| 97.44% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Aurora's fingers closed around [around]" | | 1 | "Isolde turned away [away]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 39 | | tagDensity | 0.41 | | leniency | 0.821 | | rawRatio | 0.125 | | effectiveRatio | 0.103 | |
| 91.47% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1173 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 57.37% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1173 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silk" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "stomach" | | 4 | "tension" | | 5 | "glistening" | | 6 | "shattered" | | 7 | "beacon" | | 8 | "flickered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The air was thick with" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 84.94% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "tried to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "seemed to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 96 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1165 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 65.56% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 41 | | wordCount | 829 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.69 | | worstName | "Isolde" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Veil | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Nyx | 6 | | Isolde | 14 | | Aurora | 12 | | Shade | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Grove | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Veil" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Aurora" | | 4 | "Shade" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.656 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "something like pity flickered in those laven" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1165 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 40 | | mean | 29.13 | | std | 23.72 | | cv | 0.814 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 7 | | 1 | 68 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 58 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 29 | | 8 | 50 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 116 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 31 | | 14 | 62 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 39 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 61 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 35 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 53 | | 23 | 24 | | 24 | 42 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 29 | | 28 | 75 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 19 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 25 | | 33 | 24 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 23 | | 36 | 27 | | 37 | 39 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 32 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 147 | | matches | | 0 | "was like surfacing" | | 1 | "was swallowing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 96 | | ratio | 0.063 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora felt it first in her chest—a pressure that had nothing to do with the cold autumn air of Richmond Park." | | 1 | "Aurora exchanged a glance with Nyx—or tried to." | | 2 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible profusion underfoot—violets and foxgloves and something that glowed faintly blue, all tangled together in a carpet that stretched between the oaks." | | 3 | "The oaks grew thicker, their trunks twisted into shapes that seemed almost deliberate—a face here, an outstretched arm there." | | 4 | "Her expression did not change, but something in her posture shifted—a tension that hadn't been there before." | | 5 | "Figures sat at those tables—human-shaped but wrong, their movements too fluid, their mouths too wide." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 842 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 33 | | adverbRatio | 0.039192399049881234 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009501187648456057 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 96 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 96 | | mean | 12.14 | | std | 7.92 | | cv | 0.653 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 7 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 29 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 23 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 40 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 33 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 23 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 19 |
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| 64.93% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.4270833333333333 | | totalSentences | 96 | | uniqueOpeners | 41 | |
| 50.51% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, she saw a vast" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 14 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "Their shadow-form rippled, edges fraying" | | 1 | "Her silver hair caught something" | | 2 | "She wore robes the colour" | | 3 | "They had walked through the" | | 4 | "She gripped the Fae-forged blade" | | 5 | "It was like surfacing from" | | 6 | "It was a canopy of" | | 7 | "She reached out and touched" | | 8 | "It was warm." | | 9 | "They walked deeper into the" | | 10 | "It didn't flow consistently." | | 11 | "It stuttered, paused, reversed for" | | 12 | "Her expression did not change," | | 13 | "She leaned forward, and the" |
| | ratio | 0.212 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 61 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "The Veil peeled apart like" | | 1 | "Aurora felt it first in" | | 2 | "The Heartstone pendant against her" | | 3 | "Their shadow-form rippled, edges fraying" | | 4 | "Nyx whispered, their voice scraping" | | 5 | "Isolde stepped through first." | | 6 | "The half-Fae woman made no" | | 7 | "Her silver hair caught something" | | 8 | "She wore robes the colour" | | 9 | "They had walked through the" | | 10 | "Isolde gestured with one slender" | | 11 | "Aurora exchanged a glance with" | | 12 | "The Shade had become little" | | 13 | "She gripped the Fae-forged blade" | | 14 | "The world changed." | | 15 | "The shift wasn't violent." | | 16 | "It was like surfacing from" | | 17 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible profusion" | | 18 | "The air was thick with" | | 19 | "It was a canopy of" |
| | ratio | 0.924 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 4.61% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 31 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora felt it first in her chest—a pressure that had nothing to do with the cold autumn air of Richmond Park." | | 1 | "Their shadow-form rippled, edges fraying and reforming as though the boundary between solid and mist had become difficult to maintain." | | 2 | "Her silver hair caught something that wasn’t sunlight, refracting into faint prisms that danced across the bark of the ancient oaks standing in a rough circle a…" | | 3 | "It was like surfacing from deep water: a pop in her ears, a sudden clarity of scent and sound that made her head spin." | | 4 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible profusion underfoot—violets and foxgloves and something that glowed faintly blue, all tangled together in a carpet that stretc…" | | 5 | "It was a canopy of leaves so dense and layered that no patch of open air remained, yet the light that filtered through was warm and golden, as if the sun itself…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx whispered, their voice scraping the air like dry leaves across stone" | | 1 | "Isolde said, her voice softer now, almost reverent" | | 2 | "Isolde began, her feet leaving no impression on the flowers" | | 3 | "Isolde stopped, its surface reflecting the canopy above" |
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| 73.08% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 2 | "Isolde confirmed (confirm)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 39 | | tagDensity | 0.231 | | leniency | 0.462 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.154 | |