Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2J1TJVQX3SNFEMF0D4ZCFH

Run Details

Duration:
31.8s
Cost:
$0.000612
Provider:
DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt scraped against its brass housing. Rory pulled the door open six inches, chain still on, and the corridor light fell across a tailored charcoal suit and a face she’d spent eighteen months trying to forget. Lucien Moreau leaned on his ivory-handled cane, head tilted, one amber eye and one black one catching the dim glow of Eva’s flat. “Laila.” The name hit her like a fist to the ribs. She hadn’t been Laila in London. That name belonged to the woman who’d fled Cardiff, the one who’d shown up at his door desperate and hollow-eyed. The one who’d kissed him in the rain on Blackfriars Bridge and then told him this was a mistake. “You’ve got the wrong flat.” She started to push the door closed. His polished oxford wedged into the gap. “Aurora, then. Or would you prefer Rory?” The faintest crease appeared at the corner of his mouth. “I have something of yours.” “I didn’t leave anything at your place.” “No. You were rather thorough about that.” The words hung in the stale air of the stairwell. “You did, however, leave something at the Golden Empress. A notebook. Red cover. Full of sketches of cats and what appears to be an annotated map of the Thames barrier.” Rory’s stomach dropped. “Shit.” “Your Mr. Cheung was worried. He gave it to me for safekeeping when you didn’t return for your shift.” Lucien’s gaze drifted past her shoulder, taking in the cluttered flat in a single sweep. “I thought you’d want it back. I’ve been looking for you for three weeks.” Three weeks. She’d been lying low, doing deliveries for Yu-Fei, sleeping in Eva’s spare corner while Eva hunted down obscure necromantic texts for a client who paid in antique silver. Rory hadn’t told anyone where she was staying—not even Silas, and he owned the bar beneath her old flat. She’d burned her burner phone, switched to pay-as-you-go, changed her hair length. But Lucien Moreau was an information broker. Of course he’d found her. “I don’t want it that bad.” She kept her voice flat. “Burn it.” “I could. But I’d have to read it first, and I’m afraid your doodles of the Gherkin dressed as a Victorian gentleman are quite charming. I’d hate for them to go to waste.” The cat—Ptolemy, a striped tabby with an imperious expression—twined between Rory’s ankles and mewed at the crack in the door. “Pto, get back.” She nudged him with her bare foot. Lucien crouched, the motion smooth despite the cane. He extended a hand, palm up, fingers still. “I’m not a threat to you, Ptolemy.” The cat sniffed his fingers, rubbed his cheek against Lucien’s knuckles, and purred. Rory swore under her breath. “You bribe everyone, don’t you?” “I find people respond well to being paid attention to.” He straightened, and the movement brought his face into the full light from the flat. She’d forgotten the architecture of him—the sharp cheekbones, the platinum hair swept back, the way his mouth seemed always on the verge of saying something dangerous. “Let me in, Rory. I’m not here to collect a debt. I’m here because I’m worried.” “You don’t get to be worried about me.” “I’ve been worried about you since you walked out of the rain and into my life with nothing but a forged ID and a black eye.” His voice dropped, losing its polished edge. “Let me in. Five minutes. Give me the notebook, I’ll give you my word I won’t follow you again, and that’s the end of it.” The end of it. The phrase should have been a relief. She’d wanted an end ever since she’d kissed him and felt something crack open in her chest that she hadn’t been ready to name. She’d wanted clean cuts, sharp breaks, the kind of exit that left no threads to pull. But here he was, and the threads were tangled around her ribs. She unchained the door. Lucien stepped inside and the flat shrank. It always did when he entered a room—he had a way of filling space, of making walls feel closer and ceilings lower. He took in the overflowing bookshelves, the stacks of scrolls on the kitchen table, the wall map crosshatched with red string. A mug of cold tea sat next to a half-eaten bag of crisps. “Eva’s place,” he said. “You know her.” “I know of her. We share a client or two.” He pulled the notebook from his inner jacket pocket—red cover, dog-eared, exactly as she remembered—and held it out. “Here. Safe and unread, if you don’t count the Gherkin.” She took it. Her fingers brushed his and she felt the jolt of it, unmistakable, unwelcome. She pulled back. “Thank you.” “Don’t thank me. Thank Yu-Fei. He kept it behind the counter for two weeks, and when you didn’t come back, he got nervous. People with notebooks full of maps and cat drawings don’t usually vanish without a reason.” Lucien’s gaze settled on her wrist, on the small crescent-shaped scar she’d had since childhood. “Are you in trouble?” “No.” “Rory.” “I said no.” He didn’t push. That was the worst part of him—the way he let her have her silences, her walls. He’d never once pushed. Even on Blackfriars Bridge, when she’d kissed him and then stepped back, he’d only nodded. He’d said, I won’t make you choose something you’re not ready for. She’d hated him for that. Hated that he understood. “I don’t want to owe you anything,” she said. “You don’t.” “I do. That’s what you do, Lucien. You hand people things and then you hold it over them. Information. Favors. Safe passage.” She waved the notebook. “This isn’t just a notebook. This is an I.O.U.” He studied her for a long moment. The amber eye caught the light, warm and patient; the black one was depthless, older than it had any right to be. “You left so fast that night. You were gone before I finished reading your note—four words, written on a napkin. Can’t do this. And I didn’t follow you. I didn’t call. I gave you the space you asked for.” “And now you’re here.” “Because you vanished for three weeks, and the only reason someone like you vanishes is because they’re either dead or they don’t want to be found.” His voice dropped. “I had to know which one it was.” The admission landed somewhere between her ribs, sharp and warm. She looked away, at Ptolemy grooming himself on the windowsill, at the mess of research notes covering every surface. The flat smelled like curry and dust and the faint tang of expensive cologne that clung to Lucien’s coat. “I’m not dead,” she said. “No. You’re not.” “And I don’t want to be found. Not by you. Not by anyone from that part of my life.” “Then you’re safe.” He turned toward the door, his cane tapping the worn floorboards once, twice. He paused with his hand on the deadbolt. “But I should tell you something. The reason Yu-Fei gave me the notebook. He didn’t give it to me because I’m a regular. He gave it to me because I came in every night for a week asking if anyone had seen you.” Rory’s throat tightened. “Why?” “Because when you walked away on that bridge, you took something I hadn’t realized I’d given you.” He didn’t turn around. “And I wanted the chance to tell you that I was fine with you keeping it.” He opened the door. The corridor light spilled in, pooling around his shoulders, glinting off the slicked-back platinum of his hair. Ptolemy meowed once, sharp and questioning. “Luc.” Her voice cracked on the syllable. He stopped. “I didn’t kiss you because I wanted to leave,” she said. “I kissed you because I was terrified I wouldn’t be able to stop.” He turned, and the look on his face was something she’d never seen him wear before. Unarmored. Hungry. The cane rested on the floor, and he didn’t lean on it. He stood straight and still, waiting. She didn’t know what she was doing until she did it. One step, then another. The notebook hit the table with a soft thump. She reached him in four strides, close enough to smell the rain on his coat, the cedar and smoke of his skin. “I’m not ready,” she whispered. “I don’t know if I’ll ever be ready.” “I’m not asking you to be ready.” His hand rose, slowly, giving her every chance to pull away. His fingers brushed the curve of her jaw. “I’m asking you to let me wait.” She closed her eyes. Leaned into his palm. And for the first time in eighteen months, she let the door stay open.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.37
leniency0.741
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.59% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1466
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
93.18% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1466
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"glinting"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"glinting"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences86
matches
0"felt the jolt"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences86
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences119
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen55
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1457
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount876
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.91
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Moreau2
Eva3
Laila1
London1
Cardiff1
Blackfriars2
Bridge2
Rory6
Three1
Yu-Fei1
Silas1
Lucien8
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Laila"
3"Rory"
4"Yu-Fei"
5"Silas"
6"Lucien"
7"Ptolemy"
places
0"London"
1"Cardiff"
2"Blackfriars"
3"Bridge"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"smelled like curry and dust and the faint"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1457
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences119
matches
0"Hated that he"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean25.12
std20.76
cv0.827
sampleLengths
038
124
255
312
429
57
647
74
848
961
1012
1113
1233
1320
1410
1523
1613
1710
1867
198
2058
2151
2212
234
2463
254
263
2738
2821
2957
301
311
323
3350
349
359
362
3735
3868
394
4037
4148
425
433
4419
4567
464
4737
4827
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences86
matches
0"were tangled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs163
matches
0"was staying"
1"was doing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences119
ratio0.059
matches
0"Rory hadn’t told anyone where she was staying—not even Silas, and he owned the bar beneath her old flat."
1"The cat—Ptolemy, a striped tabby with an imperious expression—twined between Rory’s ankles and mewed at the crack in the door."
2"She’d forgotten the architecture of him—the sharp cheekbones, the platinum hair swept back, the way his mouth seemed always on the verge of saying something dangerous."
3"It always did when he entered a room—he had a way of filling space, of making walls feel closer and ceilings lower."
4"“I know of her. We share a client or two.” He pulled the notebook from his inner jacket pocket—red cover, dog-eared, exactly as she remembered—and held it out."
5"That was the worst part of him—the way he let her have her silences, her walls."
6"The amber eye caught the light, warm and patient; the black one was depthless, older than it had any right to be."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount894
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.03355704697986577
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.003355704697986577
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences119
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences119
mean12.24
std9.95
cv0.813
sampleLengths
08
130
223
31
410
56
620
719
812
97
1017
115
127
1317
1430
153
161
1734
1814
192
2028
2119
2212
237
245
2511
262
2733
2820
2910
308
318
327
3313
345
355
3625
3726
3816
398
4033
4125
424
437
4424
4516
4612
474
487
4922
52.38% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3445378151260504
totalSentences119
uniqueOpeners41
43.29% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences77
matches
0"Of course he’d found her."
ratio0.013
12.21% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences77
matches
0"She hadn’t been Laila in"
1"She started to push the"
2"His polished oxford wedged into"
3"She’d been lying low, doing"
4"She’d burned her burner phone,"
5"She kept her voice flat"
6"She nudged him with her"
7"He extended a hand, palm"
8"He straightened, and the movement"
9"She’d forgotten the architecture of"
10"His voice dropped, losing its"
11"She’d wanted an end ever"
12"She’d wanted clean cuts, sharp"
13"She unchained the door."
14"It always did when he"
15"He took in the overflowing"
16"He pulled the notebook from"
17"She took it."
18"Her fingers brushed his and"
19"She pulled back."
ratio0.519
11.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount69
totalSentences77
matches
0"The third deadbolt scraped against"
1"Rory pulled the door open"
2"Lucien Moreau leaned on his"
3"The name hit her like"
4"She hadn’t been Laila in"
5"That name belonged to the"
6"The one who’d kissed him"
7"She started to push the"
8"His polished oxford wedged into"
9"The faintest crease appeared at"
10"The words hung in the"
11"Rory’s stomach dropped."
12"Lucien’s gaze drifted past her"
13"She’d been lying low, doing"
14"Rory hadn’t told anyone where"
15"She’d burned her burner phone,"
16"She kept her voice flat"
17"The cat—Ptolemy, a striped tabby"
18"She nudged him with her"
19"Lucien crouched, the motion smooth"
ratio0.896
64.94% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences77
matches
0"Even on Blackfriars Bridge, when"
ratio0.013
50.69% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"That name belonged to the woman who’d fled Cardiff, the one who’d shown up at his door desperate and hollow-eyed."
1"She’d been lying low, doing deliveries for Yu-Fei, sleeping in Eva’s spare corner while Eva hunted down obscure necromantic texts for a client who paid in antiq…"
2"The flat smelled like curry and dust and the faint tang of expensive cologne that clung to Lucien’s coat."
3"The corridor light spilled in, pooling around his shoulders, glinting off the slicked-back platinum of his hair."
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"He straightened, and the movement brought his face into the full light from the flat"
1"He turned, his cane tapping the worn floorboards once, twice"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.093
leniency0.185
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.037
83.1407%