and in its centre grew a single white flower on a stem of silver. “The pendant you wear. Show me.” Aurora unclasped the silver chain and held out the deep crimson gem. The Heartstone pulsed, and the water in the pool rippled without wind. Isolde studied it for a long moment. Her expression did not change, but something in her posture shifted—a tension that hadn't been there before. “This is not a gift. It is a key. And it was not given freely. It was stolen.” “Stolen?” Aurora's fingers closed around the pendant protectively. “It was left for me. A note said—” “Notes lie. Stones do not.” Isolde pointed at the pool. “Look.” Aurora hesitated, then knelt at the edge. The water was cold, cold enough to ache. She leaned forward, and the reflection in the pool was not her own face. Instead, she saw a vast hall carved from black stone, lit by braziers that burned with green flame. Long tables stretched into shadow, piled high with platters of meat and fruit and glistening sauces. Figures sat at those tables—human-shaped but wrong, their movements too fluid, their mouths too wide. And at the head of the table, a figure in crimson robes raised a goblet in her direction. The figure smiled. The smile was all teeth. The image shattered. Aurora jerked back, heart hammering. The pool was clear again, reflecting only the canopy and her own pale face. “Dymas,” she breathed. “The realm of Gluttony,” Isolde confirmed. “Prince Belphegor's domain. The pendant was forged there. It calls to its home. And it has been calling you.” Nyx stepped closer, their shadow-form darkening the water. “She walks with a beacon tied to her throat. Every step she takes, they feel her.” Aurora looked down at the Heartstone, now burning warm against her palm. “Eva. They took her to Dymas.” “Or she went willingly.” Isolde's voice was flat. “Mortal souls are bartered for feasts every day. Your friend may have already been consumed.” “No.” Aurora stood, slipping the chain back over her head. The stone settled against her chest. “She wouldn't. She left a message. She wanted me to come.” “Then she wanted you to follow.” Isolde turned away from the pool. “The Grove will not hold you much longer. The Veil is already straining. If you wish to enter Dymas, there is a way—but it will cost you.” “What cost?” Isolde looked over her shoulder, and for the first time, something like pity flickered in those lavender eyes. “A piece of yourself. Something you cannot get back. Are you prepared to pay?”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
97.44% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Aurora's fingers closed around [around]"
1"Isolde turned away [away]"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.41
leniency0.821
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.103
91.47% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1173
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.37% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1173
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"silk"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count2
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"tension"
count1
5
word"glistening"
count1
6
word"shattered"
count1
7
word"beacon"
count1
8
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"silk"
1"pulsed"
2"warmth"
3"stomach"
4"tension"
5"glistening"
6"shattered"
7"beacon"
8"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"The air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences74
matches(empty)
84.94% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences74
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"began to"
2"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences96
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1165
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
65.56% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount829
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.69
worstName"Isolde"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Isolde"
discoveredNames
Veil1
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone3
Nyx6
Isolde14
Aurora12
Shade1
Fae-forged1
Grove1
persons
0"Veil"
1"Nyx"
2"Isolde"
3"Aurora"
4"Shade"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Heartstone"
3"Grove"
globalScore0.656
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences51
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something like pity flickered in those laven"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1165
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean29.13
std23.72
cv0.814
sampleLengths
07
168
221
34
458
55
613
729
850
93
10116
1124
1222
1331
1462
156
1639
175
1861
1922
2035
2119
2253
2324
2442
2516
2611
2729
2875
293
3019
313
3225
3324
3418
3523
3627
3739
382
3932
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"been crushed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs147
matches
0"was like surfacing"
1"was swallowing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences96
ratio0.063
matches
0"Aurora felt it first in her chest—a pressure that had nothing to do with the cold autumn air of Richmond Park."
1"Aurora exchanged a glance with Nyx—or tried to."
2"Wildflowers bloomed in impossible profusion underfoot—violets and foxgloves and something that glowed faintly blue, all tangled together in a carpet that stretched between the oaks."
3"The oaks grew thicker, their trunks twisted into shapes that seemed almost deliberate—a face here, an outstretched arm there."
4"Her expression did not change, but something in her posture shifted—a tension that hadn't been there before."
5"Figures sat at those tables—human-shaped but wrong, their movements too fluid, their mouths too wide."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount842
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.039192399049881234
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.009501187648456057
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences96
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences96
mean12.14
std7.92
cv0.653
sampleLengths
07
121
223
34
420
518
63
74
86
929
1023
115
122
1310
141
1519
1610
178
1819
1923
203
214
2224
2325
2417
256
2640
2712
2812
2912
3010
3120
3211
3312
3417
3513
363
372
381
3914
406
416
4233
435
446
4519
4623
474
489
4919
64.93% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.4270833333333333
totalSentences96
uniqueOpeners41
50.51% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences66
matches
0"Instead, she saw a vast"
ratio0.015
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences66
matches
0"Their shadow-form rippled, edges fraying"
1"Her silver hair caught something"
2"She wore robes the colour"
3"They had walked through the"
4"She gripped the Fae-forged blade"
5"It was like surfacing from"
6"It was a canopy of"
7"She reached out and touched"
8"It was warm."
9"They walked deeper into the"
10"It didn't flow consistently."
11"It stuttered, paused, reversed for"
12"Her expression did not change,"
13"She leaned forward, and the"
ratio0.212
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences66
matches
0"The Veil peeled apart like"
1"Aurora felt it first in"
2"The Heartstone pendant against her"
3"Their shadow-form rippled, edges fraying"
4"Nyx whispered, their voice scraping"
5"Isolde stepped through first."
6"The half-Fae woman made no"
7"Her silver hair caught something"
8"She wore robes the colour"
9"They had walked through the"
10"Isolde gestured with one slender"
11"Aurora exchanged a glance with"
12"The Shade had become little"
13"She gripped the Fae-forged blade"
14"The world changed."
15"The shift wasn't violent."
16"It was like surfacing from"
17"Wildflowers bloomed in impossible profusion"
18"The air was thick with"
19"It was a canopy of"
ratio0.924
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
ratio0
4.61% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Aurora felt it first in her chest—a pressure that had nothing to do with the cold autumn air of Richmond Park."
1"Their shadow-form rippled, edges fraying and reforming as though the boundary between solid and mist had become difficult to maintain."
2"Her silver hair caught something that wasn’t sunlight, refracting into faint prisms that danced across the bark of the ancient oaks standing in a rough circle a…"
3"It was like surfacing from deep water: a pop in her ears, a sudden clarity of scent and sound that made her head spin."
4"Wildflowers bloomed in impossible profusion underfoot—violets and foxgloves and something that glowed faintly blue, all tangled together in a carpet that stretc…"
5"It was a canopy of leaves so dense and layered that no patch of open air remained, yet the light that filtered through was warm and golden, as if the sun itself…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Nyx whispered, their voice scraping the air like dry leaves across stone"
1"Isolde said, her voice softer now, almost reverent"
2"Isolde began, her feet leaving no impression on the flowers"
3"Isolde stopped, its surface reflecting the canopy above"
73.08% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
1"she breathed (breathe)"
2"Isolde confirmed (confirm)"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.231
leniency0.462
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.154
76.3303%