Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2J3M8EQPGWMHACKCS2B6YE

Run Details

Duration:
13m 39s
Cost:
$0.085642
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign above The Raven's Nest hummed against the damp October air, its chartreuse light leaking across the wet cobbles of Soho. Inside, the bar lived in a perpetual dusk. Lamps with emerald shades hung low over the counter, casting halos that never reached the walls, where maps of old empires shared space with black-and-white photographs of long-dead operatives. The maps' cartouches curled like dry leaves; the photographs showed men with cold eyes and women with cigarette holders, their faces frozen moments before secrets were spoken. The place had the aroma of beeswax and stale smoke, a scent that had settled into the floorboards long before Silas Blackwood took ownership. Behind the counter, Silas moved with a slow, deliberate economy. He was fifty-eight, his auburn hair brushed back from a brow grooved by thought, a streak of grey at each temple. A slight limp, relic of a shattered knee from a botched operation in Prague, gave his stride a cautious rhythm. He polished a whiskey tumbler, the silver signet ring on his right hand catching the lamplight with each rotation. A few regulars dotted the bar, men who nursed drinks like rosaries. Silas glanced across the room, his hazel eyes resting on the corner table. Aurora Carter, who had once been Laila, and before that Aurora, sat with her back to the wall. The posture was not a preference but a survival tic, a habit born in a Cardiff flat where a man's mood could shift like a storm front. Her bright blue eyes, the only feature that still belonged to the girl who left that flat, tracked the door without concentration. She held a mug of cold tea. Her other hand traced the small crescent scar on her left wrist, a memento from a childhood fall, not from the man who’d tried to kill her. Her hair, straight and black as polished jet, fell to her shoulders, obscuring part of her face. She was twenty-five, but the years she had spent rebuilding herself from nothing had given her an expression that didn’t belong to her age. The street door swung open and a woman blew in on a gust of damp. She was about Aurora’s age, with a thicket of blonde curls that escaped from a clip. A suede jacket, too light for the weather, wrapped her shoulders. She stamped mud from her boots onto the mat and scanned the bar’s dim interior, her movements a mix of curiosity and hope. When her gaze hit the corner, her entire body went still. “Laila?” The name came out as a half-strangled gasp. Aurora’s fingers tightened around the mug. The name belonged to a dead girl. She did not answer. The woman crossed the room, her scarf unspooling behind her. “My God, it is you. I cannot believe it.” She stopped at the table, breathless, her blonde curls bouncing with the force of her arrival. Aurora looked up. “Naomi.” Naomi dropped into the opposite chair without invitation, her eyes bright with unshed tears. “Seven years. I’ve looked for you for seven years. Not a word, not a sign. I thought you were dead. Everyone thought you were dead.” “I didn’t want to be found.” The words came out flat. Naomi’s face twisted. “That is the most appalling thing I’ve heard in my life. Do you have any idea—” She broke off, swallowed hard, and started again. “I had nightmares. I went to your parents, and they would not tell me anything. They said you were alive, but that was it. They closed the door on me like I was a stranger.” “They did what I asked.” “Why?” Aurora set the mug down, and the tiny click was a period in a very long sentence. “I left a man who was going to kill me. I left with nothing. No money, no phone, no numbers. I could not go back to the person I had been. The person who let Evan do all that. I had to become someone else.” Silas, at the bar, had slowed his polishing to a halt. His gaze fixed on the bottles in front of him, but his attention was elsewhere. Naomi blinked rapidly. “The night at the Griffin. You had a hoodie pulled up. The bruise on your neck. I saw it, and I didn’t say a thing. I just let it go.” “Your choice.” Naomi’s voice climbed. “And it has haunted me, Rory—or whatever you call yourself now. I have lived with that picture in my head, the picture of a friend slipping away while I did nothing.” “You could not have stopped him. That was the awful genius of him. He made sure no one could help, not even me. I couldn’t help myself for years.” Naomi’s hand shot across the table and grabbed Aurora’s wrist. The touch was desperate and sincere. “I am sorry. I am so sorry.” Aurora did not pull away. “I am sorry, too. For disappearing. But I didn’t know how to be anything else.” The silence that followed was a living thing. Silas, sensing the shift, chose that moment to carry two tumblers of whiskey to the table. He placed them down, the glasses clinking against the wood. His eyes met Aurora’s for a fraction of a second; she answered with a tiny tilt of her chin. He gave Naomi a courteous nod and limped back to the counter. Naomi watched him go. “He looks like he’s seen things.” “He’s seen enough.” Naomi picked up the whiskey and took a long swallow. When she set the glass down, her expression had changed: less frantic, more wondering. “What do you do now?” “By day, I deliver food for a Chinese restaurant. By night—” Aurora hesitated, then pushed ahead. “By night, I help Silas with some work. He has connections. We help women get out of situations like the one I was in. We provide safe houses, new identities sometimes. It is not legal in the strict sense, but it is necessary.” “That is incredible.” “It’s penance, maybe. I don’t overthink it.” “You always overthought everything. It drove our tutors mad.” Aurora almost smiled. The memory was there, a pale shadow. “I used to think I would be a barrister. I’d argue cases in the Old Bailey. But I lost the taste for argument. I learned to be quiet.” “You were the loudest person in our year. The girl who would debate anyone on anything. I see the change now.” Aurora poked at her scar. “The loudness was a cover. Fear makes you fill rooms with noise so no one notices you’re trembling. Now I don’t need covers.” Naomi drained her glass. “Will you try to visit Cardiff? Your parents… I think they need to see you.” Aurora considered this. “Someday. When I am ready. The silences between us are not simple.” Silas had moved to the door and was flipping the sign to Closed. The other customers had departed while they talked. They were alone in the bar. Naomi stood, pulling her jacket tighter. “I’m here for a week, for a conference. Can I see you again? Tomorrow? Lunch?” Aurora stood as well and pulled her phone from her jeans. “What’s your number?” Naomi recited it, and Aurora tapped it in. She sent a four-word message: It’s Rory, not Laila. Naomi’s phone chimed in her pocket, and she read the screen. A slow smile spread across her face. “Rory, then. I think it suits you.” “Me too.” They hugged, a brief clasp, and then Naomi made for the door. Silas held it open, and the green neon made her blonde hair electric for a moment before she was gone. Silas let the door swing shut and threw the bolt. “Everything sound?” he asked, without looking at Aurora. “For now. She carries guilt she shouldn’t.” “We all do.” Silas collected the empty glasses, his limp a quiet punctuation. “Go on up. I’ll lock the back.” Aurora headed for the staircase hidden behind the bar, the stairs that led to her flat. At the first step, she turned. “Silas, do you think people can really forgive themselves?” He paused, his back to her. “Forgiving yourself is like this leg. You learn to walk on it, but the ache never leaves. That’s the only way it works.” He glanced over his shoulder. “But it does work.” Aurora gave a single nod and climbed the stairs. The weight of time and regret was still there, but it felt, for the first time in years, not like a burden but like a foundation. She had somewhere to stand.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Aurora hesitated then [then]"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.05
93.04% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1436
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
79.11% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1436
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"shattered"
count1
1
word"traced"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"electric"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"shattered"
1"traced"
2"scanned"
3"silence"
4"electric"
5"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences77
matches
0"was desperate"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences77
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences109
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1435
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions52
wordCount883
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity2.04
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
October1
Soho1
Silas9
Blackwood1
Prague1
Carter1
Laila2
Aurora18
Cardiff1
Naomi13
Closed1
Rory1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Blackwood"
4"Carter"
5"Laila"
6"Aurora"
7"Naomi"
8"Rory"
places
0"Soho"
1"Prague"
2"Cardiff"
3"Closed"
globalScore0.481
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.091
wordCount1435
matches
0"not a preference but a survival tic, a habit born in a Cardiff flat"
1"not legal in the strict sense, but it is necessary"
2"not like a burden but like a foundation"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences109
matches
0"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean30.53
std29.29
cv0.959
sampleLengths
0112
195
2142
376
49
517
635
74
839
911
1062
115
121
1362
1426
1533
162
1734
1829
1923
2020
2165
2210
233
2429
2559
263
277
289
2938
3021
3128
3219
3315
3427
3521
3614
3735
387
392
4042
418
427
4320
4431
4538
4640
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences77
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs144
matches
0"was flipping"
90.43% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences109
ratio0.018
matches
0"The maps' cartouches curled like dry leaves; the photographs showed men with cold eyes and women with cigarette holders, their faces frozen moments before secrets were spoken."
1"His eyes met Aurora’s for a fraction of a second; she answered with a tiny tilt of her chin."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount515
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.031067961165048542
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.003883495145631068
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences109
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences109
mean13.17
std9.2
cv0.699
sampleLengths
024
18
229
327
424
510
621
720
819
912
1013
1118
1227
1322
147
1527
1617
1724
1815
1916
2011
2123
2211
239
246
257
264
2710
2825
293
301
3114
3225
3311
343
3524
3635
375
381
3917
4045
4111
4215
433
4430
452
463
4731
4829
4910
51.07% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3394495412844037
totalSentences109
uniqueOpeners37
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
ratio0
98.95% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences76
matches
0"He was fifty-eight, his auburn"
1"He polished a whiskey tumbler,"
2"Her bright blue eyes, the"
3"She held a mug of"
4"Her other hand traced the"
5"Her hair, straight and black"
6"She was twenty-five, but the"
7"She was about Aurora’s age,"
8"She stamped mud from her"
9"She did not answer."
10"She stopped at the table,"
11"She broke off, swallowed hard,"
12"His gaze fixed on the"
13"He placed them down, the"
14"His eyes met Aurora’s for"
15"He gave Naomi a courteous"
16"They were alone in the"
17"She sent a four-word message:"
18"They hugged, a brief clasp,"
19"he asked, without looking at"
ratio0.303
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences76
matches
0"The green neon sign above"
1"Lamps with emerald shades hung"
2"The place had the aroma"
3"He was fifty-eight, his auburn"
4"A slight limp, relic of"
5"He polished a whiskey tumbler,"
6"Silas glanced across the room,"
7"Aurora Carter, who had once"
8"The posture was not a"
9"Her bright blue eyes, the"
10"She held a mug of"
11"Her other hand traced the"
12"Her hair, straight and black"
13"She was twenty-five, but the"
14"The street door swung open"
15"She was about Aurora’s age,"
16"A suede jacket, too light"
17"She stamped mud from her"
18"The name came out as"
19"Aurora’s fingers tightened around the"
ratio0.921
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The place had the aroma of beeswax and stale smoke, a scent that had settled into the floorboards long before Silas Blackwood took ownership."
1"She was twenty-five, but the years she had spent rebuilding herself from nothing had given her an expression that didn’t belong to her age."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"he asked, without looking at Aurora"
1"Silas collected, his limp a quiet punctuation"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.025
leniency0.05
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
77.6421%